Ek Ajnabi - RA / RN ff (Part 9 - Pg 13) - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ami_princess

ROCKING part 👏 ....superb yaar.....sujal is all fida over kashish and kahsish she is getitng angry at sujal's flirty behavior 😆 .....but how did sujal got hurt this much....was he in army!....plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon...

will be waiting for next part impatiently! 😆

thnx 4 likng da part dear....n abt answer 2 ur question tht h he gt hurt...u will gt 2 know soon....as stry will reveal all answers as it will proceed ahead...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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jus one comment guyz....it was so bad.... 😭 😭 ....its been now 4-5 days i hav posted n no comment....plz comment....coz then i also need encoragment 2 write...if u don lik..then do say...so i stop writing this ff.... 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3

It was a beautiful day out. We see Kashish has reached the hospital premises and is now on her way to her room. Meanwhile charu does not enter her room but goes directly inside sujal's room and they have some talk which we can't hear.
Kashish in her room....
Ik tu jab se yeh news mili hai koi kaam bhi dhang se nahee ho raha hai...mainey tu socha tha..k i won't react much but...why he always gets on my nerves...ab us din k he baat le lijye..arey yaar...jab mujhe woh dhamakedar news mili...gussa tu tha thora..par later...mainey socha k...woh bhi ik patient hai...so y should i over react i would behave like hez no one infront of me...aur yahi sock k mai regular rounds k liye uthi..sab kuch normal he ja raha tha k....my bad luck...i entered his room...frstly tu aisa laga k hez sleeping...par woh kya hai na..humarey aise bhag kahan..jaisey he mai yeh soch k janey k liye palti k...according 2 charu uski sexy voice...sunai de...sexy my..foot..i dono..charu ka shaayd...demgh hil gaya hai..uske peech thore kasne parhein ge...plz...his voice..is...kya kahoon...ab itni bhi buri nahee..k kuch aisa waisa bolon..par its even nt sexy...khair...mein muri k dekhoon..janab ko check he kar loon..jis kaam k liye aye the...murte he...jis cheez se mujhe skht nafrat hai uska ...24/7 smily face..samney tha...ab even m doctor na..hav 2 be friendly..i posed a smile 2...mujhe tu lagta hai..in fake smiles ko woh sachmuch k "i see him...i smile" wali samjhney lag parha hai...chalo ji..usey choro...main agay bhari...aur gt busy in checking his previous reports...bt was nt able 2 concentrate kyun k..uski tu nazrein he mujhe par garhe thein..h much i wished at tht moment k....merey pass is stethoscope aur file k jagah..koi hatyar hota..i would hav killed him...mujhe..yani kashish..ko..kisi larke k..purey shimla main ajj tak himmat na hui..yun ghurney k..n he...i hate him..coz hez now being only one...who has nerves 2 do that..n i can't say anythng also...as hez my patient i have 2 be good with him...good my foot....chk karney k baad..as evrthng was normal...siwai uski memory k...mujhe tu doubt hai...khisak gaya hai..bechara memory loss ka sun ke..mom ko tu bola bhi..par merey ird gird k log na...sab he ik uske sache humdard hain...meri bst frnd charu se le ke...mom dad..dr shalini...all nurses...yahan tak k humara..watchman bhi....koi uske khilaf sun he nahee sakta...sab ko tu ik usi se humdardi ka bukhar hai....acha tu..lejye mein phir track kho gaye..haan tu main wapis murney he ko the..as i thought k would nt talk 2 him..jus chk up..n go..bt..my fate...he caled ...dil tu kiya..k..par u knw...again my fake smile...n turning...
K:ji kahiye..kuch kaam tha??
S:woh..dr.kashish...app kya mujh se naraz hain??
K:nahee..aisa tu kuch bhi nahee..main bhala app se kyun naraz hongi...(dil mein tu aya bolon..naraz...mera bas chale..tu tumare room mein na..aoon..yeh tu meri...anyways..tu)
S:acha..mujhe laga...kahin app is wajah se tu nahee...k Dr.shalini ne...meri responsibility bhi apko de di...mein janta hoon..app buhat..busy doctor hain...ap kahien tu mein..unse baat karoon..woh chnage kardein ge...apki duty...mera ka hai...meri tu memory ka koi pata nahee...aye na aye...koi bhi doctor chale ga..apko bela waja takleef ho rahee hai..
K(dil mein tu aya bolon...ik no ke chaloo ho tum...khud he kaha hai..dr.shalini ko..as i don knw..u...aur ab kasiey masoom ban rahee ho...infnt of me..app kahein tu...bacho..par mainey bhi...kachi goliyan nahee..khelin...app ahegaye ho.under me...tu ab batoon ge..kashish is no less..2 be in competition wid):aisa kuch nahee hai..sujal ji...app ghalat math sochye...woh tu mein kafi thak gaye hoon..bas is liye...app aram karye.mein aur pateints ko bhi check karna hai...i will take a leave...n yah..take ur medicines on time...n try 2 remember thngs..as it will be good 4 u...
aur wahan se chalti bani mein tu...janti thi..on my back kya howa hoga....he would be on cloud nine...by those words...i said..par i tu only said as its in my duties...bt he would thnk opposite only...aur raste mein ajj..charu se bhi yahee behas hui.idiot larki..mujhe tu kahi se apni frnd nahee lagti...when i tld k...h he was actng smart n all...n i said wht i hav 2 as it was my duty...tu usnye..madam kya boltein hain..k mein aur patients ko tu kabhi aisa nahee bola..k take medicines on time...nurse ko bolti hoon..giv them..tu why 2 him...ab so wrong..aisa kuch nahee...hai...mein tu sabhi ko boltoon hoon..par log na...awain kuch bhi bolte hain...khair...mujhe kya...par nahee hai na mujhe...ab yeh charu jae usko bolegi...k i said this n tht...pata nahee...why..har roz socthe hoon..ab charu ko kch nahee bolonge...usey jake bol deti hai...magar..phir..mein bhi kya kroon...bachpan se ik ikloti dost he paye hai...usey bhi na kahoon tu kise kahoon....aur gussa tu is baat pe bhi nahee hai...gussa tu mujhe apney mom dad pe hai...unhe aur humdardi chari hai...dad nekal rat dinner par jo bomb blast kiya...uskey asraat abhi tak hain...metey kanoo mein us...tofaan ke aney k nagarey abhi bhi baj rahe hain...mujhe tu paka yaken hai...yeh bomb...dad ne heroshima aur naga saki par jo giraya tha...wohi udhar leke..merey sar pe phora hai...he knws...na..k mein usey rati bhar bhi..like nahe karti...par phir bhi...mujhe kuch na sojha tu...mom k mintein kar dali..par woh tu...unka tu beta hai...ma baap..aisey badley merey k dil ro para...woh konsa gana...hai...bilkul fit betha mujhe pe...mom...mom na rahe...dad..da na..rahe...aur haan..dost bhi tu dost na rahee...aur kya tha..haan..zindagi humein tera atebar na raha...na raha...sab e kasam kha le mano...merey he khilaf jayeinge...yahan tak..mein ne...apney sada k dushman..bhai...prem yaar...usko bhi call..kar dali..k shayad...jab apne...na rahe..tu dushmano ko dost bana loon..par dushmano..ne tu..phele he...inkar kar diya...aur ab..jab koi haal na baja..tu...apna gussa..yahan...beth k nikal rahee hoon..kya duniya mein...aur koi jagah nahee bachi..k he..of all..da places..will now...live wid us..in our house...from next week..as hez getting discharged....ab app sochye..zulm nahee hai...yeh mujh abla naree...bebas..lachar aur dukhyari parr..hai na...bolye...par merey ghar waloon ko...aur khas kar k...us sujal ko ko samjhaye..ab tak tu charu ne..news pohancha bhi de hoge...aur ab jab mein..check up k liye jaonge..tu 50 ..nahee nahe.100 volt k smile..meri muntezar hogi..kash..k mere pass...arey ab tu app jan he gaye honge..ji ji..bikul...stethscope...aur files k jagah...hathyar hota..tu.....par kya karein...hum doctors jo tehre..koi baat nahee...meiney tu decide kiya hai...koi aur kaam karoon na karoon..medical k field k liye..ik hathyar aisa zaroor banoge..jo bechari mujh jaise doctors...aur us jaisey pateints ko marney k liye kaam aye...ahi an..rite decision...
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In Mumbai...
We see a big house..inside tht house...in a big room...wid pink wallpaper...grly stuff here n there....we see a grl sitting n talking on her phone...lets see..whom shez talking 2...
G:haan baba..mein pohanch gayee hoon..haan koi problem nahee hua...tum..kahan par ho abhi?
G:office mein ho...aur uncle aunti kasiey hain...??
G:yah even i missed u...par kya karti...college trip tha...jana imp tha..nahee hota..tu kabhi nahee jati...
G:haan..mama bhi theek hain...naina the na...yahan..so i was relieved..
G:hmm...yah shez recovering par still..shiv...woh abhi tak...is braham mein he je rahee hain..k bhai zinda hai...par....sach tu...(n she stred cryng)
G:yah m fine..bas woh..bhai k yaad aye tu...anso...ab yeh anso he tu bache hain...
G:yah i know..wont cry more...promise...tu kab arahe ho mujhse milney...
G:sham ko..itna late..i thought kahoo ge abhi..ajata hoon..how unromantic u r...logon k...mangetar hote hain...unke agay pechey ghomte ik humarey hain..jinko..office ke kaam se he fursat nahe..
G:theek hai...theek hai...i willl wait 4 u..zyada dair nahe karna..we hav 2 return back early 2 then..mama..akeli honge..na..phir..aur u knw..k woh aise he chinta karein ge...
G:ok then..luv u...bye...
n da grl....cuts da call..when...maya calls her...
M(frm downstairs):mahi kahan hai...jaldi aa..khana lag gaya hai..
she turns n we see..its mahi
....daughter of maya....n sis of rajveer...
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ok guyz...this is it 4 now...plz comment...
till nxt time..tc..
wid luv...
guriya....😊
Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 nice part yaar......but i hope the final pairing is rajeev-amna....not RN 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing part
im glad sujals gnna stay with kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

👏 nice part yaar......but i hope the final pairing is rajeev-amna....not RN 😕

thnx...n 2 knw...abt final pairing...keep reading...as i don't usually dissapoint my readers...😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part
im glad sujals gnna stay with kashish
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thnx 4 likng da part...n keep reading as fun will be coming ahead...as sujal is gonna stay at kashish's place...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guriya !!!!!.......caught up with the story 😊 ..........aweosme part's !!!...........so sujal is her biggest enemy 😆 ...................the second part was hilarious yaar 😆 👏 😉....sujal (raj) past, well how she found him ........n all ......all the hospital staff, including kashish parents are really fond of sujal 😉 ....n charu is her friend 👏.........kashish irritadet coz he's been flirting wt her from a few week's 😉...........finally mahi came 😊, she's getting married to shiv 😉.......poor girl she lost her dear brother (no he's alive 😊) ......i think she's trying to be strong, but from inside she's devasteated 😭 😭 😭.........,,,,,so sujal is going to live in "prem niwas" with kashish n her family 😆 😉 😛.........can't wait for the next part 😉 ..........waitting eagerly for them 😭 😊 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oye mujhe zara batao.Raj ka k8iske saath hoga toh main decide karungi ke main yeh fic padungi ya nahi kyunki Kashish toh mere bardast se bahar hai.lWoh jis fic mein hoti hai I do not touch it with a barge pole but I love RN fics.Toh answer me.

Aur mujhe Kashish ke upar yeh Basu sirname bilkul pasand nahi.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: le_me_star

hey guriya !!!!!.......caught up with the story 😊 ..........aweosme part's !!!.....thnx a lt dear........so sujal is her biggest enemy 😆 ...................the second part was hilarious yaar 😆 👏 😉....sujal (raj) past, well how she found him ........n all ......all the hospital staff, including kashish parents are really fond of sujal 😉 ....n charu is her friend 👏.........kashish irritadet coz he's been flirting wt her from a few week's 😉...........finally mahi came 😊, she's getting married to shiv 😉.......poor girl she lost her dear brother (no he's alive 😊) ......i think she's trying to be strong, but from inside she's devasteated 😭 😭 😭.........,,,,,so sujal is going to live in "prem niwas" with kashish n her family 😆 😉 😛.....yah...i knw...it will be fun now...so keep reading......can't wait for the next part 😉 ..........waitting eagerly for them 😭 😊 👏....will cont soon....don worry....

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