Ek Ajnabi - RA / RN ff (Part 9 - Pg 13)

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@aishwaria

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

awesome intro its a different concept i lie it very very much please post first part soon its gonna rock dear 👍🏼 👍🏼

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sun_423
very nice guriya dear...the promo was very damn interesting...too goodd.. 👏 continue soon.. 😊 😛 😃

thnx a lt surya dear....will cont shortly ...😊

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: neh0307
woow....gr8 intro yaar....amazin... 👏
zindagi ki sachai ko sabdo me bahut hi khubsurti se peesh kiya hai aapne.....maza aa gaya...
and yes i want to know Dr KASHISH BASU more and also his CUTE PATIENT....so update soon...wil be waitin...

u will surely knw them both..pretty soon...n thnx u like da way i expressed life...i hop i keep up da gud work...so neva comes a chance 2 dissapoint any of my readers...thanx again..😊

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: togepe30
awesome...........start the story soon !!!! 😳

thnx...😊

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

@Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: aishwaria
awesome intro its a different concept i lie it very very much please post first part soon its gonna rock dear 👍🏼 👍🏼

thnx a lt 4 likng it dear...will cont shortly..😊

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

@Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

Promo 2

Waqt,pal aur halaat,yeh teen aisey lafz hai jo meri kahani bayan karte hain.Waqt jis ne mera saath na diya aur mujhe merey he apno se durr kar diya.Woh apney jin ko ajj mein janta tak nahee hoon,pehchanta tak nahee hoon,jin k yaad bhi mere dimagh k kisi hisay mien nahee jagti.Sochte sochte din raat beet jate hain par kuch yaad nahee ata.Bas yaad rehte hain tu woh pal jo ajj kal mein us ke saath beta ta hoon,woh jo meri kuch bhi nahee lagti par kyun aisa lagney laga hai k wohi ab mere sab kuch hai,us ke bina ik din bhi adhura pata hoon apney app ko...par halaat in ka sitam tu dekhye mujh par k woh mujhse chirte hai,bhao khate hai,baat tak karna pasand nahee karti.Ab kya batoon appko us ke barey mein,yahi ke thori ziddi hai nak chari hai,bossy hai,hukum manwa ho tu koi usey sekhey balke merey khayal se us tu le jayein humarey naitaoon(politicians) ke pass tu unhe bhi woh patrey pe le aye.Bas mujhe itna pata hai jaise bhi hai meri hai par yeh halaat na usey mera nahee karte,ab kal ki baat he lejye ab us ne Dr Shalini,arey bhaye appko nahee pata woh kon hain arey bhaye woh is hospital k head hain,tu mada ne un se keh diya k woh kisi aur doc ko meri responsibility dein,woh tu shukar hua charu ka,ab yeh maat poochye ga ke charu kon,acha app poochenge tu chalein bol he deta hoon woh hai na..meri woh...arey wohi jis ka mein dewana hogaya hoon..app log bhi na..kuch nahee jante khair...,tu charu uski karebi dost hai,kehney ko tu uske dost hai magar humari patti achi hai,so us ne mujhe bataya aur phir Shalini ji ko bare mushkil se apni masomait ka istimal karte hui phansaya aur ab jake jaan mein jaan aye jab pata laga ke woh mera ilaaj karney ko ready hai,dil tu chaha us waqt bhangre dalo par pata tha,madam kacha kha jayeinge,uske ankhein,kya batayon appko hain tu katil par,darr bhi lagta hai na,us ka bas chale tu unhe se mujhe katal kar de.Ab itna tu mujhe maloom hai k woh bakshney wale nahee mujhe par phir bhi hum bhi tayar hai,haar maney wale nahee,kyun app kya kehte hain haar man jaoon..nahee na..

aur jahan tak baat rahe merey intro k tu..apna asli naam tu maloom nahee k kya tha,haan par in sab ne jo naam diya wohi bol deta hoon,actually woh yeh sab ne socha k ab jab koi merey agay peeche nahe,kyunke koi aya nahee mere us accident ke baat 2 claim,so in sab ne socha,k bajaye iske k oye,aye,helloo mister jaisey lafzoon se mujhe bulaye naam he rakh diya in sab ne mil ke,so m sujal....kaisa laga mera naya naam acha hai na...mujhe tu buhat pasand hai..pata hai kyun...us ne rakha hai na...is liye....app mujhe batayga zaroor app ko kaisa laga...aur mujhe se milna chahe tu no problem...bas yeh thread parthe rahayega..aur mujhe jante rahyeiga...

Meet Dr Kashish's Sujal

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ok guyz do tell me...h it was...n how u liked da character of our hero....will be wiatng 4 ur replies...n coming up...introduction of one more imp..character...stay tuned...

till nxt time tc...

wid luv...

guriya...😊

Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 17 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

guriya yaar kya baat hai..maan gaye tumko..this concept of your story is absolutely amazing & very damn different... you know i likeed both humari heroine aur hero ka intro...totally mast..zabardast...keep up the hood work going.. 👏 yaar jaldi se agge ke parts post kar..me cannot wait to read the parts..me waiting too eagerly.. 😊 😛 😃

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

@Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sun_423
guriya yaar kya baat hai..maan gaye tumko..this concept of your story is absolutely amazing & very damn different... you know i likeed both humari heroine aur hero ka intro...totally mast..zabardast...keep up the hood work going.. 👏 yaar jaldi se agge ke parts post kar..me cannot wait to read the parts..me waiting too eagerly.. 😊 😛 😃

thnx surya dear...4 likng both da intro's...will be soon strtng off wid da story...jus one more character intro left...so wait 4 tht...😊

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saba

@aishwaria

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

Next is Naina's description right plz post it soon and start the FF

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Parvathi

@Paru6

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Posted: 17 years ago

#20

hey u started another one yay!! 👏 just excited lol 👏 👏 this seems as gr8 as the other two 😛 👏 👏 loved the way u r writing on first person... r u gonna con like that 😉 😛 😛 can't wait to meet the doc especally her patient lol 😆 😉 😉 cont soon

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