Ek Ajnabi - RA / RN ff (Part 9 - Pg 13) - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishwaria

Next is Naina's description right plz post it soon and start the FF

yah dear...m posting that only...don worry...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Paru_M

hey u started another one yay!! 👏 just excited lol 👏 👏 this seems as gr8 as the other two 😛 👏 👏 loved the way u r writing on first person... r u gonna con like that 😉 😛 😛 can't wait to meet the doc especally her patient lol 😆 😉 😉 cont soon

thnx 4 likng da concept n m nt sure i will be writing as first person...might be in some parts where its required as da track will be...will cont soon...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yeh waqt bhi kya ajee cheez hai na..kabhi tu yeh humein ik he pal mein dhairoon khushiyan de deta hai aur kabhi yeh bas ghamoon ke saye tale chor jata hai..mera saath bhi is ne kuch aisa he kiya..jab mujhe laga ke merey pass sab kuch agaya hai..merey se zyada khush kismat koi na hogi tab hi is ne mujhse woh sab cheen liya jo mera sab se kimti saman tha..ik kimti yaad chor de..aur mano mere hari zindagi ko berang kar diya...apney saath yeh waqt merey us dost..us saathi...us shaks ko jo ke mera kuch dino mein sab kuch honey wala tha...ura le gaya..aur mujhe akela chor gaya..kyun akhir kyun..yun roney ke liye..yun dard mein tarapney ke liye...bas ab aur nahee bardasht hota..mein bhi tu insan hoon thak gaye...hoon kab tab apne karebi logon se jhoot bolon..zahir karoon k mein khush hoon..halanke...yeh mein he janti hoon..k mein kitni nakhush hoon...kyun raj..why u have gone so far frm me..that i can't touch u now...i can't feel u anymore near me...tum tu kehte the..ke kabhi mera saath nahee choro ge..than why u left me in this world...n tht also widout u...tum he tu the..jo mujhe achey se jante aur samjhte the..ab mein apna dukh kis se share karoon...tumhein tu hum sab pe taras bhi na aya...na mujh pe...apni best friend pe..na apney maa pe...na apni ladli behan pe...yun tanha kar gaye unhe...aur mein..kab tak unhe sambhalo...par i have promised u..i will always take care of ur family...m tryng my level best 2 keep them happy...par khud ko khush kaisey rakhoon..tum he tu mujhe khush rakhte the,,,par ab...even ur nt here...par mujhe pata hai u r near me...sab bolte hain..u r no more..bt i knw...ur there..n u will always be there 4 me..n i will surely find u one day....
mein naina singh aluwalia ajj yeh kasam lete hoon...tht i will find u anyhow..chahe tum duniya ke kisi bhi koney mein he kyun na ho..mein tumhein dhond nikaloon ge...n thts a promise..naina's promise..aur tum tu jante he ho raj...naina neva brakes a promise...neva..so u hav 2 now be alive...4 me...4 ur naina...warna...mein zinda nahee reh paonge...will die....i love you raj...come back soon na...itna maat tarpayoo...maat karo yeh sitam...maat karo...
Meet Naina Singh
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hop u have liked it...comments plz...
tc...wid luv..
guriya...😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey really nice 👏 👏 now plz start the FF soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishwaria

Hey really nice 👏 👏 now plz start the FF soon 😊

thanx dear..n i will be postng first part soon...jus hav 2 finish da other ff...than i will post frst part 4 this one...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi everyone the wait is over..here is presenting you all the first part of Ek Ajnabi - Person Very Close To Heart
Part 1

Its a beautiful morning and we see that we are in the outskirts of a hilly area.The place is none other than Shimla,people call it lovers paradise too because of beauty that is around the city whether it is due to the lush green hills or beautiful narrow valleys or the atmosphere around. The fact is its the best place to live in and i can i assure you that once you visit my city you will forget any place,i mean it really, any beautiful place in the whole world.And here in between the hills is a place where i live, look here is my house, my home sweet home where i live with my mom and dad.The best mom and dad in world and the name of our beautiful home is "Prem Niwas".Why prem niwas beacuse my dad oh let me show you actually who he is,here look at my dad
Doctor Anurag Basu
You know he is the best dad any daughter can get he pampers me a lot,loves me so much cannot see a single tear in my eyes and mom she always complains that dad gives me unnecessary laad.Oh look i again started my blabering, you know my mom hates me doing that beaucse i actually loose the point am talikng on and in the end all talk becomes rubbsih anyways i was talking about why my house is called prem niwas so my dad used to live in mubai with his family and then he was sent abroad for higher medical study and there he met my mom,you want to have a look who she is,here
my mom Prerna Basu
She is an adorable mom,loves me lot but never pampers me like dad.she ususally is after me beacuse of my stupid acts and silly behaviour but what can i do na.I love to be like that i can't change you know.Ok ok,i got the hint back to the point am coming.So the two met and fell in love and then no Samaj ki dewaar type thing happen to them so they got married. My mom is a gynecologist and my dad is a heart surgeon,both are world's best doctor. So when they came back to india they got many good offers in mumbai.But my mom was always fond of nature so when dad decide to built his own hospital they came with idea to settle down here and so we landed here,not exactly we my mom and dad only we means my bro and me came later.They used to live in some rented house and then my mom gave birth to his first child my big brother Prem Basu,
here he is
prem beacuse he was the symbol of there love so and then i came into this world right after 4 years of prem's birth, i mean me and that's Kashish
Kashish Basu.And so our family got completed,later my dad bought this house and as this was symbol of our family, the bond of love we share and will share staying here,so they named it prem niwas.And you know my stupid brother prem he thinks its after him but in actual its not and we have big fights on this issue and in end both get a tight slap on head by mom.Ok now i hope you are not feed up of my talks and if you are then even am not interested as its 8 in morning mom will shout at any moment and i have to get up and change am in no mood but have to so catch you guys in a while.
hey look am back all ready,you think this blue shalwar kameez is suiting me and what about this pink gloss nah i don't want extra make up you know i hate it and even dad says simple is beauty,so am beautiful.its suiting now indeed, oho look in the mirror na why are you looking at me,gud,yah i know it is,it was gifted to me by charu my best friend.Now you want to meet her too but wait we will but after breakfast as mom will kill me if i won't eat my breakfast properly.So lets go,oh wait where are my belongings here they are on my favourite study table.lets go now i have took my books,stethoscope,all set,here we come.
Bye Mom,Bye Dad,see u guys later
now breakfast done and here we go on my basanti,arey not any tanga yaar my bicycle.you would be thinking where are we going right na.so dumb you are na,you can't see i took a stethoscope that means i am a doctor and we are going toward the hospital.While going toward charu house i will tell you about me,so i completed my eduaction last year from UK and came here to join my mom and dad in the hospital as i love this place too i never imagined to leave it.We three love shimla you knew.We three cause prem na,he doesn't like being here and seldom comes on vaccations you see he is working in mumbai and lives there only.Mom misses him a lot but thats what moms do and thats what sons do.Dad is very angry on him beacuse he wanted him to handle the hospital's responsibility but he never liked the idea of being a doctor so he refused but i never ever can see pain in my dad's eye.so i said i am your son too na and here i am working with both of them.Mom and dad visit often,they don't spent whole day there but i have to, as you know am new and have to learn a lot.But Dr Shalini says am a really good student and i learn fast and thats why she gives lot of resposnsibility to me.I will show you who Dr shalini is when we will reach the hospital till then just know that after mom and dad she is the head of all the doctors and mostly looks after the hospistal.Here comes charu's house and here she is on her bike,
Charu Sinha my Best Friend
We are friends from childhood and we studied in same school even graduated from same place and last year both came back to serve our country.She is a sweet and bubly girl and we two together make the best jodi as we are the biggest prankster.
Here comes the dream of my mom and dad,Our hospital Dream Hospital because here we care to let everyones dream come true.dreams of doctors to excel in there practice.dreams of patient to gain health again,dreams of mom and dad of new borns,dreams of dying people by giving them hope and care at our best.
As we enter usual greetings are done by my fellow doctors and nurses and charu leaves for her cabin and i enter mine.As i sit on my chair i had no idea where the time flew and look its now 3 in the evening,oh no i had to take a round,just then a nurse enters and gives me a file and as she leaves i open the file and to my shock i see the name of my biggest enemy right there.To know who he is wait as i need courage and have to control my anger to let you know who he is.....
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yeh tu thi kashish ki kahani usi k zubani ab chalte hai thora sa door in hasen wadion se urr ke mumbai k bher mein....kis aur k kahani ko dekheny...hum dekhte hain...ik bara sa ghar...andar dakhil hote he...sunai deti hai ik madhur awaz..jab hum kareb jake dekhte hain tu pata chalta hai k koi aurat pooja kar rahe hai...tu intezar pooja k khatam honey ka par yeh kya us sey phele k woh aurat pooja khatam karey hum dekhte hain k ik larki andar ati hai aur uskey pechey khari ho jati hai..jaisey he woh larki haath jor k khari hoti hai..samney wali aurat kehti hai..
Aurat:naina...tu ajj phir late hai...
larki jisko aurat ne naina kaha..hum ne uska chehra nahee dekha hai..na us aurat ka...kehte hai..
Larki:sorry aunty..woh..mom ney dair karwa de..warna u knw..i m always on time...sorry..
aurat murti hai...milye in se kyun ke yeh hain..
Maya Shekhawat
aur jo larki unkey smaney khari hai woh hai..
Naina Singh...
maya naina ko prasad deti hai..naina ashirwaad leti hai aur dono mandir se nikal kar breakfast table par atey hain..
maya naina ko bethney ko kehte hai..aur phir dono breakfast kar rahe hotey hai k..naina poochte hai.....
N:maya aunty..mahi kaha hai..dekh nahee rahee .uthi nahee kya ab tak......
M:tum tu janti ho usey beta..jo howa uske baad..ajj kal jaldi uth jati hai...aur college chali jati hai..buhat kam humari mulakat hoti hai..
dono is zikar pe ik dam chup ho jate hain..phir naina..khamoshi ko torney k liye bolti hai....
N:acha maya aunty..phir u tell me what u have decided..
M:beta kya decide karna...ab tu kisi cheez mein dil nahee lagta...
N:plz aunti aisa maat bolye...i have still hope..ab bhi mat lose karo...plz...
M:mujhe bhi tere jaisa lagta hai..aisa lagta hai.k woh hai..mehsoos kar sakti hoon..k woh..kahin tu hai...par mahi..uska kya karoon..woh kehti hai..app is sach ko maan lo k he is dead..woh ab wapis nahee ayega..par mein ik maa hoon...mehsoos kar sakte hoo..k woh mara nahee hai...ass pass hai ajj bhi mere...jab merey pati ko us bhagwan ne china tu sabr kar liya mainey..apney in do bachoon k kahtir..magar..ajj apney bete k bari pe..dil sabr nahee karta naina..yeh kehta hai..k woh hai..hai na naina..
N:haan..aunti...don worry..app merey saath hai na..bas app dua kariye..mein kamyab ho jaoon..use dhondne mein..mujhe bhi yakeen hai k woh hai...ok aunty mein chalte hoon..phir aonge..bye..and take care..zyada sochye maat..ok
M:bye beta...
naina bahir ati hai and when she was passing the garden...she saw a swing...and then memories...of her childhood came all the way...where she was swinging on the swing..and a boy comes..stops the swing...when she shouts...to leave and let her swing...he then...gives her swing with a lot of force..she close her eyes tightly..as she was fearful that she might fall...then scene fades away...and scene comes of naina..being grown up....still swinging and some one...pushing swing with lot of force as she has her eyes close again...when she knows she will fall...she shouts..."raj...mien agar gir gayee na..tu...i will kill u..agar ik bhi chot aye..na..tu u have to pay for it"...when she was abt to fall...she falls in some ones arms...she open her eyes..and see herself in raj's arm....we see raj's face
...then she hits him on his chest...he throws her on the ground....she runs after him to catch him and teach him a lesson...both fall on each other...and then they laugh..naina suddenly comes back to reality...she had smile on her face...remembering all tht....and it fades away when she realizes what is the reality at the moment..
N(herself):raj i miss you..you have to come back for me...you have to..
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ok guys here is the first part for you all...do comments and tell me how it was...will be waiting for your response..sorry if had done any mistakes...
with love,
guriya...😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome first part guriya !!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 .......basu family intro was awesome 👏 😊 👏.......prem thinks's that "prem niwas" is after his name 😆.........n kashish always taking 😆.....(but i like it😊).............by the way who is kashish biggest enemy?????????...........................in mumbai we meet maya n naina 😊.......they sound sad 😭.....by the way who is mahi played by ???........i can't belive that raj is dead 😭 (hope no 😊)...........what is the decetion naina is asking maya for😕???..........continue soon plz.........great first part 👏 😊 👏.........really interesting 😊.......can't wait for the next one !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....................great story 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow yaar is it RN ff or RK.....plz plz tell me...and the part was just awesome trust me....it was fab....love the way kashish introduce her family....conitnue soonnnnnnn
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nahiiiii......yaar i want an RA ff......i dont like RN 😭 plz RA rakhna!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: le_me_star

awesome first part guriya !!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 .......basu family intro was awesome 👏 😊 👏....thnx dear...prem thinks's that "prem niwas" is after his name 😆.........n kashish always taking 😆.....(but i like it😊)......me too n u will luv da relationship b/w both sis n bro in future in assure u of tht.......by the way who is kashish biggest enemy?????????..............u will surely gt 2 knw in da nxt part..till then hold ur breath.............in mumbai we meet maya n naina 😊.......they sound sad 😭.....by the way who is mahi played by ???....its played by neha bamb....i can't belive that raj is dead 😭 (hope no 😊)...........what is the decetion naina is asking maya for😕???....all questions will be answered in nxt part..so wait 4 some more time......continue soon plz.........great first part 👏 😊 👏.........really interesting 😊.......can't wait for the next one !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....................great story 👏 thnx

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