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CH 8 – Getting Things Back and Getting Things Straight


"Figures that that piece of rag would be your favorite shirt!"
"Aw, if you like it that much you can keep it darling. I mean who wouldn't want to have a reminder of me in their room!"
A pair of pants and a shirt land a few feet away from Adi as a frustrated Maithili glares through her window. Adi comes forward and grabs his clothes off the ground.
"Smells just like you honey," he takes a sniff of the shirt, "sweat and mud and oh, what's that."
He takes another whiff, "oh right, and garbage."
Just then, various items fall all around Adi: couple of books, CDs, pencils, pens, and a lamp. One of the books hits his left foot, a half a dozen of the CDs crash against his arms, few of the pencils and pens crash against his back, and the lamp just barely misses his head. Grabbing his injured body parts, a mad Adi looks up to see a satisfied Maithili who had shoved almost all of the items that had been laying on her table on the poor fellow.
"I smell like garbage huh! Bet you won't even dare to say anything like that ever again!" she shouts as Adi's nostrils begin to flare.
"Oh, you crazy woman! Aggar kuch hota mujhe na, you would be crying your pretty little eyes out!"
"Please, don't think you have that much importance in my life. You are worth less than a useless servant, no less than a rupee!"
Adi picks random things off the ground and starts throwing them upward at Maithili: twigs that land in her hair, stones that make cracks in her window, and handfuls of dry dirt that make a mess of her clothes.
"You insufferable…! Tanu! Tanu!" Maithili walks to her closet and lets her younger sister out from being a hostage.
At the same time, Sharvan pulls up on the curb next to Maithili's house with his headlight-less car.
"Adi! You owe me new headlights man," he walks up to Adi.
"Now Tanu!" yells out an eager Maithili.
A stream of water appears out of the window and lands directly on the spot that Sharvan is standing on. Tanu puts the bucket that she had just filled with water down and sees a wet Sharvan. Maithili follows her gaze and sees a laughing Adi.
Adi continues to laugh, "Nice aim saali-ji."
"What did you just call her?"
"Exactly what she is going to be very soon darling," he smirks back at her.
He then walks over to a shivering Sharvan and tries to control his laughter.
"You ok bro," he puts his hand on Sharvan's shoulder.
"I'm so sorry dude!" a guilty Tanu states firmly.
Sharvan's eyes slowly move upwards and meet Tanu's for the first time.
"Sorry?! Oh, if you're sorry then it's ok huh stupid!"
"You don't have the right to call her stupid!" says a defensive Maithili.
"Yeah, how dare you say that to me, you jerk!" Tanu's guilt melts away as she faces Sharvan's impoliteness.
"Don't call him a jerk!" reacts a defensive Adi.
"Hey, you stop yelling at my sister!"
"You stop yelling at my brother!"
"If you really care about your brother, take him out of here before I teach him a lesson he'll never forget."
"Yeah right. This from a girl who can't even finish sentences," Adi fold his arms.
"What are you talking about?" Maithili frowns at him.
" 'and then confuse me when you come near me,' " Adi imitates Maithili's voice.
"It was a slip of tongue that's all. I meant to say anger me when you come near me," Maithili quickly retorts back.
"Right it was such a slip of tongue that you couldn't even correct yourself afterwards huh."
"Why do you care anyway? Shouldn't you be off chasing the newest girl in your social circle or something?"
"Oh yeah. I have to get back to Ria. Wow, now she is a real woman."
"What is that suppose to mean?" Maithili snatches a book off her table and holds it in a threatening manner.
"Come on bhai. Lets leave the two monsters and go before we get anymore bruised," Sharvan says as Adi stares at Maithili.
"Di, close the window. Those two duffers can not worth getting our selves irritated," Tanu says as Maithili looks at Adi.
"You're right," both Adi and Maithili say.
Maithili closes her window and Adi turns around to return to his car.
This night was the first night when both Adi and Maihili felt like they had been fighting over something that wasn't superficial. They both were fighting over their emerging feelings. One who doesn't like to admit anything and the other who likes to suppress everything.
Edited by roygvib - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww thats so funny
love it love it
plz cont. soon as possible can't wait for their next fight n them getting together lol
one question are sharvan and tanu gonna end up together???
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg! i'm a new reader to this ff n omg! i'm in love! gosh, they're sooo funny n throwing stuff out the window!hahahahaha... contd soon can't wait! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: krazychik92


one question are sharvan and tanu gonna end up together???



umm i dont wanna say. 😆 just keep reading 😉 thanx for the comment!

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CH 9 – Kya, Kya, Kya, Kya, Kya?!

"Just go."

"I said I don't want to."

"Just go already!"

"Bhai, you know I don't like to go downstairs whenever Dadu has his business partners over for a party."

"Yeah I know but you need new headlights. I'm tired of driving you around," Adi flips through the television channels restlessly while sitting on his bed.

"You're the one who smashed my headlights!"

Sharvan grabs the worn-out remote from his cousin's hand after which Adi picks up the extra remote from the table next to him. Annoyed by this, Sharvan reaches to also remove the new remote from Adi's hand.

"You know I have three more remotes hiding around in my room," Adi says plainly as he continues to stare at the television screen.

"Why?" a perplexed Sharvan asks.

"I don't like to change the batteries of the remotes," Adi moves to lie down on his bed.

"Nice logic, bro," says a sarcastic Sharvan as he walks out of the room to go talk to his Dadu.

"I think so," a grinning Adi says to a slamming door.

Taking a deep breath, Sharvan walks down the stairs and looks around for his Dadu. Mr. Suresh Mehra is in deep discourse with a man whose face is blocked by a waiter. After spotting his Dadu, Sharvan starts to walk steadily towards him and he's able to make out pieces of their conversation.

"By the way, how are your daughters doing?"

"They are going fine. It's just a matter of time before they are done with their studies and then I have to worry about finding grooms for them."

"Well, don't your daughters go to the same college as my two nephews, Mr. Khanna."

Sharvan stops walking from utter shock and hides behind a caterer after stuffing some money in the caterer's pocket. He sticks his head out for a second to take a look at the Mr. Khanna's face.

"Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god. That's those monster sisters' father!" he says a little too loudly and slaps his mouth as punishment.

"Yes they do Mr. Mehra. What are you thinking?"

"Your oldest daughter is in the same class as my oldest nephew Adi, right?"

"I believe so. Do you think they know each other?"

Know each other? No they don't know each other. They hate each other!

Sharvan tries to shut his mind up so that he can continue to listen to their conversation.

"I think I saw her here on the day of Sharvan's birthday party, but I don't know if she came here as Adi or Sharvan's guest."

Adi! Adi! Adi's guest, yaar.

"But Sharvan is younger than your oldest daughter, Khanna-saab."

Thank god for my age.

"But not older than my younger daughter Tanu."

What?! No!

"Then again, they both are really young to think about marriage right now. They still have a few more years of college left, Suresh."

"That's right. Tanu and Sharvan are very young for that right now."

Score one for Sharvan!

"So we should ask Maithili and Adi what they think about each other before we decide to dream about their wedding."

"Yes I agree Avinash. In three months or so we can ask them because by then exams will be over and they will have only half a year left to go before they graduate."

"Absolutely Suresh and if they dislike each other, we still have Tanu and Sharvan."

"Good plan," Suresh shakes hands with Avinash.

Oh hell no!

Sharvan picks up what's left of his dropped jaw and heads back upstairs. He runs into Adi's room and closes the door behind him as a confused Adi looks up from his bed.

"What happened? Did Dadu want to slap you for getting your headlights smashed again," he turns back to look at the television program.

More like he wants to get me married. No wait, he wants at least one of us to get married to one of the monster sisters and I am going to make sure that it's not me so I'm sorry Adi bhai.

"Nothing happened. I couldn't find him and I accidentally kicked a waiter who went psycho and started to chase me. That's all."

"Right," a suspicious Adi says.

* * *

Ring! Ring! Ring!

"Oh what the heck man!"

Tanu Khanna opens her eyes in the dark and grabs her ringing cell phone from the table next to her bed.

"It's 3 in the morning so this better be an emergency or else I will kill you!" Tanu screams into the phone.

"It is an emergency junior monster!"

"What did you just call me? And who is this?"

"It's Sharvan."

"Sharvan who?" Tanu rubs her left eye.

"Adi's cousin Sharvan. The one who you dumped a bucket of water on. That Sharvan."

"Oh it's just you. Wait, how did you get my number?"

"From your very friendly friend Shelley."

"Oh I will take care of that girl later but what do you want?"

"We need to meet today before college. Come to the coffee shop across from the college ok. It is really important."

"Yeah right. As if I'm going to come."

She cuts the line as a mad Sharvan redials her number and Tanu yells into the phone again.

"What?!" Sharvan jumps back a little from the phone.

"If you don't want to get married to me, come to the coffee shop!" Sharvan hangs up the phone.

A puzzled Tanu still holds the phone and listens to the dial tone.

"Huh," she lets out softly as she tries to go back to sleep.

* * *

"Kya, kya, kya, kya, kya?!"

"You heard me right. Now do you understand why I needed to see you and why I need your help."

"Are you sure it was my dad."

"Yes, it was Avinash Khanna."

"Damn."

"Exactly, but if we make sure that Adi and Maithili are head over heels in love with each other within three months."

"Three months! That's impossible," Tanu grabs a tighter hold on her cup of coffee.

"No it's not. Do you even watch television? The main leads are in love after a few weeks. It's definitely possible," Sharvan nervously takes a sip from his cup.

"Yeah but this is real life and it's Maithili and Adi."

Just then, as if right on cue, the sound of a collusion is heard and the sound of familiar voices. Tanu and Sharvan look towards the direction of the crash.

"That was my spot, you moron! Get out of there!"

Adi jumps out of the driver's seat and runs to look at the back of his car.

"No, no, no, no! You psycho! Look at what you did to my car," he yells back at Maithili who is still behind the wheel of her car.

"Sweet baby, everything's going to be alright. Okay darling, don't worry," Adi says softly as he runs over the dent and the scratch marks of his car.

Maithili laughs and gets out of her car to reinforce what she thought Adi was doing.

"Are you…are you talking to your car?!" she laughs violently at Adi's actions.

"I'm. trying. to. undo. the. damage. you. have. done. psycho!" Adi takes deep breaths and talks slowly in order to control his anger.

"If. you. hadn't. taken. my. parking. spot. your. darling. would. be. okay. idiot!" Maithili mimics Adi's slow talk.

"Ok that's it. I have had enough from you!" Adi jumps back into his car and backs up right into the Maithili's car.

A shocked Maithili looks on as her headlights strain to remain in tact and the hood of her car tries to maintain its form.

"You have done it again, Vikram Aditiya Mehra!" she gets into her car and starts driving into Adi's car as Adi continues to collide again Maithili's car.

"Ok, here is step number one: we try to stop them from killing each other!" Tanu says.

"Agreed!" Sharvan and Tanu get out of the coffee shop and run towards the freak show occurring in the parking lot of their college.

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Edited by roygvib - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey!!!
Pls continue soon....its really great....LOL....will b lookin forward to these interestin updates 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lol luved this part
so bharat n tanu r so funny lol so kute
adi n metz r gonna completely ruin their cars huh?
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heyy love it
waiting for the next part 👏
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omg where have u gone?!!? update plzzz!! 😳
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no this fic is not dead 😆 so here's a small sneek peak at the next chapter. i should have it done by sunday (US time)
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Flinging his books onto his desk, Adi limps into his room.
Who does she think she is? What region's queen is she? She should have been born with a crown on her head. Thank god her dad took her car away or else I would be under her tires fighting for my life.
"God, how I hate her!" he yells out loud.
"Is something wrong, Adi?" Shikar Mehra enters his son's room with a worried expression on his face.
"Oh, hi dad. I didn't know you were home."
Adi hopes that his father hadn't heard his verbal outburst, but he's disappointed as Shikar continues his questioning.
"So who do you hate Adi?"
"Huh? No one, no one dad," he answers too quickly.
"Does this no one you don't hate have a name?" Shikar sits down at Adi's desk and flips through the books on the desk.
Adi's mind races a mile a minute.
Edited by roygvib - 17 years ago
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yes i know i know. i finalllllyyy updated! 😆 well enjoy n keep the love for Adi and Mets alive.
peace. roz.
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CH 10 – Unforeseen Forces

She looked at him with so much disdain that he had to take a step back and move his eyes from her face. He had been walking to his class when her powerful presence stopped him in his tracks. Now, she too stands still as her expression begins to convey the true extent of her anger.
"You look mad," his eyes prove themselves to be brave by daring to look at her.
"Really?!" she walks towards him at a quick pace. He fears what she will do and steps back to make sure he is not hit with the force of her walk.
"Really! Do I really look mad to you?!" her face is inches away from his as she tip toes to appear just as tall as him.
Adi cowers away like a scared little boy as Maithili continues to fill the empty hall with her loud voice.
"I mean why should I be mad! Just because my dad took my car away while you're allowed to roam around in your new car and on top of all that, my dad thinks I'm crazy! That's nothing to be angry about, right?!"
She keeps walking towards him as he struggles to walk backwards trying to avoid bumping into something.
"Why would he think you're crazy?"
He says timidly and lets out a dangerous chuckle realizing her current actions certainty serve as evidence to prove her craziness. Maithili narrows her eyes as her nostrils flail. With the speed of a lightning bolt, she sticks the heel of her left shoe into Adi's right foot and stomps away towards her class.
"As if you don't know," Maithili mutters under her breath while walking away.
"Ow, ow, ow…..!!" Adi grabs his foot and hears the clear sound of foot steps in the empty hall.
"That's the second time she has done that and her feet are still as huge as an elephant's!"
"I heard that you wimp!" her voice echoes in the hallway.
"All the echoing," he hits his forehead, "of course she can still hear you. Stupid Adi!"
"Yes, very stupid, Adi!" the faint echoes of her steps are heard as she finally appears to be out of earshot.

* * *

A loud car brake and two door slams later…

Flinging his books onto his desk, Adi limps into his room.
Who does she think she is? What region's queen is she? She should have been born with a crown on her head. Thank god her dad took her car away or else I would be under her tires fighting for my life.
"God, how I hate her!" he yells out loud.
"Is something wrong, Adi?" Shikar Mehra enters his son's room with a worried expression on his face.
"Oh, hi dad. I didn't know you were home."
Adi hopes that his father hadn't heard his verbal outburst, but he's disappointed as Shikar continues his questioning.
"So who do you hate Adi?"
"Huh? No one, no one dad," he answers too quickly.
"Does this no one you don't hate have a name?" Shikar sits down at Adi's desk and flips through the books on the desk.
Adi's mind races a mile a minute.
Oh no! Ma!
"Your mother tells me Avinash's older daughter is a very good friend of yours."
Adi swallows hard while the strings of nervousness tug at him. He takes a few steps backwards and bumps into his bed.
"A friend who you fight with all the time and like to crash cars with."
Shikar gets up from the desk as Adi sits down on his bed.
"But dad the car crashing was entirely her fault …"
Cutting Adi off, "yes, yes, I remember how you explained it to me. You were with one of your many girlfriends when Maithili's car hit yours. You said she was jealous."
"Yes dad. She was jealous that I had a relationship with someone when she didn't have anyone like that in her life."
"Wait," Shikar says as he establishes a frown on his face, "You just said she was jealous and that implies that she was jealous because you were with someone other than her."
"What? No. That's not what I meant dad."
"Well you should have been specific the first time around,Adi!" Adi's dad paces around the room with a seemingly concerned expression. "I already told Mr. Khanna that his daughter damaged your car in a jealous rage…."
"Kya?!" Adi pushes himself off the bed as if electric currents were invading his mattress.
"Haan. He was sincerely apologetic for her behavior. Now what are we going to do?"
"Tell him the truth. That will fix the problem. Maithili will get her car back and Khanna-ji will know why his daughter attacked me."
Adi speaks the last two words in such a low volume that had his father not been less than a yard away, it would have been difficult to comprehend the sentence.
I can't believe what my stupid lie has caused. Man, I hope she doesn't hate me too much. Wait, why do I care about that? No, no, I don't care about that. I just don't want Maithili to have any more ammunition against me that's all, right? Right. Right.
"You're wrong, Adi."
"Huh?" he manages to pull himself out of the monologue in his head.
"The damage has already been done. Everyone in our circles will know about this incident in a matter of days. You know how fast gossip travels. We have to control the situation somehow. If we just tell people that she wasn't in a jealous rage but was rather angry about her own single status, they will think that we are making things up to save image. We need to do something drastic."
Adi's stomach suddenly begins to feel sick as he realizes what his dad might have in store for him and …her.
"I need to talk to your Dadu and Mr. Khanna immediately about this," Shikar rushes out of the room leaving a stressed Adi inside.
As he closes the door to his son's room, Shikar Mehra smiles to himself and as he hears claps, turns around to see his wife.
"Well done. A brilliant performance."
"What can I say," he shrugs.
"Adi is so your son."
"He better be," Shikar jokes with his wife as he goes to hug her.

* * *

"Ok here's the plan. We write a letter to Adi and pretend it's from Maithili. In it we tell Adi how much Maithili loves him blah blah blah and wants to meet up with him at a certain place and time. We also do the same thing from Adi's perspective and send it to Maithili."
"Are you serious right now?" Tanu says as she raises her eyebrow and takes a sip of her soda.
"Yeah, why?"
"Where do you get these ridiculous scenarios from? I've heard five straight in a row. And besides, how can they love each other right now? They can barely stand to be at the same college."
"We only have about three months ok."
"Well, we need a bigger better brain for that. A brain that neither you nor I have."
"Knew you'd say that," Sharvan shakes his head.
"Really? Well then, what is your solution? And it better not be another one of your outrageous thoughts."
"You said we need someone else to help us, right? So I asked a friend of mine plus he's also a friend of Adi and Maithili."
"Adi and Maithili have a mutual friend? When did this happen?" Tanu crumples up a piece of paper.
"Yeah they do. I'm just afraid you're not going to like him," Sharvan wears a worried expression.
"Why's that?" Tanu aims the paper ball she has just created for the trash bin across from their table and misses the bin.
"Oh! Sad shot Tanu!"
Tanu's eyes begin to flare at the sound of the familiar voice. She carefully turns her head to the right.
"Tanu Khanna, you really need to spend more time at the basketball court with that kind of arm."
Standing in the doorway of their college's canteen is Manthan Virani with his sunglasses tilted downward to show a little splash of his eyes and a big conceited smile on his face.
"Sharvan, do you know how many years in prison I will have to serve if I was not in my right mind and I accidentally killed someone."

Edited by roygvib - 17 years ago

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