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hey u guys i noe small part but i am trying to figure this story out lmaoo...if u have any ideas plz tell me lol. 😆

Part 27
P: I bet they loved each other a lot!

L: haha…yea they did…but they didn't noe it yet.

After all five talk some more Dev and Preeti head home… In the car with Preeti and Dev:

D: it's weird isn't?

P: what is weird?

D: oie ke unke shakal humse milte hai…

P: han…but u have head of recarnetion (sp?) rite?

D: yea…lol I guess we r supposed to fall in love in this life time too.

P: haha in ur dreams….i don't go for guys like u, ur not my type.

D: oh really? What is ur type soon to be Mrs. Dev Kapoor? 😛

P: well mr. Preeti is gonna kill u soon, my type…( in her mind: is just like u) 😳 …

D: come on…what is ur type? 😉

P: you won't understand (smiles n looks out the window.) 😳

i noe short part but i have to hurry cuz i have dance class...yes jail has began AGAIN! it is sad i noe...lol but my teacher is back from india n she wants us to have dance practice today....n it is snowing like crazy here...it has already snowed like ONE foot lol i hope we dont have skool tom. plz god!! 😆

~Preeti~

hello....firt one to comment!!! woot...my parents get annoyed coz i sumtmes only speak gujju and wen i speka hindi it sounds weird lol....good part.....make dem fall in love with each other.....and cmon seriously how can u not enjoy dancing i am missing my shiamak....it starts soon...woot!!! lol......

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

hello....firt one to comment!!! woot...my parents get annoyed coz i sumtmes only speak gujju and wen i speka hindi it sounds weird lol....good part.....make dem fall in love with each other.....and cmon seriously how can u not enjoy dancing i am missing my shiamak....it starts soon...woot!!! lol......

oh ok lol i noe wat u mean... 😛 i speak punjabi at home but at skool i had to speak hindi in front of everyone cuz it was diversity day or week n it was soooo weird...my friends where like... 😕 DUDE that didnt even sound like u!!! lol n WHAT R U TALKING ABOUT? I LOVE DANCING! 😳 music is my life man!! i just like music that i cant understand! it is all gujju music lol so i cant understand one word! lol i mean give me arabic chaldean music 😃 ...i can understand that but i cant understand gujju music lol... 😆 😉

hey preeti...gud last part...continue soon// 😃

Originally posted by: sonalkhullar

hey preeti...gud last part...continue soon// 😃

thank u! next part is coming up rite now!!

Part 28
The next few days go the same. Dev and Preeti go to Sonia's house and Love and Josh tell them more about their Preeti and Dev. Dev and Preeti also keep getting more flashbacks…soon they are seeing each other in a new way.
At Uni.

You see a couple of people talking with Preeti
"Hey Preeti…so the dance is coming up…are you going with anyone?" asks Amit. "yea…she is going with me…rite hun?" says Jay b4 Preeti can answer. "uh no..." says Preeti. Dev comes and says " so what are we all…arguing about?" "Well…Amit asked me to the dance but apparently I am going with Jay...who I do not remember asked me out yet." Dev stares at Amit and than Jay, "hey! I have a solution for this…" everyone looks at dev. "Why don't I just go with Preeti?" He grabs Preeti's hand and runs for it. He stops at the skool garden and Preeti starts laughing.

"why are you laughing?"

"cuz you are crazy"

"you figured that out now? wow Preeti ur slow"

Both Laugh.
Dance:
Everyone is having fun and like planed Dev and Preeti come together.
" Can I have this dance?" asks dev putting his hand out.
Preeti nods and both go to the dance floor.

The song that is playing is Jay Sean, Rishi Rich, and
Juggy D's Mere Nal Nachla ( I love this song.) here is the video: http://youtube.com/watch?v=Tf23OBDgyqg

UK (C'mon)

Girl you got exactly what I need
I aint gonna lie with you is where I wanna be
All up in the club the finest girl I see
I know that you want me to come over to you and talk
I'm just tryna keep it real with you
Are you feeling me the way I'm feeling you
You go call your crew and Ima call my crew
Coz Jay, Rishi Rich and Juggy D are coming through

Kurri soni te akh mastani
Tu giddha de rani, Ne gal sun ja
Tu dil kholeyain te mere man mohleyain
Te ek galan horiyan, Ne gal sun ja

Ho mehta tere naal nachnaa
Ho mehta tere naal nachnaa
I just wanna dance with you
Ho mehta tere naal nachnaa...nachnaa...nachnaa...nachnaa

Girl what have I told you
Been thinking of all the possible lyrical ways
To come and approach you
Haven't been able to think of anything
Other than wanting to reach ya
I aint tryna speach ya
I aint gonna use any lyrics to impress ya

A gentleman from the start
I'll get you a drink at the bar
Thinking I'm making you tickle and laugh
Telling me you wanna head to the car
If its alright with you then its alright with me
So get your coat coz tonight you're leaving with me

Now I've got you in my ride
Tell me what's on your mind
Shall we continue moving on, cruising on

Girl we're heading to my home (we're heading to my home...)
We'll take it nice and slow (take it nice and slow...)
And I will show you what it is I wanna do (but only if you dare..!)

Ho mehta tere naal nachnaa
Ho mehta tere naal nachnaa
I just wanna dance with you
Ho mehta tere naal nachnaa...nachnaa...nachnaa...nachnaa
Ho mehta tere naal nachnaa
Ho mehta tere naal nachnaa
I just wanna dance with you
Ho mehta tere naal nachnaa...nachnaa...nachnaa...nachnaa

I just want you next to me
A lil taste of ecstacy
Tomorrow you'll be texting me
You know it's true
Girl if you just roll with me
Maybe get to know with me
If you wanna maybe come on home with me
And we can do whatever you wanna do

Ho mehta tere naal nachnaa
Ho mehta tere naal nachnaa
I just wanna dance with you
Ho mehta tere naal nachnaa...nachnaa...nachnaa...nachnaa

Ho mehta tere naal nachnaa
Ho mehta tere naal nachnaa
I just wanna dance with you
Ho mehta tere naal nachnaa...nachnaa...nachnaa...nachnaa

As the song ended Preeti and Dev for dancing closely

Flash

At the club.

Preeti and dev close to each other and they kiss

Flash

Dev turns Preeti around and grabs her hand. he takes her to his car and drives to the beach. Preeti didn't say anything the whole way as she too was trying to sort out wat was happening btw her and Dev. They reach the beach n both get out and start walking…suddenly Dev gets down on one knee and says " Preeti …I love you…Marry me?" Preeti is shocked but is happy. "yes." Dev slips the ring he was holding and gets up and hugs Preeti.


hey you guys i noe..moving a lil fast...sry! there is only one short part left...and than i will start a new ff soon...and it will be MUCH better than this one lol...this is my first try soo u noe lol thankz and hope u enjoy...last part will be up by tonight or tom. :)

Last Part:

Dev gets down on one knee and says " Preeti …I love you…Marry me?" Preeti is shocked but is happy. "yes." Dev slips the ring he was holding and gets up and hugs Preeti.

3 years later.

You see a beautiful house. You go inside and Crash! "nooo!! Mum is gonna kill me!" you see a 3 yr old boy standing by a broken base. He picks up the ball that is rolling away and runs to his room. He puts the ball in his toy chest and runs back down to the living room where the mess has been made. "WHAT HAPPENED IN HERE?!" the boy turns around and is shocked to see his mum, no other than Preeti. "oh mum…the ball…n than throwing…n…" the boy starts crying. Preeti sighs and goes to the lil boy n says " Shaan…it's ok..hun…now stop crying." "hey what happened to my big boy?" says a man walking in the door. "Dev…he broke a vase." "so?" asks Dev. "he just started crying. "i..i…di..di…didn't mean to!!" says a hiccupping Shaan. Dev takes shaan out of Preeti's arms and says.."it is ok..it is just a vase, we can buy a new one sweetheart!"

At night; in Dev and Preeti's room:

Dev comes and hugs Preeti from the back. "happy aniversery!" Preeti laughs " I have been married to an idiot like you for 3 years now…that's a new record." "kya Preeti! Romantic mood kya turn off na kar!" Preeti laughs and turns around so she is facing dev. Dev picks Preeti up and takes her towards to the bed…………

The End.

ok so this is the end...i had fun writing this ff; i learned a lot from here too. i can bet you that my next ff will deff. not be like how i wrote this one lol. my writing style is gonna be very different. But i kinda glad that this ff is over. i thought i kinda became Ekta Kapoor and stretched it when i did the rebirth thing lol. but i hope you guys enjoyed! 😉 if or when i write my next ff i will post the link here if you guys want it or u can pm me...if i am going to rite one than it will be posted after this weekend :) thankz for reading this ff and bearing with me 😆 u guys, exspecially Sonal and Sonia! i wanted to close this ff but you guys really encouraged me not to, thank you! 🤗 🤗
luv u all,
~Preeti~ 😳

aww...lovely ending..but u ended it... 😭 ..wel..hope u start neother ff soon...n i mean soon... 😉

Originally posted by: sonalkhullar

aww...lovely ending..but u ended it... 😭 ..wel..hope u start neother ff soon...n i mean soon... 😉

aww sonal ur sooo cute!!!! n i am starting another one...n i had my friend proof read it n she really likes it lol she wants to join I-F now lol but the best part is....SHE IS NOT EVEN DESI! lmaoo 😆