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Posted: 17 years ago
hey u guys come on!! i am not getting any comment except from Sonia!! do u not like it? is it that bad? 😕 i wont stop though cuz i dont like leaving things unfinshed... 😆 but if there are any silent readers plz give me some sign of life!! so i noe that u apperciate it...i dont care if the comments are good or bad like: "WOW preeti great job!!" or " sheesh preeti wat garbage are u riting?!!!" ANYTHING will work! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

ok here is the next part!!! enjoy!!

Recap:

You see two bodies being cremated (sp?) and than the ashes being set free into the sea…

Today: Part 23

20 years pass…

You see a two middle aged people sitting at a dinning table in a nice house. They appear to be married. The woman says:

W: sachi es larki ka kya karu? Aj es ka college hai aur abhi ve ne uthi!

M: kya Loveleen thora safar karna seekle!

Loveleen: L

L: Josh!! Tum apke beti ka side boath late ho! U have spoiled her to death!

Than u see a cute girl coming down the stairs…she seems to be 19 or so. Girl: G

G: good morning mama! Good morning papa!

She goes and kisses both her parents on their cheek.

L: kya ha Sonia! Yeh koi time hai uthen liye? Aj college ve janna hai!

Sonia: S

S: mama! Me late ne hu!

Sonia Sharma: The only daughter of Josh and Loveleen. A very sweet girl. She is 19 years old and doing a fashion major at London University.

Josh and Loveleen: yes they have gotten married…after the death of Preeti and Dev they relised that they loved each other…(I noe wat ur thinking…how can u relies u love someone after a death…idk…just go with the flow plz lol). They moved to London because everything in New York reminded them of their best friends. They a pretty happy family…except for when they remember those ppl who were…no…ARE so close to their hearts.

S: ok mum and dad, I have to hurry…I don't want to be late!

Sonia runs out the door and into her car and drives to London University. She reaches her destination and comes out of the car. You see Sonia go to a girl who is sitting on the hood of her Jeep Liberty.

S: arre yaar! I noe I noe! I am late…sry!

Girl:G

G: yea yea…lets go…

They both start walking towards their class.

G: you noe it's the first day of collage and you come 5 min. b4 the bell rings…I am surprised…you set a record!

B4 Sonia can reply a guy comes to them:

Guy: GU

GU: hey Preeti! Wat u doing tonight?

Yes…the girl is no other than Preeti!

Preeti: 19 year girl who was born n raised in London. Her parents are Kusum and Naresh Choudary (sp?). Only child. They both care very much about their daughter and have spoiled her to death. They own a fashion house called Fraishta (Idk how to spell angel in hindi..sry). Preeti is VERY sweet and kind. (fashion major)

P: sry John…I am busy maybe some other time?

S: wow…how many times have you turned him down?

P: idk...i lost count…lol.

S: ok so I got gossip..you want to hear?

P: duh!

Right as Sonia was about to say something both girls crashed into a guy.

Guy: G

G: oh shit..sry!

S and P: its ok

Flash!

First day of uni. Preeti and dev crash into each other.

Flash!

You Preeti looking at this guy n thinking: aisa ku lagta hai ke yeh phele ve ho chukka hai?

G: hi… I am Dev… Dev Kapoor. (puts his hand out)

Preeti shakes his hand.

Flash!

Preeti and Dev are shopping and Preeti pulling Dev's hand.

Flash!

Dev smiles n thinks: aisa ku lagta hai ke me es say mil chukka hu?

DING DING!

S: oh shit! One min. left b4 class starts! Preeti let's go!

While Preeti is being pulled to class she yells:

P: I'm Preeti!

Dev smiles and leaves for his class.

Dev Kapoor: only son of Dilip and Naina. Apple of their eye…they own the fashion house called: Ischa (wish). Dev is a very sweet handsome guy. He was born and grew up in London too. (Business Major)

ok you guys i bet ur confused...yes RECARNATION!! rebirth!! ok now NOTE: Dev and Preeti have never met! London is a big city u noe! ok n Sonia's parent have never seen Preeti...lets say cuz when ever she comes..they r too busy lol i hope u enjoyed!!😳

Love,

Preeti!

Edited by hotaditya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
verii interesting partss....i lyke de recarnation idea....cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sonalkhullar

verii interesting partss..thank u..i lyke de recarnation idea...lol i noe me too..one day it just came to me.cont soon... i am writing the part right now!😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

jaan...i really think u need to improve your vocabulary...lol but thank u..i am writing the part right now.😉

Mrs. Khanna😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
hello...loved the part...like always...cont. soon....

Sonia
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Posted: 17 years ago
ATTN: hey u guys! i just want to tell u b4 hand that holiday break is coming up for me and after this friday i will be cont. everyday untill break is over! just so u noe ok? thanks for the comments!
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok u beta cont everyday...lol even though i am on summer hols i don't continue everyday....u show ur commitment...
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

ok u beta cont everyday...lol even though i am on summer hols i don't continue everyday....u show ur commitment...

First of all...BETA? arre yaar! ur younger than me...so how am i ur beta lol? well u prob. dont cont. everyday cuz ur busy. n i want to finish this ff b4 finals n dance class begins...if i dont finish b4 that than u guys will only get like one update per week...n i dont want my silent reader...if i have any to be mad lol. 😆

Love,

Mrs. Khanna aka Preeti 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hotaditya

First of all...BETA? arre yaar! ur younger than me...so how am i ur beta lol? well u prob. dont cont. everyday cuz ur busy. n i want to finish this ff b4 finals n dance class begins...if i dont finish b4 that than u guys will only get like one update per week...n i dont want my silent reader...if i have any to be mad lol. 😆

Love,

Mrs. Khanna aka Preeti 😳

Hello!!! not beta to u...duh i mean that u better continue everyday....lol.....

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