hell yeah my hand hurt!!! i am riting the next part rite now....
n neev is cute but dev is punjabi!!! get me? lolz 😆
n rani i read it it rocked!!! but it wont let me comment 😕 y?
ok i am done here i go:
Part 14
THE FIRST HALF
Recap: kiss….preeti runs away…dev catches
TODAY:
Dev: preeti!
He holds her tight so she doesn't run again.
D: man! I have never seen u run so fast!
Preeti lookz away n he turns around so she is facing him
D: look idk wat happened in there ….do u regret it? (thinkz: cuz I don't)
P: ….idk if I do…idk anything rite now!
She starts to cry a lil. Dev wants to hug her but doesn't noe if he should….he does anywayz. He reaches for preeti n hugs her….she hugs back.
After a while preeti's fone starts to ring
RING! RING!
Preeti n dev come apart, she puts her fone on speaker on accident.
P: (to fone) hello?
V: where r u?
P: oh adi… I am…at home.
A: oh...wait! y?
P:…um…well…my stomach was hurting.
A: oh ok…do u want me to come over?
Dev shakes his head n preeti giggles
A: hello? Wats so funny?
P: nothin…u don't have to come over I am doing fine. U can just go home, besides its getting late. Thankz anywayz.
A: (disappointed) ok bye. See u later?
P: we will see. Bye! I g2g now…my dad is calling me.
A: but ur parents r on vacation.
Dev slapz his forehead.
P: they r on ….the other ling ADI!
A: oh ok bye.
She hangs up.
D: when did he become so possessive with u? wat r u his wife?
Preeti laughs
P: sighs…soon to be. L
D: lets hurry up n take u home.
P: y?
D: u never noe…he might come to ur house to ck on u!!
P: (sarcastic) haha.
They both leave for preeti's house.
In they car:
SILENCE
D: ( I wished I never kissed her….then maybe I wouldn't have lost a friend…b4 she n I would talk all the time..n now….but y did I like the kiss? Y did I want her to be close to me?
D: thinkz: can she read my mind or something?
D: aloud: no no
D: preetz (I wished MY bf called me that…not that I have a bf….or do i? haha that is the question!) can I ask u a question?
P: no…(starts laughing) of course u can wat kind of question is that?
D: y did u run away?
P: idk…i am sry for that btw…I guess I was just scared.
D: scared? Scared for wat?
They reach preeti's house b4 she can answer the question.
P: OMG!
D: wat happened?
P: I really think u should become a fortune teller.
D: huh? Y?
P: he's here.
D: who?
Dev lookz at where preeti was looking n starts laughing n cant stop.
P: stop laughing!!
D: sry..but…hahaha! I told u he would come he to ck on u!!!
Yes yes its no other then adi who has come to preeti's house.
Adi is about to get out of his car n ring the door bell when dev n preeti run to the back yard n go into the house from the back door.
DING! DONG!
Preeti runs n opens the door…but b4 she goes to her room n grabs a robe (cuz she is in her club clothes!)
P: wat r u doing here?
A: to ck on u.
P: oh u don't trust me? Haha
A: oh no no I just wanted to make sure u were ok.
P: well I am! …..u want to come in?
Adi smiles
P: sit I will go change n then get u some coke.
She goes into her room n closes the door n sighs with her eyes closed.
V: having fun?
She opens her eyes as she recognizes that voice anywhere.
P: DEV! Wat r u doing here?
D: I came to find ur diary.
P: lolz I don't have one!
D: oh
Preeti goes to change into her night suit n comes out.
D: y not?
P: huh?
D: y don't u have a diary?
P: well i never remembered about it…i would alwayz forget that I had one. Lozl
D: oh.
P: y r u asking?
D: cuz I wanted to noe ur deep dark secrets.
Preeti just laughs n goes downstairs.
i will post the 2nd half tom. sry i typed it its just it got deleted cuz my comp. shut down on me. :(
Edited by hotaditya - 17 years ago
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