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Posted: 17 years ago

my friends name is skyler! :) lolz ok sry i didnt cont. yesterday i was not feeling so good so i fell asleep around 6 in the evening! n i woke up at 5:30 in the morning .....hehe sry i will post the next part in a half hour 😃

P.S. thankz for the lovely comments😛

Edited by hotaditya - 17 years ago
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second half....n b4 it starts i just want to say ...i noe it sucks... 😭

T: ok class we r going to start anew project today that will be due Monday (today is Friday) n b4 u get too excited…u do not get to pick ur partner…I do (smiles)

Class: groans

T: yea yea…so lets start….ok love n josh, tyler n skyler, n so on…last but not least Dev n Preeti.

D: (too aloud) PERFECT!

Preeti smacks her forehead n dev just smiles like an idiot.

The class starts doing their project….

D: Preeti….y is it that we r always partners? ( not waiting for an answer) I think its cuz Vahiguru wants us to be together.

P: uh…no its cuz Vahiguru has cursed me to be with u….(looking up) y Vahiguru ? Y?

Love n josh r watching n start laughing.

L: u too r soooo cute together!

Preeti scoffs "yea sure."

Abhi is watching n getting pretty mad….she wanted to be with dev but nooo…she got stuck with matt the nerd…..who actually wasn't that smart.

Abhi goes over to the gang.

A: OMG! Dev I was soooo worried last night (touching his cheek) where did u go?

Dev gets uncomfortable with her hand there n pushes her hand away.

D: preeti was not feeling well so I took her home.

Abhi glares at Preeti n preeti just smiles.

A: oh ok….then y don't we go to dinner tonight?....i mean after all we r getting married!

D: actually I wanted to talk to u about that…(looks at preeti for support)…

Preeti comes close to dev n dev puts his arm around preetis waist. Abhi is fuming right now.

A: (scoffs) wat? Don't tell me that this witchie whore put a spell on u n now ur like totally in love with her!

D: (losing her patience) first of all she is not a witch! N second of all if u ever…EVER… call my LOVE a whore u will get it!!! GOT IT?

Preeti had never seen this side of dev….she was also scared of him right now…but looking at abhi's face she just laughed. By now everyone was looking there way n seeing the drama….n everyone new that abhi was madly in love with dev since pre-k.

The bell rings n dev grabs preeti's hand n leaves the classroom.

A: (thinks) no one ever talks to abhilasha…(uh.. watever munni's last name is) that way!

Canteen

Preeti laughing: haha omg! Wow dv I never new u could be sooo mean! I am proud of u my son!

D: (smiles) well…wat can I say? She gets on my nerves. I would of died if I married her….our (d n a) kids would be mental but now…OUR (d n p) kids will be perfect…speaking of kids I want A LOT….like a cricket team…no wait….make that 2 cricket teams. J one is girls n other is boys.

Preeti's mouth is wide open

P: now if u think I will got through all that labor…I don't think so hun!

D: awww…plz?

P: nope

D: fine…I guess u want me to be sad….for the rest of my life….cuz u don't want to give me kids….

P: haha I didn't say I wont give u any kids I said I wont give u THAT many kids….but 2 is enough J

D: 10?

P: 2

D: 8?

P: 2

D: 6?

P: 2

D: 7?

P: 1

D: ok ok 2 is fine (dissapointed)

P: (pats his cheek) now that's a good boy

Love n josh laugh uncontrolably.

J: (trying to stop laughing) haha!!! U …..guys….r..sooo…in love!!! Haha!!

P: (sarcatic) duh! Its cuz we r!

preview: wat happens at dev's house? trouble?

ok u guys i will post part 16 tom. comment....😊

Edited by hotaditya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
..grat part!!
they are sooo cute togethorr..!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

ok so i am cont. i noe its short but the best is yet to come 😉

Canteen

Preeti laughing: haha omg! Wow dv I never new u could be sooo mean! I am proud of u my son!

D: (smiles) well…wat can I say? She gets on my nerves. I would of died if I married her….our (d n a) kids would be mental but now…OUR (d n p) kids will be perfect…speaking of kids I want A LOT….like a cricket team…no wait….make that 2 cricket teams. J one is girls n other is boys.

Preeti's mouth is wide open

P: now if u think I will got through all that labor…I don't think so hun!

D: awww…plz?

P: nope

D: fine…I guess u want me to be sad….for the rest of my life….cuz u don't want to give me kids….

P: haha I didn't say I wont give u any kids I said I wont give u THAT many kids….but 2 is enough J

D: 10?

P: 2

D: 8?

P: 2

D: 6?

P: 2

D: 7?

P: 1

D: ok ok 2 is fine (dissapointed)

P: (pats his cheek) now that's a good boy

Love n josh laugh uncontrolably.

J: (trying to stop laughing) haha!!! U …..guys….r..sooo…in love!!! Haha!!

P: (sarcatic) duh! Its cuz we r!

The day come to an end

Part 16

….. as preeti n dev were leaving……

P: hey remember we have to finish our project…

D: oh yea! Ok come over my house today…we can start our project n…(smiles) start our plan.

P: haha…ok…bye

D: (grabs her arm) wooo…. Not like that …abhi is right there. U have to say bye the right way!

P: oh really?

D: yes…(smiles naughtly)

P: (giggles) n wat way is that?

D: a kiss…of course!

P: ok…

Preeti goes close to him n kisses him on the cheek. She is about to leave but dev grabs her arm again.

P: sigh…wat now?

D: I meant a kiss on the lips….

P: haha in ur dreams!

D: so the kiss on ur brithday was in my dreams?...oh yea n last night was in my dreams?

P: YUPP! (laughs n leaves)

D: (smiles) man she is impossible!

N has dev said abhi was watching all this n was fuming in anger.

A: ahhh! I cant believe this! Ripi I need to noe wat happened aat the club that changed things so much!

R: but first of all…y weren't u there in the first place?

A: oh …I ..uh…(embarrassed) I was following adi

R: oh ok…

AT DEV'S HOUSE

DING DONG!

Dev's mom (DM) comes n opens the door.

DM: oh preeti!

P: hi auntie how r u?

Both hug

DM: I am good….u? (confused)

P: good…n I see that ur son the duffer hasn't told u that I was coming right?

DM: (laughs) he didn't but ur always welcome here!

Now u see dev running down the stairs.

D: mom can u call preeti's parents over for dinner? (with out waiting for an answer) ok thanks!

He grabs preeti's hand n takes her upstairs.

DM just laughs at her son.

will cont. on mon. or tues ...whenever i get time to rite a part😊

Edited by hotaditya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
no one liked it?.....oh well.....
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ~*!Ripi!*~

..grat part!! thankz!
they are sooo cute togethorr..!! i noe...😛

p.s. y arent u on any more? i miss u yaar!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sonalkhullar

hey preeti...gr8 part....plzzzz update soon.... 😛 thank u! n i did😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

awesome, i like it so far i am glad u liked it! plz do tell me if u dont like something ok? i like to noe wat my readers want me to improve on....😊

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Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

awesome, nice part thank u! i love to see ur comments haha...would u like to predict wat happens next?

THIS GOES FOR EVERYONE....PREDICT WAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT.....😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey preeti....continue soon...if possible todayy....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😉

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