No More Love: AM: Pg 4: A meets M - Page 2

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-Jwalamukhi- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1 comming in about 1 hour.
-Jwalamukhi- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1 -

A girl is shown sleeping and suddenly the girl screams and gets up. Another girl whos name is Mukti gets up, turns the light on and asks the girl who had just screamed if she was OK.

M: Are u OK Mathli?
Mets: Yea. I just had a bad dream about.....
Mu: U were thinking about it and him right?
M: Yes, I don't know what to do! I try to forget him but I just can't! Can't believe that it was all a joke! I loved him more then anyone! His eyes, his smile, his talks! He was just perfect!

While Mets said that, there were flashes and then the guys Eyes, smile and talks were shown.
Mu: BUT U HAVE TO FORGET HIM! Said angirly!
Mu: Don't u know what he did to u? That night? U even lost your baby u fought with everyone for! Even ur own mom! Don't u remember?

And Mets started crying on hearing the word baby.

M: I know! I lost my everything to him!
Mu: I hate men! They are just soo selfish! I want to go back to my old liffe! Away from these horrible memories! Away! I want to fulfill my dream of becoming a doctor that I had a year ago! When I was in collage...with u, Prem, Radhika, Sunny! I want those days back!

Flashback -

A girl is shown playing cricket with boys from the age of 10 to 15. The girl is up for batting and the boy throws the ball, the girl hits it and the ball goes high in the air, comes down, hits Prem on the head eventually making him go bonkers, then the hitting the car, then a bald man, and finally breaking the glass of a window. The girls face is finally shown and its Mathili. The guy whos window the ball had landed in comes to his balcony and yells at Mets and the other kids.

Guy: How dare u hit a ball at my window? U know how much the window costs?
Kid: Well, lets see, more then the ball and the bat toghter!?
Guy: Yea! It does cost more then the ball and bath put toghter!
Kid: Uncle...why do u have this much costly window when u could get the cheap ones so that when we break the windows, u don't have to get double the money!
Guy: Well, this is the 1115 ball that has hit my window in the last 5 months! If this keeps on going on then....then...then...I don't know what I will do but i will do something real bad!
Kid: Whatever.

Prem was trying to get up from the ground when the guy throws the ball down again and it hits Prem at the same spot that it had before driving Prem more bonkers!

That was it for today guys. More after I get more comments.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
Ce sOir 2h quelqu'un va s'apercevOir
qu'il t'm fOnd si tu l'envOie 15 persOnNes il te le dira si tu brises cette chaine tu n'auras que du malheUr tOute ta vie et je te
prOmets que a marche ce n'est PaS des btises et ne l'envOie PaS ce celle
qui te l'a envOyer Fais cOpier coL ler et envOie le si tu perderas
quelqu'un a ki tu tien


cool part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
Aww PM are in the story as well šŸ˜
Why is methilli crying???? Continue soon
Patel 1993 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PM in the story, oh why didn't u say so Shifali?
do continue soon, it has been quite a while.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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excellent start... i jus read ur other ffs as well, n i luved all of them, so im highly awaiting for u to cont
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: May1902

Aww PM are in the story as well šŸ˜
Why is methilli crying???? Continue soon

Yes, PM too...u will find out next part.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

excellent start... i jus read ur other ffs as well, n i luved all of them, so im highly awaiting for u to cont

Aw...thanx and will do.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Gr8 Shifali....i cant even 2 FFs at a tym šŸ˜† ,and u're writin more than 5 together...thts gr8...plz,cont.soon...i'm dying to read the next part... 😃

BTW,jis ''uncle'' ka kaanch toota hai,is tht Adi?? šŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2

Present -


After hearing what happened to Atul when the ball had hit him and how the guy had screamed at them all, Mukti had a smile on her face but still with tears for Mets.

Mu: And remember when u, Prem, Radhika met me and Shekhar? 1st it only used to be the group of u 3 when u met me and Shekhar...

Mets smiled.

M: I remember, the 1st time, all our little fights, then him coming into our life pretending to be our true friend....and started crying again.
Mu: I remember every single thing....how he made u fall in love with him, and how u guys spent the "night" toghter...then the next day, he telling u that it was all a bet with one of his friends adn there was nothing serious...then u pregnant, fighting for ur babys right...asking him to own the baby...him stabbing uar stomach....u losing ur baby...him going back to Mauritius....u coming to Delhi....and crying ur heart out for ur baby...I remember everything that happened to u.

Mets started crying again when her mind started thinking again to the moment when she was in collage.

Flashback -

After Prem had finally woken up from his "little" sleep that he had had. Ridz and Prem with their 1 other friend, Radhika were coming to collage when a car comes and goes through a mud puddle splashing all the mud on Prem.

P: Not again! 1st the ball then this...God what is happening?

And calls out to the person in teh car, 'Oye! What the heck is ur problem? Are u blind or what? Eh....U can't just do that adn u have to talk to me.'

A girl comes out of the car and says sorry to Prem. Prem keeps on staring at the girl like he was deep in love...when violins started playing in the backround...then Prem started singing...

Ek ladki ko dekha to asia laga
ki ek kilta gulab
jaise shair ka khwaab
jaise bijli ke rang
Ohh....ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga...

And to his suprise when he looked at the girl...we came to know that she was Mukti!

Mu: Aw...how sweet of u to sing a song!
P: Thank u...I am a ready made singer...
Sapna started laughing adn so did Mets and the others..
M: Hey..I am Meithli and these are my friends, Radhika and Prem, introuding them.'Wanna be friends?'
Mu: Sure! I am Sapna and this is my brother, Shekhar and a guy got out of the car and said hi.

Days past and Mets, Prem, Mukti, Radhika and Shekhar became really good friends and while they were toghther Atul would try to flirt with Sapna and this kept going on.

One day..while all 5 of them were in the canteen, they saw a guy getting off his bike leaving Radhika and all the other girls except Mets day dreaming.
Seeing Radhika and Mukti looking at the new guy...Mets got irritated and left the table.
As she was going to her class, the new guy bumps into Mets. And after bumping into her, he tells Mets his name.

New guy: Hey! My name is Adi.

Taking his hand out for Mets to shake.

Edited by *Shifali* - 17 years ago

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