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Posted: 16 years ago

Yay!! Di ur okay now!!

Soo happy,

OMG. The bar scene was soo good!! Kripa shouted at Shabd.

WOW..

😆 - Listen just agree 2 everyfing they are sayin den once da weddin date cmz u lot do1.

That was a funni line. Armaan...Stupid!!
Dont u make Angad marry Ridhimma di...i'll kill you. I have a knife ready in my hand...im gonna come to the USA and yea...so watch it!! 😆
Does Alisha have somthing to do with Shabd and whatsoever??
Something unexpected happens!!!!!!! YAHH. I bet its Kripa's memory cause you kno u love me!! 😆 Yea yea emotional blackmail but still....
Cont soon and PM me.
Harji
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ak lover

read the whole ff rite nw. its jus awesome, waiting for nxt part

Thx a lot 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
awsome part, keep it up loved it [:d] but i'm still waiting for what will happen next 😆. Sorry i got dc on msn 😕.

Love, Laiba
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Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

Yay!! Di ur okay now!!

Soo happy,

OMG. The bar scene was soo good!! Kripa shouted at Shabd.

WOW..

- Listen just agree 2 everyfing they are sayin den once da weddin date cmz u lot do1.

That was a funni line. Armaan...Stupid!!
Dont u make Angad marry Ridhimma di...i'll kill you. I have a knife ready in my hand...im gonna come to the USA and yea...so watch it!!
Does Alisha have somthing to do with Shabd and whatsoever??
Something unexpected happens!!!!!!! YAHH. I bet its Kripa's memory cause you kno u love me!! Yea yea emotional blackmail but still....
Cont soon and PM me.
Harji

Thx a lot Harji😃
i live in UK nt USA😆 dnt wori i myte nt get dem married keep reading
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -Laiba-

awsome part, keep it up loved it [:d] but i'm still waiting for what will happen next . Sorry i got dc on msn .

Love, Laiba

Thx a lot Laiba 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
I will update inabit Im so sori 4 da delay been busy wid uni
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Part 80

The next day its HOLI!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Every1 is very happy and gettin ready, after a while every1 cmz dwnstairz in Khanna Mansion (Viveks house) and they go 2 da garden, ders different colours everywhere we c Mayank and Sukriti (Angads cuzins)

Mayank- SUKU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM GNA KILL U JUST WAIT

Suku- Catch me 1st hehe

Mayank- I gt u

Suku- No u didnt (she bent dwn)

Nupur waz standing behind and all da colour went on her

Suku laughed and ran 2 Angad

Suku- Poor Bro Nupurs gna kill him nw hehe

Angad- Yh its gna be funni

They both laughed

Suku- Angad Bro wers Laiba

Angad- Shes insyde she sed she dnt wana cm

Suku- I will call her

Nw we c Mayank and Nupur

Nupur- Mayu ka bacha ur so dead (she gt bucket full of water colour mixed 2geva)

Mayank- Nupur... listen yh dat werent 4 u dat waz 4 Suku Nupur listen......... no Nupur

Nupur dumped da whole bucket on him den she laughed

Mayank- Dats it Nupur nw u watch

Nupur- Mayu burah na manoh HOLI HAI!!!!!!

Mayank- U wait

Mayank and Nupur were running afta each oda

Meanwhile we c Suku finding Laiba insyde da house and we c Ammy talkin 2 Angad

Ammy- Angad wers Laiba

Angad- Shes insyde shes nt talkin 2 me properly uno since she found out bout our plan and all, I really duno wah 2 do I'm gna tell da truth 2 Mom, Dad afta da party

Ammy- Uno shes nt talkin 2 me properly even y cant she just understand

Angad- Ammy its nt da rite tyme yet ok u should give her sm more tyme

Ammy- I am buh u c she should atleast talk 2 me I will go and call her, yh I will also be da 1st person 2 put colour on her (Ammy ran insyde)

Angad- AMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just den Ridz came

Ridz- Happy Holi Angad (she put colour on his cheek)

He does da same

Angad- Happy Holi Ridz

Ridz- Wers Ammy and Laiba

Angad- Der insyde uno Laiba nt talkin 2 us properly coz of da plan and all Ammy gne 2 call her and so is Suku

Ridz- Dnt wori she will understand

Summit, Kumkum, Shashank and Padma so dem talking they were so happy

Nw we Malhotra Mansion every1 is busy wid da party arrangement in da garden

Shaz is playin Holi wid every1

Shaz- Happy Holi Nani, Mama, (she put colour on them)

Veena/Ganga- Happy Holi Beta (they put colour on her)

Shaz- Mama, wers Daddy and Di

Ganga- Dev aur Kripa doctor keh pass ghe hue kuch tablets leni thi aur doctor ko Kripa keh signature chahiye the toh woh dono wahaan ghe hue hai they wil be bck inabit wers every1 else?

Shaz- K Mom well Shabd Jiju is sleepin and da rest r gettin ready, Sujal Bro gne out and yh Shabd Jijus Uncle and Aunty are over der I swear Mom der annoying

Ganga- Shaz aise nahiye kehthe der our guests Shaz call every1 dwn aur haan tell Shabd 2 wake up nw beta its 11 all da guests will be cmin at 1

Shaz- Jee Mom

Shaz goes upstairz 2 wake Shabd she takes sm colour wid her, she goes 2 Shabds room and hes sleepin so peacefully

Shaz- Jiju!!!!!!!!!!!! get up!!!!!!!!

He still doesnt get up

Shaz- Hw dare u Jiju u ignore Shaz (she gets colour and makes a funny face on Shabds face and den she laughs) Dis wah u get 4 nt listening 2 Shaz

She goes 2 da gangs rooms

Shaz- U lot ready

Sam/Lucky/Rob- Yh we look like idiots

Tanz- Talk 4 urselfs I look gurjus

Lucky- (Laughed) Gurjus no wayz u look even more ugly in dese

Tanz- U wah I look ugly nw ur dead (she gt da colour frm Shaz and throwed it all on Lucky) Nw dis is wah I call ugly

Lucky- TANZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tanz ran dwnstairz and Lucky ran afta her

Shaz- Dese lot will neva listen anyways guys gues wah I dne

Sam/Rob- Wah u dne

Shaz- I (Just den they heard Shabd scream)

They all went 2 his room

They so his face and they all laughed

Shabd- WHO DNE DIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Every1 waz still laughin

Shabd- QUIT LAUGHIN AND TELL ME

Shaz- Burah na manoh jiju HOLI HAI!!!!!!! (she ran dwnstairz)

Shabd- SHAZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Meanwhile we c Suku talking 2 Laiba

Suku- Laiba cm on lets go outsyde its HOLI and ur sitting insyde

Laiba- Im nt in da mood

Suku- Buh Laiba u luv holi plz cm on

Laiba- I wil cm l8ter Suku

Suku- No nw (she dragged Laiba outsyde)

Ammy saw Laiba he gt a bucket full of colour

Ammy- I will be da 1st 2 put colour on Laiba

Just den we c sm1 cmin towards Laiba

SM1- LAIBA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ammy throwed da bucket buh it didnt go on Laiba it went on Suku

Ammy- CRAP!!!!!!!! Sori Sukriti dat waz 4 Laiba

Suku- Its ok werz Laiba gne

Just den we c sm1 hugging Laiba and putting colour on her

Ammy- (Angrily) Who da hell iz dat idiot I waz meant 2 put colour 1st on Laiba

Suku- Dats Sammy u dnt no him

Ammy- No wah a weird name

Suku- Nah his ful name is Samrath him and Laiba r very gd friends

Ammy- Oh k SAMRATH ka bacha idiot I dnt like him

Suku- Y Ammy hes so cool uno every1 luvs Samrath in our uni

Ammy- COOL!!!!!!! MORE LIKE IDIOT no1s cooler den AMMY!!!!!!! AND LAIBAS ONLI MA BEST FRIEND

Just den Angad came

Angad- Wahz rong Y u shouting

Ammy- Shouting no Angad I'm very happy

Angad- Ammy quit it nw yh and tell me wah happened Suku u tell me

Suku- Bro uno (she tells him wah happened)

Angad- (Laughs) So Ammys jealous aww

Ammy- Shurrup Angad I aint jealous

Angad- Ur nt jealous den wah u shouting 4 like a idiot calm dwn

Just den Kumkum came

Kumkum- Beta tum dono idhar aao I want u 2 meet a few people

Ammy- Aunty I (Interuptted)

Kumkum- Chaloh Ammy tumbhi

Meanwhile we c Singhania mansion all da arrangements are dne they are waiting 4 da guests 2 arrive

Dev and Kripa are bck they play holi wid every1

Kripa- Shaz wers Shabd

Shaz- Dunno Di he should be here

Kripa- Well hes not

Just den Lucky came

Lucky- Kripa, Shabd told me 2 tell u hes gne 2 a meeting it waz important he waz sayin he will be bck inabit

Kripa- Oh k Fanks Lucky nw wenz Sujal Bro cmin

Lucky- He will be here inabit

Kripa- K werz Alisha and ur Tanz

Lucky- Alisha gone wid Bro. Kripa dnt u dare call Tanz mynes shes a witch i h8 her uno wah she dne she throwed da whole bucket of colour on me

Kripa- Lucky itz holi so obviously she gna do dat we all no hw much u both luv each oda, uno whoeva puts colour on us 1st in holi we luv dem da most and they luv us thats y im waiting 4 Shabd 2 cm hes gna be da 1st person dat puts colour on me

Lucky- Kripa u dnt get it do u I dnt luv Tanz h8 her more den anyfing

Kripa- Oh yh rememba wah happen wen u went frm da house in London wen Aryan came nobody knew u and him were twins, Tanz knew who u were so its obvious u both luv each oda and afta dat rememba i send u and Tanz outsyde i called u both retards and den u both went outsyde den Alisha went 2 call u guyz and both of u were hugging each oda so lovingly and ur tellin me u dnt luv Tanz

Lucky- Kripa dat waz just a friendly hug and hw do uno all dis uno u (Interuptted)

Tanz- Shurrup Lucky

Lucky- Here cmz da churail wah ya want

Tanz- Nuffin just came 2 talk 2 Kripa and tell her about u

Lucky- Wah bout me

Kripa- Wah happen Tanz?

Tanz- Well u c Kripa dis stupid Lucky is annoying me since morning uno da 1st fing he called me ugly and den he threw da whole bucket of colour on me and most of he ruined ma whole outfit and ma beauitful hair and to conclude I H8 HIM SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!! so can u shout at him

Kripa- U lot stop being childish and u Lucky nxt tyme dnt u dare say fings 2 Tanz nw say sori

Lucky- No Im nt saying sori 2 dis churail nowayz it against ma rules

Tanz- Against ya rules I dnt fink so I h8 ur such a loser

Lucky- Dnt call me loser

Kripa- STOP BEING RETARDS BOTH OF U SAY SORI AND QUIT IT LET BRO CM BCK U BOTH WILL BE SENT DIFFERENT UNI 4 NXT SEMESTER TANZ WILL GO TEXAS UNI AND U LUCKY WILL GO CALFORNIA UNI

Tanz/Lucky- Dnt do dat Kripa wer sori

Kripa- im stil gna tell Bro unless u both start being good be nyce 2 each oda

Tanz/Lucky- We promise we will be nyce 2 each oda

Kripa- K

Kripa leaves

Lucky- Tanz Kripas memory is cmin bck

Tanz- I no we gta tell Bro

Nw we Khanna Mansion Kumkum is making Angad, Ridz, Ammy and Suku meet all da guests, and Laiba is talking 2 Sammy

Sammy- Laiba u joining Calgary Uni

Laiba- No Sammy wer just here for holiday wer goin bck in a few dys

Sammy- Oh dats sad I fought u will be stayin anyways I heard bout Angads wedding wer gna cm 2 Manhattan its gna be so much fun

Laiba- Yh dat is if it takes place anywayz Sammy hws Gunjan u proposed 2 her yet

Sammy- Laiba uno me its just weneva I go 2 tell her I start 2 mumble, its just shes different shes nt like oda girls

Laiba- Sammy u should propose 2 her soon b4 its 2 late smetymes we leave fings 2 late and everyfing gets messed

Sammy- Yh I will propose 2 her

Laiba- Ok so Sammy y dnt u propose 2 her 2dy its no point delaying it

Sammy- 2dy

Laiba- Yh 2dy

Sammy- Ok

All da tyme Sammy and Laiba were talking Ammy waz looking at dem angrily

Kumkum- Ammy beta yeh hai Mrs Sharma aur unki beti Payal aur yeh hai Armaan Mr aur Mrs Malik ka beta

Ammy waz 2 buzy lookin at Laiba

Mrs Sharma- Kaise ho Armaan beta

Suku nudged Ammy

Ammy- Jee mein tike hoon excuse me I fink Mayanks callin me

Ammy goes

Mrs Sharma- Waise Kumkum Armaan ki shaadi toh nahiye hui

Kumkum- Jee nahiye

Mrs Sharma- Mein soch rahiye thi meri Payal aur Armaan ki jodi achi rehaghi tum rishthe ki baat chaloh

Kumkum- Haan mein bat karoonghi Padma seh

After a while we c all da Khanna family in Singhania Mansion, Shaz throws all da colour on Angad, Ammy and Laiba, Angad is running afta Shaz wid colour

Nw we c Shabd walking 2wards Kripa wid colour

Angad throws da colour on instead of going on Shaz it goes on Kripa because Shaz had moved, Shabd isnt very happy nor is Kripa

Angad- Sori Kripa dat waz for Shaz

Kripa- Its k I wanted Shabd 2 put colour on me 1st

Just den Shaz came

Shaz- Itz ayt Di, Jiju can put colour on ur oda cheek

Shabd- Yh Happy Holi Kripa (he hugs her)

Kripa does da same

Just den we c sm1 entering the party they mix smefing in the drinks

SM1- Afta he drinks dis everyfing will be finished

TO BE CONTINUED.......................................

WAHS GOING 2 HAPPEN?????????????????

Edited by Anam Ali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
WOAH DI WONDERFUL! I feels sooo bad for Angad....aww my poor sweetheart!
I feel bad for Armaan as well.....so many proposals and break-ups di!
I wonder wen Kripa will get her memory back and di how did she lose it in the first place??
IM sooooo happy u finally updated and im sorry i cudnt cum online tht day cause i was really busy.
Finals are coming up soon and im so nervous.
Plz cont soon and PM me.
Harji
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

WOAH DI WONDERFUL! I feels sooo bad for Angad....aww my poor sweetheart!

I feel bad for Armaan as well.....so many proposals and break-ups di!
I wonder wen Kripa will get her memory back and di how did she lose it in the first place??
IM sooooo happy u finally updated and im sorry i cudnt cum online tht day cause i was really busy.
Finals are coming up soon and im so nervous.
Plz cont soon and PM me.
Harji

Fanks a lot Harji😃 yh she had an accident so she lost her memory it will be bck soon 😆 its ok dnt wori i handed in ma economics assignment 2dy, i gt exam on tuesday on business research analysis and den ma last exam is on da 26th on accounts will try and update after ma exam probz on wed I will pm u

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