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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -Laiba-

gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous! hot hot hot! soo happy to no shabd is alive ufff now continue soon [:d] i wonder what do i want to say tho Ammy anywes continue sooon [:d]
Love, Laiba

Thx Laiba😃Finally ur happy I will update l8ter u will find out soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 64

Every 1 was shocked 2 c Shabd

Kripa was so so happy

Kripa- (Happily) Shabd tum agaye I missed u so so much

Shabd- (Happily) Kripa I'm so happy 2 c u itneh saloh baad tumhe dekha, ause hadseh keh baad mein Italy shift hogaya tha

Kripa- Yeh Kaisi baatein kar rehay ho Shabd tum toh yahin teh skewl finish hogaya, hum saat mein Prom geh teh aur ab hum colij start karneh waleh Mama, Papa keh rehjay teh tum Australia mein ho

Shabd- Kripa mujhe kuch samaj mein nahiye araha, Uncle, Aunty kahaan hai

Kripa- Mama, Papa wahaan hai tumbhi hamare saat ghar chaloh ab tum mera saat rahoghe tumseh bahuth sari baatien karni hai

Just den Dev nd Ganga nd da rest cm

Dev/Ganga- Shabd beta tum yeh sab kaise hua (Interuptted)

Josh- Mama, Papa ghar chalke baat karteh hai Shabd tumbhi chaloh hamare saat

Shabd- Tike hai

Every1 goes 2 da Vence Outhouse

Kripa introduces every1 2 Shabd

Kripa- Aur haan yeh hai Angad hes one of ma closest friends

Shabd- Da famous Rockstar Angad Khanna who doesnt no him

Angad- Yh ofcourse

Kripa was talkin nd talkin 2 Shabd bout everyfing buh Shabd didnt get wah she was sayin

Kripa- Shabd hum Manhattan Colij jayghe tike hai aur haan bahuth sari shopping karni hai aur (interuptted)

Shabd- Kripa yeh tum kya kehrahiye ho colij hum toh (interuptted)

Angad- Excuse us Kripa can u cm wid me I want 2 go beach, i dnt feel 2 well can u cm wid me

Kripa- Kya hua Angad r u ok shall we call da doctor

Angad- Can we just go beach plz I will feel beta

Kripa- K lets go Shabd I will be bck l8ter ur stayin 2dy k be bck inabit

Angad took Kripa out da house so da parents could tell da truth bout Kripa

Shabd- Uncle, Aunty yeh sab kya horaha hai i'm so confused

Dev- Beta hum bathateh hai (they tell him wah happened 2 Kripa) toh beta shes lost 8 yrz of her lyfe she has partial amnesia aur we bought her here so we could tell her da truth bout u dis past month all shes been askin bout iz u

Ganga- Beta agar tum aaj humhe milteh nahiye patha nahiye hum kaise saari saachai bathateh Kripa ko, Beta we have made everyfing as b4 yaad hai tumhe Kripa aur tumhara woh kamrah bachpan mein tum dono wahaan khela karteh teh humneh woh Kripa ko diya hai everyfing is like b4 jab tum dono skewl mein teh she finks u lot r goin colij after summer term patha nahiye kaise sambhalenghe hum (Interuptted)

Shabd- Uncle, Aunty ab mein agaya hoon sab sambhaloongha I promise

Dev/Ganga- Haan Beta wer so happy ur alive lekin Beta yeh sab kaise hw did u end up in Italy

Shabd- Uncle, Aunty itz a long story aapko yaad hai 1 week afta Prom mein aur Kripa shoppin janeh waleh tab mera accident hogaya tha truck seh, yeh sab Madan ki planning thi phir hospital mein auseneh Doctor ko kaha keh woh aapsab ko bataye dat I was dead wen I wasnt I was in Coma 4 da last 4 yrz aur baad mein maine Kripa aur aapsab seh contact karneh ki bahuth koshish ki kisi neh mujhe bataya Kripa London mein hai aapsab keh saat auseneh wahaan apni nayi zindagi shuru ki aur phir achanak mujhe Italy mein kaam milgaya aur ab mein yahaan hoon, I'm so happy i gt everyfing bck my Kripa aap sab ause Madan ko mein nahiye choroongha

Dev- Beta hum kuch nahiye karsakthe saboot nahiye hai hamare paas, Kripa ki jo haalth hai ause dekteh hue hum Madan keh kilaaf kuch nahiye karsakthe she finks hes her gd friend woh bhi yahin rehatha hai mein kal ki tickets book kardetha hoon we r all goin bck

Shabd- I'm gna go Manhattan afta so many yrz im so happy mujhe meri saari khushiyaan milgayi Uncle, Aunty mujhe yakeen nahiye araha hai

Ganga- Beta ab mujhe sirf ek baat ka dar hai agar Kripa ki memory wapis agayi patha nahiye kya hogha

Shabd- I dnt understand Aunty agar auseki memory waapis agayi she will remember everyfing yeh achi baat hai

Sujal- Shabd u dnt understand in da past 8 yrz Kripas been wid me nd ma gang, shez a drug addict once her memory is bck she will 4get everyfing, shes ma sista i really care 4 her we all do we all lived 2geva in london for 8 yrz, coz of Uncle, Aunty we moved 2 Manhattan we convinced Kripa a lot nd we live nxt door 2 her house, buh she still stayed wiv us since her memory is gne she is stayin wid her parents, she dnt rememba us buh we have mde gd friends wid her again buh u she remembers u every single day all we hear is Shabd, uno wen I had met her bck in London she was so heartbroken I helped her in da club nd she told me wah happened, she said everyfing has gne frm her lyfe, she sed she didnt wana live anymre, she told me bout u nd her, I told her u goto live just coz 1 person goes ur lyfe dnt end, we became really gd friends, more like bruva nd sista buh 1 fing i couldnt stop her was frm takin drugs, i take dem 2 buh i told her once nd she was like u want me 2 be happy it calm me dwn nd i couldnt say anyfing, she hardly spoke to her parentz they use 2 visit us nd she neva use 2 talk 2 em much, I will prefer her memory nt cmin bck

Alisha- Coz we want her 2 be happy wiv her family so we r nt makin her remember anyfing bout us, shes our family 2 buh wer happy seeing her da way she is even though she has partial amnesia atleast shes nt an drug addict

Shabd was shocked hearin all dis

Shabd- I cnt believe all dis my Kripa drugs nd smokin I rememba in skewl wen I tried a cigarette she went so mad she didnt talk 2 me 4 a week

Just den Angad nd Kripa wer bck nd they heard wen Shabd was talkin bout cigarettes

Kripa- Shabd mera bigaar he sabko batha reho skewl keh bareh mein, uno wen he tried a cigarette every1 was talkin bout it in class wen I found out i was so angry I didnt speak 2 him 4 a week afta a lot of persuadin nd beggin I 4gave him nd I told him he has 2 promise me he will neva do dat again

Shabd- Kripa I still have maintained my promise

Kripa- I no Shabd u neva brake any promise dats y I luv u so much (she hugged him)

Shabd- I luv u 2 Kripa

Angad was heartbroken hearin all dis buh he knew it made Kripa happy so he had 2 be happy sometimes wen we luv sm1 and they dnt luv us bck we should be happy in their happiness

Angad- U lot im goin sleep nyte

Kripa- Angad ur nt watchin movie wiv us

Angad- Sm oda tyme Kripa I'm really tired nyte

Kripa- Ayt nyte

Angad went upstairz

After 1 hour Madan nd Arjun came nd they wer shocked 2 c Shabd

Kripa- (Happily) Madan look huz bck Shabd is ere I'm so happy

Shabd- Im bck MADAN!!!!!

Madan was so shocked

Madan- SHABD!!!!!!!! Lekin tum toh (Interuptted)

Sujal- Madan, tum mera saat chaloh I will explain mujhe tumseh zaroori baat karni, u lot I'm goin make sure ur sleep by 2 ayt

Kripa/gang- Ayt Bro

Alisha- Im cmin 2 Sujal

Kripa- Alisha y u goin

Alisha- Im tired nyte

Every1 laughin

Tanz- As soon as Bro goes Alisha goes 2 aww

Kripa- Yh I fink der in Luv der look so cute 2geva

Laiba/Ammy- Yh they do

Lucky- Yh der in LUV!! I knew it. omg hw can any1 be in luv imagine u got be wid da same person everydy, u gta make sure u rememba b'days, be on tyme 2 dates, da list is endless I cnt handle it

Tanz- Lucky u dnt need 2 coz no1s ever gna be in Luv wiv a monkey like u (she laughed)

Lucky- Yo dnt call me monkey

They wer fightin again like idiots

Shabd- Ayt enough no fightin

Ammy- Welcm 2 our world dese 2 fight everydy I wouldnt be surprised if they fall in luv wiv each oda

Tanz/Lucky- Shurrup Ammy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nw we c Sujal talkin 2 Madan

Sujal- (Angrily) Look Madan I'm warnin u If u cause any harm 2 Kripa or Shabd I wont spare u, so STAY AWAY FRM MA SISTA ND SHABD

Madan- And if dnt den wah SUJAL!!!!

Sujal- DEN I WILL PERSONALLY KILL U SO STAY AWAY FRM DEM

Sujal went 2 his room

Every1 watched 2 movies it was 5am in da mornin they all slept dwnstairs

Da nxt day every1 goes shoppin, den in da evenin der all go bck 2 Manhattan nw we c every1 in Kripas house Shaz is so happy 2 c Shabd bck nd her sista so happy

Shaz- (Happily) Im so glad u lot r bck Shabd I cnt believe ur ere, r u sure its u nt ur ghost

Shabd- Shaz I'm ere its nt ma ghost hw cm u werent in Italy

Shaz- Dnt ask I had an extra Law semester was in Uni in revising 4 ma exams, I had ma last exam yesterdy I was cmin Italy buh Mama told me every1s cmin bck so no need 2 cm so I didnt go, Di I missed u so much im so glad ur home

Kripa- Me 2 Shaz

Summit nd Kumkum cm 2 visit nd so does Yuvika

Yuvika hugs Kripa

Yuvika- I missed u Di

Kripa- Elow gurjus do I no u dnt fink we met b4

Angad- Dats ma niece Yuvika

Kripa- Oh k shes adorable

Yuvika was confused

Yuvika- Chachu wah happened 2 Di

Angad- Bacha I will explain l8ter as u lot r bck I'm cmin home wiv u lot den wel talk

Yuvika- K Chachu I cnt wait 4 all of u 2 cm bck home Kavya Chachu, Raj, Anjali Chachi, nd ma Laiba Bua nd Ammy itz borin widout u all at home we came bck 2 days ago Shaz told us u lot r in Italy

Angad- Yh buh nw wer bck nd we will be goin home I bought loads of gifts 4 u

Yuvika- Really Chachu cnt wait 2 cm dem

Kumkum- Ab hum chalteh tum sabneh aapna saaman baandliya hai, Ramu Kaka samaan gadi mein rakhdo

Anjali was talkin 2 Kavya

Anjali- Im sori Kavya I cnt cm home Kripa needs me she doesnt know bout our marriage, tumhe Raj ko akleh he sambhalnah paregha

Kavya- Anjali dnt be sori trust me mein Raj ko sambhalongha hes ma son end of da day u tc

Anjali- Yh gna miss ma baby (she kissed Raj nd gave Kavya)

Nw we c Khanna Mansion

Laiba- Im so happy 2 be home I missed u Papa

Summit- Me 2 bacha I missed u da most

Angad cms

Angad- Obviously akhir aapki pyaari beti hai mein toh aapka kuch lagtha he nahiye

Ammy- Angad dnt be jealous nw itz ayt

Kumkum cmz

Kumkum- Kya baatein ho rahiye hai I missed u lot so much

Angad- Me 2 Mama I'm sure Dad must have been very happy wivout me

Summit- I was very happy wivout u yeh jo tumhaari Mama haina iseh tumhari barhi chinta ho rahiye thi, mujhe toh sirf meri beti Laiba ki chintha thi

Angad- C Mom, Dads nt equal towards all of us he just luvs Laiba da most

Kumkum- Beta aisi baat nahiye hai u c Laiba is da youngest

Angad- Yh buh still nt fair

Ammy- Angad just chill look at me man ma parentz dnt care told dem 2 shift 2 Manhattan buh they havent der still in Canada, I'm der onli child ur lucky Uncle nd Aunty luv u loads Uncle just has a funny way of showin it

Kumkum- Ammy beta mein tumhe bathna bhoolgayi Kirti ka fone aiya tha woh aur Shubankar bhai kuch dino mein Manhattan arahey hai just 4 u beta they luv u loads hamare saamneh walah bunglow they have buyed

Ammy- (Happily) Really Aunty I'm so happy mein abhi Mom ko fone kartha hoon

Kumkum- Tike hai Beta, aur haan Laiba beta I gt a gd news 4 u Aryan araha hai kal

Laiba- (Happily) Dats gr8 Mama

Summit- Kya beta hw iz it gr8 I'm sure shaadi ki date keh bareh mein kehgha aur phirseh meri beti mujhseh dhoor hojayghi mein chahtha hoon tumhaari shaadi nxt yr mein ho ur graudatin in a few months

Laiba- Haan Papa I'm sure Aryan wont mynd waitin till nxt yr, I will tell him

Summit- Tike hai Beta

Kumkum- Waise Angad beta tumseh kuch baat karni thi tumhari shaadi keh bareh mein

Angad- No Shaddi Mom I'm 2 young afta Laiba weddin den I will fink bout it

Laiba- Bro ur gettin old Im younger den u nd I'm engaged

Summit- Haan tumhare liye koi rishtha bhi nahiye milegha (Summit nd Laiba both laughed)

Angad- Mom tell Dad nd Laiba

Kumkum- Tum dono baap beti hasna baad karoh meri beta keh liye hazarron rishthe hai, meri bahu bilkul ek pari hoghi beta hamareh business associate Mr Juneja ki beti Payal bahuth he pyaari hai mein soch rahiye thi tumhare rishthe ki baat wahaan (Interuptted)

Angad- Mama mujhe abhi shaadi nahiye karni

Kumkum- Kyun Beta kya tum kissi seh pyaar karteh ho

Angad gt quite

Kumkum- Bhaloh beta jiseh tum pyaar karteh hum tumhari shaadi ausi seh kardenge

Angad- (to himself) Jiseh mein pyaar kartha hoon woh kisi hur seh pyaar karthi hai (he talks) Nahiye Mom mein kisi seh bhi nahiye pyaar kartha I dnt believe in Luv anyways Mom aap jiseko bhi mere liye pasand karenghi I will marry dem lekin nt yet

Kumkum- Tike Hai Beta

Angad goes 2 da garden Ammy was playin basketball

Ammy- Wahz rong Angad?

Angad- Ammy uno Mom was talkin bout ma weddin 2 sm Payal girl, I told her I dnt believe in luv nd I dnt intend 2 get married yet buh I told her I will mary whoeva she likes, lekin Ammy hw can we marry sm1 we dnt luv I luv Kripa buh she luvs Shabd (Interuptted)

Ammy- Angad just chill Aunty just mentioned it she will understand wah u mean, I no u luv Kripa nd she luvs Shabd smtymes we cnt get our way look at me I luv Laiba nd she luvs Aryan (Angad was shocked)

Angad- U wah AMMY!!! u luv ma sista

Ammy- U werent meant 2 here dat well I wont hide it frm u I luv Laiba buh b4 I could say anyfing she told me she luvs Aryan nd will be engaged soon so I didnt say anyfing nd wiv a heavy heart came 2 her weddin

Angad- Ammy u neva told me dis b4

Ammy- I fought it werent necessary we shouldnt talk bout fings wich r impossible, I'm happy 4 Laiba plz dnt tell her anyfing I dnt want 2 ruin our friendship

Angad- I wont

Yuvika heard da whole convo

Yuvika- OMG!!!!!!!! CHACHU U LUV KRIPA DI ND AMMY U LUV BUA I'M TELLIN DADU

She ran insyde da house

Angad/Ammy- OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad nd Ammy ran insyde da house

Angad- Bacha cm ere plz

Ammy- Yuvi plz dnt

Summit- Yeh tum dono kya kareho kya hua Yuvika batho

Yuvika- Dadu aapko patha hai Chachu aur Ammy

Angad/Ammy- Yuvika plz dnt

Summit- Tum loge chup karo bhaloh Yuvika

Yuvika- Chachu aur Ammy mujhe bahar lehjarehay hai Ice cream khane aur park hum jaye Dadu

Summit- Haan haan have fun joa beta

Yuvika- Thx Dadu

Angad/Ammy- Thx god isneh bataya nahiye

Summit- Kya hua tum donoko kya bataya nahiye

Angad/Ammy- Kuch nahiye chaleh Yuvika

Yuvika- Yeh lets leave

Angad- Bacha u scared me 2dy ur nt meant 2 tell everyfing 2 Dad

Ammy- Yh uno wah if Laiba found out

Yuvika- Y u 2 scared 4 if u luv sm1 u should say it nt hide

Angad- Bacha uno ur Kripa Di has lost her memory she luvs Shabd frm childhood hes bck nw she luvs him so much I dnt want 2 cm between dem

Ammy- Laiba luvs Aryan nd I dnt want 2 cm between dem either so Yuvika u goto promise us u won't tell anyfing 2 any1

Angad- I will buy u ice cream nd toyz everydy

Yuvika- K I wont tell I promise

They have a lot of fun at da park nw they go home nd we c Ammy nd Laiba talkin in da garden

Laiba- Ammy Im sorri 4 da past few days in Italy waheva has happened I was overeacting, da oda day I wanted 2 tell u dat I cant c u be close friends wiv sm1 else, its just me nd u r best friends frm yrz I dnt want any1 takin u away frm me

Ammy- Its ok Laiba everyfing is sorted nw me nd u will always stay best friends, I'm always wid u

Laiba- Thx Ammy (she hugs him) waise Ammy i gt sm gd news Aryans cmin 2moraw so me nd u r goin airport 2 recieve him

Ammy- Dats gr8 news I wil defo cm wid u

PREVIEW- SHABD ND KRIPA ENGAGEMENT ANNOUNCEMENT MDE BY DEV ND GANGA

-MADANS NEW PLAN

-ARYAN IS BCK

Edited by Anam Ali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! Shabd is alive!!! OMG!! Poor Angad......so Shabd survived from the accident and he was a singer?! Seriously?! I like Shabd and Angad but i understand that only 1 can be happy whenevr Kripa is around because Kripa isnt some kind of cake tht can be shared, niether is she a ball to be tossed around. But thanx alot now Kripa wont be getting her memory back!😡 I liked her character but im so damn happy Shabd is alive. U know i love this kind of suspense, when there are 2 guyz that love one girl and then sumthin happens to 1 guy but he cumz back with a BANG!!😆....U know. Then the other one was so close to "winning" but too bad, but thats the whole exciting part of it!! Loved it!!! CONT SOON!! HARJI😈
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Posted: 16 years ago
@Harji- Fanks a lot 4 da big comment =) Yh wel its exciting u neva no bout her memory cmin bck, keep reading
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Posted: 16 years ago
U crazy!? its awesome!! so sad for armaan and angad! are u planning on bringin ridhz in soon for our sweet armaan. Yuvika totally got me sacred there!!😊 SHbad and Kripz are awesome!!!!!!!! Harji
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

U crazy!? its awesome!! so sad for armaan and angad! are u planning on bringin ridhz in soon for our sweet armaan. Yuvika totally got me sacred there!! SHbad and Kripz are awesome!!!!!!!! Harji

Thx again 😃 Yh poor Angad nd Ammy wel lets c wah happenz she myte be in da fanfic Yh they r so Harji u agree Shabd nd Kripa should be 2geva 😆 keep reading I wil update again 2moraw gna end da fanfic soon maybe end of da month
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Posted: 16 years ago
i love your part today poor angad he is happy tht kripa happy i am wondring if kripa memory back what will happend with angad.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh poor angad i feel bad for him but he is soo sweet he do what make kripa happy .

shabd and kripa's enge oh angad going to broke down .

Thank you for great update and pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Kameena is comming back >_< ufff why does he have to come back *roll eyes* anywes awsome part, actually ROCKING i just loved it, specially the way u brought Shabd back and all! Aww my sho shweet Angu and Ammy will now be blackmailed by Yuvika😆 and well looking forward to read more =) continue soon
Love, Laiba
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

i love your part today poor angad he is happy tht kripa happy i am wondring if kripa memory back what will happend with angad.

Thx a lot😃

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