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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

this was a great part... i cant believe what happend to shabd.. disguisting...i knew madan was bad news! ugh..

well continue soon

Thx a lot😃 Yh he is bad news
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Posted: 16 years ago
wowowow cool part anam i love it
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowow cool part anam i love it

Thx a lot 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
SEE!!! SEE!! I told u!!! I told u Madan might have done sumthin!! Tat disgusting little jerk!! HATE HIM!! Poor Kripa, but she found a bad soultion to her prob. By the way di u said Angad was a spoiled brat in the character sketch. He sure doesnt act likeone. Hes sweet though. Aww!! U killed poor Shabd in just 1 part!!! HOW SAD!!! I ALMOST CRIED!!! U KNOW WHY?! BECUZ SHABD AND ANGAD R MY FAV HEROES!! U KILLED 1 OF THEM?!!! WHY?!! :( SO SAD. OH WELL. KRIPZ IS AWESOME, SHAHI IS AWESOME, AND ANGU IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT ANAM DI IS THE BEST!!!......IM STILL BETTER THOUGH!! :) HARJI
LOTS OF LOVE. NEXT PART OF UNINVITED(KRIPA HAUNTED) IS ALREADY UP!!!
HARJI
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh poor shabd , i want to kill madan ?

Aww angad knew all truth now , he will make kripa happy in any cost and i am sure he will make her normal .

Thank you so much for pm and awesome part,
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

SEE!!! SEE!! I told u!!! I told u Madan might have done sumthin!! Tat disgusting little jerk!! HATE HIM!! Poor Kripa, but she found a bad soultion to her prob. By the way di u said Angad was a spoiled brat in the character sketch. He sure doesnt act likeone. Hes sweet though. Aww!! U killed poor Shabd in just 1 part!!! HOW SAD!!! I ALMOST CRIED!!! U KNOW WHY?! BECUZ SHABD AND ANGAD R MY FAV HEROES!! U KILLED 1 OF THEM?!!! WHY?!! :( SO SAD. OH WELL. KRIPZ IS AWESOME, SHAHI IS AWESOME, AND ANGU IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT ANAM DI IS THE BEST!!!......IM STILL BETTER THOUGH!! :) HARJI

LOTS OF LOVE. NEXT PART OF UNINVITED(KRIPA HAUNTED) IS ALREADY UP!!!
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Thx Harji😃 yh he was buh den he fell in luv wiv Kripa so changed, i will defo read uninvited wen i cm bck frm shoppin, nd den will update JDCK also
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Oh poor shabd , i want to kill madan ?

Aww angad knew all truth now , he will make kripa happy in any cost and i am sure he will make her normal .

Thank you so much for pm and awesome part,

Thx Monika😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! don't u dare sista 😡 i gave u lakshya but hell no for Ammy he is mine and mine forever 😭! i'm not talking to you i'm gnot even gonna comment on ur part 😭😭😭
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -Laiba-

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! don't u dare sista i gave u lakshya but hell no for Ammy he is mine and mine forever ! i'm not talking to you i'm gnot even gonna comment on ur part

Aww Laiba dnt be sad everyfing will be F9 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 63

Da nxt day Kripa gets up early gets ready nd cms downstairz 4 breakfast she is very happy

Kripa- Papa wers Angad? woh keh raha tha meri Shabd seh baat karvaygha he promised

Dev- Beta woh Angad has gone out woh Venece Hotel mein auseka aaj performance hai loads of Rockstars r performing from different countries hes representing Manhattan, Beta he wanted 2 tell u buh u wer sleepin

Ganga- Beta we will al be goin in the evening 4 nw u can go shoppin wiv Laiba

Kripa- Lekin Mama mujhe Shabd seh baat karni hai

Ganga- Beta shaam ko tike hai ab tum shoppin karneh joa

Kripa- Tike hai Mama

Just den Lucky nd Tanz came dwnstairs they wer fightin like idiots

Tanz- I sed do1 Lucky

Lucky- No y should I do1 y dnt u

Tanz- Dats it Lucky shurrup

Kripa- Y do u lot always fight stop it

Tanz- Its nt ma fault Kripa u no him hes always fightin

Lucky- No itz her

Ammy- Ayt whoeva it iz stop it lets go shoppin

Laiba- Yh cm on Kripa

Ammy- Wel take my car

Laiba- No wer takin ma car u go in ur car wiv Tanz cm on Kripa lets leave

Ammy- Laiba wahs rong wiv u wer gna go 2geva all of us nw stop it

Ammy nd Laiba wer fightin nw

Kripa- (Angrily) Dats it im losing ma patience Lucky nd Tanz r enough 2 handle, wahs rong wiv u Laiba nd Ammy lets go shoppin all of us 2geva, wel go in da jeep both of ur carz stay home nw lets leave u cmin Alisha nd Sujal Bro

Alisha/Sujal- Yh we r lets leave

They all go shoppin 2 House Of Fraser Ammy was tryin 2 talk 2 Laiba, buh she werent listenin 2 him she was very angry wid him, nd Lucky nd Tanz wer fightin

Kripa was shoppin wiv Sujal nd Alisha

Alisha was choosin dresses 4 Kripa

Alisha- Look at dis Kripa black dress hws is dis

Sujal- Yh itz ur favourite colour

Kripa- No I dnt wear clothes like dis I like dat pink dress

Alisha- Yh dats ntce

Sujal- K I will buy dat 4 u Alisha wich 1 do u want

Alisha- I dnt wear stuff like dis wel go 2 an asian shop

Sujal- Wer goin 2 a party so u goto wear a dress I will buy u da sky blue 1

Alisha- Buh Sujal (Interuptted)

Kripa- Alisha it will look nice on u get it Bro

Sujal- C even Kripa agrees

Alisha- Yh end of day ur sista so has 2 agree wid u nw wers da odas gne?

Lucky nd Tanz wer fightin

Sujal- Look u lot atleast dnt fight ere ur embarassin me wah do u want I'll buy u lot ur clothes nd lets leave

Tanz- Bro I want dat red halter dress nd dis Lucky sed its horrible, nd (Interuptted)

Lucky- Bro its horrible u cnt buy dat I told her 2 buy da silver dress (Interuptted)

Tanz- Dats ugly I h8 u Lucky y do u always interfere in ma lyfe

Meanwhile we c Ammy nd Laiba

Ammy- Laiba wahs rong wid u? I sed Im sorry even though I dnt no wah I did

Laiba- U dnt no wah u did im ur friend buh u still give more importance 2 Tanz

Ammy- WAH!!!!!!!!!!!! me nd Tanz r m8s k nd me nd u r best friends so hw can u fink dat

Just den Tanz started screamin 4 Ammy

Tanz- AMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Laiba- (Angrily) C dis wah i dnt like every little fing she calls u Ammy ab joa I dnt want 2 talk 2 u

Ammy- F9 I dnt want 2 talk 2 u either wer onli friends y dnt u understand Laiba

Tanz- Ammy u ere can ya batter Lucky I h8 him hes annoyin me so much

Ammy- Lucky stop annoyin Tanz stop fightin nd be friends

Lucky- Itz her she always fights

Sujal- Ayt I will pay 4 everyfing wers Laiba

Ammy- Shes over der dunno wahs rong wid her I will get her

Ammy- Laiba u choosed ur dress yet

Laiba- (Angrily) Just shurrup Ammy dnt wana talk 2 u I dnt want anyfing im goin home Y dnt u go 2 ya Tanz

Laiba leaves

Ammy goes afta Laiba

Ammy- Dis iz enough Laiba wah iz rong wid u? me nd Tanz r friends ayt nuffin more nd me nd u r best friends so y da hell r u behavin like dis

Laiba- Coz I...

Ammy- U wah?

Just den Kripa cms

Kripa- Cm on u lot wer goin hurry up I cnt wait 2 go Vence Hotel

Every1 leaves

Nw itz evenin every1 iz ready 2 go Vence Hotel Kripa is da 1st person 2 be ready, Tanz goes 2 Laiba room

Tanz- Laiba u cmin

Laiba- No I'm nt in da mood go away maybe ur Ammy is finding u

Tanz- U wah my Ammy look Laiba me nd Ammy r onli m8s hes cute buh hes onli a m8 nuffin more, so dun fink like dat no wonder ur bein mean 2 Ammy ur so insecure hes ur best friend nd will always be so nw do1 nd say sori 2 him nd get ready

Just den Lucky cms

Lucky- Yo Tanz u cmin

Tanz- Yh im cmin lets go wel wait dwnstairs 4 u

Laiba gets ready nd apologises 2 Ammy

Laiba- Im sori Ammy I was overeacting seeing u wiv Tanz

Ammy- Itz ayt Laiba (he hugs her) u lookin beauitful

Laiba- Thx u look gd urself lets go dwnstairz every1s waitin

Ammy- Ayt

Ammy nd Laiba go dwnstairz

Kripa- U lot r takin yrz cm on lets go I cnt wait 2 c Angads performance den afat dat Im gna talk 2 ma shabd cm on lets go

Dev- Lets leave

Nw we c every1 in Vence Hotel

Host- Welcm Ladies nd Gentlemen to our grand opening, we will be having performances by singers nd rockstars from all over da country, our 1st performance is by da famous rockstar Angad Khanna frm U.S

Angad cmz on stage nd performs 2 Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai, every1 claps he goes nd sits wiv da family

Kripa- Angad dat was a gr8 performance can we call Shabd nw plz

Angad- Kripa wen we go home k da event isnt finish yet k

Kripa- K

Host- Wonderful Performance nw 4 our next performance u will all have 2 guess, hes da heart of Italy every1 knows him ere

Sm1 cms on stage nd sings Mahi Ajaa Re frm Raaz 2 (Its 1 one of ma favourite songs)

Mahi mahi mahi
Hooooohhhoooo'. hoooohhhooo'.
Tujhe milke laga hai ye, tujhe dhundh raha tha main
Tujhe milke laga hai ye, tujhe dhundh raha tha main
Tujhme hai kuch aisi subah sa
Jiski khaatir main tha jaga sa
Aa tu mere khwab sajaa ja re
Mahi aaja re, mahi aaja re

Tujhme hai kuch aisi subah sa
Jiski khaatir main tha jaga sa
Aa tu mere khwab sajaa ja re

Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Mere mahi, mere mahi tu aaja mere mahi

Tujhe milke laga hai ye tujhe dhundh raha tha main
Tujhe milke laga hai ye tujhe dhundh raha tha main
Tujhme hai kuch aisi subah sa
Jiski khaatir main tha jaga sa
Aa tu mere khwab sajaa ja re

Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Mere mahi, mere mahi tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi

Ohhhooooohhhhooo..hooooo'..
Mahi mahi' mahi, mahi mahi' mahi
Dhadkano me mahi, saanso me hai mahi
Tu hi hai mere dil ki tamanna
Teri hi yaadein har lamha
De mujhe de apna aanchal
Dhoop me jalta main harpal

Tujhme hai kuch aisi ghataa sa
Jiske liye hu main pyaasa sa
Aa tu meri pyaas bujha ja re

Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Mere mahi, mere mahi
Tu aaja mere mahi dil roye ya ilahi
Tu aaja mere mahi

Mahi mahi' mahi, mahi mahi' mahi
Bas mera tu mahi saanso me hai maahi
Hain mujhe hai tera armaan
Hain tujhe hai mera banna
Har ghadi teri dil me aahat
Tu mile mil jaaye raahat

Judd ke bhi tu mujhse juda sa
Milke bhi tu kyu hai khafaa sa
Aaja meri baaho me aaja re

Ohhoo..
Judd ke bhi tu mujhse juda sa
Milke bhi tu kyu hai khafaa sa
Aaja meri baaho me aaja re

Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi
Mahiiii''.. (Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi)
Maaaaa'' Maaaaaaahhhiiiiiii (Dil roye ya ilahi, tu aaja mere mahi)
Maahiiii''

It was none oda den Shabd every1 was shocked

Host- Excellent peformance by none oda den our Rockstar Shabd Sareen

Kripa- (Happily) Shabd mera Shabd (she ran 2 stage nd hugged Shabd)

PREVIEW- SHABD TELLS WAH HAD HAPPENED 2 HIM?

-EVERY1 BCK IN MANHATTAN

Edited by Anam Ali - 14 years ago

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