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Awesome di!!! How wonderful! Im feeling a little down so wont cmment a lot. But thanx a lot for mentioning Twillight! LOL I got over it but nooooo!!! The movie was awesome. Excellent!!! oved it!! Angad is soo sweet.
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Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

Awesome di!!! How wonderful! Im feeling a little down so wont cmment a lot. But thanx a lot for mentioning Twillight! LOL I got over it but nooooo!!! The movie was awesome. Excellent!!! oved it!! Angad is soo sweet.

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Thx a lot Harji wahs rong? dun wori everyfing will be ayt i dnt mynd even 1 word is enough 4 me cheer up big hug 🤗
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Part 61

Da nxt day we c Dev nd Ganga in gangs house talking 2 Sujal

Dev- Dekho Sujal beta jitna hamara haq hai Kripa par utnah tumhara bhi hai akhir auseneh apni zindagi keh 8 saal tum sab keh saat jiyeh hai

Sujal- Haan Uncle aap kahiye baat kya hai

Dev- Beta hum Kripa ko Italy lekar jarehay hai hum chahteh hai keh woh wahaan kuch hafteh rehagi phir hum auseh himmat karkeh Shabd ka sach batahdenghe beta humhe kuch samaj mein nahiye araha kya karein

Ganga- Har bar Shabd ki baatein karthi hai humhe hamaari beti wapis milgayi lekin beta agar humneh Shabd keh bareh mein bathadiya hum phir apni beti ko kodenghe woh bardasht nahiye karpayghee bahuth pyaar karthi hai woh Shabd seh

Sujal- Uncle nd Aunty hum sab aapke saat hai mein aur Alisha aapke saat Italy chalenghe yahaan peh Rob sab kuch sambhalengha aur Imran aur ausekeh dosto ko kehdoongha woh yaahaan rehene ajaye aap loge fikar maat kariye hum sab Kripa ko sambhalengha aur hum koshish karenghe Kripa ko Shabd keh bareh batha deh jab woh purhi tarah seh tike hojayghi

Dev- Tike hai Beta hum aaj shaam ko he jarehay hai mein tum dono ko tickets karahdoongha

Sujal- Nahiye Uncle mein aur Alisha kal ki flight seh aiyeghe tike hai pehele aapsab jayee hum baad mein ajayenghe

Dev- Tike hai beta jaise tum tike samjo

Dev nd Ganga go home

Nw we c da gang talking

Tanz- Bro huz Shabd?

Lucky- Yh y dnt we just call him nd den everyfing will be F9

Sujal- (Angrily) Shurrup!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! both of u be quiet I dnt want 2 talk bout dis wid u lot just be quiet 2moraw me nd Alisha r goin Italy Imran nd Gang will be stayin ere wiv u lot nd Rob itz ur responsibility 2 look afta every1 ayt nd handle all da dealz wiv Imran

Rob- Ayt Bro dun wori

Sam- By da way Bro I was sayin y dnt u tke Tanz nd Lucky wiv u they cause 2 many probz ere they give me a headache by fighting everydy

Tanz nd Lucky wer pissed off nw

Tanz/Lucky- Yo we dnt wana go Italy wer stayin ere

Rob- Wel it'z true onli Alisha can handle dem nd shes goin I cnt handle dem

Tanz- We dnt need handling Bro we dnt wana go Italy wer stayin ere nd plus Imrans cmin dun wori we wont fite promise

Sujal- Wel im nt trusting u 2 again I will take u lot wiv me I will book ur tickets

Lucky- Bro we dunt wana go plz

Tanz- Yh plz

Sujal- Quit argueing ur cmin wid me ayt so pack ur bags wer goin 2moraw

Lucky/Tanz-(Angrily) F9!!!!!!!!!!!

Lucky nd Tanz go 2 der rooms

Bck at Malhotra house we c Angad nd Kripa watchin Football, nd Ammy nd Laiba we der 2, Dev nd Ganga cm

Ganga- Kripa beta hum tumseh baat kareha so we r leaving at 9pm pack ur bags beta r u listenin

Kripa werent listenin she was 2 busy watchin Football as Man u wer playin her favourite team

Kripa- OMG OMG CM ON ROONEY SCORE DA GOAL!!!!!!

Angad- YH WER DA HELL IS HE LOOKIN

Ammy- HE SHOULD PASS IT 2 RONALDO WAHS IZ HE DOIN

Laiba- HES NT EVEN PAYING ATTENTION IDIOT MAN U GNA LOSE 2DY

Just den Rooney passed da ball 2 Ronaldo nd he scored nd Man u won da match

Kripa- YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad- Finally they scored

Ammy- Yh

Laiba- I fought der wer gna lose

Kripa- Hw can Man u lose Laiba der da BEST!!!!!!!!

Kripa was very happy

Dev- Beta hum tumseh baat kar rehay hai

Ganga- Beta r u listenin

Kripa- Sori Mama, Papa woh mein match dek rahiye thi kya baat hai

Dev- Beta hum aaj raat ko Italy jarehay

Kripa- Kyun Papa

Dev- Beta humsab jarehay hai Angad, Laiba, Ammy bhi

Anjali/Josh/Kavya- Aur hum bhi Kripa its gna be a lot of fun tum jakeh apna bags pack karoh aur tum sab bhi

Angad- Uncle, Aunty lekin hum sab kyun I'm confused

Ganga- Beta kuch hafto keh liye jarehay hai outing keh liye, chaloh ab joa samaan pack karoh humneh tum sabke tickets book kardiye hai

Kripa- Lekin Mama humhe Shabd ka intezaar karnah chahiye

Dev- Beta Shabd abhi nahiye aiygha kuch haftoh baad hum soch rehay teh Italy chaleh outing keh liye ab joa beta saaman pack karoh

Kripa- Tike hai Papa

Every1 goes 2 pack der bags

Nw we c every1 in Airport Angad nd Kripa in da newsagents buyin football magazines, nd Ammy nd Laiba in Boots store coz Laiba wanted to buy eye pencil

Kripa- Angad wel take dis magazine its gt Rooney nd Ronaldos interview wah say

Angad- Yh ayt

Nw we c Ammy nd Laiba

Ammy- Laiba hurry up

Laiba- OMG!!!!! Ammy ders no more maxfactor eye pencil left

Ammy- So wah buy a different 1s ders so many brands tke da Rimmel 1 it makes no difference itz eye pencil end of da dy Laiba hurry up wer gna miss da plane

Laiba- Ayt Ammy I will buy da Rimmel 1 I'm so proud of u

Ammy- Y?

Laiba- Ur learning a lot frm me bout make-up it will help u in da future wen u get married ur wife will also be proud of u

Ammy laughed

Ammy- Laiba i was just lookin at da dopy make up brands nd dat helpin u tke yrz man rimmel eye pencil was der so told u 2 tke it nw hurry up

Nw we c every1 on da plane

Angad nd Kripa wer sittin 2geva nd Ammy nd Laiba

Dev, Ganga nd Josh wer sittin 2geva nd Kavya nd Anjali wiv baby Raj

Al through da journey Kripa was telling Angad all bout Shabd

Angad- Uno Kripa I fink ur in luv wiv Shabd hes a lucky guy 2 have a girl like u

Kripa- Yh I luv Shabd hes ma lyfe uno he told me he luvs me at Promnight, I was so happy uno he called me 2 cm on stage I went all da flowers fell on me den he gifted me gurjus teddy bear, nd gave me a ring nd told me he luvs me I was so happy uno me nd Shabd been best friends since childhood

Angad- Dats so sweet Kripa

Kripa- I no Shabds a wonderful person opposite frm me im stubborn, hes nt I mean he's so calm he never shouts, wen i dne smefing rong uno once in skewl I hid Shabds favourite Nike jacket he was findin it in da whole skewl it was bare funny, sm1 told him I hided it nd he didnt once shout at me, nd uno once we had a food fight in skewl i threw pasta on Shabd it was so funni

Angad was laughin hearin all dis

Angad- He must've gt mad on dat I would have

Kripa- Nah he didnt his best Diesel top gt ruined he didnt instead he chased me in whole canteen nd throwed pasta on me as wel afta dat Mr West came nd we gt done Mama nd Papa had 2 cm skewl

Angad- Omg u must've gt in trouble den

Kripa- Yh I did buh Shabd sed it was his fault nd dat buh I sed it was my fault, he always covered up 4 me dats y I luv him so much wenever I needed him da most he was der, buh dunno wahs rong nw he should've cm by nw wer gna start colij soon

Angad- He will cm dun wori hes probz plannin a big surprise 4 u

Kripa- Yh

Air hostess- All passengers da flight is bout 2 land plz make sure ur belts r tied thx u

Kripa started panicking

Angad- Wah happen Kripa u ayt

Kripa- Angad i'm scared of plane landing

Angad- Kripa stop being silly hw can u be scared of plane u've been 2 London

Kripa- Wah Angad I've neva been 2 London in my entire lyfe I would luv 2 go der, I've onli been 2 France nd dat 2 wiv Shabd nd all ma family, dat tyme I werent scared coz Shabd was wiv me

Angad- Wel Kripa u shouldnt be scared nw as well coz Im ere, I'm ur m8 as well

Kripa- I no

Kripa hugged Angad tightly

Angad- Its k Kripa dun wori I'm ere u will be F9

Da planed landed

Airhostess- U have sucessfully reached ur destination we r nw in Italy

Kripa- Thx god wer ere

Angad- C Kripa nuffin happened we ere

Kripa- Thx Angad

Angad- Itz Ayt

Nw we c every1 in Vence outhouse

Angad decided 2 talk 2 Ganga nd ask bout Shabd

Angad- Aunty woh mujhe aapseh kuch baat karni thi (Interuptted)

Kripa- Angad lets go beach Mama seh baad mein baat karlenah Bye Mama

Angad- Lekin Kripa (Interuptted)]

Ganga- Beta baad mein baat karlenah tum loge joa enjoy urselves

Angad, Kripa, Ammy nd Laiba go beach, nd so do Josh, Anjali Kavya nd baby Raj

Every1 was having a lot of fun especially Angad nd Kripa they wer playin in da water, Anjali nd Josh so dis

Anjali- Josh Angad and Kripa look so cute 2geva, I wish Kripa moves on in life nd 4gets bout Shabd

Josh- Di dats nt possible everydy she talks bout Shabd dunno wah wer gna do, Mama, Papa r gna tell er soon they r so upset dunno hw Kripas gna react

Anjali- Yh just hope everyfing bes k

Nw we c Manhattan every1 iz ready 2 go airport

Tanz nd Lucky dnt wana go der upset

Imran nd gang have cm 2 stay at Sujals house

Imran- Wahs rong wiv u 2 y u so upset

Aditi- Yh ur goin Italy u should be happy Sujal Bro so safe, dis idiot Imran dnt take us nower

Imran- We gt bare fings 2 do dats y ere so many dealz nd dat ayt dese lot r goin 4 Kripa k

Tanz/Lucky- We dnt wana go

Sujal cms

Sujal- Enough u 2 lets go Robs put ya luggage in da car, Imran tke care of every1 nd da dealz ayt

Imran- I wil dun wori

Sujal, Alisha, Tanz nd Lucky leave Rob drops dem airport, nd leaves

Tanz- Bro im goin 2 get smefing frm newsagents brb

Sujal- Be quick Lucky go wid er

Lucky- Yes Bro itz nt fair I aint er Bodyguard uno everytyme have 2 go wid er

Tanz- I'll go maself i dnt need ya

Tanz leaves

Sujal- Lucky go nw

Lucky- Im goin chil Bro

Tanz goes in newsagents gets a magazine nd a chocolate, just den she sees Madan nd Arjun wiv der luggage

Lucky cms

Lucky- Tanz hurry up yh

Tanz- Lucky i just so Madan nd Arjun

Lucky- Wer

Tanz- They wer chekin in 4 da flight

Lucky- Tanz ders no1 der u've gne mad lets go b4 Bro starts shoutin at me

Nw we c every1 board da flight

Tanz was really worried so she decided 2 tell Sujal everyfing

Tanz- Bro i so Madan nd Arjun in da chekin counter I fink der goin 2 Italy as well

Sujal- Tanz dnt be silly they dnt no wer goin Italy

Alisha- Sujal Kripas der nd uno Madan dunno wat he is plannin nw

Sujal- As soon as we get Italy i will ring Imran nd tell em 2 c wer Madan iz dun wori if he is der I will sort him out

Alisha- Yh I hope he aint der dun wori Tanz relax

Lucky- Yh chil Tanz im ere I will be der 4 u (Lucky laughed)

Tanz- Shurrup Lucky dnt need ya Ammy is der, hes a champion in boxing, nd hes so cute I fink I'm in luv again da onli gd fing bout Italy is dat Ammy iz der

Lucky was gettin jealous

Lucky- Nd wah if dat Ammy is der im so beta den him

Tanz- No u aint Ammy iz da best im gna tell him 2 batter u coz ur so mean 2 me

Lucky- Yh rite

They wer arguein like idiots da whole plane was lookin at dem

People- WILL U LOT SHURRUP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sujal gt embarassed

Sujal- Alisha I shouldnt have bought dem nw der gna argue everydy nd gna give me a headache in Italy

Alisha- Dun wori Sujal I will handle dem

After a while da flight lands da gang also go 2 Vence Outhouse, as soon as they get they c Madan nd Arjun der talkin 2 Kripa

Kripa- Elow u lot ere also meet ma friend Madan nd his cuzin Arjun they will be stayin ere also, Madan nd me wer in da same class in skewl

Madan- Yh I miss skewl cnt wait 4 colij

Kripa- Yh me 2 Shabd will be cmin soon

Madan- Oh really dats nyce aint seen him in ages wer iz he dese dys

Kripa- Hes in Australia

Madan- Oh k

Da gang wer shocked hw could Kripa talk 2 Madan he was her enemy, nd da gangs rival. Angad didnt like Madan talkin 2 Kripa

PREVIEW- FLASHBCK OF KRIPAS PAST ANGAD KNOWS DA TRUTH BOUT SHABD

-DA GANG WARN MADAN ND ARJUN

-EVERY1 BCK IN MANHATTAN

Edited by Anam Ali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Both parts were excellent ,keep it up [:d]
And u want or no i don't care as i know that Ammy is mine forever😆
Love, Laiba =)
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Originally posted by: -Laiba-

Both parts were excellent ,keep it up [:d]
And u want or no i don't care as i know that Ammy is mine forever
Love, Laiba =)

Thx a lot Laiba😃 We will c bout dat 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thx a lot 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG SERIOUS DI?! Madan ws in Kripz's class?! WOW! THEY WERE FRIENDS!! I have a feeling Madan might have done sumthin and then Shabd and Krpa got seperated. BUT wonderful!!! Loved it di. Loved ur commnt at UNVITED(HAUTNED KRIPA). Thhnx . Hope u liked the ff. The next part will be up today. Its going to be SCARY!!!
LOL
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Posted: 16 years ago
yay!! i finally caught up with all the parts di...fab updates!!
hmmm shabd, madan, me excited!!! lol
love ya
sukhi :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
cooll partt plzz contuied soon

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