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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

OMG SERIOUS DI?! Madan ws in Kripz's class?! WOW! THEY WERE FRIENDS!! I have a feeling Madan might have done sumthin and then Shabd and Krpa got seperated. BUT wonderful!!! Loved it di. Loved ur commnt at UNVITED(HAUTNED KRIPA). Thhnx . Hope u liked the ff. The next part will be up today. Its going to be SCARY!!!

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Harji

Thx a lot Harji😃 I will defo read it let me no wen ya updated yh they r friends gd prediction Harji I will update 2moraw da truth will be revealed
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

yay!! i finally caught up with all the parts di...fab updates!!

hmmm shabd, madan, me excited!!! lol
love ya
sukhi :)

Thx a lot Sukhi 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

cooll partt plzz contuied soon

Thx a lot 😃
I will update 2moraw
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Posted: 16 years ago
YES FINALLY!!! u better write it out in details.. so madan and kripa nad shabd were friends.. that means shabd was madan's friend and he somehow betrayed her..or ahh..omgg i think i know whats going on yet i dont so i am waiting impatiently for the next part
continue soooooonnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

YES FINALLY!!! u better write it out in details.. so madan and kripa nad shabd were friends.. that means shabd was madan's friend and he somehow betrayed her..or ahh..omgg i think i know whats going on yet i dont so i am waiting impatiently for the next part

continue soooooonnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!

Yh everyfing will be revealed in da nxt part keep reading u will be shocked 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow again awesome update . i love angad soo sweet hai , thank you forpm.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

wow again awesome update . i love angad soo sweet hai , thank you forpm.

Thx a lot Monika 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 62

Madan was talking 2 Kripa they both were talkin bout skewl nd hw much fun they had, nd they wer talkin loads bout Shabd. Da gang went to put der luggage away upstairs, Laiba so da gang nd went 2 talk 2 dem

Laiba- Hey every1 u lot ere also

Sujal- Yh we came 4 Kripa

Laiba- Yh Madan ere also I cnt believe it Kripas talkin 2 him, i fought u lot wer enemies

Alisha- We r buh Kripa doesnt rememba anyfing coz shes lost her memory

Sujal- Madan nd Kripa went 2 same skewl nd bck den they wer friends, Im gna kill dis Madan

Alisha- Sujal calm dwn rememba we cnt let Kripas memory cm bck, so u cnt say anyfing 2 Madan

Sujal- Yh I will warn him if I c him outsyde hes such a idiot

Angad came upstairs also 2 meet da gang

Angad- Fank god Madans gne da idiot he wouldnt leave Kripas side, hes gne nw me nd Kripa r goin 2 da beach u lot wana cm

Alisha- We will der inabit

Tanz was lookin around 4 sm1 everybody noticed dis

Laiba- Tanz who u findin?

Lucky- Yh im rite ere

Tanz- Im lookin 4 Ammy wer iz he

Laiba- Ammy iz (Interuptted)

Ammy came

Ammy- Im rite ere Tanz (he hugged her) welcm 2 Italy

Tanz- Fanks Ammy missed ya loads

Ammy- Me 2

Lucky nd Laiba werent happy wiv dis

Laiba- (Angrily) Ammy lets go wer goin beach

Ammy- Nah Laiba I will cm l8ter wiv Tanz

Lucky- Well Ammy Tanz aint goin no beach shes stayin ere wiv me .... I mean we came ere 4 Kripa so we goto sort Madan out

Tanz- Be quiet I wana go beach Ammy I will get ready den wel go

Ammy- Ayt I will wait 4 ya dwnstairz

Laiba was nw fuming in anger nd went 2 er rm nd so did Lucky

Nw we c Angad nd Kripa at da beach havin fun

Kripa- Uno Angad I luv da beach bck in Manhattan me nd Shabd always use 2 go everydy it was so fun

Angad- Well until wer ere we will cm everydy if dat makes u happy, I just hope Shabd cms soon

Kripa- Yh Im waitin 4 Shabd he makes ma lyfe complete

Angad- Kripa wana go 2 da cafe they have ur favourite Bens nd Jerrys Chocolate Ice Cream

Kripa- (Happily) lets go I luv ice cream actually lets have race da last 1 in da cafe iz a rotten egg (Kripa runs 2 da cafe)

Angad- Yo Kripa dats cheating

Kripa- Itz nt ma fault u cnt run like me (she laughed)

Angad was happy seeing Kripa like this as she was so happy, buh he knew once Shabd cms den she will be more happy. He ordered ice cream 4 her

Angad- Kripa u act just like my niece Yuvika she also luvs Bens nd Jerry Chocolate Ice Cream

Kripa- Ur niece I never knew u had a niece wen we go Manhattan I will meet er

Angad- Yh

Bck at da Outhouse we c every1 in da garden Ammy, Laiba, Tanz nd Lucky wer playin basketball nd Sujal nd Alisha wer talkin

Madan nd Arjun cm

Madan- Have u lot seen Kripa

Sujal gt angry

Sujal- (Angrily) MADAN STAY AWAY FRM MA SISTA SHES ALREADY SUFFERED ENOUGH COZ OF U WER ONLI TOLERATING U COZ KRIPA FINKS UR HER FRIEND SHES LOST HER MEMORY BUH I HAVENT I WONT SPARE U MADAN IF I C U ANYWER NEAR MA SISTA

Madan- Calm dwn Sujal I luv Kripa nd I will get her, uno wah I did so many fings 2 get Kripa u nd ur gang came in da way buh dis tyme she dnt even rememba u guyz (he laughed)

Lucky/Tanz- So wah if she dnt shes our gang member we r ere wer all wid er, we wont spare u

Alisha- It will be beta 4 u 2 stay away frm Kripa

Madan- I wont coz I luv Kripa

Nw Sujal was losing his patience he punched Madan nd nw Sujal nd Madan wer fightin, Ammy nd Lucky stopped der fite, Josh nd Kavya came

Josh- (Angrily) Wah da hell r u lot doin If Kripa so all dis wah would she fink, shes nt well by seein all dis she could regain her memory bck stop all dis MADAN GO AWAY FRM ERE RITE NW, nd Sujal I didnt expect dis frm u

Sujal- Josh u dunno wah he sed

Just den Angad nd Kripa came bck

Kripa- Hey every1 wer bck

Dev nd Ganga came

Ganga- Kripa Beta tum agayi tum aur Anjali mera saat chaloh hum meri dost keh ghar mein jarehay hai woh yahaan Italy mein rehethi hai

Kripa- Tike hai Mama mein abhi tyaar hokeh athi hoon

Dev- Madan stay away frm my daughter I'm onli toleratin u coz of Kripa jo tumneh kiya hum bholeh nahiye tumneh meri beti ki khushiyaan chinelee

Angad was shocked hearin dis

Madan- Uncle mein Kripa seh (Dev slapped him)

Dev- Daffa hojo yahaan seh (Interuptted)

Madan- Uncle Jee agar mein daffa hojoongha yahaan seh toh aap Kripa ko kya bataheghe keh aapne auseke dost ko yahaan seh nikaal diya phir woh aapseh sawaal pochenghi kyun nikhala papa toh phir aap kya kahenghe Uncle Jee (he laughed) Aap kuch bhi nahiye karsakthe

Just den Kripa came dwn

Kripa- Papa, Madan kya baatein horahiye hai

Madan- Kuch nahiye Kripa woh Uncle jee keh rehe teh mein bhi tum logo keh saat chalo

Kripa- Oh k tike Madan tum bhi chaloh

Sujal- I will drive u lot der nd cm wid u lot chaloh lets leave

Sujal, Madan, Ganga, Anjali, Kripa leave

Nw Angad was so confused he didnt know wah was happenin, every1 else went beach wiv Alisha, Angad was home nd decided 2 talk 2 Dev

Angad- Uncle mujhe aapseh kuch baat karni hai Kripa keh bareh mein

Dev- Haan bhaloh beta

Angad- Uncle yeh sab kya horaha hai Madan bhi yaahan aur Kripa auseh apna dost manthi hai mujhe kuch samaj mein nahiye aiye aur phir aapneh bhi Madan ko marah aap Madan seh keh rehe teh keh auseneh Kripa ki saari khushiyaan chinelee aisa kya kiya tha Madan neh

Dev- Angad beta mein samaj saktha hoon tumhe Kripa ki bahuth fikar hai toh tum pooch rehay hoon, beta aaj mein tumhe sarah saach bathadoongha beta meri beti ki saari khushiyaan Shabd seh thi bachpaan seh Kripa bahuth pyaar karthi hai Shabd seh hai dono saat he bareh hua hai humneh bhi faisla kiya tha jab Shabd aur Kripa colij katham karenghe hum dono ki engagement kardenghe, aur graduation keh baad shaadi lekin iss Madan neh (he had tears in his eyes)

Angad- Uncle Im sorry plz (Interuptted)

Dev- Nahiye beta mein tumhe aaj purah saach bathadoongha, beta Madan bhi Kripa ko bahuth pasand kartha hai Shabd, Madan aur Kripa ek hi class mein teh jab Madan ko patha chalah Kripa Shabd seh pyaar karthi hai he went mad aur auseneh Shabd ka accident karwahdiya aur ause haadseh neh Shabd ki jaan lehli aur Shabd keh jaane seh meri beti ki saari khushiyaan chaligayi meri beti jo hasthi thi hamesha khush rehethi auseki woh haasi chaligayi jab auseh iss hadseh keh bareh mein patha chal she went hospital beta itni dua maangi she cried so much maine aise apni beti ko kabhi nahiye dhekah lekin jab auseh patha chal Shabd is dead auseki haasi chaligayi beta humneh auseh London bhejdiya phir patha chalah woh kisi gang mein hai aur drugs aur cigarettes pithi hai, hum London gaye meri beti itni badli hui thi, nah woh kabhi haasthi she was so different yeh sab Madan neh Shabd ka accident kiya lekin hamreh paas saboot nahiye tha, toh hum Madan ko arrest nahiye karpaye

Angad- Uncle mein Madan ko nahiye choorogha

Dev- Nahiye beta hum kuch nahiye karsakteh kyunki hum majboor hai Kripa ko sab kuch patha chaljayegha fillal mein yeh soch raha hoon hum Kripa ko Shabd ki saachai kaise bataye

Angad- Patha nahiye Uncle Kripa Shabd seh bahuth pyaar karthi hai, har bar auseki baatein karthi hai woh yeh sab sunke patha nahiye kaise react karenghi

Dev- Beta kuch dino baad hum waapis jarehay hai hum waapis jakar sab kuch bathadenghe

Angad- Tike Uncle jaise aap tike samjeh

In da evening every1 was bck they had dinner nw every1 was watchin movie 2geva

Kripa- U lot Im goin sleep I'm tired gdnyte

Every1- Nyte

Kripa went sleep

It was 3am in da mornin Kripa screamed Shabds name

Kripa- SHABD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHABD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHABD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dev nd Ganga rushed 2 Kripa room so did da gang nd Angad

Ganga- Kya hua Kripa beta

Kripa started crying

Kripa- Mama koi mera Shabd ko mujseh chinekeh legaya, aur Mama mera Shabd accident (she started crying more)

Ganga- Beta plz dnt cry sab kuch tike hai tumneh sirf burah sapna dekha beta

Angad- Kripa everyfings F9 dnt wori Shabd tike hai tumneh sirf burah sapna dekha

Kripa- U promise Angad Shabd tike hai mujhe Shabd seh baat karni hai abhi baat karni hai

Angad gt quiet

Kripa- Bhaloh na Angad

Angad- I promise Kripa he's F9 dun wori tum sajoa k phir hum Shabd seh subha baat karenghe

Kripa- Sach Angad

Angad- Yh

Ganga- Beta chaloh sajoa

Kripa- Mama aap mera paas betho plz Mama mujhe bahuth dar lag raha hai

Ganga- Tike hai beta Mama yahin sojoh

Every1 else leaves

Nw we c every1 talkin in da lounge

Angad- Im Sori Uncle maine Kripa ko kaha keh mein auseki baat Shabd seh subha karoongha I didnt no hw 2 react I gt scared

Dev- Koi baat naiye beta ab humhe yeh soachna paregha hum kal kya bathenghe Kripa ko

Sujal- Uncle hum sab sambhalenghe aap chintha maat kari hai

KRIPA ASKS ANGAD BOUT SHABD WAH WIL HE SAY??????

Edited by Anam Ali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
this was a great part... i cant believe what happend to shabd.. disguisting...i knew madan was bad news! ugh..
well continue soon

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