Jab Dil Churaye Koi (AK)LAST PART PG152 INDEXPG154 - Page 101

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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG OMG OMG such a rocking part, i'm so happy that shaz and joshua are together but eww he is soo not damn sexc :s what happened with shaz choices 😆 and i dunno why but i feel so sad for Shabd :S anyways keep it up, and do continue sOooooooooooonn i'm waiting for it =)

Love, Laiba
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Part 91

Shabd- I duno hw Im gna talk 2 Kripa she doesn't even want to no me, afta all dah

Shaz- Dnt wori Shabd bruv Di will talk 2 u k everyfing will be fine Angad Jijs is gone to call Di k u just relax

Shabd- I hope she cmz I really want to talk 2 her

Nw we c Angad talkin to Kripa

Angad- Plz Kripa 4 my sake meet Shabd once he really wants 2 talk 2 u

Kripa- Look Angad I dnt want 2 meet him, I do wah I lyke I aint gna listen 2 u, I have always done wah I wanted

Angad- Look Kripa if it wasn't a serious matter I wouldn't tell u 2 meet him, plz

After a lot of convincing Kripa agrees to meet Shabd, nw we c every1 in da garden conservatory

Angad- K Cm on Shaz lehs go u lot talk

Kripa- No both of u stay its nuffin personal wah wer gna talk bout, Angad u have ryte 2 no all dis ur my fianc end of da day, so Yh wah do u want Shabd u c I just gt engaged 2dy I really dnt have da tyme 2 talk 2 u hurry up wah is it?

Da fings Kripa sed really hurt Shabd he was really upset

Shabd- Kripa I wanted to apologise Im really sori if i ever hurt u plz 4give me plz I didn't mean to and (Interrupted)

Kripa- K fine I 4give u no need 2 extend all dis dnt want 2 hear da lecture ur 4given Shabd enjoy da party lehs go Angad

Angad and Kripa left Shabd waz really hurt and upset

Shaz- Relax Shabd bruv dnt tke anyfing 2 heart uno Di has lost her memory she dnt remember anyfing so uno wah I (Interrupted)

Shabd- Yh Ino buh its really hurtful I bought dis present 4 her could u plz give her

Shaz- Bruv u can give Di urself ur stayin her 4 a few days k, Kripa Di is at Sujal Bruvs house dw everyfing will be F9

Just den Joshua came

Joshua- Yes Blud Dw if Shaz sed everyfing will be F9 den it will

Shaz- Shabd Bruv dis is Joshua my Boyfriend

Meanwhile we c Angad and Kripa talking

Angad- Kripa u didn't even leh Shabd complete his sentence seriously wahs rong wid u?

Kripa- Look Angad I met him coz of u I even 4gave him, I aint gt time to listen to his crap k I need a fag brb

Angad- Kripa every1s here der gna ask bout u

Kripa- Mke sm excuse yh

B4 Angad can say anyfing Kripa left

After a while Kumkum cmz

Kumkum- Angad Beta wers Kripa?

Angad- Mom shes cmin gone 2 da restroom

Kumkum- K da function bout 2 finish beta sm of our guests wanted 2 meet her

Angad- I will call her Mom

Kumkum- K Beta hurry up

Angad goes to fynd Kripa and he sees her smoking

Angad- (Angrily) Kripa enough of dis yh lehs go Mom was saying sm guests want 2 meet u

Kripa- Yh Im cmin 2 minz nearly done wid da fag

Kripa goes dwnstairz meet da guests

Meanwhile we c Laiba in da conservatory Ammy had called her der, buh he didn't cm himself Laiba was very angry she had been waitin 4 half an hour nw

Ammy- Sori Im late had 2 geh sm flowers

Laiba- Wah 4? Ammy hurry up yh wah do u want 2 say

Ammy- Its very short and simple I luv Laiba will u marry me

Laiba- WAT????????

Meanwhile we c Nanima fyndin Shaz she goes to da Restroom and sees Shaz and Joshua makin out, Nanima was very angry

Nanima- SHAZMIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shaz gt scared and so did Joshua

Shaz- Nanima woh I (Interrupted)

Nanima- Shurrup U wat chaloh mere saat and u beta leave 2dy pack ur bags I want u out of my house u understand Joshua disgusting no shame at all wahs happened 2 da world aj kal ke bache no sharam chaloh

Shaz- Nanima I luv Joshua and (Interrupted)

Nanima- Its nt luv its just crush ur gna marry Karan infact I have even called his family 2mrw for lunch u can meet him der I have fixed ur rishtha wid him

Shaz- Nanima u cnt do dis I luv Joshua and will only marry him nt any1 else I mean it, Im gna talk 2 Dad

Nanima- Dev is nt gna say anyfing hes agreed already, dnt u dare say dah boys name u understand, its ur sistas engagement 2dy and u look at u Im ashamed of u, I didn't expect dis 4rm u

Sujal- Ladies and Gentlemen can I plz have ur attention, I would like to tell u all anova gd news, Im getting married next week and so is my Sista Kripa both weddings will happen on da same day

Angad and Kripa were shocked and every1 clapped

Bck 2 Laiba and Ammy

Ammy- So Laiba u gna say anyfing or not

TO BE CONTINUED...........

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Posted: 15 years ago
Di, sorry for replying so late. =( I was busy. Okay..soo i reaaallllyyyyy liked the last two chaps! Oooo i love Angad sooo much!! He's my fave character....obviously. LOL Well...update soon and PM me!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update i hope angad kripa ko sudhaar de ..
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsome but too short! it's so bad Krips didn't even listen to Shabd poor guy :s and the joshua shaz part was funny! continue soon ^^
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 92

Laiba- Ammy I (Interrupted)

Sm1- LAIBA CM INSYDE!!!!

Laiba- Cmin

Laiba went inside

Ammy- Oi Laiba listen 2 me

Ammy went inside as well every1 was very happy besides Kripa, and Shaz was really upset she was crying

Laiba- Wahs rong Shaz? Dnt cry wah happened

Shaz- Laiba uno wah happened (she tells her wah happened) Nw Nanima gna throw Joshua out of da house I luv him she goes she gna geh me married 2 sm1 else duno wahs gna happen (she cried more)

Laiba- Plz dnt cry everyfing will be fine dnt wori Shazy u will geh ur luv dw lehs go and find Joshua

Shazy and Laiba go outside to fynd Joshua

Kumkum- Ammy Beta have u seen Laiba duno wer shes gone

Ganga- Kumkum Shazmin isn't here either duno wer she is uno Mama shouted at her she went smwer cant fynd her anywer

Kumkum- Im fyndin Laiba also duno wer she is

Ammy- Duno Aunty I will fynd Laiba and Shazy

Kumkum/Ganga- Beta go and see I'm getting worried

Ammy- Jee Aunty Im gwin

Ammy goes outside to fynd Laiba and Shaz, he sees dem in the car park

Ammy- Laiba, Shazy wah u lot dwin here? Lehs go inside y u crying Shaz? Wah happened Joshua did ya say anyfing to Shazy

Joshua- No

Joshua tells him wah happened

Ammy- Ok relax Shaz wel sort it out k

Laiba- Yh dw Joshua u can stay at my house it will be k orite

Ammy- Yh dw nw lehs go inside plz

Laiba- Yh Shaz cm on dnt cry nw k

Joshua- Yh ayt dw man no1s gna separate us u lot go inside, Laiba u gt da keys 2 ya house I will go ur house and wait 4 u der

Laiba- Yh 1 minute here u go, I will leh Dad no u dw k, Ammy drop Joshua 2 my house

Ammy- Ayt cm on Joshua lehs go

Joshua- Yh i gta geh ma stuff den wel go k den lehs go (He huged Shaz) Dw yh everyfing will be fine ignore ur old gran she gt no brains

Shaz- Ayt

Joshua- I will call u l8ter dw

Ammy and Joshua leave, Shaz and Laiba go inside

Meanwhile we c Angad and Kripa

Kripa- Omg!!! Da weddings gna happen so soon

Angad- I no Kripa if you have any problems leh me no, if u dnt want 2 go ahead wiv da wedding

Kripa- No Im ok wid it dw I will brb gna have a fag

Angad- Kripa u just had 1 stop it nw yh u promised dah u will try and quit by having less fags so u cnt k

Kripa- I need it u dnt geh it, its an addiction

Angad- Ino I use 2 smoke wen I was younger den I quit, it was an addiction 4 me also buh Mom made me understand dah lyfe is more important and (Interrupted)

Kripa- Plz Angad no lecture Ino wah u mean buh duno y i cnt quit buh im tryin and uno dah as well

Angad- Ino ur tryin buh tryin is not enough u need to quit, isn't da family's luv and my luv enough 4 u Kripa u dnt need smoking to help u

Kripa- U wah Angad u myte luv me buh I dnt ur just a m8, I no wah u tryin 2 say every1 is der 4 me all my family buh I duno y I still (Interrupted)

Angad- Trust me Kripa my family was my biggest strength, their luv and happiness made me quit and I no u can quit 2 (he gt da fags 4rm Kripas hand) So no fags if u luv ur family u wont smoke eva

Kripa- Angad ur blackmailing me u cnt do dah

Angad- Yes I can I'm ur future husband

Kripa- Husband my foot I aint even married 2 u yet

Angad- Ur my fianc so I have ryte on u k so u have to listen 2 me

Angad leaves

Kripa- Oi hw dare u talk 2 me like dah Angad listen 2 me wer u gwin.. Angad

Alisha- Wah happened Kripa? Aunty was calling Angad let him go nw u been talkin 2 him since ages (laughs) oh god Kripa u wont leave him alone for 1 minute even I been observing u 2dy u been wid Angad throughout the whole engagement

Kripa- Its nt funi k Alisha u dnt understand dis Angad he makes me so angry

Lucky- Geh use 2 it Kripa ur gna be marrying him, all of u freedom will be snatched

Tanz- Yes I agree im so glad im not in ur position gd luck Kripa

Sam- Yh gd luck

Rob- Yh lots of gd luck

Sujal- Shurrup all of u sayin bad fings 2 ma sista be quite cm on Kripa lehs go Aunty wants u 2 meet sm guests, u lot c da arrangements stop being lazy Lucky go and c da food arrangements

Lucky- Yh Im gwin Bruv in a min

Sujal- (Shouts) No NW!!!!

Lucky runs

Meanwhile we c Angad and Ammy talking

Angad- Wahs rong Ammy?

Ammy- Ok Angad dnt shout at me k u see I proposed Laiba again and she (Interrupted)

Angad- WAT??? U proposed ma sista and u didn't tell me

Ammy- U c Angad each tyme i tell every1 im gna propose Laiba she ends up saying no 2 me, dis tyme i sed I wont tell any1 and I propsed her and (interrupted)

Angad- Yes and as usual my beautiful sista sed no to u, ur such a fool Ammy

Ammy- Shurrup Angad dnt call me a fool u see u and ur sista are exact same u neva listen 2 any1, no1 understands my feelings

Angad- Ammy stop sulking wah did Laiba say

Ammy- Nuffin uno Nuffin

Angad- Dahs a gd fing

Ammy- Wat!! U fink dahs a gd fing Angad (Interrupted)

Angad- Yes coz if she neva sed nuffin its fine atleast she didn't say no

Ammy- Well Angad technically she didn't say yes either

Angad- Dw she wont fynd any1 beta den u I will talk 2 her

Ammy- Yh Ino Im da best

Angad- U myte be da best my sista is one in a million and I luv her loads, I always want her 2 be happy, and I no u will keep her very happy, uno waheva happen wid dah Aryan its made it very difficult 4 ma sista 2 trust sm1 again, she luved him a lot and he betrayed her, so its difficult 4 her

Ammy- Ino buh im not Aryan I will keep her very happy, I luv her more den my lyfe

Angad- Ino ur perfect 4 Laiba dw I will talk 2 her again

Ammy- Yh I will also I need 2 no my answer man im so curious 2 no, is it a yes or no

Angad- K Ask her

Ammy- Yh I will do actually I will go and fynd her nw

Angad- Ammy da function is nearly over so wer gna be gwin home i doubt u will geh chance talk 2 her 2mrw

Ammy- Yh I will c if I can fynd her nw

Meanwhile we c Shaz and Laiba talking

Shaz- Wat Ammy proposed to u 2nd tyme and u sed nuffin

Laiba- Yh I couldn't say anyfing sm1 called me one of our relatives and told me u were crying and I ran 2 u, ur ma best m8 my sista u were upset so it was more important 4 me to be wid u

Shaz- Yh soz Laiba u should say yes 2 him Laiba he luvz u

Laiba-I no he does and I do 2

Shaz- Wah u do

Laiba- Yh

Shaz- Dahs so gd u should tell Ammy he will be really happy

Laiba- I will dw nw lehs go Im cmin 2 ur house 2dy

Shaz- Ayt dah will be gd

Laiba- Yh I have told Dad dw bout Joshua Ammy and Bruv r der k u relax, wel ring him wen we geh home k

Shaz- Yh I hope hes k

Laiba- Dw he will be k

Angad- Laiba wer gwin home nw u cmin

Ammy- Yh Laiba cm on lehs go home I'm staying at ur house 2dy

Laiba- Yh have fun u lot u c im gwin to Shaz house gna stay der da nyte

Ammy- Wat???

Laiba- Yes I have told Dad

Angad- So ur gwin 2 ur Bhabhi house very gd Laiba ur takin sides already

Kripa- U jealous Angad

Angad- Yes ofcourse Iam shes ma sista

Kripa- Well shes on ma side ryte Laiba

Laiba- Yes Bhabhi im on ur side bye Bruv

Josh- Cm on guys lehs go

Angad- Dahs nyce Laiba leavin ur bruva takin Bhabhi side already, we aint even married yet, wen Kripa cmz 2 our house u aint even gna bother talkin 2 me are you Laiba ur gna be wid ur Bhabhi all da tyme

Laiba- Yh, I cnt wait Bhabhi till u cm 2 our house

Shaz- Yh Di ur gna be leavin us all

Kripa- Dw Shaz u can cm 2 Angad wont mynd will u

Angad- No I dnt mynd ur always welcm Shaz

Josh- Angad u cnt tke both ma sistas dahs nt allowed, Shaz u gta stay wid us ayt

Joshs wife Aliyah came

Aliyah- Josh she wont be staying wid us 4 long, Nanima has fixed her rishtha der cmin 2 c her in 2 days im very happy

Shaz- No ways I aint getting married

Aliyah- U dnt have a choice Shaz nw lehs go Mummyji is waiting

Nw we c Shaz, Kripa and Laiba talkin in Kripas room

Kripa- Relax Shaz I have talked 2 Dad he said if u dnt like da guy u aint gna marry him, Im here ayt I will sort every1 out

Shaz- Yh Di uno I luv Joshua

Kripa- Yh Ino dw afta ma wedding will tell Dad 2 fix ur wedding wiv Joshua

Laiba- Yh and Shaz im gna be ur bridesmaid k

Shaz- Yh Laiba buh b4 dah I want u and Ammy married

Kripa- Ammy, Laiba u neva told me all dis

Laiba- Sori Bhabhi I will tell u 4rm da start (she tell her all da stori) so yh Ammys ma best m8 and he luvs me since ages he proposed me twice

Kripa- Ur so silly Laiba u neva sed anyfing

Shaz- Its all ma fault

Laiba- No its not Shaz its fine dw k

Kripa- Brb gta have a fag

Kripa went 2 her hiding place to find her fags she had hid dem in her bathroom, buh they weren't der, der was note der instead

I no ur finding ur fags sori u cnt have any I have took em all, so like u promised u wouldn't have any, yh dnt bother gwin to Sujal Bruvs house coz hes awake and u aint havin any fags so nw go sleep like gd girl and sweet dreams bout me luv ya

Angad xx

Kripa was furious

TO BE CONTINUED.........

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Posted: 15 years ago
how cute.. wonder whats next.. contineu soon!
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hi
do pm me when u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
so sweet and cute part awesome i love it thank you for pm & this part
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wow rocking part ^^!!!!!!!!!!!! i so badly hope joshua & shaz and all the weddings happen on the same day xD it'll be so much fun xD and aww Ammy so sweet hihi my love <3 continue soooon ^^

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