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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
where are u ?

pl continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 7:-

Raj couldn't control his tears when he was once again bejeweled with the stars, medals and credentials denoting his rank. He had become a Major in the Indian Army. This once upon wistful wish had come true. He was elated, honored, proud and ecstatic and yet something nagged his mind. He could perceive a strange sense of apprehension. His eyes traveled over the throng of people assembled there. All of them were all smiles. His favorite bunch looked joyous. All six of them were now his colleagues now apart from just being his strength and assertion. After being felicitated, all his acquaintances expressed their hearty joy and deep remorse at being of no help. He was floored by 'congratulations' in the next couple of hours. After the small ceremonial function, every one retired and his eyes scampered around the remaining small couplets and triplets left. His gaze landed upon Alekh, Huda, Yudi, Ali and Pooja. He walked over to them. Initially there was moment of silence and then screams and shouts soared around the hallway. He thanked all his Cadets for their assistance and rooted credence in him. He had no words for Alekh. Alekh also understood the unspoken message and gave a small smile and a nod while his eyes gleamed with triumph and respect. He found out that Ali and Pooja had married 7 months ago and Alekh was betrothed to Neelu. After having expressed his hearty congratulations he said,

"Guys, mujhe kuch poochna hai."

"Kya sir?" asked Pooja.

"Abhimanyu kahan hai. Kya use nahin maloom ki mujhe beizzat bali kiya gaya hai?"
The painful, desperate and longing tone was evident.

The cadets looked upon their selfless teacher who still cared and was concerned about Abhimanyu because of whom he had lost four years of his life. They knew Abhimanyu Sir couldn't be blamed directly but still if he hadn't told Nandini about the extent of the once-existed strained tension between Naina and Raj regarding the death of Naveen and Raj's effort to reduce their drifting gap, then today would have been completely different.

Hesitatingly, Yudi spoke up –'Who actually Sir ko………"

The strong musical voice interrupted, "Apne is dost se maafi maangne ki himmat jataane main thoda waqt lag gaya."

The word 'Euphoric' itself was insufficient to describe Raj's feelings. Abhimanyu was right in front of his eyes. Without wasting a second, both of them hurried forward and grasped the other with over-powering emotions. The lost time couldn't be recovered, but then they had each others friendship in the coming years.

After the tearful and jubilant reunion Raj thanked Abhimanyu furiously for his undeterred assistance and support to their once-upon-a-time-cadets and his faith in him.
He was glad that he hadn't lost another one of his close friends.
Naina was missing. God is she a witch or something. She disappears from the location every alternate hour. His eyes then landed on Huda who was now hugging some pretty young lass. Hasn't changed a bit, Raj thought grimly yet paradoxically with a grin. Walking arm in arm with Abhi towards the 'Famous 5' he cocked and eyebrow obviously demanding an explanation as to what was happening. The reply was deafening. Huda had been hugging his wife. They had got married a year and a half ago. Then Naina! What about her? Huda replied that she had lost her heart to someone else. The hope which had been building after the first sentence had shattered with the completion of the second. "She loved someone else!!!!" He reminded himself that he had prepared himself for this outcome, but yet how could he console his heart which was searing and throbbing with numb pain and soreness. He couldn't help feeling jealous yet angry at the man who had managed to steal away the most priceless possession of his. Yet the years had strengthened his resolve. A true soldier he was. Her happiness was all that he wanted.




Naina's POV:-

Naina had been silently observing the proceedings and had been hanging on to her love's every movement, his words and his actions. It felt so good to see him in action. She was brought out of her reverie by the ring of her cell. The anonymous caller threatened that if she didn't meet him outside within an hour then Arjun would be hurt.
No! No one dared to touch her son. Quickly checking the gun and all the bullets, she hurried towards the exit with a last glance at him.

Naina glided around the ground and her muscle twitched into motion when she was uncouthly grabbed around her neck. She let her body limp, an expert move to trick the person into easing his hold on her when she had learnt Judo and martial arts. The man falling for her move, soon lay on the floor with a gun pointed at his temple. Her flashing eyes and functional state of attack was enough to make a mark that she wasn't one to be messed with.

"Arjun ko koi haath bhi nahin laga sakta. Khaas kar jab tak main zinda hoon.

'Ab mujhe maarke koi fayada nahin, mujhe bas ye sandesh dene ke liye bheja gaya hai ki your good luck is going to run out. Enjoy your last moments of peace. Hell is going to break out on you and Major Rajveer. Had to use your son to lure you into coming here. You see personal delivery of message. And haan lala sahib ke saath koi ched-chad nahin karta. Tumne to sirf cheda nahin hai par ek zahreele naag ko uksaya hai."

And then kicking her gun with his leg and pinning her beneath him he slapped her which momentarily stunned her and utilizing her inability he then ran away.


Frustration was evident from her expression. He had got away. She now had to be extremely cautious. Nothing was going to happen to Raj and Arjun; she was bound to make sure of that.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
awesome but towhom is naina married
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
very interesting.... 👏 continue soon.... 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
hey pl continue that to with long update
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 8:-

Setting her clothes right after getting up, the first thing Naina did was call up home. Boy, why wasn't anyone picking up the phone. With every ring her tension rose drastically. Finally when she had almost cut the call and was about to hurry back home, her call was answered.

She could hear her Mom's faint reply-" hello."

"Ma, app kaise ho? Sab theek hai na. papa aur arjun surakshit hai na. koi problem to nahin hai ?. Ma...?

"hann naina. Ab theek hai. Tu itni ghabrayi kyun lag rahi hai? Tere papa aur arjun bilkul theek hai.'

'phir aapne phone uthaya kyun nahin? pata hai itni pareshan ho gayi thi. Meri toh jaan hi nikal gayi!!"

"nahin wo bus main kitchen main thi aur tu apne papa ko jaaanti hai. Arjun ke hote hue unhe aur kisi ka dhyan hi nahin hota. Aur beta Captain Rajveer ke case ka kya hua?"

"ve azzaad hai mamma. He's proved innocent and now he's become a major in the Indian Army.'

"naina. Unhe tu ghar kab la rahi hai. Tere bhai ka dost bhi to hai."

"maa. Aap ne unhe maaf kar diya?"

" haan. Keval main hi nahin tere baba ne bhi yeh nateeje pe pahuncha hai ki unka ismain koi kasssor nahin hai. Yeh sab kismet ka khel tha.

'Nahin maa. Yeh ek sochi samjhi saadish thi. Aur aapko pata hai Sir aur Arjun ki jaan ko khatra hai. Maa yeh log bahut hi khatarnak hai. Par main unhe mere bete tak pahunchne bhi nahin doongi. Aap please sabka khayal rakhiyega. Thode samay main ghar pahunch jaoongi. Bye.

No sooner had she finished the call and had turned around she bumped into a masculine figure. Maintaining her balance, she looked up to see a face raging with fierce passion and unexplained worry ;demanding answers. The face of that of her Adonis. As he looked at her calculatingly she could see cold pain in his eyes. The sight branded her. She knew their relation could never reach the ultimatum and it killed her. He would never accept her. The lost years of his life were all due to her. Little did she know that both their wishes, desire, aspiration and dreams were the same.


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Raj had gone out to the open to compose himself and set his thoughts right. But Huda's very words of Naina falling in love with someone else kept reiterating in his mind. To add to his plight he saw Naina out on the ground talking to someone. Fret could be clearly understood and documented judging her expression. The earlier feeling of apprehension returned. He quickly walked towards her strangely without much noise. And then he overheard the most shocking, deplorable and rueful words of his life.
'Yeh ek sochi samjhi saadish thi. Aur aapko pata hai Sir aur Arjun ki jaan ko khatra hai. Maa yeh log bahut hi khatarnak hai. Par main unhe mere bete tak pahunchne bhi nahin doongi'
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She had a son. This was new. His life was in danger. That he knew. But this time it was they who were going to be in the receiving end. Not him or by the matter anyone whom he knew. But Arjun – her son!!!!! She was married!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How was that possible. Earlier he recollected Captain Salve calling her Captain Ahluwaliya. Then what had happened. He had lost her. Putting up a passive and poised expression he felt her touch after the end of the call. But his expression clearly betrayed away his emotions.

Her eyes looked at him with affection, longing, support and most of all love. Love?
Softly, he asked –" Tumhara beta- Arjun?"

Naina knew she couldn't hide anything from him. Of all people he deserved to know. Atleast she felt that it was her duty.

She started.

Flashback:-

Arjun was her 8 months old son. On the same mission, she had been assigned to work undercover in a child care institute which was under suspicion. Marketing of ammunition were rumored to go on at the place. And then one day..............


yoginisahakari thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
hey great going

pl continue soon

cant wait

and not with such a small update

pl make it longer
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
Awesome please make RN together 😊 cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
tooo gud plz update asap
dyong too know who is arjun-adopted son??
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
very damn coolll... 👏 continue soon... 😊 😛 😃

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