PKR-sk fanfic [part 3] *epilogue*updtdpg75 - Page 53

my analysis tooooooooooooooooooooooo hot its an amazing part and really liked this hot side of kashish gr8 job cont soon

k-wht happened to u? y so mild . [she is kissin him all over his body rubbin his entire skin] I lik it wild. I want my tiger. The roarin scratchin biting tiger, my very own.

s-ahun! [raisin an eyebrow] so , u lik tht way,then u will hav tht way!

He grabs her tightly in her arms & both fall on the bed

She is giglin all the way

He is huggin her the tightest

Their feets are rubbin with each other

He is sucking her wet,snugglin her around her neck & shoulders with passion

She has wrapped her legs arnd his waist

Moanin & giglin of pleasure

s-u knw love u look gorgeous in this outfit,my very own sexy babe, oooo so hot , u make me mad

k giggles

she strts kissin him arnd his adam's aaple

he is rubbin his hands all around her back & lower back

k-u knw it's a reward,my way of saying thanku to u

s-thanku for wht?

k-hmmmm for being the best father for my baby,I cannot ask for anything more. Ir everything,for being the most carin & lovin husband , for being the most passionate lover,for finding me beautiful & sexy aft 3 yrs of marriage,for tolerating my immaturity & excessive talking & tantrums every second,for being the most understanding & supportive friend to me & for being the most hen-pecked husband ever [she giggles]

s-so if this kind of thanku I am getting everytime then I'l keep on being wht I am gladly

kissed on the hollow between her breast

she moans & giggles in pleasure

s-& I wana thanku,for making me wht I am today & lovin me unconditionally [he is kissin her fingers delicately] wht I was & wht I am now its all bcoz of u baby . an irresponsible wasted depressed guy [she whispers u were never irresponsible] now to atleast a human

she is beamin at him

s-so..now [s looks at her],if our thanxs givin ceremony is over, can we proceed with wht we were doing [gives a mischief full smile to k] our very own roller coaster ride with my tigress

s makes a grrrrrrrr roarin sound

k puts her lips o his transforming it into a very passionate French kiss

puri raat unke kamre se awaazein aati rahi of giglin ,moaning,talking laughin,screaming,groaning,gasping

i am not able to comment on this part..........bcoz it was wild...it was awesome..........so sexy but very well written..........after 3 yeras of marrige ........very romantic

Abb subah hoti hai-

Both of them r wrapped on by the samne bedsheet tht is entangled around their waist

S is sleepin facing the roof

She is facin s,sideways

Her lips touchin his cheeks

Her arms around his neck

& her 1 leg on s

he is holdin her around her bare back

subah hoti hai to k ki ankh pehle khulti hai

she opens her eyes & looks at s who is sleepin so much peacefully

she kisses him on his cheek sheere se

& climbs a bit on him

kisin him slowly all over his face

s ki neend bhi khul jaati hai

he smiles seein her lovely face the 1^st thing as he awakens

cups her face with his hands & gives her a juicy wet exploring kiss on her lips

she keeps her head on his chest

rubbin his other bust [chest] with her hands

he is rubbin her arms & shoulders while she is I his arms

k-sujal ek abat puchun?

s-hmm

k-when do u like me more? I in normal outfits or I in these sexy outfits?

s-i like u the most in my arms!

She hits him playfully

k-shut up [smiles]

she gets up,

k-come on get up office ke lie late ho jaega

abb s gets ready

comes twrds breakfast table

kj is on sofa

wahan khel rahi hai

actually kj wants to ride on her walker par k ne nahi bithaya as wo har jagah ghumti rahegi usko sambhalna mushkil ho jaega

to s comes in thr

kj s ko dekhke,she was on all 4's to haath badane lagti hai uski taraf

kj-pa…pa..pa….pa..pa…[thoda thoda bolne lagi hai,par ek hi baat baar baar bolti hai]

s ka dil pighl jaata hai kj ki awaaz sunke wo usko apne walker pe uthake bitha deta hai

kj is very happy she is smiling at s showin her 2 teeth only 2 teeth she has naa

she is happily moving all over the house on her walker

k naashta leke aati hai

k-arre ye kya kia,abb ye saare ghar mein udham machaegi

s-machane do bachchi hai

k-shaitaan bachchi hai

abb s naashta karne baithta hai

kj ko leke apni godh mein bitha leta ha

kj is playin on his lap,s ne ek haath se kj ko pakda hua hai ek heaths e he is eatin aur saath saath chotte chotte nivale kj ke muh mein bhi de raha hai,kj khelte khelte kab wok ha leti hai usko khud pata nahi chalta

k-ye kajal waise solid khana khane mein kitne nakhre karti hai,par aise subah tumhari godh mein kaise araam se khaa leti hai

s-haan she is my princess naa

s kisses kj on her mote mote gaal

k-sujal!

s-haan

k-main soch rahi thi ki main naa abb bore ho jaati hu baithe baithe ghar pe,kya karu?

s-hmm,y don't u join some hobby class,tumhara mann bhi laga rahega,aur tum kajal ka bhi dhyaan rakh paogi

k-haan idea to achcha hai,par jab main class mein hongi tab kajal ka dhyaan kaun rakhega?

s-arre kuch ghanto ke lie ek aayaa rakh lo naa yaar

k-hmm keh to tum thik rahe ho,sochti hun

s-ok fine then bye kashsih [kisses k & k kisses him back]

kj ke paas jaake

s-papa ko kishi karo! [kj ko thikse kiss karma nahi aata wo s ke gaal pe chaat deti hai,k smiles, & s kisses kj on her cheeks]

he waves to both k & kj

& goes to work

what a cute part.........how nice it is.....jab aap subaah me aankhein kholo aur sabse pehle apne pyaar ka chehra dekho.........subaah haseen ban jati hai........kitne dino ke bad aisa lagta hai ki dono ko thik se neend aayi hai.......i love the relation between daughter and father....bcoz it reminds me about my dad and me.........it is such a cute family.........i know it is hard to take care of baby in walker becoz my nephew just started and oh my god he runs in it.........so ya bahot shaitaan hote hai chote bache.........achchi baat hai kajal se thoda durr kashsih apne liye waqt nikalna chahti hai...........kajal ko woh log day care me kyun nahi rakhte kuch dair ke liye dusre bacho ke saath use bhi achcha lagega..........what a cute small famliy.......thanks

hai ram yeh toh kuch zyada hi hot hogayi loved these part gr8 job cont soon

neelu yaar i'am back with my comments on pkr dear.. sorry yaar itne time ke baad comment karr rahi hoon..you know right thodi meri life busy hogayi thi..hope you understand...😊 waise tho story bohat hii achchi jaa rahi hai.. sujal , kashish aur kajal ek sweet family... jaise har family mein achche din hothe hai , bure din hothe hai waise hii sujal kashish kii zindagi mein un dono ne aapne sabse khushi bhare din bhi dheke hai aur kabhi ghum bhare din bhii dekhe hai.. jaise har husband wife ke beech nokh-jhonk tho chalthi hii rehthi hai.. waise hii sujal , kashish ke beech bhii chotti-chotti ladayiyaan tho hothi hii rehthi hai.. waise dekha jaye tho kabhi , kabhi ladna bhii chahiye.. kyunke yahii chotti-chotti ladayiyaan jeene mein swaad laasthi hai.. aise ladne se hii tho pyaar hotha hai.. pyaar aur badh jaatha hai aisi chotti nokh jhonkh se... kashish kii insecurity regarding sujal bhii kuch hadh thak sahii hai.. aue kyun na ho aakhir kashish ka pati itna handsome aur dashing joh hai.. hahaha.... waise it is fine kii kashish was feeling insecure.. lekin sujal hai na usse sambhal ne ke liye.. sujal yeh baat bakhoobi jaantha hai kii kashish ko kis tarah manaye... he very well knows kii kashish cannot resist his charms...hehe.. yeh sujal bhi na bada shaitaan hai.. itna shararthi... waise mere hisaab se tho sujal , kashish ka rishtha aur bhi ghehra hogaya with the birth of kajal.. sujal , is such a good father.. uska rishtha with kajal is very adorable.. baap , beti are just too sweett..bohat hii cute..... pyaare.. kahiin meri hii nazar na lag jaye dono ko.. waise dekha jaye tho even kashish is a very good mother...you know neelu in sab ke beech mujhe ek baat bohat achchi lagi... aur woh baat yeh hai kii sujal,kashish kii abhi ek beti hai.. they are nibhaying the parents jan farz bohat achche tarike se.. lekin aisa karthe hue woh dono kabhi bhii ek dusare ke prati apne farz ko nahii bhoole.. aaj bhi sujal kashish ko utna hii chahtha hai jitna pehle chahtha tha... aur kashish bhi sujal se utni hii mohabbat karthi hai , jitna pehle se karthi aayi hai... main tho kahoongi kii with time sujal , kashish ka rishtha aur bhii zyada ghehra hogaya..now they understand each other ko khud se zyada... and with the years passing by sujal , kashish ka pyaar ek percent bhii kum nahii hua hai , lekin unka ek dusare ke liye pyaar aur bhi zyada badh gaya hai... aur ab bhi that pyaar is increasing... i'am very sure yeh pyaar kabhi kum nahii kum hoga....in simple terms all the three together are one happy , cute family.. really bohat achche dear.. very interesting.. mujhko tumhari writing style bohat zyada achchi lagthi hai.. you really write very well... superb , excellent , beautiful , lovely , wonderful , fantastic , just marvelous.. your writing rocks yaar.. your story is absolutely rocking... i love your story completely.. it is just so well written.. mazaa aagaya parts padke... bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat hii zyada achcha likha hai tumne.. hat's off to your writing yaar.. it is ek dum mast , zarbardast , dhassu , bindaas , jhakasas , raapchik.. yaar tumhari story kii main jitni bhi tareef karoon woh kum hai.. you deserve much more than that...👏
yaar now coming to the recent parts you have posted... my comment on them...well yaar kya kahoon mein about the recent parts you have posted.. they are absolutely sizzling hot... mazaa aaya mujhko bohat reading the romance between sujal and kashish.. yaar kehthe hai kii shaddi hone ke kuch saal baad romance between the shaddi shuda couples dies down , it takes a back seat.. lekin sujal , kashish ke beech ka pyaar , un dono ke beech kii romance abhi kum nahii hui hai balki zyada ho rahii hai..aur zyada ho rahii hai.. hailaaaa.. woh sweeett... sujal , kashish ka romance scene padkar main sachchi sharam se paani-paani ho gayi thi.. i was like... woww.. this is so romantic.. sujal , kashish ke beech kii baatein while they were romancing , their thanku's , teasing each each other , all this was just too mind-blowing... sujal , kashish ke romance pe tho main marr-jawaa.. vaari-jawaa.. ishq mein unke mein sadke jawaa.. hyee.. hyee... i'am blushing as alaal tomato after reading their romance... phir unki agli subah kii good morning was just as lovely as the night... keep up the good work going dear..😳 the next day sujal's scene with kajal and kashish also was very damn well written.. inke pyaare se sweet se parivaar ko dekhkar mere mann mein bas ek hii khayal aa rahii hai kii kahiin nazar na lag jaye..is haste khelthe parivaar ko... you keep up the good work going..👍🏼 now coming to my guess on the coming up parts .. well next part ke liye i think kashish koi classes join karegi.. shayad there will be misunderstandings between sujal and kashish.. which will be created as kashish is too busy withe her classes kii woh sujal aur khaas karki kajal ko waqt nahii de paa rahii ho... ya phir sujal , kashish ke eech koi theesera ghalayfaimitan paida karne kii koshish kare... so mere yeh guess hai kii sujal , kashish mein thodi si durriyaan aayegi.. they will drift apart thoda zyada nahii..aur waqt rehthe sab theek ho jayega unke beech.. so dear kya mera guess sahii hai , mujhe zaroor batana..😉neelu dear next part jaldi se post karna.. i'am waiting for the next part eagerly..😊😛😃

Kuch din baad-

Shaam ka waqt hai

S bechara thaka haara comes back frm office

Darwaza khula hai to enters the living room

Par kashish ka koi ataa pata nahi

He gets a bit worries,ki kahan chali gai

He strs callin her name

s-kashish………..kashsih

suddenly before he cld even understand

there is a haaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiyaaaaaaaaaaa

he finds himself on the sofa & k sittin on his chest

wearin a karate dress

& his jaw hurting badly

k looks at him with full of excitement

s-ye..ye..ye kya hai?

K bilkul aaraam se per phelake baith jaati hai uske chest pe making herself comfortable

k-sujal, kaha tha naa class ke bare mein to maine karate class join karli , how is it?

s-painful [murmers]

k-huh?

s-waise baby ko kahan rakha?

k-arre wo meri frnd hai naa Nisha, usne mere lie aayaa ka bandobast bhi kar dia. U knw mere paas do option the karate class ya kathak class. To maine socha karate wld be new kyun hai naa

s-kashish I think tumhe kathak hi join kar lena chahie

k-kyun, karate is so gud. Tumhe nahi lagta main achche se kar sakti hun?

s-tum kuch zyada hi achche se karti ho. Plz aur achche se mat karna

k-par its abt self defence

k-plz..plz..plz kathak join karlo, karma hi hai to…plz listen to me plz, no karate plz..no..plz

bechare ki lagta hai wat lagne wali hai............ab jab biwi karate class join kare to lagta hai shamat aa gayi........bechara pehle din hi darr gaya............haa yeh katak wala idea itna bura nahi.......mar khane se music ka shar dard achcha hai...........lagta hai ab karate se sujal ke bure din shuru hone wale hai...........kashish garewal se log use kashish karatewali bulayenge............god ple help sujal.............sujal jake pehle paincular dawa leke aao..........apne liye aur apni kamar ke liye..........wahh kya part tha maza aa gaya.........ab aise hi mast part post kar do...thanks

wow nice part poor sujal is shortly goin to break his bones with kashish new hobby