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Posted: 17 years ago
she is fumin

aft a min aur two

s-kashsih!

k-kya?

s-kajal kahan hai? tum usse akela chodke aai!

then realisation strucks her,eyes fill with horror

k-oh no,maine to iss baare mein....

s gets up & runs to kj

& brings her thr,on his lap

k runs & hugs kj

k-oh my baby![kiss]

s-[a bit annoyed] kashsih wht is this! how can u be so irresponsible!

kj ko godh mein leke k pyaar kar rahi hai

k-wo..main...[guilty]

s-pata hai abhi wo tumhara perfume kholke pee-vi leti!

k-oh mera bachcha! [kissin kj]

s-thoda to dhyaan rakho yaar!

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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh ye kashish bi na kajal tou choti si hai wo tou taung karey ge na par kashish ko tou us ka dehan rakhna chaheye na agar usy saach mei kuch ho jata tou!!!!!!!1 wo tou sujal ne bacha liya nice parts do continue wid long update plzzz...
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey.......it is just a small perfact family.......bahot hi achche se ja rahi hai......baby is so mucky to have parents like Sujal and kashish.........per kashish kuch jyada hi pareshan nahi rehti....bacha hai girega tabhi sambhlega........beti ko maa se jyada papa pasand hai.....papa ki choti si pari........aakhir kajal ne pehli bar kata aur woh bhi sujal ko.......muje woh line bahot achchi lagi ki maa kam thi ab beti ki katne lagi......how romantic.......i love every scene of it.....kashish ka bechari ka bhagte bhagte bura hall ho gaya.........yeh kajal kahi P T USha to nahi......agar aaj sujal na hota to bechari kajal to gayi thi kama se.....how could u kashish..........ab jaldi se use aage batao........thanks

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kashish
Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome parts 👏 ..............perfect family i think sujal and kashish r very resposible parents 4 kajal 😳 ................plz con't soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi....sorry for not commenting for so long but I was not active 😭 😭 ......i have read all the parts....they are very well written 👏 👏 ....u have done a great job writting them 👏 👏 ......loved the part when kajal bites sujal 😆 😆

Sorry Again, Hope u don't mind 😛
Ruhee 😳
Edited by Ravinder duggal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
ab jaldi se post bhi kar do ek achcha sa part............ab itne dino ke liye gayab huyi thi to saza bhi to milegi......
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Posted: 17 years ago
kuch din beet the hain-
shaam ka waqt hai
k is cookin
aur s baitha hua sofe pe susta raha hai
aur kj ko apni god mein khila raha hai
aur kj bhi s ke saath khub khilkhila rahi hai
apni kj ki muskaan bilkul uski maa k par jo gai hai
tabhi the door bell rings
s kitchen se chillati hai
k-sujaaaal,dekho naa kaun hai ,honey
s uthta hai,kitchen mein jaake kj ko k ki god mein deta hai,aur goes to the door to open it
k kj ko god mein uthae hue,sabzi dekhne jaati hai
she hears the sound of the door openin
k-babyyyyyyyy,kaun aaya hai?
s-emm..mumma aur mehak,kashsih bahar aao
k ka face brightens in a sec
k-oh ma
k bhaagke comes to livin room
jahan sujal,mom aur mehak r indulged in formal talk
k jaake hugs mom mehak
k-mumma aao naa bhaitho
k sabko bitati hai
k-aise achanak
ma-aise tum sab se khaaskaar meri nanhi kashish yaani kajal se milne ka mann kia to aa gai
k-😃 achcha kia mumma bohot achcha kia
k baatein karte karte,hands over kj to s
aur s aur kj to as usual apne mein hi,apni masti mein khel rahe hain
kj to s ke saath khilkhilake khushi se haas haaske khel rahi hai
ma-kajal kitni pyaari bachchi hai,ek baar bhi nahi roti
m-di kajal dikhne mein bilkul aap par gai hai,dekho bilkul ditto,jiju jaisi to wo dikhti hi nahi .kitni chweeeeeet hai
s-achcha hua nahi dikhti,warna sweet nahi bhayanak lagti
tabhi s ka ph rings
s-xcuse me
s k ko kj hand over karke,goes out of the room to rcv the ph
k-ye sujal aur inke international delegates ke calls,inke bina kisi ka ek bhi minute nahi chalta kya. abb call kia naa ma,har chotti badi cheez sujal se puchenge,khud ka dimag hi nahi,aur sujal bass ghanto bass ph pe lag gae.aap hi batao mumma,ye koi baat hu,pehle subah se shaam pura din bechara kaam kare office mein,aur ye log ghar aake bhi chain se saans nahi lene dete,thak jaate hain
ma-tu sujal se bohot pyaar karti hai naa
k-suja bhi mujse kam pyaar nahi karte
m-di,ye sab chodo kajal ko meri godh mein do naa
k-ye le
hands over kajal to mehek
aur mehek ke godh mein jaate hi,kj zor se ro padti hai
m-arre arre di ye to rahi hai ,aap hi sambhalo isse
mehek gives kj to k
k ke godhi mein jaake kj k se lipat jaati hai,aur stps cryin
m-mehek tu bhi naa,tujhe bachche ko godh mein lena nahi aata,chal aa kashsih kajal to apni nani ke paas jaegi
k gives kj to mom
par kj phir rone lagti hai
k takes kj frm mom
k-wo mom wo,abhi chotti hai naa ,sabki godh mein nahi jaati,aapki godh nahi pehchaanti naa
m-haan,par tu isse aise akele kaise sambhalti hai
k-nahi mumma kuch nahi,din mein main sambhalti hun,sujal aa jaate hain to sujal hi dekhte hain kajal ko
m-wo dhyaan rakh pata hai
k-haan mumma kajal to sujal ke saath sabse khush rehti hai,dono khelte rehte hain,aur sujal ho to mujhe chain rehta hi ki wo gir-vir nahi jaegi,sujal ki godh se to utharna hi nahi chahti.balki sujal iska dhayaan mujse achchi tarah rakhte hain.sujal kajal se bohot zyada pyaar karte hain. sujal se achcha pita shayad hi koi ho sakta hai
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Posted: 17 years ago
yaar whts the point in updatin,update karo phir sabko link pm karo phir bhi ek bhi comment nahi
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey i just read this part its amazing i liked the comment k gave abt s workers ab thoda romance dal do na yaar lovely part cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg, this is dhamakedaar u write so good...very nice part and keep up the good work...btw why arent u updating milke bhi hum milte nahin?

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