DK - Kaajjal After ML-p11 pg19-Dec 26, 07

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Kashish for a moment I thought that mayb u hv finished with your Memory Loss FF 😳 ..But then as usual u r back with a bang 😛

What can I say ..yet another masterpiece 👏

The intensity in Dev's eyes and the growing passion in Kaajjal's heart was heating up the entire Atmosphere 😳 😳 😳 ...So Kaajjal was hellbent for removing Dev's shirt 😉 😆 😛 ...I m sure both badly wanted to take each other into each other's arms 😳 but well the situation was not allowing them to do so 😡 ...But I m sure when Kashish will want both will surely submit themselves into each other's arms...hai na 😉 😆 😳

Outstanding narration Kashish 👏 ..where can we get so much romance other than Your,Mala and Autumn's DK-Fanfics 😳

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kashish yeh kya kar dala tune......
oh god that was one sweet scene and knowing me i am sure u know how much i have loved every single moment of it u know kashish............ur mloss ff is closest to my heart.Thanks so much for continuing it 👏

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That was sooooo scintilaating Kashuuu!!! Poor Kajju baby and her haywire senses! 😳 Thank God Satya never found out that his kajju barfi is with Devu! Phew! 😛 😃 Aur Kajju baby taking care of his wound, and while taking care of the wound, she moves even closer, her hairlocks tease her and Devu moves his hand to move the hair locks......I really had difficulty breathing at that point! You set my senses in fire today Kashuu!! Brilliantly narrated!!!! 👏 Please, please, please, please continue asap!!😃

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thank you so much kushi 😛
awesome, fablious, lovly, tarfic, and most importatly ROMANTIC, part i had ever read 👏 ...............fablious work 👏 .........kushi u wrote it so well it was like i was actully there in the hut 😊 watching both of the love birds, 😳 who were try to ignore each other 😭 ........u had showed us the really meaning of love today, the way they both were trying to stay way form each other but there love wouldn't let them stay way for a second 😳 ...........kushi hats off for todays part 😛 ......i think im gonna read this part over and over.....thank you so much for the most lovely part ever.

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awww Girls i am sooo glad u remembered this FF even after such a long delay in updating .... but this is surely for princess and her persistence that i took time out to write it. I am sooo glad i did.

Nimmo dear i am soooo happu my words were sound enought o have u picturize the whole scene ... kya kahoon yar, when i talk about DK i go all emotional ...

Jyoti, yeah i know yar, i was sure everyone must be thinking that .. the delay was too long but then as i said above, your kashu is back with ML FF. And yeah no matter how hard they try their love shall always speak its language and attract them towards each other irrespective.

Mala, ab main tumhaina kya kahoon tum mujhay kitna khush karti ho ... itna na kiya karo mera dimagh kharab ho jayay ga hehehhehehe. and haan yar, when i write about DPS i lose all track of time and all control on senses. phir tu bas main hoti hoon aur mera DPS and then whatever i write is straight from heart .... i dont know why and how i started feeling soooo strongly for him but the fact will remain the same that he will always be a very very important part of my life.

and this song Mala ... OMG my all time fav ... ehsaan tera hoga mujh pay ... wow ...wow ... everytime i listen to this song i just lose myself in it ..... thanks sooo much dear for associating such beautiful song with the part. You are a darling. 🤗

Sameera, i am soo glad u liked it yar ... i am glad u could bring a smile on your lips.

Zareen, hahahha dear abhi say senses on fire ... abhi tu u have to see what happens next ... just wait and watch, kaajjal is not done with her treatment yet ..... 😉

Princess, My darling this is just for you honey .... i know i have taken a long time in updating it, but now that i have done ts only because i knew someone out there wanted to read it .... My special princess. And haan yar, how can they ignore each other .... their love is tooo strong ... khamoshi main bhi un ka pyar baatain karta hai .... kaisay dur hoon gay ai doosray say ....

Thanks for encouraging me dear ... it means a lot to me.

I will be back soon with the update, for the wound treatment is not yet over. 😉

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...won't say anything now...will be back to comment later...til then, 👏

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o Payal i was about to PM you dearie ... okie dokie i will wait for your post now.

Love, Kashish

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Hey kashish di.

bahut accha. bahut hi accha. i am just so happy u coninued this fanfic after so many months. i must say u have a very special charm of telling DK love stories. Di plz continue, i like can't wait for the next part!! 😊

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thesaint148 wrote:

awww Girls i am sooo glad u remembered this FF even after such a long delay in updating .... THIS FF is awesome but this is surely for princess thnak you and her persistence that i took time out to write it. thank you so much for writing it i really enjoyed it I am sooo glad i did.

Princess, My darling this is just for you honey .... thank you i know i have taken a long time in updating it but it was wearthe wating it😉, but now that i have done ts only because i knew someone out there wanted to read it .... My special princess, i really love ur FF and a look forward of readig it. And haan yar, how can they ignore each other .... their love is tooo strong ... khamoshi main bhi un ka pyar baatain karta hai .... kaisay dur hoon gay ai doosray say .... yep eside they are ade for each other😳

Thanks for encouraging me dear ... it means a lot to me. thx for writing it

I will be back soon with the update, for the wound treatment is not yet over. 😉 i'll be wating

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When did this reach part ten?!?!
When did his lips begin touching hers?
I merely read the first line of this and realized I've missed something...give me time to go back and read...then I'll get back to you...
I LOVE THIS ONE...Thank You SO Much For Continuing to Update It!!!

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Ok, I read it...I'll comment in detail later...for now, hats off to you my dear...and THANK YOU once again... 👏

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array Payal .... hmmmm did u really miss the last part ... array go and read darling ... u will enjoy it ...

hmmm i will wait for your reply ... eagerly ...

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Kashish darling thank you so so much for continuing the ML one! I love this FF so much 😳 😛 You know, JUST the other day I was thinking, I missed out so much, what happened to the ML FF? Did Kashish ever continue it, or did she just stop writing in this one? Thats when I got your PM about the update. 😃 😛

Once again, your narration was beautiful! I loved how much Kaajal calling Dev Mr. Singh hurt him, and how Dev called Kaajal Ms. Behl, it hurt her. Clearly she is getting more and more attached to him, yet she cant seem to know why. Uoff I love it. I love it how Kaajjals distance, her not replying properly makes Dev pine so much! Hmm. Maybe I should try that on a certain someone 😆 😉 Oh wait, actually I already have 😆 😉 😛

But Kashish please please continue soon! Its only your writings that keep me sane at some points! and also keep me updated of when you continue! 😳

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Kashish ji! 😳 wat have u done here... 😆 😳
god..that was one breathtaking part from beginning to end... 😳

God..Mr singh..bhudhu kaajjal 😡 Call him Dev na 😆

God that wound-fixing session was one really gorgeous..and breathtaking moment..god the passion between these two is just.....mindblowing and unique..no one can stop them... 😳

u sent shivers down my spine with this part.. 😳

plzzzzz continue soon...its just mindblowing ...do not keep us waiting for tooo long na... 😆 😆

😳 Komal

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sharna2k6 wrote:

Kashish darling thank you so so much for continuing the ML one! I love this FF so much 😳 😛 You know, JUST the other day I was thinking, I missed out so much, what happened to the ML FF? Did Kashish ever continue it, or did she just stop writing in this one? Thats when I got your PM about the update. 😃 😛

Once again, your narration was beautiful! I loved how much Kaajal calling Dev Mr. Singh hurt him, and how Dev called Kaajal Ms. Behl, it hurt her. Clearly she is getting more and more attached to him, yet she cant seem to know why. Uoff I love it. I love it how Kaajjals distance, her not replying properly makes Dev pine so much! Hmm. Maybe I should try that on a certain someone 😆 😉 Oh wait, actually I already have 😆 😉 😛

But Kashish please please continue soon! Its only your writings that keep me sane at some points! and also keep me updated of when you continue! 😳

Love,
Sharna

Sharnuuuuu my dear ... i am sooo happy to read ur reply here. yar ritu aur tum hi tu thay jin kay liyay i started this FF. I still remember how ritu pmed me for an elaboration of the DK cliff meeting scene after ML.

I am sooo glad u enjoyed it yet again Sharna, though i know u r toooo busy to even take time out. But my darling i am sooooo pleased and truly humbled to know that my writing plays a role in your life as well. you have no idea how u have touched my heart.

thankyou Sharna and keep coming back honey, i really miss you.

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