Fan Fic: Aashiq Banaya Aapna. - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: cheen2005

wowwww 3 parts in a row n kripa having an attitude infront of ANGAD KHANNA, how dare she 😆

Well cuz she's Kripa!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Indian101

really good!! attitude in front of Angad!! kya baat hain!!
Neha- all thnx 2 u i started reading tis fan-fic!!!

ur welcome anytime!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 i was getting angry at u!!! my head is gonna live in a fantasy land all cauz of ur ff!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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lol! that should be a good thing rite! 😉
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Part 6

Around 7 P.M.

Everyone is at the capmus.

In the bus, Everyone is in, Josh and Neha sit togeather, and Angad and Kripa are just bording.

Kripa looks around and finds only one seat empty in the end, she moves to the back and sits down near the window resting her head, when Angad comes and sits next to her.

A: Hey Krips! Whats up!

K: Excuse Me.

A: What?

K: Darling, the name is Kripa- not CRISP!

Anagd feels kinda embarrsed as Neha and Josh sitting one seat ahead laugh a little.

J: Neha, pelha baar kisina Anagd ko kuch sunaya hai.

Neha cant stop laughing, while Kripa weras an arrogant smile.

A: Well, KRIPA, whats up

K: Well ANAGD, kuch khaas nahie expect ki mujha aapna poora safar tumahara saath kaatna paraga, How borning.

A: Well hum itna bhi borning nahie hai.

K: Titlting her head in a style, Oh really.

Anagd nods politly.

K: Lakin filhaal tho im kafie bored, and not to mention tired

A: Oh! Tho mera kanda hai naa, ispar sar rakhiya aur aapko aaram sa neend aaygi!

K: Well tumsa saayda ya window comfartable hai.

Neha turns her head and looks at Angad, talking to Kripa.

N: Kripa! Kya baat hai, tum pelhi ladki ho jo Anagd ka saamna melt nahie hoti, by the name, i'm Neha, unfortunatly Anagd's best friend.

K: Nice name, and nice to meet u, I'm Kripa, unfortunatlly Anagd partner for this assingment!

N: Oh oh! Bach ka rehna, kahie en pach dino main Anagd tumara dil ki choori na karla.

K: Eyeing Angad, Darling, i'm Kripa Chopra, aur mera dil mera saath nahie hai- now kinda mummbling, vo tho pelha koi lagya hai.

Neha and Josh: What? They are not sure if they heard rite, but Angad has heard rite and clear.

K: Kuch nahie.

Anagd moves closer to Kripa and wispers, Kahie vo "Koi" main tho nahie?

Kripa pushes him away and wipers back- I WISH! there's a style in her voice, its arrogant, and ziddi.

Anagd smiles, and the rest of the way Kripa sleeps on Anagd's sholder, while Neha sleeps on Josh's sholder.

The Hotel

Everyone gets down and gathers up.

Teacher: Students, aap log room share kara ga aapna partners ka saath, aagar koi problem hai, because of gender, please tell me.

Kripa is still listning when Anagd turns to her.

A: So Miss Kripa Chopa- whats ur plan.

K: My plan, huh! Well, i dont mind.

Anagd cocks one eyebrow tilting his head a litlle.

A: Hmm- really! So u can trust me!!!! Anagd is grinning now.

K: WOW! HOLD ON! Kisna kaha mujko [BOLD] TUMARA UPOR VISHWAAS HAI [/BOLD] her fingure on on Anagd's chest, Vishwaah hai lakin, her fingure shifts upon her self, vishwaas hai lakin Kudu par.

There's a serious expression on Kripa's face rite now, and this confused expression is confusing Anagd.

Kirpa takes a few steps fowards, and then backwards to Anagd.

K: By the way, will u please bring my bags, her thumb is pointing towards the bus.

Anagd is shocked! As Neha and Josh come laughing to him.

Neha: Putting her elbow on Anagd's sholder- So Cooli number 1! U ready, Anagd turns her head towards Neha putting her his index fingure under her chin.

A: Neha, meri jaan! now with style Shut Up!

J: Anagd mera bahi! he slaps his back hard, u dont have much more to say.

A: Dont worry Josh, es Kripa Chopra ki aaker tho main uusi waqt nichal saktha tha lakin, isko thora aur kush honado, i'll get her at once.

N: Anagd! Dont lie to ur self- Tum Kripa ka saamna KUCH BHI NAHIE HO!

Now Angad turns to Neha.

A: Neha, aagar tum chup nahie bethi tho....

Neha: Tho???

A: Tho...

Neha: Tho?

Josh is just looking back and foward.

A: Tho- ah forget it.

Anagd walks fowards when Neha and Josh stop him.

Neha and Josh: Angad.

He turns and smiles: Kya hua?

N: Kripa ka bags!

A: Ofcourse, picking up Kripa's and his bag he goes into the hotel room!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
wow, angad the cooli. please continue Neha.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
😆
ya he's my cooli no 1!!!! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
that was really good neha i just read all of it
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
if u are reading PLEASE comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
HOW DO U COME UP WITH SO MANY IDEAS FOR SO MANY FAN-FICS.???? 😕 😆
ur doing an awsome job.

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