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Posted: 18 years ago
PART 15:

Angad spent the night in the surgical ICU, keeping a keen eye on Prateek.
"Sister….yadi Prateek jaag jaaye, tho muhje bataa dena" he told the nurse as he settled down with his laptop to finish some work.

In a short while, a nurse informed him that Prateek was awake and throwing a fit…" sir….thodi morphine aur dein usse?" (morphine is used post operatively to help with pain and calm patients down)

"Nahin…let me see what is going on" Angad got up to go to Prateek's bed

He sat down on his bed and put his hand on his bandaged head…"beta….kya hua?…kahin dard ho raha hai…?" he asked affectionately

"NAHIN….MUJHE MAMA CHAHIYE….AUR NISHU PAPA…" he cried loudly. Angad lifted him and place him on his lap so his head and body could rest on his chest. The monitors connected to Prateek started beeping as Angad moved him…beep…beep.

A nurse ran to his bed.."OH…sir aap hain?….yeh monitor disconnect ho gaya hoga…." She tried to re connect the leads.

"Rehney do sister….I can feel his heartbeat and breathing…..he is alright…..don't connect the monitors….he doesn't need them…" Prateek's little heart was beating fast through Angad's shirt. Angad held him closely and calmed him with his gentle touch and soothing words. Prateek was barely sobbing now as he hugged Angad tightly and fell asleep. Angad also fell asleep as he held his son…..they both slept all night like babies….the sounds of the loud monitors and beeps in the ICU could not disturb them…..Angad had never felt this comfort before…prateek was not missing Kripa or his Nishu papa any more……

The nurses and ICU staff were puzzled and surprised, "hamare Dr khanna ko kya ho gaya hai….? Aisa tho unhey kisi patient ke saath nahin dekha…"

One of the nurses had recognized Kripa earlier. She used to work on the surgical floor a few years ago and still remembered the days when she had seen Angad and Kripa's love story blossom on the surgical floor, almost seven years ago. She smiled to herself as she understood what was going on, she had tears in her eyes……

Kripa was back at the hospital early in the morning. She found Prateek sitting up and talking to Angad.

"Achha, doctor uncle….aap basketball kheltey hain? Mere Nishu papa mere saath hamesha kheltey the…."

"Haan…zaroor…balki main apne school ki basketball team ka captain tha…"

"Aap mere saath khelengey basketball?"

"Bilkul…aap bas theek ho jaayo, in fact aap ke liye main basketball yahin le aaoonga…." He had an idea!

"Hello, Prateek" she came and gave him a hug. She was surprised to see an unshaven and sleepy looking Angad at the bedside, his hair all messy as if he had just gotten up.

"Angad…tum raat ko…..yahin the?"

"Haan…wo koyi emergency ho gayi thi ICU mein….I had to stay back…but don't worry, Prateek is fine." He lied and tried to re assure her about Prateek.

He got up and said, "kal…you and I will play a special basketball game" , he gave Prateek a high-five and mischievously looked at Kripa, "Kahin maa pe height chali gayi tho…basketball kaise khelegaa bechaara….baap pe gayi…tho achha hai" he winked and walked off. Kripa was stunned at his last comment and looked at him as he walked out of the ICU, "kya …matlab……" she could barely say.

Angad walked into his office to get his belongings. He saw an envelope addressed to him from the lab. "Itni jaldi aa gayi report…" he unsealed the report and was not surprised to see, "perfect DNA match between sample A and B": his heart always knew that, now his mind was convinced too!

He smiled, picked his bag and walked towards the elevator, whistling to himself. The staff riding with him were surprised as Dr Khanna was always "Dr serious" as they called him. "inhe kya hua hai" they all questioned.

As he was leaving the elevator, he saw Harshini walking towards her office.

"Harshini!" he ran after her, "I need to talk to you"

Harshini was surprised to see Angad, who was always Clean and well groomed, looking so shaggy…unshaven, uncombed hair.

"Bistar se seedhe hospital aaye ho?" Harshini laughed as she unlocked her office.

"Kuch aisa hi samjho….I need to talk to you NOW!"

"OK..OK andar tho chalo…."

"Harshini….tumney mujhey itney saal yeh kyon nahin bataaya ki mera ek beta hai…"

Harshini lowered her eyes, "tumhey kissney kaha…?"

"That is not important ki mujhe kaise pata chala…achcha yeh batao….Kripa 6 saal pehle Institute chhod ke kyon gayi thi…" he was holding her shoulders and shaking them.

"I can't say anything…I have been sworn into secrecy by Kripa….haan itna zaroor bata sakthi hoon ki it was not the reason we were all made to believe…you know kripa….there was no reason for her to resort to something that cheap to get good grades….I can't say anymore."

"That is enough for me….." said Angad as he turned around to leave

"Ek aur baat Angad…..Nishant bhaiyya aur Kripa ki shaadi ek samjhauta tha…for Prateek's sake….Kripa was very clear with him….I don't think she has ever loved or will ever love anyone else but you….Angad" she said as her voice cracked.

Angad came close to harshini, "Harshini, kripa is very lucky to have a friend like you……" he hugged her and wiped his tears.

"I think I am the lucky one…..Kripa jaisi ladki maine aaj tak nahin dekhi…..anyways…I have said enough…Kripa maar dale gi mujhe…." Harshini tried to smile through her tears.

"Main dekh loonga usse….kaise maarti hai tumhey…" Angad smiled back and left her office. He had not been this happy in years. "Kripa theek kehthi thi….jo hota hai…achha hota hai….yadi Prateek ke brain tumor nahin hota….tho main apney bete se kaise milta…Kripa sey phir kaise milta…??" he whistled all the way home.

Angad came home to find Mishti talking to someone, "Chintu…aur Monu…idhar aao….chalo homework karo.." she was talking to her imaginary kids. Angad felt sorry for her whenever he saw her like that. The first few years after their marriage, Angad would get upset with her imaginary behavior but now he had learnt to ignore it and take it in stride. He had accepted Mishti the way she was; it was his duty to take care of her and he would make sure he would do that till he lived. He had learnt never to mention the word, "kripa" in front of Mishti- the very mention of her name would often trigger a major psychotic relapse which could make Mishti very aggressive or even suicidal!

"Mishti, mere saath shopping chalogi….Chintu aur Monu le liye toys lekar aathey hain…"

"Angad tum!" she hugged him as he walked in, "haan chalo….main tayyar hoon"

"OK main shower lekar aata hoon, phir chalengey"

They drove to an electronic toy store. Angad purchased a video game console with some games. "Oh, basketball? Chintu tho football kheltaa hai…." Mishti protested when she saw the shopping cart.

"OK…aisa kartey hain, basketball aur football dono le lete hain…." Angad had learnt not to argue with her.

He decided to stay back with Mishti till lunchtime as he had no surgeries scheduled that morning. He made sure she ate properly and took her medicines before he left for the hospital. Angad had learnt to treat Mishti like his child, he tucked her in bed, kissed her forehead and left with the shopping bags.

AT THE HOSPITAL:

Prateek had been transferred back to the regular floor. Angad walked into his room and saw kripa trying to walk Prateek to the bathroom.

"Mama, mujhse nahin chalaa jaata….." Prateek started crying.

Angad put the bags down, "Kripa, abhi uske pairon mein kuch din weakness rahe gi….don't worry" he came forward and carried Prateek in his arms to the bathroom. He helped him go to the bathroom and cleaned up after him. Kripa was stunned to see how comfortable Prateek was with Angad.
Angad carried him back to his bed and said, "buddy, are you ready to play basketball?"
Prateek's eyes lit up as Angad set up the video game console in front of the TV.

"Angad…yeh sab kya hai..?"

"I always keep my promises kripa…." He soon realized that statement hurt Kripa's feelings as she tried to read his underlying message.

"sorry…mera matlab yeh nahin tha….I had promised Prateek, he will be able to play basketball….."

Angad sat down next to Prateek and gave him one game control and kept the other one in his hand. They both started playing and shooting basketballs, oblivious of the fact that Kripa stood there with her face to the window trying to control her tears.

Angad looked up and saw her reflection in the glass window, he felt sorry for what he had said.

A nurse came in and saw Angad playing with Prateek, "Dr khanna…aap tho bachchon ke saath bahut achcha khelte hain….aapke apne bachchey bhi nahin hain…..tab bhi…."

Kripa was shocked to hear the last statement as she still remembered their conversation from last night when Angad told her he had one son.

As the nurse left, angad said, "tumney mere bete kaa naam nahin pooncha tha kal…" He walked towards her as Prateek kept shooting baskets with his controller.

Kripa looked at him with a lot of questions.

"Haan…mujhe Prateek ke bare mein sab pataa hai…." Angad said

"Harshini?" Kripa got upset

"Nahin….ussney kuch nahin kaha…pehely mujhey shaq tha, phir kal raat ICU mein Prateek ke saath ek raat bitaaney ke baad yakeen ho gaya aur phir apne dimaag ki shanti ke liye…." He took the lab report out from his pocket and showed it to Kripa.

Kripa had nothing to say, she looked ashamed for keeping such a big secret from him.

"main nahin jaanta tumhaari kya majboori thi….par ab mujhe apney bachche ki zindagi se mat nikaalna jaise tumney mujhe….." he turned around to hide his tears and then walked off…..

…..to be continued…..
Edited by bheegi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

nice update... 👏
but what made angad to perform DNA tests for his and prateek's sample...???? 😳



Sixth sense??? Read part 15...u will know 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
i just started reading ur fan fic amd it is awesome

kashish 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part..........ak getting closer...
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was awesome,i like ur ff infact i love it but do something abt mishti plz i dnt like her n her presense btw ak.....i hope ak will get bak together again n this time will forever....cont soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing part
keep it up
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG bheegi..i love ur ff...this one is amazing like others...pls continue soon..i hav read ur 2 ff...the turtleneck girl...it was superb.....the way u portrayed kripas character was amazing....and the first kiss...it was gr8 plss give me the links to all ur ffs.......i LOVE THEM.........CONTINUE SOON..............plssssss!!!! and make AK closed forever.................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

U R A WONDERFUL WRITER.......!!!!!and u noe vt ur this ff is soo good i mean its even giving us knowledge regarding medical doctors....and etc ..for me u r 2nd EKTA........ 👏 keep up the good work ...best of luck...!!!!!!CONTINUE soon......!!!!!!


LOve
-Laraib..!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome!! i always get to read 2 parts in the mornings so keep updating at the times you do! 😆

Angad knows now!! yay!! lots of father-son bonding hopefully!

poor angad thougt.. living with mishti.. i wonder how they'll sepearate! 😕

continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks everyone 😊 Love all ur comments. I am glad I am able to educate u guys at the same time 😆 All the medical facts and the medical college environment in this ff is infact very true 😊 Laraib, I will post all the links of my ffs on the index post. THanks again 😊 😊

PART 16:

After Angad left, Kripa sat with Prateek on his bed and hugged him. She sobbed quietly and thought, "Angad...I am sorry.....lekin mere paas aur koi raasta nahin tha.....jaanti hoon mainey tumhey bahut dard diya hai.....aur tumhare bina, main bhi sirf apni yaadon ke saath hi zinda hoon......kitna ajeeb rishta hai hamara......is rishtey mein sirf dard aur yaadein basi hain.......aur ek hamara bachha......kaash main tumhey samjha sakti ki mainey yeh sab kyon kiya......I love you Angad....I still do......main tumhey kabhie bhool nahin payi." She dozed off with her son in her arms, lost in her own thoughts.

NEXT DAY:

Kripa and Harshini were talking at Prateek's bedside, who was playing his video game.

"Harshini….Angad ko Prateek ke baarey main pata hai….."

"Haan….aakhir kab thak chupaati tum…."

"main jaanti thi ki Mumbai aakar main yeh risk ley rahi hoon…..parr Prateek ki bimaari ke aagey main majboor thi…" Kripa said softly

"Ab kya karogi?" asked Harshini

"He wants to be involved in his care now….."said Kripa

Angad walked in as they were talking, "Hey…buddy….who is winning? The Mavericks…or Lakers?"

"DOCTOR UNCLE!" Prateek's eyes lit up as he saw Angad walk in.

"Good morning ladies" he greeted Kripa and Harshini and started examining Prateek.

"I think Prateek is making good progress…..bas thodi physical therapy chahiye hogi…for his legs….he still doesn't have much strength in his legs…..discharge ke baad bhi you can continue to bring him for physical therapy…." Angad informed Kripa. He was behaving like a total professional this morning; not letting his conversation with Kripa about Prateek last night come in between.

"Wo….physical therapy tho Delhi mein bhi ho sakthi hai…." Kripa said with some hesitation.

As soon as she said that, Angad gave her a sharp look. Kripa could not meet his gaze; she knew she had touched a sore chord.

Harshini sensed the tension, 'main chalti hoon…..baad mein aaoongi…" she walked out as Prateek said, 'bye…bua…." "bye…beta…"she replied back.

Angad kept staring at kripa in anger, "Please don't do that to me again….."

"Parr, Angad…how are you going to explain this to your family?"

"Family ki fikr mat karo……they don't need to know anything……Prateek will live with you but I just want to be involved……mein usse roz mil saktha hoon…..I can take care of him…..please stay back…if not for me….do it for Prateek"

Kripa knew Angad was right; since Angad had started interacting with Prateek, he was a different kid-much happier and did not miss Nishant as much.

"Theek hai….main Harshini se baat karr loongi…." Kripa saw Angad was relieved when she said that.

Kripa spoke to Harshini about her conversation with Angad. Harshini was delighted. Harshini, who was now married to Shabbir could not control her excitement, "That would be great….Shabbir bhi 6 mahiney ki training ke liye US gaya hai….meri bhi company ho jaayegi….you know how close I was to Nishant bhaiyya and you are my best friend" she hugged Kripa.

After Prateek was discharged from the hospital, Kripa moved in with Harshini. Kripa had resigned from her job in Delhi when Prateek had been diagnosed with brain tumor. Fortunately, Nishant was well off and left a lot of savings for them. Kripa's focus was now Prateek and his rehabilitation. She would like to go back and practice as a pediatrician again but that would have to wait till Prateek was back on track.

Angad started visiting them almost every evening. He had cut back on his workload; they had hired some new surgeons in their department and that made it easy for him to divide his attention between Prateek and Mishti. Kripa and Angad acted more like friends and never discussed their past. Harshini acted like the catalyst between them and was always there when Angad visited. They would often have dinner together, then play with Prateek and sometimes talk till late in the night after Prateek was in bed.

Angad looked forward to his evenings with Prateek…..and of course Kripa…..he had noticed that motherhood had enhanced her beauty further…..she was no longer a young medical student, he had fallen head over heels for…..she was a mature young woman…..who unfortunately had seen more than her fair share of sorrows in life……he knew he still was head over heels in love with her…..

Angad never asked her about Nishant, although he did wonder at times how they would have met….how could Nishant have resisted Kripa…..Harshini had mentioned that their marriage was a compromise…..was Kripa still attracted to Angad the way he was to her….??? He resisted from touching or holding her at Harshini's house-even accidentally; he knew once he did that, he would have a hard time holding back…….

One day, Harshini said, "Yaar….my hubby is really missing me in the US….he wants me to join him for sometime…I have 15 days vacation…..you mind if I go?"

"Arre….Harshini….isme poonchney ki kya baat hai….of course you need to go….warna main bahut naraaz ho jaaoongi…" Kripa scolded her.

"I know you are comfortable with this area now…..kuch bhi problem ho tho phone karr dena….main next flight le kar waapas aa jaaoongi…." Harshini hugged kripa.

Harshini left the next day. The same evening, Angad did not show up at his usual time. Kripa changed into her lilac colored silk pajamas with a sleeveless, button down top and was getting ready to tuck Prateek in bed when she heard the doorbell.

"Itni raat ko….kaun ho sakta hai..?"
She was surprised to see Angad at the door, "Oh…Angad…itni late…."

"Haan…aaj kuch emergency aa gayi thi…Prateek soya tho nahin?"

"NAHIN DOCTOR UNCLE!" Prateek heard Angad's voice

Kripa laughed, "tumhey apna answer mil gaya…"

Angad smiled and said, 'main bas washroon ho kar aata hoon…I WILL BE RIGHT THERE PRATEEK!"

Kripa went back into the bedroom. "Mama, please mera superman waala game de do….mujhe doctor uncle ke saath khelnaa hai….please"

Kripa was initially reluctant but gave in, 'OK….kahan rakha hai?"

"Wo….almirah ke oopar waale shelf mein…."

"Uffo…..stool laana padhega" she brought a stool and climbed up to find his game.

"I can't see it beta…."she tried to get on her tippy toes….

Angad came back and saw her trying to reach something really high…her night top had lifted up to reveal her thin waistline above her pajamas. She suddenly lost her balance, "O….OUCH….!!!" Angad managed to get there in time and she landed in his arms. They both looked at each other and momentarily forgot where they were.

"HA…HA…HA! Mama gir gayee……doctor uncle aap hi superman ban gaye…." Prateek interrupted their eye locking session.

Kripa felt embarrassed and got off his arms…. "kuch peeyoge….?" She changed the subject as she stared at the floor.

"Haan…ek cup coffee…."

"1/2 spoon sugar and extra hot…." She smiled as she remembered her first day of ragging when she had joined college. He smiled back as he remembered the same incident- how upset he was with Kripa, as the coffee was not to his specifications.

Kripa was relieved to get away but was still having goose bumps as she could still feel his touch on her body…..

When she got back with the coffee, she saw Angad was trying to put Prateek to bed….she was surprised to hear Angad sing a lullaby:

"aahista aahista" from "swades"- beautiful song in which Kripa also joined him in the last part:

http://www.dishant.com/album/swades-(2004).html
or
http://www.gayaki.com/songs-of-Swades.html

lyrics on : http://www.raaga.com/channels/hindi/lyrics/20920.html


Once Prateek was asleep, Kripa asked, 'khana khaa liya tumney?"

Angad answered as he was sipping his coffee, "nahin…banaaogi…tho kha loonga…."

They both smiled as they remembered the ragging incident when Kripa had to cook for a room full of hungry medical students.

She went back to the kitchen and started frying some 'paneer.'

Angad put out the bedroom lights so Prateek could sleep in peace and followed Kripa to the kitchen. "Harshini kahan hai?"

She turned around to see Angad nibbling on the 'paneer' pieces she had just fried, "Oh…Angad…..yeh kyon kha rahe ho….sabzi kaise banaoongi…haan…Harshini aaj hi US gayi hai….oh please….saare mat khaao…." She moved his hand away from the plate.

As soon as she touched his hand, he grabbed her by her wrist and turned the stove off. With his other hand, he removed the ladle in her hand and brought her close to him. He kissed her neck, then behind her ears…then down to her lips….she tried to protest but he did not budge…he carried her to the guest room and kept kissing her passionately. Kripa could not hold back either and responded equally to his lips. He started unbuttoning her top; she suddenly realized what was happening and pushed him away…. "NAHIN Angad…hum aisa nahin karr sakthey….tum shaadi shuda ho…."

"I don't care Kripa…..I just want you…." Angad tried to grab her again but she pushed away, 'Please go away Angad……you can't do that!" she was sobbing with her face turned away from him. Angad felt humiliated, picked his bag and walked out as he was buttoning up.

Kripa ran to the bathroom and turned the shower on…..she could not take it anymore…..she stood there in the cold shower crying her tears out….

Song in background: "kya janoo sajan" from "baharon ke sapney"

http://www.dishant.com/lyrics/song-5557.html



(Kya jaanoon sajan hoti hai kya gham ki shaam
Jal uthe sau diye jab liya tera naam) -2
Kya jaanoon sajan

(Jabse mili nazar, maathe pe ban gaye
Bindiya nayan tere dekho sajna) -2
Dhar li jo pyaar se, meri kalaayiyaan
Piya teri ungliyan ho gayi kangana
Kya jaanoon sajan hoti hai kya gham ki shaam
Jal uthe sau diye jab liya tera naam
Kya jaanoon sajan

(Kaanton mein main khadi, nainon ke dwaar pe
Nis din bahaar ke dekhoon sapne) -2
Chehre ki dhool kya, chanda ki chaandni
Utri to reh gayi mukh pe apne
(Kya jaanoon sajan hoti hai kya gham ki shaam
Jal uthe sau diye jab liya tera naam) -2
Kya jaanoon sajan




Angad was hurt by her rejection again, "I know she loves me….her lips and eyes cannot deny that fact…..tho phir wo kyon mujhsey door bhagthi hai…." He banged his head on his steering wheel and then drove off. After he had calmed down, he thought that this incident would not come in between Prateek and him….he would still visit them tomorrow….Kripa was probably right-she like the rest of the world thinks I have a normal marriage….but….

…to be continued….
Edited by bheegi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww wonderful prts....just caught up bheegi...gr8 job.....y did she has 2 push him nowww😭😭😭
Edited by me_iq - 18 years ago

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