'DARD ka rishta' KYPH ff END pg 35

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cheeselova

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Posted: 18 years ago

#121

angad u idiot u should trust the person u love 😡
gr8 part bheegi

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#122

Thanks guys. Lets see what Angad finds out about Prateek in next few parts. Well, Angad trusted his love a lot, but what does one do when she walked out of his life for 6 years, without informing him or telling him why she was going. 😭

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A&K_4Evr-S

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Posted: 18 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: bheegi

Angad was made to believe all those nasty things about Kripa by Dr Bose and other staff members. Even in original KYPH, Angad was shown as a hot headed person who did not think before he spoke....remember how he called Kripa 'public property' 😡

omg i wanted to kill angad man....well itz not intirly his fault but its not kripaz either...btw how many parts r there in this FF???

lol just curious😆

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: sahr_8

omg i wanted to kill angad man....well itz not intirly his fault but its not kripaz either...btw how many parts r there in this FF???

lol just curious😆

it is a short ff, as this was my first ff i wrote months ago- may be 25-26 parts

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meme25

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Posted: 18 years ago

#125

awesome part.........i just want the whole truth out soon...........hopefully a-k will get together soon 2
continue asap!!!!!

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angullgrl91

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Posted: 18 years ago

#126

gr8 part. i hope angad finds out the truth soon.

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#127

Thanks guys 😊

Today's episode are dedicated to everyone who has been a parent in their life...I hope they can relate to what Angad is going through....

PART 14:

Angad was at the Operating theatre early in the morning. After he scrubbed in for surgery, he saw a little boy being wheeled in on a stretcher. Angad skipped a heartbeat when he saw Prateek asleep under the influence of sedatives. This little boy's fate was now in his hands…."why am I thinking like this?" he thought.

As Angad took his place on his operating chair, he saw Prateek's head been shaven off; they were getting ready to make an incision in his skull bone with a saw……when he heard the noise of that drilling machine….he almost thought someone was cutting his own bones with a knife….he could not take it anymore!

"Excuse me….sister….I need to change my gloves…" he lied and stepped aside. He went back to the scrubbing area and stood there with his back to the center of operating room where Prateek was being prepped for surgery. Each drilling motion of the saw was like a sharp pain in his chest….

His hands were shaking…..why was this reminding him of the time when Kripa had been bitten by the snake in Madhupur……he looked up, "God….I ask you for courage today…..why am I becoming so weak today….." He thought he was probably just tired as he did not get enough sleep.

"Sir, we are ready, the dura (covering of the brain) is ready for incision…." The senior resident called for him.

Angad turned around, trying to hide his tears…."sister, please ek extra tube mein blood le lena….." he did not know what made him say that.

"Sir, kya test order karna hai?" the nurse asked

"Tube mujhe de dena…..wo Vellore mein ek tumor study ke liye Prateek ka blood test bhej naa hai…" he lied.

Once he was settled in his chair, the surgeon in him forgot all his emotional turmoil….his fingers and eyes were focused on his target…..after a few hours, the tumor had been removed completely; they had checked to see whether the electrical waves to his vision center were working; the surgery was a success!

"Please send the specimen for pathology…..looks benign though….lagta hai chemotherapy ya radiation ki zaroorat nahin padhegi…." He was relieved just as a close member of a family would be…..his eyes moist again…this time with happiness!

He walked out to the waiting area after putting the extra tube of blood in his lab coat pocket.

He saw Kripa pacing up and down; it was rare to see her so nervous. He noticed her hands were scratched by her constant digging of her nails, which she had probably done in the last few hours. How he wanted to hold her hands and re assure her….."sab kuch theek ho gaya…..chinta mat karo….main hoon naa….." He was surprised to see that there was no one else to support her at this moment….was she as lonely in this world like he was……???

Kripa ran to him as she saw him standing at the door. "Prateek…theek hai naa…..is he alright?" She was like any other worried mother he had encountered many times. Now he could understand why a mother would behave this way….he always thought mothers unnecessarily worried too much about their kids….seeing Kripa like this made him realize what it takes for a mother to express her feelings about her child in front of everyone……

"Don't worry Kripa…Prateek is alright…bas thodi der mein hosh aa jaayega….we got the whole tumor out….I think he should not need any further treatment at this point…baaki biopsy ki report ke baad pata chalegaa…..they have taken him to the post op area…..I can show you where that is…." He guided her to where Prateek was.

"Thanks …Angad….mein tumhara ehsaan kabhi nahin bhuloongi…." She said tearfully. She was dying to see Prateek.

"You are welcome….that is my job….by the way….tumhare parents ya koyi aur family….?" He asked

"Mere parents bhi Nishant ke saath the…uss accident mein...." she could not control herself and tears started pouring. Angad felt bad as he should have not mentioned them at this point. He was about to touch her shoulder but she turned around and went inside the post-op area. Angad's gaze followed her till she found Prateek's bed. He was genuinely feeling her pain….all his anger at her had somehow melted…..he wanted to be there for her….she had no one else….just like him….

He went down to the lab, "yeh blood test ka DNA report chahiye aur yeh ek aur sample hai." He made up some fictitious names for both the samples –one was actually Prateek's and the other one was his!

"Sir…kal tak mil jaayegi report." The lab technician said as he took the tubes from him.

After he was done with rest of his surgeries, he went back to the post-op area to check on Prateek. Prateek was awake now but crying loudly. Kripa was trying her best to console him.

"Kabhi kabhi anesthesia ke baad bachche thode emotional ho jaate hain….we will give him something…don't worry" he reassured Kripa who looked distressed at Prateek's behavior.

He hung around the post-op area with the pretext of checking out other patients. His eyes would keep wondering to Prateek's bed- he saw prateek had gone back to sleep after the nurse gave him an injection.

"Madam…aaj raat Prateek ko ICU mein rakhna hoga…wahan parents nahin reh saktey…" the nurse informed Kripa.

"Tum chaho tho main staff quarters ka intezaam kar saktha hoon…" Angad came forward when he heard the nurse's comment.

"Nahin….wo…mein Harshini ke yahan chali jaaoongi….uska ghar paas mein hi hai…campus mein ….i mean"

"I can walk you there…..mujhe bhi ghar khana khane jaana hai…" Angad lied as he usually ate in the hospital itself.

Kripa kissed Prateek, "sister, please mujhe aap phone karr dena jab yeh uth jaaye….he is not used to being without me……I will come back….main zyaada door nahin jaa rahi…." She said with a heavy heart as she would rather spend the night with Prateek but she was not one to ask for favors or break the hospital rules just because she was a doctor herself.

Angad and Kripa walked out of the hospital on the familiar streets…..it was a full moon…the light of the moon guided them through the darkness of the night. Angad had his hands in his lab coat pocket. Kripa walked with her hands folded….both walked quietly, lost in their own thoughts…..

Song in background….

"tere bina zindagi se' from "aandhi"
This link is from movie "dil vil pyar vyar" as the newer version of this song suits A and K better (in my opinion)

http://www.dishant.com/lyrics/song-5558.html

Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi, shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi
Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin, zindagi, to nahi, zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi
Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi

Kaash aisa ho tere qadmo se, chun ke manzil chale aur kahi door kahi - 2
Tum gar saath ho, manzilo ki kami to nahi
Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi

Jee mein aata hai, tere daaman mein, sar jhuka ke ham rote rahe, rote rahe - 2
Teri bhi aankho mein, aansuo ki nami to nahi

Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi,
shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi
Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin, zindagi, to nahi,
zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi

Tum jo keh do to aaj ki raat, chaand doobega nahi, raat ko rok lo -2
Raat ki baat hai, aur zindagi baaki to nahi

Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi,
shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi
Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin, zindagi, to nahi,
zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi

Kripa finally broke the silence, "Mishti kaisi hai?"

"Achchi hai…." Angad answered

"Koyi bachche hain?"

"Haan….ek ladka hai…." He said hesitatingly

"Kitna badha..?"

"Yehi koyi 5-51/2 saal kaa…"

"Prateek ke baraabar?….kya naam….AH!" before she could complete the sentence, a fast moving car passed by, splashing dirty water on Kripa from a rain puddle. She almost fell down but Angad promptly caught her….they were in each other' s arms…her hair sprayed on his face….he could smell the same fragrance like before…..her shoulders touched his chest….the heat from her body, warming his heart and body both…….

"I am sorry….." she regained her composure.

They were at their destination. Angad bid good bye and walked back to the hospital to complete his work…..and stay in the ICU all night…..no one would question him , it was not unusual for him to attend to neurosurgical emergencies all night….no one would even notice….but he wanted to be there just for Prateek….

….to be continued…

Edited by bheegi - 17 years ago

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A&K_4Evr-S

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Posted: 18 years ago

#128

wat misty angad have a kid 😡
i thought it was mistys thought ??? or illusion or something
cnt soon
plz clear my confusion

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namelesssr

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Posted: 18 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: bheegi

Today's episode are dedicated to everyone who has been a parent in their life...I hope they can relate to what Angad is going through....

This one was really well written! Thanks, Bheegi. Angad's emotions and anxiety were expressed so nicely. I can fully empathise with his mental state.

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Jignasha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#130

awesome job...bheegi..really i have no words the way angad was trying to control his emotions twoward parteek..........i can't wait 2 see how he reacts to the news wen he finds out tht parteek is his son.. it was out of the blues wen angad told the nurse to geta sample of parteek's blodd n gived it to lab with his blood for a DNA..test...i think wen kripa asked if he n mishti had any kids i was thinking if he was talking abt prateek cause angad didn't have any physical realtionship w/ mishti............i really think u did an outstanding job on this part.i say this one of ur bestest part tht i have enjoyed in this ff......i really lookin forward to the next part..........i hope he finds out soon.........plzzzzzzzzz 👏 i was 👏

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