Reflection (AK) Part 5 07/28 pg.3

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Reflection

Part 1

An attractive young girl is staring in the mirror, from a persons point of view you see light brown hair, gorgeous hazel eyes, ideal lips and a slim fit body. But, from her point of view she sees hideous hair, baggy eyes, big fat lips and an unfit body. I know this sounds weird but this short story is about a girl named Kripa who is very beautiful but, in her mind and heart she sees nothing but an ugly girl whose life can't get any worst! Her best friend Ashley tells her everyday that she is beautiful but like other depressed girls she thinks the people that love her are going to go away in a matter of days. Kripa had lost her parents at age four in a fatal car accident. After, that she had been depressed. The only person she had in the world was her best friend Ashley, even though she thought Ashley was going to leave her any day. Ashley's brother Angad was a doctor who helped people like kripa.

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"Kripa… Kripa… KRIPA!!!" Ashley shouted at her while she was lying on the floor. Ashley put her hand on her fore head "Wow! That's warm" She immediately took Kripa to her house which was two blocks away. "Angad Angad" she called out and after about five minutes you see a handsome guy who was wearing Bugs Bunny Boxer Shorts and a white sleeve less shirt. "Angad, I saw kripa lying on her bedroom floor and she in unconscious so can get down here and check what's up with her" Ashley said panicking. "Okay, okay" Angad out her on the couch and checked her heartbeat and her blood pressure. "What's wrong? Ashley questioned. Angad looked at Ashley as if he had seen a ghost.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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yippeee another ak fanfic
gr8 intro
cont soon


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Posted: 18 years ago
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luvv dissz ff
plss cont soon
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awesome intro!! 👏
do continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow angu as a docter lala lovin it 😳
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Reflection PART 2


"Angad! What's wrong with her??" "Ah-She over dosed her self on Asprin, we have to take her to the hospital ASAP! Angad quickly ran up to his room and got dressed, mean while Ashley got kripa into her car. Angad came down wearing jeans and a FCUK shirt. "Come on Angad we don't have all day man COME!"
"Angad took kripa to the hospital he worked in.
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N (nurse) - hello, Angad how may I help you?
A- This lady over dosed on Asprin and now she's unconscious.

N- How are you guys related?

A- We are friends

N- Sorry. But only someone from her family could and bring her here because this is a case of Suicide and we have to report this to the police. I'm very sorry.

Ash-Angad man do something, or else we might loose kripa!

A- Ah- sorry I mean to say me and her are married.

Ashley looked at Angad in disbelief. "What the f*** are you saying" "Ashley shut up! So it everything okay now can I take her in?" "yea" the nurse said

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"Doctor is Kripa going to be fine?" Angad said, "We don't know yet because she is very weak and she needs more psychological help then physical help sorry. "Is she conscious?" "Yes but, wait about and hour before meeting her because she needs rest" "okay". Just then Ashley stepped in the doctor's office "so how's Kripa doing?" "Fine, hey do you want to cheer her up?" "Why would I not want to cheer her up" Ashley said sarcastically. "Okay enough with the attitude. Here's what we are going to do go get all her favorite flowers and get as many teddy bears or stuffed animals you could find and we will out it in her room and when she wakes u she'll be happy!!! So, here's my credit card" "okay but, why re you doing all this Angad?" "Ah-Ashley some things in life you just can't answer because there too personal" "Come on I won't tell her please" "okay, okay I loved kripa from childhood when you guys were best friends and now I just want to save her life cause I don't want her to go away for forever" "Awww… shoo cute" while saying that Ashley pinches his cheeks. "Just because your like one minute older then me you cant pinch my cheeks! Angad said while rubbing his cheeks that were now red!

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Ashley first goes to the shop in the hospital there she buys a bouquet of red roses kripa loves those she thought, then she bought red flower petals. She also buys 2 teddy bears that say "I love U." She then goes to Kripa's room and places everything in a pacific order that Angad told her. Angad comes is holding a cake with I love you on it.
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After five minutes Kripa wakes up meanwhile Ashley and Angad are hiding behind the sofa in her room. "SURPRISE!" Angad and Ashley shout at the same time. "Wow, thanks guys" Kripa says. Kripa doesn't seem very happy cause it only reminds her more of her parents, she quickly hugs Ashley. "Kripa im going to help you to recover from your parents accident and-." says Angad "DO YOU THINK I WANT YOUR HELP, NO I DON'T SO PLEASE GO AWAY!! 😡 " Kripa goes to the washroom and leaves Angad and Ashley. "Angad why is she so pissed at you? What Happened?" Ashley asked. "Ashley I didn't want you to know about this but im the reason why Kripa's parents are no more!"Angad says while looking very pale.
Edited by crazy_craze - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg angu is dah reason? 😕 conti soon
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Part 3
"Angad stop joking I know you wouldn't do such a thing and any ways you were just four, how could you do that?" Ashley kept talking until Angad yelled "STOP ILL TELL YOU, it was that day me and you were over kripa's house to play and at night while you and Kripa were playing with your toys, and me and karan (angad's friend) were outside thinking of ways to get you mad… and after we thought a little I thought of a plan to put a toy under the brakes of the kripa's father's car. So, that's what we did we were just kids so we didn't think at all so, later that day her parents went to the mall and they got into a accident." "How did kripa find out" Ashley exclaimed "well because she was so sad she went to the car and was just looking around and she found my toy and she knew it was me and since that I talk to her but, she doesn't talk to me" Angad replied.

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The next day Kripa was back at her house, (she lives alone) after I few hours after thinking about the incident that happened at the hospital she called up Ashley. "Hey Ash!" "Hey, want to go to the mall today I'm very very bored" "Nah… you go I'm going to stay home" Kripa said. "Man kripa you're so depressed why don't you go out and have some fun?" "Dunn feel like it anywaz imma go to the docsz 2day FO a check up" Kripa said trying to act hip. "Yea, whateva well bye then I might as well stay home to no fun going to the mall myself" Ashley said while hoping Kripa would come. "Fine… fine meet me at my home at one o'clock, kripa said. "Works every time haha juss jokin' bye… o ya Angad might come he has to get clothes for some next docterr partai" "BYE" kripa said


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after an hour Ashley and Angad came, Ashley was wearing a brown dress with pink flowers on it, with brown leggings and flats. Angad was wearing jeans and Phat Farm t-shirt. She herself was wearing jeans and a plain white t-shirt on top. Well, he looks pretty hot she thought while he was driving to the mall. "Hello, Kripa Hello we're here" Ashley said while tapping her shoulder. Kripa came out of the car and entered the mall.

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Kripa saw lots of shops; she saw Jacob, Aldo, Fcuk, Lacosta, Claire's, Nine West and many more. Wow its been like forever since I did some shopping she thought. "First Kripa's turn lets buy you I knew outfit, that isn't lacking style like the one you're wearing right now!" Ashley said. "Okay… okay lets go" Kripa mumbled. First, they went to Jacob and bought her couple pairs of capris and shorts. Then they went to Stitches and bought her A LOT of fancy t-shirts, Tanks. After, they went to Fcuk and bought her dresses and leggings. Last, they went to nine west and Claire's and bought her accessories and shoes. Paying for all this was no problem at every store when the total came up all Ashley said to Angad was Credit Card. Angad gave his Credit Card and off they were leaving angad holding millions of shopping bags. "Ashley lets go home im getting tired ill do my shopping tomorrow" Angad said. "No! Today Ashley screamed" Fine… Fine = [, Angad said while looking annoyed. They went to Tommy Hilfiger and bought Angad a pair of jeans I black plain shirt and a black jacket to go on top. "Finally we are done"Kripa yelled when she came out of the mall. Kripa realized it was 10 pm when she got into the car. "Uh… Kripa you want to join us for dinner we are going to Mandarin" Ashley asked. "Sure, Kripa answered back
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Hope you liked it I know its short,
but I hope you liked it
leave your comments
thank you! = ]
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww dis is sad...kripa's suicidal? and angad loves her? 😭

i hope he can make her believe him bout his tru feelings. she's so sad...i hope his love cures her.

ashley's nice...i lyke her. 😃

i dont kno y u dont get dat many comments...ur ff is da bomb id i may say so myself 😉

newayz, forget bout da lazy readers dat dont comment. even they love ur ff, so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE cont soon.

once again, please and thank you,

<3 kiran
E> GA <3
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: kIrAn...E>GA<3

awww dis is sad...kripa's suicidal? and angad loves her? 😭

i hope he can make her believe him bout his tru feelings. she's so sad...i hope his love cures her.

ashley's nice...i lyke her. 😃

i dont kno y u dont get dat many comments...ur ff is da bomb id i may say so myself 😉

newayz, forget bout da lazy readers dat dont comment. even they love ur ff, so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE cont soon.

once again, please and thank you,

<3 kiran
E> GA <3



thnxx soo much ... ill continue soon😊

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