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Posted: 18 years ago
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great parts!! suicidal huh? :o i feel bad for pooor angad!! i hope he can change her reflection of herself 😉 and hope she forgives him-- it was an accident.. who knew a toy could do so much damage? Continue Soon!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part i really liked it cant wait 4 da next part
keep it up
oh umm continue soon please 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 4

All Kripa thought on the way to Mandiran was, how her paranets did and Angad was a jerk. She enever could of Forgave Angad she thoguht, he took her life away from her. Ashley finally broke the silence, "so, Kripa want to come with me and Angad to the movies, we are watching Harry Potter and the Order of Phoenix" "Uh-no i dont watch that sorry" Kripa said quietly."Okay, but no need to say sorry" Ashley said laughing. Kripa started laughing and they were at Mandirin. Ashley had a plan in her mind, she was going to mix alchohol in Kripa drink so she could see the real side of kripa. After kripa took a sip out of her drink, man was she high. she was jumpping on chairs, talking to Angad and laughing. Ashley's plan did work Kripa was now living her life. After dinner Kripa stayed at Ashley's house cause she was to drunck to go home. Kripa went to sleep like a baby, but in the middle of the night Angad came to Kripa and put a note on the bed. It was six in the morning and Kripa realised her head was pounding so she went and took Asprin. Aslo, when she got up she wasnt at her house she was at Ashey's house and she was very very surprised. "Uh- what happened last night i dont remember anything" she mummbled to herself. When she got up she saw Angad'd note.

dear, Kripa i know along time ago i was stupid and i accidently killed your parents, but trust im very regretful of that. I know sorry is just a 5 letter word that means nothing to you but to me it means the world. Kripa im am very very very very sorry for all i did to you and im not ever going to make that mistake again and i dont want to loose you so, please let me do your treatment im sure you will keep this letter for life, cause deep inside i know you want to be a normal LIVING person.
love, Angad


"Angad's so sweet" she whispered to herself.I'm so rude, why did i become this away mom and dad passed away years ago i shouldnt let that ruin my life Ashley's parents just dies 3 years ago and shes living her life to the fullest, she thought. Sh quickly went downstairs, while she was climbing down the stairs Angad was watching tv on the sofa with his boxers and he was shirtless. Kripa quickly went behind Angad and gave him a little friendly kiss on the cheek." Thanks" she whispered in his ear. Angad kissed her back and she was off her way to her house.

but when she came there all she saw was FIRE!
"ahhh..."Kripa screamed as she fainted


hope you like it leave your comments !! = >

sorry for making it short, but i didnt have much time on me ill make the next one extra long!!

Edited by crazy_craze - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no comments 😭

im beggining to think i shudnt cont my ff anymore
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww, i lyke dis ff kay?! ur going to cont, im glad kripa finally forgave angad. and yes, i agree. angad is SWEET. her house is on fire?! omg....cliffie!!!!

cont soon, i <3 dis ff...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey its great, i reallyy like it and im damn serious! ive been catching up on tons of ffs but im only commenting on ures the most cuz other ppl arent commenting, trust me, we read but we are just being lazy, its really good and im glad she is cool with angad-- i wonder why her house is on firr =[ Cont Soon!!

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Part 5



5 years later...
Kripa woke up with doctors suurounding her, she looked around but regonised no one. "Where am i?" Kripa quizzically asked. "Kripa, your in a hospital" Angad answered not knowing what was going to her brain right now. "Uh- who are you and whoes that girl standing right behind you?"
"Kripa, its me Ashley and Angad dont you remeber us?"
"Uh-am i supposed to..." "Kripa Ashley is your bestfriend and sister in-law and im your husband. A few years ago we got married and we had a little baby girl named Tanya. Dont you remember us?" "Uh-nope all i remember is, actually i dont eally remeber anything."
The doctor told Angad and Ashley that Kripa has suffered brain damage, so she has lost her memmory for a while."When will be able to take her home?"Angad asked. "Um...Tomarrow will be fine and please dont treat her differently, treat her the same as before.
If you are confused after Kripa house was on fire, she went into a coma for 2 years, and she was fine. But, a year after she and Angad got married,but because of stress and tension she once again suffered big brain damage and thats the reason she lost her memmory. Tanya is 1 years old but could talk and walk normally.
Angad and Ashley went home and they found Tanya watching Barney. She sat on the sofa near the television listeing to Barney singing songs. "Papa, wheres mummy, I want to play with her!!!" Tanya said pouting. "mummy is going to come home tomarrow so how 'bout I play with you" Ashley said to Tanya. "Thanks Ashley for always taking care of Tanya when Kripa isnt here, I really appreciate it."Angad said while hugging Ashley. "Bro, I love Kripa as much as you do and Tanya is soo adorable. I love you. She gave a sisterly kiss on his cheek and went to play with Tanya. In theospital Kripa thought about what was happening to her life, Why couldnt she remeber her name or where she lived, something was up with Angad and whats her name...Kripa soon feel into a long slumber because of her strong medicines. While Ashley was trying to get Tanya to eat her food!
Ash- Eat your food Tany, please if you eat your vegetables mummy is going to come faster
T- NO...I dont want to eat nasty green vegetables, they make me puke!!!
Ash- Eat your vegies and ill take you ouy for icecream!!
T- Okay,,,ill eat your nasty greens.
After Ashley bribed Tanya to eat her food they all went for icecream. Tnya had a triplescoop from Baskins Robbins meanwhile, Ashley and Angad just had coffee from Starbucks.They all couldnt wait untill Kripa was going to come home, all Tanya wanted todo was play cards with her, meanwhile, Angad had his plans and Ashley had hers.Angad tossed and turned all night thinking of kripa's memmoryloss and how Tanya was going to react to it.Sure tanya wasonly 1 and a few months, but she thoughtlike a fully mature women accept when she was eating and watching television. Finally theday had arrived, that Angad was dreaming about. He was gonna pick up his beloved wife from the Hospital. He was scared and exicted at the same time, he dodnt know what Kripa thought of him. But, he knew one thing for sure he loved Kripa even if she didnt feel the same as him. Tanya had come along with him, but Ashley satyed back at there house. "Pops, is mummy going to be very happy to see me?" "Yea, offcourse she loves you like mad, your her little 'Drama Queen'Angad said pinshingher cheek slightly. "Drama Queen. No. Im not!" Tanya protested, "Yea, thats coming from you who starts crying if you dont get Burger King everyweek, or if you dont go shopping. From my point of view your the cutest Drama Queen on earth" "Papa, I love you" Tanya smiled. "Love you too" Angad said parking the car. Tanya was so exicted she could finally meat her mom, this was the soo exicting after living with Father and Aunt for about 3 months! he was waitng for thsi moment practicaly her whole life!
When Angad pointed ut her mom to her, she quickly ran and hugged her."Uh-who would this be?" Kripa said not noticing Angad at the door. "What are you taliking about you forgot your Drama Queen!" Tanya shouted. Oh, this is Tanya, apparently her daughter Ktipa thought."I didnt forget you i was jst testing you , if you were going to get mad" Kripa said with a fake smile on her face. Angad came in and gave a little kiss on Kripa's cheek.
A- So, how you feeling today?
K- Fine, but why are you here?
T- To take you home mummy, Im tired of Living with Papa and Aunty I want you to come home now(tugging on to Kripa's Arm)
K- Okay, but Tanya can you excuse me and your dad for a second
T- Okay...
K- Ah- Mr.Angad I dont want to go home with you!
A- Well, Honey you cant stay here so you have to go home with me.
K- But, no phisical contact. Even if i am your wife
A- Fine, anything else chick?
K- No,shady

Kripa gave Angad a dirty look and went to the bethroom to change. Angad sat outside with Tanya. Kripa came out wearing short denim skirt and a plain pink t-short. "You look amazing chick" Angad said with a smirk on his face."Your quite of a hunk yourself shady" Kripa said with the exact smirk on her face. "Mummy, you never dress like this you always wear indian suits."
"Well, the old mommy's gone, and this new hip mommy's here!" Kripa said stilling smirking."Well,ill love to see that chick!" Angad said.
They went home after picking up Kripa's medicine. On the wayto there house Tanya couldnt shut up, all she talked about was Barney and other Cartoons, Kripa wanted to be nice to Tanya so she nodded and looked interested. "Omg, hey Kripa are you feeling better?" Ashley said walking towards her. "Uh- your uh...ah-"Kripa stuttered "Its ashley, Kripa" Ashley said smiling. They bot hugged and started talking about how cute Tanya is. Angad looked like he was listening, but all he could do is admire kripa's innocent face!
After they had pasta for dinner that Ashley perpared before they came,"Angad, wheres my room?" "Uh- you mean our room chick" Angad said puuting his arm around Kripa's shoulder. Kripa hesitated but, played along for Tanya. When Angad showed her there room, she was surprised it was so romantic with candles glowing with red curtains shut and Red rose pettals everywhere!
K- Are you trying to seduce me? Shady
A- Yea, and is it working?
K- No, and rememberno phisical contact or im gone!
A- Whatever you say chick
After Kripa took a 40 minuteshower she came out wearing botty shorts and a tank top. Angad waa amazed howgood she looked before she would weara normal boreing cotton shirt and ctton pj's. She just wanted to love her all night long, but knew what she had said justa few minutes ago. After, he went a took a ten minute shower he came out where swet pants. Kripa admired his well tanned body and his muscles, now she was getting seduced. She walked towards him and gave him a light kiss on his cheek. "You look good shady" Kripa said in a seductive voice."I know i do chick!" Angad gave her a kiss on her lips that Kripa enjoyed. It started to be a light friendly kiss but turned into a passionate kiss that leads to...


Hope you enjoy this part!! please leave your comments!!The faster i get comments, the faster ill continue=]
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haha, angad is seducing kripa...and its workin. y do they call each other chick and shady?

great part, cont soon!!!! tanya soundz lyke a little brat.....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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interesting story...but i m confused....is kripa really married 2 angad?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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an interesting and unique story

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