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Posted: 18 years ago
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~hey! im so excited i got more readers! i kno a lot of u r wonderin bout niharika but i have lyke 13 chapters written and they go in random order. thanks munnibaba, erier101, and of course my darlin, iqra babe!!! thanx for all da encouragement~

Chapter 5- Beginning of a Beautiful… Something.

"Stop staring," Vidya said with her eyes closed. She laid in her beach chair in her red bikini for a little over an hour now, sunbathing.

"Who's staring? What is there to look at anyways?" Sagar said, he had sat next to her and contrary to his words he was indeed staring. What was wrong with this girl? He just did 10 laps in perfect timing and she didn't even open her eyes.

Vidya shook her hair out before responding, "Don't be mad just because I don't find you attractive. Not everything's about you, you know." She answered without opening her eyes again, ever since he had arrived, she hadn't opened her eyes once, and she didn't need her eyes to see she had hurt his ego. She smiled silently at her feat.

"Just like the fact everything is not about you. I wasn't staring at you." He stressed the word staring as if trying to mock her; but she didn't take to mocking so well. "I wanted to borrow your sunscreen, mine's not waterproof." He said lamely. Had he just been at loss of words? Ha, this was definitely a first.

"National Swimming Champ and no waterproof sunscreen. How smart? Can you spell melanoma?" She said.

"Yeah, well I took my girlfriend's sun block instead of mine. It's SPF isn't high enough. I was thinking of a way to say that with a girl like you understanding…you know you're not the easiest person to ask a…"

"Favor from?" She completed knowingly. It wasn't entirely true. She was one of the most approachable people in the world but her dislike for Sagar always kicked in at the nick of time.

"Yeah. Anyways, my girlfriend's here so I'll just ask her." He said coolly as if not caring that she had totally insulted him. He watched the sky. Vidya felt his eyes somewhere else besides her.

"The sun's going down…" He said awe-struck. What was the big deal? It goes down every day and comes back up the next.

"Yeah." Vidya said, not exactly knowing what to say.

"Isn't it weird how people watch the sunset?"

"No. It's beautiful and romantic. Why would it be weird?" She asked confused.

"I mean it means the day is over, your time's up. It shows darkness falling. It's not really beautiful when you think about it…" His voice trailed off.

"I guess. So you think sunrise is prettier?" She asked, genuinely interested.

"No. I mean, it's identical to sunset. Why is it like that?" He asked, tilting his head to the side.

"God wants the end and the beginning to look the same." She said captivated.

"Aren't they the same though? Nothing new can happen till something old ends. Like the world. How weird would it be if we lived forever?"

"Would no one die?" She asked hopefully.

"Yes, but no one would be born either."

"Death is a part of life?" She asks. He clicks his tongue.

"Nope. Life is a part of death. And death is a part of another's life. It's a circle." He said tracing a ring in the sand.

"Never-ending." She gasped, tracing the circle. Her fingers touched his for a moment. "So what happens to us after we die?"

"Rebirthing as another person. It's sort of God's way of giving second chances. Making things right." He said now drawing an infinite symbol in the sand.

"So if everything's right. We go to heaven or hell."

"There is no heaven, no hell. It's this entire world, all about making things right here. Heaven is supposedly another world that's perfect. No greed, no lust, no envy. And hell is a place chock full of it. People seek salvation after doing a world of terrible deeds here, what good does that do?"

"This place is it. If you put lust, greed, envy here it's Hell. And if you don't, you keep peace. It's heaven."

"Exactly!" He said passion firing in his eyes. "Peace that's what it's all about."

"Well it's hard to keep peace around here, in today's day in age."

"The problem is simple."

"What?"

"We judge. We don't trust people or ourselves to be the people we could be."

"Yeah. I guess that basically sums it up."

"You agree?" He asked, she nodded.

"Hey Sagar." She said, a bit afraid of him at this point.

"Yeah."

"We're complete hypocrites." She sighs disappointed.

"I know." He sighs.

"We're making our lives hell. We judged each other. You're a good person, I think. I was wrong to insult you…repeatedly. For no reason."

"Same here."

"Truce?"

"Truce." They shook hands.

~okay, u guys...i have two stories planned out for vidya-sagar...i can make them love eachother hopelessly or hate each other endlessly. which one would be funner? hit me up!~

Edited by kIrAn...E>GA<3 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part kirann!! loved it! the whole discussion was so cooll, it was weird yet awesome 😉 😆 😃 hate each other endlessly means more sarcastic fights which im always looking forward to, its always fun 😆 so thats my vote, another reason prolly would be cuz i dont know the couple 😆 anwyays ima shut up now! u know the drill-cont soon!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow the discussion was awesome... weird and so true... lol... aren't sagar and vidya from banoo mein teri dulhan or something... sorry i dontknwo them good... i only know mahi and shabd... i wonder which one is the next...mahi shabd or niharika and whoever her partener will be.... yayyy i cant wait... continue sooooon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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make them hate each other until their is no hope for them and then make them fall in lov
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okay, so thanx for da few comments i got. vidya-sagar R frum banoo mein teri dulhann frum zee tv. i guess ill make them have a love-hate realtionship...i dunnno raelly. im juss writin as i go. next chapter is...niharika and...mystery man.

i shall post in a few moments if any1 cares... 😕

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Chapter 6- Anti-Relationship.

Niharika walked into the camp, swarming with under-age, puberty-plagued, angst-ridden girls. They bunched together like cliques in a school and Nihu didn't feel like socializing. A tall dude came to the make shift podium in the front. He was fair and tall, and his voice had a commanding quality to his voice.

"Ahem." He cleared his throat loudly. He didn't need a mike, from his voice he sounded 17. "Welcome to All-Stars Sports Camp. Soccer people to the left, Volleyball people to the right."

Without thinking Niharika yells, "What about me?!?!"

"What about you?!" He yells impatiently from the ghetto podium.

"I'm volleyball and soccer." She says calmer since he is walking towards her.

"Oh. I didn't know we had any of those this year. Ummm…One second." He said unsurely.

He scurried back to his podium and asked out loud. "Are there any other volleyball/soccer doublers? If so, follow me." About five more girls followed him.

He took them outside into separate field.

"Well you guys." Had he not noticed he was the only guy? And he was standing in front of a bunch of teenage girls that wouldn't think twice before jumping him. They all drooled over him except Niharika, she didn't play that gig.

"Well continue. I'm sure you're not talking for your health." Niharika said sassily.

"Yes. Umm, Well we usually don't have this many doublers. I expect you all to be the best of the best." Was this guy a coach or something? Best of the best, there was only six girls standing before him.

"Do we have a REAL coach?" Niharika asked rudely again. She was in quite a mood again.

"I am your coach. And I am a pretty real coach. There is only six of you, therefore I expect you to act like a real team."

"Two teams." A voice called from behind him. She looked like a real coach. She was in her mid thirties. She wore a Harvard sweatshirt and shorts. Odd combination but nonetheless, she looked like a coach.

"Yeah, yeah. TWO teams…" He sighed. She ruffled his hair.

"Why is that? C'mon let's hear it." The lady smiled knowingly.

"Because you are the master and you call the shots." He recited as if somebody had just asked him what 2-squared was.

"Yes, yes. I do, don't I?" She replied happily.

"Mom." He groaned. .

"Okay, okay. This is Vedant. And he will be coaching. He has for four years now. He will handle you three." She pointed at Niharika, and two girls apparently named Guddi and Keke. Who names their kids that?

"And I'll be coaching Tanisha, Naaz, and Shweta." The girls nodded. God, she was stuck with this…boy as her coach. Four years, he can't be that bad. And that's his mom. Wow.

"C'mon now! We're going running. Who's up for it?" Vedant yelled. Niharika always could use a good challenge. Naaz, Shweta, and Niharika jogged after Vedant. Naaz and Shweta lagged behind but Niharika was a naturally good runner. She ran beside Vedant.

"Hi. You're my coach." That was a dumb thing to say she concluded after saying it.

"I know. You're a good runner."

"I know."

"So how old are you?"

"Nineteen." He smiled. It was a smile of someone who had just had their birthday recently and loved boasting about their age.

"Good for you. And you're a coach?" She lagged behind a little, she was pacing herself. He slowed down for her. She smiled.

"Yeah, when I was fourteen I started volunteering here for my mom and I got set up coaching instead."

"You seem pretty good at it." He laughed. She didn't know why.

"Like a real coach?" She nodded.

"So…what's your life like?" Niharika was always direct. Wow, I actually just said that?

"Good. Sort of. Boring. Stressful. I'm the man of the family. It's kinda got its own pressures." He sighed.

"I know what you mean. I'm the woman in my family. I play mom around my house. It's kind of…funny really."

"How so?" They had stopped running long ago. Now they sat on the field.

"Well, all my life I've heard how I wasn't mature enough to handle anything on my own and I literally run my house." She laughed but it came out sounding a little sad.

"Wow. Yeah, my dad was a little weird about that. He was always lecturing about how the male has responsibilities to his house and how he's supposed to keep the home together. And lo and behold, we wake up one morning and he leaves for work and never comes home." He laughed at his own situation, but it was a cold laugh.

"Is he…" She didn't know how to ask the question.

"Dead? To me he is."

"Wow. I wish my mom was around still. You ever try and talk to him…your dad, I mean." She muttered quietly. She knew she was loud enough for him to hear.

"Yeah, but he's found himself a new, better family." He spat bitterly.

"Well there's nothing wrong with you guys…" She said defensively.

"What?" He asked confused.

"When my mom died for the longest time I thought that there was something wrong with me, my dad, my brother…I couldn't understand why she chose to leave us," Her eyes brimmed, she swallowed them back. She was too old to cry about this.

"Chose to leave you? Didn't she…" Die. Yes, she died.

"She died. She was killed." She looked down, "She killed herself." She looked up confidently, "But it's not our fault." She recited as if she had memorized it. She had, at nights when she couldn't sleep; she had repeated it to herself so many times. It was a reflex now.

"And you know what?" Niharika said confidently. "It's not your fault either. No matter what people may say, no matter what anybody thinks. No body MAKES anybody leave. It's their choice."

"Yeah." He sighed with what sounded like relief. "Not my fault." He said to himself as Niharika had so many nights, it was the chanting reassurance.

"What's your mom like?" She sounded cheery, she wasn't.

"Crazy. Makes me feel like she's my older sister. Like it's not bad enough, she's only 17 years older than me." She laughed. He did too.

"What's your dad like?" He asked.

"I don't know…" her voice trailed. "He's very…" She sighed. "He's very there…" She concluded. Her dad was anything but there.

"Well there is good. Better than mine. My mom's not very momly…was yours?" He asked without thinking. Upon hearing himself, "I'm sorry. That's personal."

"No. She was really fun. She cared a lot. But she was really sad all the time. I never did find out why." She swallowed another lump in her throat, "Me and my brother were always first on her list of priorities. She was the perfect mom. She…um…when I was 6. I don't remember her much. It's kind of scary. I can't remember her face. I remember her voice, her smell, her touch. But not her face. It's not fair."

"I know." He hugged her. It was comforting. Strangely enough, it was comforting.

"Hey Vedant."

"Yeah?" She pulled away from him.

"Thanks." She smiled, she had managed to let only one tear drop. It was a talent, because tears were like dominoes; if one manages to drop, then a whole mess of them seem to follow.

"No problem." He leaned in and lightly pressed his lips to hers.

"I gotta get back." Niharika said quickly, she ran back to her cabin. She shut the door shut behind her, had he meant to do that? Surely, he did it as a friendly gesture. Right? Her brain was in a million places at once. Slowly she sunk into her bunk bed and did what she thought was trying to sleep. It didn't work but it was surely worth trying.

Edited by kIrAn...E>GA<3 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowww... great part...adn there you go saying agian if anyone cares... hello!!! i an not invisible you know... and anywayss haha he kissed her at teh end... that was..cute? anywayss cant write much... mom will be back anytime... need to run along... anywayss continue sooon... will eb waiting for mahi and shabd...lol... mr stalker... haha...

okk continue soon...
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great part!! ok so niharika and vedant seems like bridget's soccer camp thing!! except bridget was totally flirting with eric--big-time!! lol! and kripa seems like tibby!! cont soon!!
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Originally posted by: MUNNIBABA2007

wowww... great part...adn there you go saying agian if anyone cares... hello!!! i an not invisible you know... and anywayss haha he kissed her at teh end... that was..cute? anywayss cant write much... mom will be back anytime... need to run along... anywayss continue sooon... will eb waiting for mahi and shabd...lol... mr stalker... haha...

okk continue soon...

no hun, ur not invisible! I juss didn't kno u were on rite now. how do u fix dat 'online now' thingy cuz mine always says im not online. even wen I am! thanx for reading munnibaba (I don't kno ur real name, sry)

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Originally posted by: erier101

great part!! ok so niharika and vedant seems like bridget's soccer camp thing!! except bridget was totally flirting with eric--big-time!! lol! and kripa seems like tibby!! cont soon!!

gasp! u read the book? wow, ur da first one to have noticed so far. either ur exceptionally smart (wich u are 😃) or all my other readers r slow. or maybe both 😆.

yea, i have tidbits of all four books in here. ull see soon 😆.

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