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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 15


Next Day

Maya wakes up bright and early, and is totally hyper…. she quickly goes downstairs and haves some breakfast and then she wakes up Adi, who has to take her to the hairdressers/make-up person. When she comes back, she is surprised at seeing Arushi all ready in her amazing blue and red zardosi sari. Her hair is perfectly curled in layers. Her arms are adorned with matching bangles.

Maya: you look amazing!!

Arushi: I know!

Maya: you can be a little modest, you know?!

Arushi: sorry can't happen!

Maya: anyway, watch, when I'm ready, you'll be watching!

Arushi: It is your wedding, you better look beautiful!!


After when Maya gets ready, she is wearing an off-white and red saree. On her head she is wearing a red chunni. Her arms have on matching bangles. She has all her jewelry perfectly in place. When Adi comes and knocks on her door. He is stunned at seeing her like this.

Adi: you look so grown-up….

Maya: Adi, don't go all sappy on me! But you don't look too bad yourself.

Adi is wearing a dark blue Sherwani, with a dark red maroon scarf.

Adi: are you ready to go down?

Maya: I guess…ok so where's Arushi?

Adi: she's waiting for you downstairs.

Maya: ok let's go


Maya and Adi make their way downstairs and Arushi gushes over Maya…. then they make their way to Shubh Vivah hall….

When they arrive at the hall, they do all the traditional rituals, and then the wedding between Rahul and Maya starts.

After the wedding, everyone poses for pictures, and then everyone goes off to the next hall for the lunch buffet.


After all that, Maya and Rahul make their way to their dressing rooms and they both get ready for the reception. Maya wears a green and blue lengha that is adorned with pink embroidery, whereas Rahul wears a 3-piece suit. When everyone arrives in the hall, the two emcees, Arushi and one of Rahul's friends Karan, announce that Mr. and Mrs. Rahul Khanna are entering the hall. Everyone stands up to see Maya and Rahul walk in together to the song, Tujhe Dekha To. While they are walking Rahul is mouthing along to the song, while Maya just looks down blushing and all embarrassed.


After the speeches from all of their friends including, Raj, Jhanvi, Aman, Arushi, and of course Adi, the cutting of the cake begins. They both cut the cake, and feed each other, and then the slide show of all their pictures start. After that the first dance is announced and Maya, who left the choice up to Rahul, was stunned when she heard….


Suraj Hua Maddham Chaand Jalne Laga
Aasmaan Yeh Haay Kyon Pighalne Laga
Suraj Hua Maddham Chaand Jalne Laga
Aasmaan Yeh Haay Kyon Pighalne Laga
Main Thehra Raha Zameen Chalne Lagi
Dhadka Yeh Dil Saas Thamne Lagi
Oh Kya Yeh Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai
Sajna Kya Yeh Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai
Suraj Hua Maddham Chaand Jalne Laga
Aasmaan Yeh Haay Kyon Pighalne Laga
Suraj Hua Maddham Chaand Jalne Laga
Aasmaan Yeh Haay Kyon Pighalne Laga
Main Thehra Raha Zameen Chalne Lagi
Dhadka Yeh Dil Saas Thamne Lagi
Oh Kya Yeh Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai
Sajna Kya Yeh Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai

Hai Khoobsurat Yeh Pal Sab Kuch Raha Hai Badal
Sapne Haqeeqat Mein Jo Dhal Rahe Hain
Kya Sadiyon Se Purana Hai Rishta Yeh Hamara
Ke Jis Tarah Tum Se Hum Mil Rahe Hai
Yunhi Rahe Har Dam Pyaar Ka Mausam
Yunhi Milo Hum Se Tum Janam Janam
Main Thehra Raha Zameen Chalne Lagi
Dhadka Yeh Dil Saas Thamne Lagi
Kya Yeh Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai
Sajna Kya Yeh Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai

Tere Hi Rang Se Yun Mein To Rangi Hoon Sanam
Paake Tujhe Khud Se Hi Kho Rahin Hoon Sanam
Oh Mahiya Main Tere Ishq Mein Haan Doob Ke
Paar Mein Ho Rahi Hoon Sanam
Sagar Hua Pyaasa Raat Jagne Lagi
Shole Ke Dil Mein Bhi Aag Jalne Lagi
Main Thehra Raha Zameen Chalne Lagi
Dhadka Yeh Dil Saas Thamne Lagi
Kya Yeh Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai
Sajna Kya Yeh Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai
Suraj Hoaa Maddham Chaand Jalne Laga
Aasmaan Yeh Haay Kyon Pighalne Laga
Sajna Kya Yeh Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai

Everyone dances the night away, and then everyone says their tearful goodbyes as the next morning Maya and Rahul are going on their honeymoon. One thing no one noticed was that throughout the night, Raj and Simran seemed to only have eyes for one another, neither one of them could notice what else was going on, as the world seems to only consist of the both of them. After Maya and Rahul left for their hotel, Jhanvi and Aman stayed back to be with Arushi, Adi, Raj, and Simran.

Arushi: so she's married?

Adi: yup…. my responsibility is done!

Simran: what kind of a brother are you?

Raj: Adi, your responsibility is never over, with your sister. See look at me; I'm always there for Jhanvi.

Adi: (laughs) I don't need a lecture from you guys! I meant my responsibility to get her married is done!

Arushi: whatever!

Aman: so now what?

Simran: the place seems so quiet!

Raj: that's because there's no one in it!!

Adi and Aman laugh.

Arushi: Raj, be nice to my friend!

Raj: sorry Aru…anyway Jhanvi, we should be heading home right?

Aman: ya, you're right. Look at Reena.

Everyone turns to look at Reena who is sleeping on three chairs put together. Jhanvi goes to her and scoops her up in her arms.

Aman goes and warms up the car while Jhanvi, Arushi and Simran have a conversation about how beautiful the wedding was, and how they all cried during it, while Raj and Adi just look at them with a look that shows how annoyed they are.

Arushi: stop looking at us with that look!

Simran: Raj, I wanna talk to you….

Raj and Simran walk off to the corner, while Aman comes in to tell Jhanvi that the car's outside.

Arushi and Adi both look at each other because they know exactly what's going on, whereas Jhanvi and Aman are totally clueless about Raj liking Simran.

After when Raj and Simran come back, they are both smiling and holding hands, which gives a hint to Arushi and Adi, but Jhanvi and Aman don't even notice.

Adi: Raj, is there something you need to tell us?

Raj: umm…..Simi, should we tell them now??

Simran: ya…..

Raj: me and Simran have…. umm decided to get engaged…

Jhanvi: what???

Arushi: awww Simi, I'm so happy for you!

Simran comes over to where Arushi and Jhanvi are standing.

Adi: so when is this going to happen, guys?

Raj: umm… (Looks at Simran)

Simran: we were thinking maybe next month…. after we have a chance to get to know each other a little better…


There is only one short part left...I hope you guys enjoyed this ff!

Luv ya loads,

Meera 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Meera, lovely part.

I'm guessing that Maya liked Suraj Hua Madam, then 😆

OMG, Raj and Simran r gonna get married after meeting each other once??? Bit quick no???

OMG, another wedding

LOL, Adi is too funny, my responsibility is done 😆

Meera, u know how much I loved this FF, it was brilliant, well done 👏 . I can't wait to see what happens in the end
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: atohani99

Meera, lovely part. Thank-you!!!! I'm gonna miss saying that!!!

I'm guessing that Maya liked Suraj Hua Madam, then 😆 obviously!!!😆

OMG, Raj and Simran r gonna get married after meeting each other once??? Bit quick no??? very quick actually...I wrote this at like 3 in the morning

OMG, another wedding don't worry...you don't have to read about it!😳

LOL, Adi is too funny, my responsibility is done 😆 guys, always find that funny!😆

Meera, u know how much I loved this FF, it was brilliant, well done 👏 . I can't wait to see what happens in the end I'm so glad I got such positive feedback about it!!! You'll see...the ending is so crappy! My ff is like an Ekta serial...starts off amazing, and ends like crap!

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Posted: 18 years ago
hai dat was soo good kya gaana choose kiya
i jus luv dat song
it was realli realli gd 👏
aww jus a little bit left but i must say i loved ur ff coz i was totally glued to it wondering wat will happen next but yh
continue soon cnt wait 😃 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Aww that part was amazing!!
Aww the weddings over...that was quick!
Aww really? only one part left....
This ff was great! I loved it!! 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

hai dat was soo good kya gaana choose kiya awww thank!!!
i jus luv dat song same here!!!
it was realli realli gd 👏 thank-you so much!!!
aww jus a little bit left but i must say i loved ur ff coz i was totally glued to it wondering wat will happen next but yh lol...I'm really happy that you liked it!!
continue soon cnt wait 😃 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_eijaz_anita

Aww that part was amazing!!
Aww the weddings over...that was quick!
Aww really? only one part left....
This ff was great! I loved it!! 😃

Thanks so much for liking it!! yup...I'm not one for describing things in detail...lol....yup...only one part left!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awww that part was marvelous! 👏 👏 👏 I loved the song! Haha Adi is silly. 😆 Nice clothes descriptions. 😛 Cant wait to see what happens in the end. Cant believe they decided for marriage after hardly knowing each other. 😆 😆 😆

Lovely part di!!! 👏

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