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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sania_58

great going 👏 👏

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Their all decided to go to shopping…. so all divided up and went to shopping…..pooja-ali and shalani-neelu went to ladies section, as alekh-yudi and huda went on upper floor to get some gadgets for yudi, clothes for alekh and shoes for huda.
Y: oye naina is so lucky yaar, she have got a life partner like rajveer sir.
A: pehle baar sahi baat ki aide!
H: akir kyun nahin ho yaar…humari phoolan bhi koi kan hain! Akar maidan main ah gaye toh sabki chuti kar degi!
Y: that's true yaar…and they all laughed and went inside stores….
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S: hey neelu do you think this dress is good! (shalu shows a dress to her)
N: yes..it is pretty…..but i think red will look better.
S: you kow what I think the same! ? (she picked hat dress up and signaled her to come with her)
N: okay you go and try it I will stay here…
S: no…you go and try I will stay here.
N: me..shalani I thought this dress was for you!
S: oh you thought that…but too bad I thought it would look good at you.
N: par…
S: no…go its an order…saying this she pushed her into room and smiled…as she went in.
Neelu came after a while and shalu whistled seeing her in that dress…..and neelu smiled seeing her reaction….far apart their was alekh who was watching neelu smiling and automatically had a smile in his face!
Meanwhile pooja was dragging ali from store to store and ali was following her without any protest b/c their were bags stuffed in his mouth too, including his both hands. Pooja did lot of shopping…mainly for her and ali….she made ali tried new clothes…which after may protest were buyed. Ali was quit happy the other side b/c pooja was talking things in his charge. So he followed her without saying anything!

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N: Raj this place is so beautiful…it feels like I am in heaven.
She looked around and saw a beautiful lake have surrounded them. It was like small island and they were in middle of it…the sun have just raised and the shaded of sun were falling all over the place. There were all different types of flower's all around. The smell of those flowers was spread all over place. It was like heaven to naina. She had never seen such a beautiful place in her life. This place was near nainital but she has never been here. It was like it had been a secret all along. (she said to raj who was hugging her from behind)
R: it is…but not as beautiful as my jaan.. (He kissed her neck, while naina blushed)
N: so what are we going to do here!
R: hmmmm…we are going to do my favorite thing!
N: and that's is?
R: fishing…
N: fishing RAJ! I don't know how to..i mean…
R: don't worry when I am there is no fear!
naina giggled at his line and raj too smiled both went their where raj had rented a both…raj helped naina get on boat as she wore long skirt and then he himself got in….he started boat and naina stood their in front of grill and enjoyed the cool wind blowing her hair. It was like wind was playing with her silky hair and raj was watching to from far. A sudden urge felt upon him…he wanted to get to her and touch those hairs, which were falling upon her shoulder. He stopped the boat after a while in middle of lake….and naina looked at him and went to him and watched what he was doing… he first took a basket in which to her knowledge were worms. So made a face seeing them and raj watched that and smiled then he took a stick (I don't know what you call it) and sat there…
R: jaan batho na…
N: okay….so how do you fish!
R: its easy jaan…see take this stick and you see this edge hook these things( he pointed to worms) and then throw that in water….the fish is going to see that food and going to come and eat it so they are trapped now and we then full that stick out…see it is simple….you try!
N:me no…no…I have not done fishing in my life.
R:so what honey…I am here come on try it..
N: no raj I don't like to touch this worm thingy…
Raj started to laugh and said jaan….these are not worms these are bait...now ocme on…he pulled her toward him. Naina started to follow what he was doing and both started doing fishing. Naina was finding it pretty boring so she started humming a song…..
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
(she started humming his sing lyrics)
R: naina bore ho rahi ho?
N: HMM…this d**** fish is not coming out…
R: jaan you have to have patience!
N: hmm…(suddenly naina felt like her string was pulling something….she called raj and he came their and told her to pull the string out as she might have caught a fish. Naina pulled the string out and saw their was a small fish struggling to get out of that hope. Naina saw that and felt sad…she takes that struggling fish in her and hand and slowly drops the fish in water again. Raj who was watching got amazed.
R: naina why did you drop the fish back you were trying to catch fish from
N: jaan I just wanted to catch fish but I didn't wanted to keep it…she would have to die if I wanted to leep it and I am not that selfish to let a fish die. I was excited to see one but not to cut and eat one so when I saw it struggling I dropped it.
Raj just smiled at her because he understood her answer perfectly. He knew his naina would never want to harm anybody not even a fish and he came forward hours and now you dropped it? and hugged her.
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Posted: 17 years ago
bhumi very sweet parts..good going... 👏 continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was a good one 👏 .both of them fishing. cho chweet 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

bhumi very sweet parts..good going... 👏 continue soon... 😊

Thanks a lol suri!!!!!!😛😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks varun😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sonarajasingh

that was a good one 👏 .both of them fishing. cho chweet 😳 😳 😳

Thanks😛😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks shaina😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

bhumi continue soon.. 😊

i willlllll😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
A: ali aap toh itna kharid rahi hain jitna ek ladki ki shaadi pe late hain? (he said it in fustration)
P: toh..ky ahuva…kya ek laski jiski shaadi honi wali hoti hain..who he itna kharid shakti hain?
A: are humare yeh matlabnahin ta…who toh hum keh arahe the ki app itna sara kyun kharid rahi hain….ab naina ki shaadi bhi toh hone wali hain..tab kharid kena? (he gave a suggestion….rather want to go to home and have a nap…)
P: are haan…aakhir naina ki shaadi ab hone wali hain…main to bahut khus hoon…akhir usko uska sharukh mil gaya..
A: hum bhi…(he said it wil 100 volt smile)
S: neelu main tumse ek baat puchu? (hesistating)
N: haan pucho…
S: main..mera matlab ki tum alekh se phir…(neelu cuts her)
N: shalani mujhe us baremain koi baat nahin karni aur main uska naam mere smake nahin suna chati….(saying this she went away…and shalani smield and said…: tum sunoghi neelu aur zindighi baar uska naam tumhare saath juda rehagha
H: are wah yaar kya cheez hain…(he said while looking at counter girl)
Y: really yaar…I love it…it is so shiny…and I think it will work…
H: are work kaise nahin kareghi…huda key samne koi bhi cheez rakhdo who aapne aap think ho gayeghi!
Y: huh…
H: are sahi toh kaha….ab tak tune kabhi dekha ki koi bhi ladki huda se bach ke ja sake….
Y(confused): ladki…what ladki…?
H: ladki…woj ladki,…(he pointed to the counter girl..who was looking very sexy….she have worn a mini skirt and her t-shirt is very tight…it reveals her body curves……blah..blah)
Y: bro where you talking about the counter girl all time?
H;aur nahin toh kya…p..par tujhe kya aga?
Y: I thought you were talking about this shoes….(he pointed to a shoes which yudi was trying a sec ago..and he was asking about his opinion…)
H: are..yaar..main toh counter girl ki baat kar raha tha aur tu…har baar galat tharike se….chal shood..main toh uske paas ja raha hoon…(he went away without listening to yudi's answer)
Raj and naina were enjoying their day very well….they both had lots of fun while fishing….
N: so raj what are we going to do next!
R: jaan….there is a beautiful sunset point nearby…..can we go their?
N; sure why not…anything that you say..today is your day..
R: hmmm…kuch bhi…(he said this with a naughty grin)
N: I mean kuch bhi matlab…. romance kum…
R: khub janta hoon…tumhari yeh shadish ko…par jaan you have to climb hill first.
N: hill…okay..
R: lets go…(he took naina;s hand in his and started walking….they both started climbing hill…it is preety high but it was nto difficult. Raj was guiding naina who was hacing trouble in clibing because of her hils…suddenly her anklw twished…
N: AHHHH! (raj looked at her and rushed to her)
R: naina kya huva…r u okay…
N: woh..haan main theek hoon..who bas pathar se tarkra gayo aur gir..
R: naian….you are very careless….(he sadi with a anger but his voice also had concern for her)
N: raj I am fine…so dotn worry and help he get up….(raj raised his hand and tried to pick her up but she fell again as she had pain I her ankle.
R: hmmm…mamsaab ko moch aayi hain..(he said ti with an anger)
N:WO…SORRY…i….(she was feeling down as raj's flan had been flopped…she want to climb the hill now…
N; I am sorry….i ruined your plan…(she was about to cry 😭 but before she could say or do anything she felt her above ground…she looked at raj who picked her up and now was smiling…)
R: nahin jaan mere plan main itni jaldi chaupat nahin hone de shakta (he winked ay her) 😆
N: tum na bahut bure ho…
R: wo to hoon…😃
N: raj tum thak jaoge!
R: nahin hoon ga….aur hum dur nahin hain…(he started walking and naina only looked at him and raj eventually looked at her and smiled…. 😛 )
they walked teh hill (actually raj did 😆 )

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