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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: varun_sujjal

lovely update .carry on

thanks varun😛😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

bhumi very sweet , really cute part...i liked it very much... very achcha...the scene between raj & naina was itna zyada pyaara.... 👏 do continue soon...me looking forward for the upcoming parts... 😊 😛 😃

Thanks suri yaar..i really appreciate your comment...aur haan naina aur raj ke bich bahut hi pyaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr hain! 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: guddi29

kya pyaar....fab updte...plz cont

Thanks guddi!😛😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
Next morning:
Naina opened bathroom door and came outside. She only had towel on her and water from her wet hair was tripping down the carpet. She came infront of mirror and started to dry her hair…she saw raj standing behind her…she just smiled in though that it was illusion…but
R: morning jaan!
N: morning raj (she started drying her hair but then stopped at looked behind her and saw raj there smiling naughtily. She jerked back and said:
N: what do you think you are doing here!
R: jaan I am here to see my s***y wife…(saying this he hugged her from back while naina tried to move but he was too strong)
N: raj what if somebody sees you here. You know that we are not in our honeymoon…
R: but I wish we were…. saying this he gave a kiss on her bare shoulder.
N: raj you know what, you are going to in big trouble when everybody sees you here.
R: I don't care. I came here to see my baby. (He said it while making a puppy face)
N: hmmm…come here…(she signals raj to come by her but raj jumped on her and both fell on bed…with naina below raj and raj burying his face under her wet hair and stared planting kisses on her neck and shoulder. Soon raj stared kissing her face and the her lips. The kiss was very passionate, heating….naina was trying to get raj's t-shirt off and raj was trying to get the knot of her towel open but naina stopped him. raj looked at her eye and they told him everything so he left that knot and again stared kissing her. He moved from her forehead to her cleavage…meanwhile naina was turning on as raj was kissing her insensately.
They were on verge of making love when somebody knocked door….
Shalu: naina….
No sign…they were still kissing each other..
S: naina…
No sign…
S: knocked harder…: naina tum ho na! Hum sab tumhara intazar kar rahe hain?
Naina heard that and moved raj…and yelled: haan shalani main ah rahi hoon
S: okay…
R: kya yaar…sab galat time pe kyun ah jate hain!
N: (smiled) …..she was about to get up but raj pulled her back and she landed on top of raj…
N: raj jane do na mujhe…
R: kyun…abhi hum busy the…aur humne humara audhara kaam bhi pura nahin kiya…(saying this rah winks at her)
Naina blused and hides her face in his chest…while raj smiles and puts his arms around her…
N: raj plz ab jane do na….varna yeh log dhaamal macha dange!
R: pehle mujhe kiss karo..
N: raj..(with shocked eye) no way…you had enough kisses for day!
R: really…saying this he pulled her and now they were very close to each other.
N:raj plz (trying to get out of his grip)
R: pehle kiss!
N: tum nahin manoghe!
R: pehle mana hu kya!
N: okay…she came forward and her lips touched his and she was just going to withdraw then but raj pulled her closer and deepened the kiss and rolled over so now naina was below raj and raj was above her. Raj was kissing her with so much passion that naina thought that her lips might have a cut after kissing. After 15 minutes raj-naina both broke up and both were breathing heavily and looked at each other. Naina just hugged raj tightly and raj hugged her back.
Naina came downstairs and made a excuse for being late…. after some time raj came looking dashing as ever and joined everybody for breakfast!
Shalu: raj kaha reh gaye the? Kab se dhund rahi hoon!
R: wo…woj kya hain na…main..mian terrece pe tha! (he said forst thing that came into his mind)
S: terrace pe! (Confused) par kyun!
R: wo ky ahain na…main jaldi uth gaya tha toh maine socha ki main terrace pe ho aavu!
S: hmmm…(not convinced easily and their naina was trying not to laugh)
Huda: are naina tu kyun apne daath dikha rahi hain! (everybody looked at her)
N: who kuch nahin….wo..who kal movie ka ek dialog yaad ah gaya! (saying this she got up and went into kitchen)
Now everybody were done with their breakfast and as planned raj-naina were not going with group today…. Today's whole day they are going to be alone and they will spend time….so as planned they told everybody to stay home or enjoy themselves so everybody decided to go and see ambala meanwhile raj had a suparise planned for naina. He told naina to get ready as today it was going to be her best day. Niana got exicted about it….she kept asking to raj about where they are going but raj would only sush her…atlast she got engry when she didn't got her answer. Raj saw her and smiled….he knew that she was angyr but when she sees her surprise she will definitely gonna love it…..naina didn't said anything further and that was making raj feel terrib;e so he gave up and spoke…
R: jaan! Aise chup chap kyun ho! Kuch bolo na!
N: main kyun bolu jab maine tumhe kaha mujhe batao toh tumne mujhe bataya kya, toh phir main kyun….
R: jaan u know that it is surprise and if I tell u what is that, then it will nto be surprise anymore.
N: hmmmmmm
R: aacha chalo main tumhe ek clue deta hoon!
N: okay…(she turned to him immediately with curiousness in her eye)
R: hmmm lets see it very beautiful, and your favourite thing surrounds it.
N: my fav. Thing (confused)
R: yes…so now I gave you clue so no more talking about that place okay1
N: okay….(saying this she started thinking about raj's clue and raj saw her making different faces and smiled)
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey very nice...pl updaet soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow so romantic update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
pl continu soon
its great
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jaychan

hey very nice...pl updaet soon...

Thanks jaychan😛😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: varun_sujjal

wow so romantic update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

Thanks i am glad that you thought it was a romantic update!😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

pl continu soon
its great

Thanks a lol yaar!😛😛

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