Do Pal Ek Dashtan (12/29) Twist-*Note - Page 29

Soon guests (huda-ali-pooja-shalani-yudi-alekh) came and all started thinking about their plan for today?
H: so ppl what is plan for today?
P: I don't know…ask my sharukh…I mean rajveer sir.
R: me….do what ever you wanna do…today is not my dad, tomorrow I will decide what to do right naina. (While she just blushed)
P: oye toh iska matlab ki kal rajveer sir-naina humare saath nahin rahenghe
(everybody looked at her in shock including raj-naina)
R: lt. Ghai….aap toh meri shaadi kay pehle is hume upar bhejne ka plan bana chuki hain.
P: nahin ….oh nahin…sir main toh bas yehi kehna chati hoon ki app aur meri naina kal humre saath nahin aayenge na…
N: pooja ab yeh kya leke bathi hain...chalo jaldo decide karo main toh bore ho rahi hoon.
H: are phoolan humre rajveer sir kay saath toh bore ho rhai hain. Abhi kehta hoon humare rajveer sir ko ki tujhe aapna filmi dance dikhaye.
Raj was drinking his coffee splited out…naina ran to him and rubbed his hand on his back….
N: raj are you okay…
R: mhh…haan…..huda agar main who filmi dance karungha toh yeh jo ghar dekh rahe ho wo tumhe toota-foota milega aur mujhe apni shaadi yehi ghar main karni hain to yeh ghar sahi salamat rehna chaiye.
H: kya sir….toh ab yeh bhi cancel…
A: toh ab kya kare.
Shalani who was sitting silent said: what about playing hide and seek.
R: shalu we are not small kids.
S: I know that raj but it is fun…everybody likes to play that game….its not that only child can play that game even adults cam play that game.
Y: yes I agreee.
Huda mummered: tu kab un se disagree karta hain
Y: bro (to huda) did you said something
H: no..
S: so decided lets play.
R: par..shalu..
S: plzz raj
R: yeh..
Naina: come raj lets play naa…its fun
R: okay…
Shalani: wah kya pyaar hain….maine kaha toh nahin aur naina ne kaha toh haan…wah..wah
R: stop it shalu (he said blushingly)
H: okay so lets play…who is going to be seek…
Y: I will be….(said immediately)
N: okay then…we can hide anywhere in house including lawn.
Y: lawn also! (said with a shock)
H: kyun yudie daar gaya kya!
Y: me no way….i am not afraid of anything..
H: oh really!
Y: ah..ann…yeah..
A: eh game suru karta hain toh kar na! Kya khali phokat main dimag kah raha hain.
Shalu: I agree!
N: so lets start….yudi count 50
Y: okay…so lets start (mean time yudi started counting and everybody started hiding)

Alekh went outside and hid behind trees….

Huda ran upstair into guest room and hid in bathroom.

Shalu hid in kitchen

Raj ran toward naina's room and hid under bed (I know quite funny, but it is supposed to be funny)

And naina who was confused where hid was restless…she heard yudi saying 5…4…3…2…1…. here I come so she quickly ran toward her room and hid under her bed….where to her surprise she found a pair of shoes….she thought she never had shoes of men then how come they are lying under her bed….she went deeper inside afraid to be caught but their she found a person…she was almost about to yell but that person keeps his hand on her mouth and covered it. She bit him on his palm….the man still didn't left so she bit his harder. He was fed up so he covered her mouth with his…..after a while…naina who was in shock looked at that person's face…she made a sign of relief but then she hit him…and whispered.

N: what are you doing here!

Voice: hmmm…I am romancing!

N: kis ke saath!

V: hmmm is bed kay saath…..kya yaar naina main wahan chup raha hoon!

N: raj yeh meri chupne ki jagah hain!

R: toh?

N: toh! This was top secret place how did you know?

R: jaani…hume aapki saari secrets pata hain

N: kaise (secret)

R: hmmmm jaise maine bataya maien tumhari diary padi thi!

N: hmm (angry) raj you are such a ….such.a…

R: (finsished her sentence) such a sweetheart.

N: raj…ek baar yahan se niklo toh sahi phir batati hoon.

R: shauk se! par ab chup raho…agar yudi ne sun liya toh?

N: hmmmm….

Meanwhile yudi was having trouble finding everybody…..he went into hall first and saw that nobody was their, then he went to kitchen and saw nobody so he started going but a noise stopped him. he turned and smirked, he started looking…he looked everywhere but still couldn't see anything…he thought it was just a noise made by rats but he got thirst so he opened the fridge and saw shalani sitting their with pasta all over her hair! Yudi almost laughed when he saw her. Pasta was sticking from her hair and her face was white as ice. He gave her hand and bought her outside. He tried not to laugh……

Y: you are caught maan!

S: (shriving) ya…I cannn….se…e..th…a…that…

Y: maam go and take a hot shover you a cold.

S: ye…yahhhh

Yudi went outside…he started looking for somebody…he spotted somebody stomach growling…..he smirked as he heard…he went near that sound and looked behind the bushes and found alekh their with a bottle I his hand. He looked at yudi who was smiling…

A: eh topari aacha huva tumne mujhe dhund liya varna main bahar hi aane wala tha….mujhe to solid bhuk lagi hain?

Y: yeh I can hear that! Saying that they both went inside the house. Alekh went inside the kitchen meanwhile yudi went upstairs. He first went to uncle-aunty's bedroom, he skimmed everywhere but he could't find anybody so next he went to raj's room he saw that no body was their either so next he went to guest room and started looking but he couldn't see anything/anybody….he thought to check the bathroom….he opened the door but instantly turned around….it was the last thing he wanted to see. He saw huda without his pants sitting on toilet..

Y: huda….what are you doing like this…

H: are yaar…tu yahan pe bhi ah gaya….kahin pe chen se toilet bhi nahin jane deta!

Y: bro you should have locked the door the..

H: to tujhe pata kaise chalta ki main wahan pe hoon!

Y: so you wanted me to know where you where? (he asked confusingly)

H: abe agar main yeh door locked kar ke rakhta toh main bahar kaise nikalta!

Y: huh?

H: yeh dekh iski knob andar se nikal gata hain, toh agar koi bahar se khole ga toh hi toh main bahar dekhai dungha!

Y: hmmm! Par ab toh tum pakra gaye ho…so lets find rajveer sir and naina!

H: toh baki sab mil gaye!

Y: haan…

H: toh chal…dhund?

Yudi went to naina's room and he looked everywhere but still couldn't found anybody…so…he went downstairs..he told everybody that he could find them so everybody helped him to find them….mean while raj-naina were talking to each other in very low tone….they made sure that yudi doesn't find them…raj was much more romancing with naina rather then talking…. Naina was not sure but why she felt like their was something that was climbing her leg. It made a tickling sensation. She thought it was raj's legs so she told raj to stop it…and raj was confused as he want doing anything….naina again said stop it….but raj was like facing "HUH" expression….this time naina again said raj it is tickling me…..so raj finally spoke…

R: jaan what are you saying I am not doing anything!

N: you are not then why do I feel like…(she looked at her leg and saw a cockroach their…. she yelled instantly…she got out of bed and started jumping…raj came out too hearing her screams and asked what happened?

N: idiot take this cockroach from my leg…..(raj saw a cockroach which wa climing his way up and took the cockroach in his hands and showed to naina who was little bit calm but still little scared…

N: raj throw this from your hands….

R: why jaan he is so cute just like you!

N: just like me! Raj plz take it away from me…..orelse I..

R: I..what?

N: I am not going to talk to u…(raj still didn't dropped)

R: jaan why are u this scared.

N: b/c they are yucky! Plzzzz

RAJ DROPPED IT….and NAINA HUGGED HIM……and this whole scene was witnessed by the gang…and yudi said….caught you…raj and naina both broke their hug and looked at them with embarrassing way….

Shalani coughed and told them to come downstairs….they all went downstairs and all sat around….

lol, kya gme thi...luvd it...plz cont 😆 😆 😆

super cooll bhumi..i could not stop laughing.. too funny.. their game was very nice... 😆 do continue soon.. 😊

Originally posted by: guddi29

lol, kya gme thi...luvd it...plz cont 😆 😆 😆

Thanks......game toh aachi hi honi chaiye na....varna readers to mazza kaise aaye ga!😉

Originally posted by: varun_sujjal

wow it is quite funny

Thanks and i am glad that you found it funny!

Originally posted by: sun_423

super cooll bhumi..i could not stop laughing.. too funny.. their game was very nice... 😆 do continue soon.. 😊

Thanks suri......i didnt even realzed that it was that funny but i am glad that you found to funny!😆

Huda: oye phoolan kuch khana hain….mujhe toh bahut bhook lagi hain!
A: me too…
Y: and me too…(naina smiled at this)
N: definitely its just that I have to cook and its going to take while!
H: okay we will wait then… right guys?
Y: yes anything for naina's food. I have heard that she makes delicious food so lets check it out this time.
N: okay guys you enjoy yourself….i have rented couple of movies you can watch that.
H: nahin yaar….we all will see it after dinner.
N: okat them…(saying this she got up)
Shalu: hey naina I will come with you too…It will be help!
N: sure shalani! (They both went to kitchen and started preparing meals while guys went talking baotu stuff but our raj had his mind on something else. He wanted to go to naina to help her rather romance….but he knew that if he told them his wish then he would definitely be teased badly)
N: shalani you can go and join everybody if you want…ic an manage!
S: no naina…I also want to help and I want to talk to you about something!
N: about what? Is everything alright!
S: yeah…..but one thing is not alright and that you also know!
N: what?
S: relationship b/w alekh and neelu (shalu said it will seriousness in her voice and naina looked at her)
N: but…ho…(shalu cuts her)
S: I am sorry naina but on that day when you and alekh were talking about their (alekh-neelu) relationship I heard everything. I am sorry. I know that I was not suppose to listen but I was just coming to call you guys so….(remember guys when alekh was telling naina real reason of his breaking up relationship I told you that their was somebody on door who had listened to their talking so that person was SHALANI!)
N: no not at all shalani….i am glad that ou heard it b/c I don't know how to make them one once again!
S: so what ever alekh said was that was the real reason for their broken relationship.
Naina nodded…..
S: so it was a misundestanding….neelu misunderstood alekh…
N: and she thinks that b/c of that she lost her child…
S: so what do yo think…how are we going to bring them together once again!
N:I think its going to be difficult as neelu doesn't even want to see alekh's face or when she does she runs away from him… its like she doesn't want any connection b/w her and alekh.
S: hmmmm this is really difficult….
N: but what if we…(naina says something to shalu and shalu smirked and both hi-fied…..sorry guys we cannot her what she says)
S: perfect idea naina….
N: but do you think it will work…
S: it will definitely bring them closer.
N: and that might clear the misunderstanding b/w them. You know shalani I really want alekh and neelu to be happy…they deserve it.
S: (she puts her hand on her shoulder) they will naina…and we will make it possible.
Suddenly they heard yell saying that: oye phoolan khaana banaya ya nahin…
To which naina yelled you have to wait….
Naina started cutting vegetables and shalu started making parathas. Just then raj comes their and sees naina….naina also sees raj and knows why he is here….so she teased him y saying..
N:are raj yahan kya kar rahe ho?
R: who kya hain na…mujhe pyaas lagi thi! (made an excuse to meet naina)
N: aare pyaar lagi thi toh dinning table par pabi ka jug rakha tha na…yahan se le late? (she said with a smirk which definitely said "what happened captain)
R: wo…wo…wahan pe paani khatam ho gaya hain.(he said in a frustrated manner)
Shalu: toh yahan se le lo raj….here..(saying this she handed him glass of water while trying not to smile)
Raj took it from her & looked at naina who was cutting vegetables w/o looking at raj….suddenly naina cuts her finger…..
N: OUCH!!!!!!!!!
Raj runs to her and says kya huva..naina!
N: I cut my finger (raj looks at her finger which was bleeding not-stop and sucked it…….naina was looking at raj who had a worried face and then shalu who was looking at both of them in shock…while naina was just blushing under her eye-lashes. Raj then took her hand out and looked at it…
R: naina chalo main bandage kar deta hoon!
N: nahin raj main think hoon..
R: no….come with me…(saying this he pulled her and took her to dining table. He took first aid box out from drawer and started bandaging her hand…while all this was happrning naina was just looking at raj who was very carefully bandaging her. Her cut was deep and because of that it was bleeing very much….so by now bandaging was done so naina got up and started to go!
R: naina kahan ja rahi ho?
N: khana banane!
R: nahin tum nahin jaogi! tumhe chot laghi hain!
N: raj I am fine it is normal…. and I will be fine. By looking at the way you have bandaged me (she looked at her finger and raj smiled at her comment) so now let me go orelse you all will be starving today….(saying this she left and raj went into living room)
Naina came into kitchen where shalani was smirking…
N:kya huva?
S: hmmm kya huva hmmm….
N: stop it shalani! Raj was just worried…
S: ya very worried….and I am very happy that raj cares about you.
N: I am too….i don't know why but I think that I had done something good in my previous life and because of that I have got a good husband in this life.
S: husband? (she raised her eyebrow)
N: I mean to be husband…..(saying this she looked away from shalu who was still smiling)
Naina and shalu made and good company and made the food while discussing their plan…..soon food was ready and everybody enjoyed the food….they all loved it and it was true that naina made a delicious food and raj indeed kissed her hand infront of everybody while everybody hooted and clapped.

Soon they got a call from naina's mum and dad saying that they will not be able to return b/c of heavy rain so they all decided to stay at naina's house for night. So as decided they all watched movie…..so everybody shattered in living room….shalani got some popcorns and drinks and settled her self on couch, alekh sat on floor beside yudi who was hugging pillow, huda sat on floor and while raj sat on sofa with naina facing her back on raj's chest and raj's hand enveloping through her wait. His thumb was rubbing her skin on waist and his legs were interewined with each other. The feeling with each other after a long day was definately great. Both were covered with a blanket so nobody saw that how they were sitting exactly.
They started watching a movie name "VIVAH" it was a good movie… in no time everybody were engrossed in that movie…. raj had no intrest in movie...he was just intrestend in watching his naina who was engrossed in movie as other so raj purposly hugged naina more talking advantage of movement nad gave her soft kiss on her neck when everybody were watching movie. naina looked at him blushed.

After a while raj also started liking the movie so he was watching it with great intrest but suddenly he heard a sob…he looked around but didn't found anybody crying…so he started watching movie again but again her heard a sob…he looked around but still nobody was crying but then he looked at naina who had tears in her eyes and all the popcorn that she was eating were wet by her tears….raj smiled at her act. He always knew that she was emotional….raj's grip on her waist tightened and naina looked up and saw raj smiling. He kissed her forehead lightly and hugged her….raj thought that naina would get back to her real position but she laid like that in his arms. After a while he looked at her and smiled…he saw her sleeping peacefully in no time. He might have guessed that she had been real tired after long day. He saw shalani who was watching them and asked what happened and raj signaled her that naina have fallen asleep. So he got up without making any movements that might wake her up and took her in his arms and went to her room. Raj placed her in her bed and made her comfortable by placing blanket over her and went downstairs where everybody was watching movie.

Soon the movie was over and everybody went to his or her room's to sleep. Raj started going to his room but stopped by naina's room to check on her. He opened the door saw naina shriving b/c window was open so he went by window and closed her and then went to her and kissed her forehead and said goodnight jaan and then went to his room.

hey nice update

Raj is so caring

pl continue soon

bhumi very sweet , really cute part...i liked it very much... very achcha...the scene between raj & naina was itna zyada pyaara.... 👏 do continue soon...me looking forward for the upcoming parts... 😊 😛 😃

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

hey nice update

Raj is so caring

pl continue soon

Thanks a lol...😛 my raj always care about other>