Do Pal Ek Dashtan (12/29) Twist-*Note - Page 27

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey too good

pl next time with a longer update
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome bhumi..the contents of the diary are very well expressed.. i loved it completely..just greattt.. 👏 do post the next part soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap with long part
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

too good but plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon with little more longer part asap.

thanks i will try to update it with long part...😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

hey too good

pl next time with a longer update

thanks....& this time i will post it with long part!😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

thanks😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti 123

awsome parts.........
please update soon......

thanks preeti i am happy that u liked it!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

awesome bhumi..the contents of the diary are very well expressed.. i loved it completely..just greattt.. 👏 do post the next part soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃

thanks suri! 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: varun_sujjal

update pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

i will....and i am sorry for being late...

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Posted: 17 years ago
It was morning and naina was making breakfast for her and raj as her parents went somewhere. She made some pancakes, tea and toast. Raj came downstairs when she was arranging table. He came and kissed her cheek while saying good morning jaan.
N: morning.
R: wow toast, pancakes…yummy did mum made it.
N: no she is out of town with dad so I made the breakfast.
R: you made this breakfast.
N: yes I did any problems…
R: no I just thought that you only write diaries (slipped from his mouth)
N: no…I…wait a minute who told you that I write diaries.
R: me..no.no..i just.(fumbling)
N: did you read my diary? (said sternly)
R: me..no..(naina stared at him) yess..yes..no…
N: yes or no (she was angry as she have wrote so much stuff about her personal life that she have never told anybody)
R: yes..i did
N: how could you raj, you know that reading diary is not a good thing.
R: yes but writing stuff about another boy RAYAN…is not a good thing
N: urhhhh you read that?
R: yes and even about shivangi, rahul, Sherman and who was the one who kissed you. What was his name?
N: raj you are crossing your limits.
R: and who was the one to which you collided.
N: raj (naina was getting angry)
R: and…(he stopped as he saw naina's face it was as red as scarlet color, now he was scared) naina I was just joking.
N: you were but not me…save your life raj.
And the chase begins..raj was running and naina was running after him with a spatula in her hands. Raj was yelling..JAAN I WAS JOKING…but naina was not listening to him..they both ran upward to raj's room and naina was now throwing pillows in raj who was struggling. Raj managed to grabed her hand and pulled her toward him both fell on bed. Naina was on top of raj.
N: raj chodo.
R: nahin
N: maar khani hain
R: haan
N: rajjjjjj
R: naina pata hain jab maine who diary padi to mujhe kita dukh huva pata hain?
N: who kyun (who was little calm)
R: kyun ki tumne us ladke ko kiss kiya tha
N: toh (knew what he is trying to say)
R: toh kya chalo mujhe kiss karo, main nahin dekh sakta ki meri fianc kissed him and not me.
N: tumhe aur kiss?
R: kyun kya huva (he made an innocent face)
N: na tum us jaise nahin ho, who to kitna handsome tha, kitne romantic tha, kitna (before she could say any further her lips were sealed by raj's but after a while she too gave in and then they both came out of their passionate kiss)
R: kabhi bhi mere samne kisi aur ladke ki baat bhi mat karna jaan?
N: okay hubby (saying this she hugged him and after a while all came downstairs)
R: naina seriously, I never knew that you think these deeply.
N: kabhi kabhi.
R: to kya main tumhari diary padh sakta hoon?
N: hmm…sochungi
R: kya yaar main tumhara better half hoon.
N: abhi nahi...(she get what he was saying and blushed)
R:(smirked) oh..so you blush also.
N: Raj, now stop embarrassing me.
R: I am not embarrassing you jaan, I was just making sure if you remembered our first..
N: RAJ....stop
R: okay okay....not more talking about that....beautiful night, when you became mine only mine. (he looked at naina who was looking at him he pulled her into hug which naina responded gratefully)
R: so when are ma and baba going to return?
N: maybe afternoon.
R: tab tak hum dono akele.
N: jee nahin huda and all are coming here in a while
R: yeah! Perfect way to spend day. (he said with a mock smile)
N: sorry jaan but tomorrow whatever you tell me.
R: promise
N: pinky promise. (she said with childish accent)
R: naina you are my baby(saying this he kissed her cheek)

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