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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth



Haa keh dii Per ak ko theek se apne dil ki baat share karne dooo na 😆 Abhi dono sharma rahe hai 😳



In a way he kinda did, at the end when he said there was no need to make a wish, cause it came true.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hellooo
sorrie havent replied...i jsu got caught up with this....awesome job...love itt!!!! very cute ak parts...only thing i found disappointing was that u didnt put sujal's reaction to the whole kripa incident..i wnated to see him get pissed off and comfort her..causse of their bro sis relationship...but yeh...other than that awesome job!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was really gud plz contd son
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was so cuteee-- loved it-- both the sujal-kashish part and the angad-kripa part-- i'd say more such cute romantic parts-- thats wat i'd like to see more of !!--
gr8 part !!-- like i said-- loved itt !!
cant wait to read more =)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Smileyface

hellooo

sorrie havent replied...i jsu got caught up with this....awesome job...love itt!!!! very cute ak parts...only thing i found disappointing was that u didnt put sujal's reaction to the whole kripa incident..i wnated to see him get pissed off and comfort her..causse of their bro sis relationship...but yeh...other than that awesome job!!



If I included Sujal's reaction then it would have kinda dragged...I haven't included Kavya's reaction either. thought if i included every characters reaction, then it would have dragged. but you all know how much the girls are cared after. 😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice part. Firstly I liked the Anu-Prerna part very much. I think it was a gr8 thought to hav them coz its really fun to read their parts.
Then Sujal n Kashish wer also gud. But was Sujal expecting Kashish to be happy after getting scolded. That was funny. Gud to knw abt Sujal's helping nature.
At last Angad-Kripa's confession was very funny. Sneha had to do it 4 them. But then Angad's last line was so sweet.
Overall it was a fantastic part. PLS CONTINUE SOON.
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part Thirty


Kripa went up to Angad and hugged him.

Kripa: Why didn't you say anything before?

Angad smiled back at Kripa.

Angad: I could ask you the same thing

There was a brief silence in the room, as Angad and Kripa had their arms around each other.

Angad: I…I…I love you…

Immediately Kripa looked up at Angad. Her eyes wide open in shock, she never thought she'd hear the words. Her eyes gleamed with happiness as she stared into Angad's eyes.

Kripa: I…I…I love you too…

Sneha: Awwww…it's a Kodak moment

Both Angad and Kripa turned around to see Sneha standing in the doorway. She was there, her hands shaped as a camera, pretending to take a picture of Angad and Kripa hugging.

Kripa: You just wait right there…

Kripa reached over to grab hold of a pillow and then she threw it at Sneha. She managed to get out of the way and then ran away from there, with Kripa chasing after her. But Kripa gave up at the door, as Sneha was already shooting off downstairs.

Angad: This Sneha is really something else…

Kripa: Yeah she sure is…

Angad smiled at Kripa. But Kripa just kept her eyes fixed on Sneha. She was smiling but not how she normally used to.

Angad: Are you okay?

Kripa looked up at Angad.

Kripa: I was just thinking about Sneha…She does so much for everyone…she acts like as if she's happy…but she isn't…to her making everyone around her happy has now become her life…but the truth is even today she's alone.

Angad: What do you mean?...

Kripa: Because of her…I have you in my life…who does she have?...Even now I can still see hope in her eyes…hope that Aryan will come back to her…she doesn't show it…but I know…she's still hurt…she's still heartbroken… even now she puts on this act…to show everyone that she's fine…but she isn't…

Both Angad and Kripa just stood there watching Sneha, jumping around, teasing them, daring Kripa to come after her.

Meanwhile Anjali was on her way into the house, when someone stopped her.

A cloth was placed over her eyes, someone had tied it around her head, covering her eyes, so she couldn't see.

Anjali: What the…who is this?

Anjali was about to take the cloth off.

Kavya: Don't…

Anjali: Kavya…What are you playing at? You scared the life out of me

Kavya: It's a surprise…just don't ask or say anything else…

Anjali: Surprise…Kavya I have to go inside to Kripa…

Kavya: Oh come on Anjali…

Kavya wasn't going to hear anything else. He just grabbed hold of Anjali's hand and helped her into the car and drove to some place. Anjali couldn't hear anything. Where ever she was it was a quite place. She heard the car door open.

Kavya: Here let me help you…and no peeking…

Anjali: Kavya…what's going on? What are you doing?

Kavya helped Anjali to her feet and then slowly removed the cloth.

Kavya: Keep your eyes closed, don't open them till I tell you…

Anjali smiled, as Kavya held her hand and directed her towards a certain place.

Anjali: Kavya…at least tell me now…where are we going?

Kavya: I'm going to push you off this cliff…that's in front of you…

Anjali: Kavya!!

Anjali smacked his arm really hard.

Kavya: Hey you talk too much…Like I said wait and see…

Anjali kept on walking, till Kavya stopped. He slowly moved his hands away from her eyes.

Kavya: Now open them…

Anjali slowly opened her eyes. The bright lights ahead of her were blinding her. She kept on opening her eyes and then closing them. She was even rubbing them trying to adjust to the lights, so she could clearly see where she was.

Kavya: Well what do you think?

Anjali's eyes widened as she looked ahead. It was a secluded spot. Lights were everywhere, brightening the place. There were flowers everywhere, all different coloured. Everywhere she looked she could only see the flowers.

Anjali: Kavya...all this…what's…

Kavya passed her a remote or switch of some kind.

Kavya: Here press this

Anjali pressed the button and then jumped, as lights started flashing up in the trees. In big letters the words ANJALI….I LOVE YOU…!!!!! were flashing on and off.

Kavya: So…how do you like the surprise?

Anjali didn't say anything, she just kept on staring at the lights flashing. She then turned towards Kavya and hugged him, as she just simply couldn't contain her delight.

Anjali: Kavya…I love it…but all this…I don't understand…I…I…

Kavya: I wanted to make up for the past…

Anjali: Kavya…how many times do I have to tell you…I want to forget about the past and look forward to our future together

Kavya: I know…that's why I wanted this to be like our first moment together…one of many that will come into our lives…because of how much we love each other...and I promise you Anjali…I will always love you like this…

Anjali looked down. But then Kavya tilted her face up and gently wiped away her tears. Anjali then held Kavya's hand.

Anjali: Kavya don't ever let this love lessen…

Kavya smiled back at her.

Kavya: I promise…this love will only grow for you and for you only…

Both Kavya and Anjali had their arms around each other, as they just watched the lightened words flashing on and off, while the moonlight and the stars were enhancing the beauty of the spot.

Meanwhile back at home, Sujal was sat in his room, going through a file, when his phone started to ring. He picked it up to see the number. It was Kashish. He didn't answer it, instead he cancelled the call and put it back on the desk. The phone rang again. But he still chose to ignore it, till he eventually gave in.

Sujal: Yes…Hello…

Kashish: What took you soooo long…I've been calling you…

Sujal: Well I'm really busy…so bye…

Kashish: Are you still angry with me?

Sujal: Angry? Me? Now why would I be angry with you…No I'm not angry at you…!

Kashish could sense by the way Sujal was talking, that he was still angry at her, for what had happened at the office.

Kashish: I'm sorry…Sujal whatever happened…I didn't mean for it to happen like that…

Sujal: Oh really…

Kashish: Oh don't be like that…come on…I've been thinking about you all day…look I…I…spoke to Neha about what had happened…she told me she understood about what had happened…it was just a misunderstanding…

Sujal: Oh is that what she told you…

Kashish: She also told me about what you did for her…I mean for her father…

Sujal: Yeah well…

Kashish: Well I didn't know I was working for such a good boss…

Sujal: What about life partner?...

Kashish: Well that would depend on if I'm forgiven or not?

Sujal: Well…

Kashish: Anyway you're the one who started this by making fun of me and I'm the one who's asking for forgiveness…count yourself lucky…

Sujal started to smile, as he just sat there listening to Kashish's voice.

Sujal: I guess I am lucky...okay I will forgive you provided you agree to go out with me…only you and me…no one else…

Kashish: Oh really I thought you were busy…

Sujal: Of course…I've got a file here, it's got a photo in it…

Kashish: Photo? Of who?

Sujal: Oh it's someone special to me…close to my heart…

Kashish: Now why have you got a picture of Neha in your file?

Sujal: Now don't you start…

Kashish started to laugh. Eventually even Sujal started to laugh to. Just by hearing her laughter, Sujal would forget everything in the world, even his little bit of anger.

Kashish: I was just messing around…

Sujal: I know so was I…I was just looking at your picture…Didn't get to see you last night did I…so had to make up with your photo…pour my poor heart out to it…

Kashish: Awwww…well you can pour your heart out over the phone…

Sujal: How about in person?...I want to see you…

Kashish: Then just close your eyes and I'll be there…

Sujal: Oh really…hey you know what that means then don't you…

Kashish: What?

Sujal: When I'll be dreaming about you…I can make you do what ever I want…and you won't be able to stop me…

Kashish: Oh really…you just try it…

Sujal: Well come on over then…

Prem: Ahem…ahem…

Sujal looked over his shoulder, as both Prem and Kavya were there, behind him listening to his conversation.

Sujal: Kashish, I'll talk to you later…

Kashish: But…

Before Kashish could say anything else, Sujal cut off the call. She understood that Sujal had cut the call, because someone was there. So she smiled at herself in the mirror and then placed the phone on the table. Picked up Sujal's picture and then kissed it.

Back at the house, Sujal got up from his chair, as Kavya and Prem walked in.

Sujal: What do you two want?

Prem: Don't worry…we didn't hear anything…we came to talk to you about something important…

Sujal: Like?

The next day, Sujal and Kavya had gone to the office, Prem had gone out somewhere. Only Sneha and Kripa were at home.

Sneha: Hey why don't we go out as well…It is a nice day…

Kripa: Yeah we might as well

So both girls got their bags and headed outside, they were about to get into the car, when out of nowhere a car screeched up in front of them and two guys got out, both had guns with them.

Sneha: KRIPA RUNNNNN!!!!!

They tried to run away, the guys managed to grab hold of the girls and then dragged them into the car and drove off.




Here is the new update. Enjoy!!!!

P.S. Let me know what you think of this new part..is it getting better and better. If not what do you want to see more of????
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Posted: 16 years ago
sweet and cute part...😊.
last was shocking..
thnkx for pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
in answer to ur last question -- YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-- its getting better and better and bettter-- i like how the story is progressing pLUS there's romance-- so double dhamaka !!--
liked all the romantic parts-- i hav a feelin aryan's gonna make an entry soon and that makes me happy--
as for the kidnapping part-- i just hope its the guys and not some goondas !! =)
gr8 part !!-- cant wait to see wat happens with the kidnapping thing-- =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part...............the story is gettin better n better...............cont soon............

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