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Posted: 17 years ago
Only 3 comments 😒 come on its the second last part if u want the part quickly then comment and i have already written it 😔
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Posted: 17 years ago
very good going...piyush kii sachchayi bahar aayi achcha hua... lekin sujal , kashish hamesha saath hai.. that is very cooolll... bohat hii interesting jaa rahii hai story... 👏 next part jaldi se post karna , i hope sujal is not hurt aur piyush ka baand sujal bajaya mazza aajaayega..... 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Sai-licious

hi saba!!!! i just caught up on ur FF... ITS MIND BLOWING!!!!!!!!! 😃 but yeh kya ur ending this beautiful story so soon... 😭 😭 😭 i understand bcoz of school but... im gonna miss this FF VERY much!!!!!!!!! 😭 😉

awesome part!!!!!!!! aur gunshot... 😭 gun toh piyush ke haath mein tha... but it may have fell when Sujal and him started to fight... do maybe kashish fires the gunshot... 😕 i hope something like that happens...



awe sad that u just started and its finishing but still one part is left enjoy
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

oyeeeee kamina piyush........ussi ko marna.......he deserves to be killed!! 😡 😡 😡



hmmmmmmmm Piyush ko marna pata nahin keep reading to watch keh kaun mara😉😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: fravashi

ohhhh this piyush is brat 😡 !!!u know aishwarya kill him 😈 . woh gunshot piyush ke liye hi hona chahiye and sujal and kashish should be one 😳 . i wish aisa hi kuch ho 😭 .continue soon yaar plzzzz......can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊



Sab yehi chahte hain keh Piyush mar jaaye sochna pare ga kyun keh abhi tak toh maine aisa kuch bhi nahin socha
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

very good going...piyush kii sachchayi bahar aayi achcha hua... lekin sujal , kashish hamesha saath hai.. that is very cooolll... bohat hii interesting jaa rahii hai story... 👏 next part jaldi se post karna , i hope sujal is not hurt aur piyush ka baand sujal bajaya mazza aajaayega..... 😉



thanx for the lovely comment😊 keep reading
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Posted: 17 years ago

We see a woman coming out of the washroom wearing a bathrobe, water dripping from her hair she looks at the man sleeping peacefully on the bed not wanting to be disturbed but she thought different what could be better than disturbing him so she went to him and shouted in his ear- SUJAL!!!!

She expected him to get up with a jerk but instead she was pulled by him and pinned on the bed with him on top of hers

Sujal- So Mrs. Kashish Sujal Garewaal what do u think u were doing he said burying his face in her neck

Kashish keeps her arms around his neck- waking up my dear hubby

Sujal- Kashish come on ki aur tareeqa nahin hai tumhaare paas

Kashish- Nahin

Sujal became serious- Tumhein pata hai na keh kya hua hai

Kashish her smile vanished as she recalled the memory of that dreadful day which had taken an innocent's life.

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GUNSHOT

SUJAL, Kashish and specially Piyush shocked none of them was hurt they then look in the direction of the doorway and saw Sanjana standing holding her stomach and blood oozing out of it the bullet had hit her [Sanjana had followed Piyush b/c she knew of Piyush's intentions and wanted to stop him] her eyes were wide with shock and she fell on the floor, Piyush rushed to her but after a few minutes she was dead.

After wards the police came and Piyush was arrested he wasn't able to bear that he had killed his sister he went mad and was sent to the mental asylum. Now after 7 years of repentance Piyush Raheja had committed suicide leaving a note that he could not bear the pressure of life anymore and he was sorry for what he had done to Sujal and Kashish and it was time for him to join Sanjana.

----------------------------------------Flashback----------- --------------------------------------------

Kashish closed her eyes trying to forget it; Sujal knew what she was going through so to lighten the atmosphere he kissed her passionately on her forehead which made her smile a little.

Kashish- Sujal ab hato aur mujhe jaane do

Sujal- aisay kaisay jaane doon huh aisay maukay baar baar nahin aate

Kashish- koi aa jaye ga

Sujal- darwaaza lock hai

Kashish- my dear se sweet se hubby humaare kamre mein do darwaaze hain aur main dusre darwaaze ki baat kar rahi hoon aur wahan se koi bhi kabhi bhi aa sakta hai aur agar koi aa gaya to

Sujal did not let her finish b/c he sealed his lips with hers and she eventually gave in now they were side by side Sujal was not on to of hers Sujal was massaging her back and she was pulling his hair.

As Kashish predicted the 2nd door of the room opened and some1 entered the room and Sujal's back was towards her and she saw Kashish pulling his hair she shouted-PAPA!!!

SK quickly separated their 2 year old daughter, Naina had seen them…..well….just seen them

She jumped on the bed- mujhe bhi papa keh baal kheenchne hain

Sujal's eyes were wide and he shouted- KYA!! NO

Naina- Yes!! BHAIYYA

And then their five year old son and their eldest and first child, the symbol of their love, Hiten came in

Hiten- kya hua?

Naina- bhaiyya aao papa keh baal kheenche

Hiten- Ok and he jumped on Sujal

Sujal- owe Kashish mujhe bachao warna tum humaari anniversary keh din widwa ho jao gee [yup it was their 7th anniversary]

Kashish- um….. dekho kids aisa mat karo papa ko dard hoga

Naina- lekin mama bhi to kheench rahi theen

Hiten😲- Kya!! Mama bhi kheench rahi theen phir to hum zaroor khenchein ge

Sujal- beta please mujhe baksh do

Kashish- haan beta plz

Hiten- theeq hai lekin first u have to tell me why u were pulling Dad's hair

Kashish was like keh zameen phate aur wo uske andar gir jaye

Sujal smiles mischievously😉- haan Kashish batao na kyun kheench rahi thi mere baal

She gives an angry glare to Sujal which clearly said 😡- I will kill you

Kashish😉- bachon maine kab mana kiya papa keh baal kheenchne hain na shauq se kheencho

Sujal was shocked😲- nahin nahin dekho bachon main tumhein ice-cream khilane le jaun ga ok now go and get ready

Hiten and Naina😃- yay ice cream and they both run off to get ready

Sujal😉- so wo log mere baal kheench sakte hai [he said this while moving closer and closer]

Kashish tries to run away but Sujal holds her by the waist and brings his face closer and closer and closer and closer their lips were about to touch when they heard a baby cry, Kashish immediately pushed Sujal and went to the little cot in their room to attend their newly born son, Rahul.

Sujal😕- yaar Kashish yeh bache mere hee hain na har waqt apne baap ko sat ate rehte hain


Kashish laughs at his cuteness

Just then Naina and Hiten enter- v r ready

Sujal hugs Kashish from behind and they both look at each other and smile and then look at their children and what a happy family they are and no sorrow or difficulty.

-------This is not the end but a new beginning in their lives--------

Hope u all enjoyed reading my FF as much as I enjoyed writing it and writing the last few lines of this part I was smiling thinking about the family. Guys please all comment even silent readers b/c it has been finished. And I would like to thank all my readers especially who commented b/c they were my encouragement.

Edited by aishwaria - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 AWESOME FF DEAR........LOVED IT........SAD TO SEE IT END......I'M GONNA MISS READING IT......CONTINUE YOUR OTHER FF SOON!!! 😳 😛 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwww sooooooooooo cute!!!!!! a very happy ending!!!!! 😳 😳 im gonna start reading ur other FF, Zindagani!!!!! r u ending that one as well??? plz don't!!! 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow ! very nice n complete FF sach mein i just lved it 😃 👏 n congratulations 2 u dear on a HAPPY ending 😃 👏

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