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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey dear ...gr8 part 👏 👏 and nice promo. 👏 👏 ..cont soon ...waiting for the next part... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

Sujal:Whatttt

Savita: Somil yeh tum kya keh rahe ho, abhi sirf 2 mahine hi to huay hain isay Oxford say aaye huay

Laxmi: haan abhi to aya hai yeh

Roy: Haan tumhe apne bacchay se pyar nahin lekin humay humaarey potey se bohat pyar hai

Sujal: eik minute plz aap sab mujhey dad se baat karne dijye, Dad what are u saying why do u want me to leave

Roy interrupts: because he doesn't love u

Somil: Dad plz let me talk to him, look Sujal there are 3 reasons behind it ok firstly, Chetan called today and

Savita interrupts: kya Chetan ne call kia tha tum ne bataya bhi nahin

Somil: Mom plz, Chetan didn't want to talk to u accha where was I … haan dekho Sujal Chetan ki company mein kuch problems hain aur wo chahta hai keh main wahan ja kar uski company ki problems ko theek kar doon, tum to meray busy schedule fo jaante ho isiliye meray liye to yeh impossible hai, lekin main nahin ja sakta lekin tum to jaa saktay ho because as ppl say u r my carbon copy. Aur is mein tumhara bhi faida hai abhi abhi tum ne kaha keh u need a break and u want to live a normal life so tumhein India mein koi nahin janta u can ;ive simply over there and as u say that u will miss your frendz so tum jao ge India yani Shimla aur Kshitij aur Shiv Mumbai aur Karan Delhi. Lekin tum chaaron eik hee country mein ho gay to eik doosray se il saktay ho lekin kum is tarhan tum un se mil bhi saktay ho aur waapis aaney par unhein itna ziada miss bhi nahin karo gay. What say haan ab tumhara kya khayal hai India ke baaray mein?

Sujal: Dad u have a point but I need some time 2 think

Somil: sure son aur ab aap ka kya khayal hai Dad ki main apnay bete se pyar karta hoon ke nahin

Roy: Somil…….mujhe lagta hai keh tum kuch kuch meri tarhan hoo

All laugh

Sujal: Hey I need to get dressed my friends will be here any minute

And he goes to his room and changes

Soon his friends arrived and they left in his car with Sujal driving, Kshitij on the passenger seat and Shiv and Karan on the back seat.

Sujal: Hey guyz I need to talk to you ppl about something and also want your advice

Shiv: Don't tell me you r getting married

Sujal: Shut up Shiv

Karan: then u have fallen in love

Sujal: God!! Will u guyz let me finish

All become quiet

Sujal continues: ok Dad has given me the offer to live in India for a while

All 3 of them: WHATTTTT

Karan: I beg your pardon

Sujal (irritated): I said Dad has given me the offer to live in India for a while

Shiv: Yaar ab to Uncle (Somil) bhi tum se tang agaye

Sujal (sarcastically): ha ha ha very funny Shiv

Kshitij in a serious tone: why does he want u to live in India

Sujal quickly tells them the reason

Karan: I think u should go yaar infact tu humaare saath hi chalna parson

Sujal: PARSON……yeh kafi jaldi nahin hai

Shiv: Yaar come on zindagi mein pehli baar to Karan ne Aqal ki baat ki hai tu maan le na phir pata nahin kitne saal baad Karan apni jo choti si aqal hai us ka istamaal kare

Kshitij and Sujal laugh

Karan: Atleast mere paas aqal to hai na tere bhejay (head) mein to bhoonsa (hay) bhara hua hai
Kshitij and Sujal laugh more hard

They spend the whole day out fighting, arguing and enjoying and having fun.

Sujal came home very late that night and saw his Dad in the hall talking on the phone

Somil: haan Sameer agar aisa ho gaya to mujhe bohat khushi hogi (then he saw Sujal) Sameer wo main tum se baad mein baat karta hoon wo Sujal agaya hai

Sujal: Dad main India jaane ke liye tayyar hoon aur main parson Kshitij, Shiv aur Karan ke saath hee jaana chahta hoon

Somil: parson….yeh bohat jaldi nahin hai khair choro jaisi tumhaari marzi waise Sujal tum bas wahan ja kar koi aisi waisi harkat mat karma aur sono wahan ki larkion se zara door rehna theek hai

Sujal: Dad don't worry main in sab se waise bhi door hee rehta hoon aur haan jahan tak koi larki pasand aane ka sawaal hai to wo to aap pasand karein ge

Somil: u mean arrange marriage

Sujal: yup

Somil: are u sure?

Sujal: come on Dad u and Mom also had an arranged marriage and it worked out

Somil: yah it did so u won't have any problems with the girl I choose for u

Sujal: no way Dad and if u have so many doubts then I promise that I will only marry the girl of your choice Ok happy now, I am of to sleep now good night Dad

Somil: Good night son

At the same time Sameer was thinking about his conversation with Somil

When the main door opened and a beautiful girl aged 22 entered

Sameer: Kashish beta tum agayeee

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Preview: Kashish and Sameer's conversation
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
amazing parts
i hope the girl soumil chooses is kashish
your fanfic sounds really intresting cant wait 2 read the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
lovely part dear... 👏 and plz cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
👏 nice part!!!

but sujal ko aisa promise karne ki kya zaroorat thi....ab kya hoga?? 😕
Edited by togepe30 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
hey very good part..........plzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey very good part..........plzzzz continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
gr8 part.... 👏 ....cont sooon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3

Sameer: Kashish beta tum agayee

Kashish: Hey Dad, aap abhi tak jaag rahe hain

Sameer: haan who bas Somil se baat kar raha tha

Kashish: Dad Sujal kaun hai?, har koi party mein bolta rehta hai keh u and Sujal must be close frendz but I don't even know who he is

Sameer: Sujal Somil ka beta hai, bara hee pyara baccha hai

Kashish: Dad ab aap plz is Sujal keh tareefon keh pull (bridge) mat bandhna shuru kar deejeeye ga and u were saying main aur Sujal kya jahan tak mujhe yaad parhta hai keh main ne to kabhie is Sujal ko dekha nahin

Sameer: Bare hokey nahin dekha lekin when u were little u plz were best of buddies har waqt shararatien kartein rehtay the eik pal eik doosre se door nahin rehte the pata hai jab hum America shift ho rahe the to tum aur Sujal pure eik hafte tak rote rahe the

Kashish: hmm

Sameer: kya baat hai beta tum kuch khoyi khoyi si lags rahi ho

Kashish nahi dad aisi koi baat nahi hai bas thori thak gayi hoon

Sameer: haan yeh late night parties to thaka dene wali hoti hain

Kashish: Dad who mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hai (she paused and bit her lip)

Sameer: beta tumhe jo baat kehni bina hichkichai (hesitancy) ke kaho

Kashish: Dad who main India jana chahti hoon

Sameer: lekin kyun

Kashish: Dad who main yahan keh mahol se tang aagayee hoon I need a break aur ishi bahane papa (professor Sinha) se bhi mil loongi aur Mehek waghaira sey bhi

Sameer: beta India jaana…… nahin main tumhe nahin jaane donga

Kashish: but dad ..

Sameer: bas Kashish kya main tumhe kabhie kisi baat se inkaar kia hai plz meri baat maan lo aur ab is topic per aur baat nahin hogi

Just then Sameer's cell rings

Kashish goes to her room and slams the door

Sameer picks up the phone

Sameer: Haan Somil bolo

Somil: Who Sujal Shimla jaa raha hai parson

Sameer: kya Shimla ajeeb itefaaq hai

Somil: itefaaq? Kaisa itefaaq?

Sameer: who Somil, Kashish bhi abhi mujh se isi bare mein baat kar rahi thi keh who Shimla jaana chahti hai lekin main ne mana kar diya

Somil: mana kyun kar diya dekh Sujal bhi wahan ja raha hai ab tu apne faisle pe ghor kar reconsider it ok bye

Sameer: bye

Sameer thinks abt it and then goes to Kashish's room and knocks on the door when there is no response he opens the door to find Kashish lying on the bed he goes to her and sits besides her

Sameer (with lots of love) : Kashish beta

Kashish: Dad aap yahan

Sameer: haan who I wanted t talk to u

Kashish: plz Dad I don't want to talk to u now

Sameer: theek hai phir jo main ne tumhara parson ki Shimla ki tickets book karvai hain who main cancel karva detaa hoon b/c u r not talking to me
Kashish: yeah whatever

Sameer start moving out of the room when suddenly Kashish realises what he said and stands up with a jerk

Kashish: KYAAAA?

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Yeh part pehle se thora chota ho gaya but I promise agla part is se bara hoga
Edited by aishwaria - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
Nice part.....and haan chota hai.....post the next one soon.......waiting for kashish n sujal to meet....choo chweet.....america shift hone ke baad 1 week tak rote rahe they dono 😆

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vandu 😉

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