Mistake!! AK story!! Part 53 END...pg 71 - Page 23

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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part
ek musibat khatam nahi hui ke dusri shuru
now what's wrong wid naina why is she taking so much interest in kanan. kripa is not that bad that she can't even except her



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sana
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: iamsmart

gr8 part
ek musibat khatam nahi hui ke dusri shuru
now what's wrong wid naina why is she taking so much interest in kanan. kripa is not that bad that she can't even except her

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Let's see what Naina wants

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sahr_8

kool part
angad and his impatientness
lollll
i liked the part wen he told anita.....lardki hi aisi hai ke mein controll nahi ker pata...something like that
i found that so sweet lol
cnt soon

😳that's how much he likes her

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: za7n4b

grt part i cant wait for kripas reaction



mee too!

jus read da whole fan fic n can't wait!
itz rly great!
keep it up!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pretuna



mee too!

jus read da whole fan fic n can't wait!
itz rly great!
keep it up!

ThanQ

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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow nice part Valli di.
Angad is so impatient, god bless him lolz.
Ab iss naina ka kya problem hai 😡 ?

Muniza
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: muniza75

Wow nice part Valli di.
Angad is so impatient, god bless him lolz.
Ab iss naina ka kya problem hai 😡 ?

Muniza

Thanks munni! Angad is always impatient to get kripa..will see what wold be Naina's problem

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Posted: 18 years ago
now whtz the problem with naina 😡 gosh plzz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part: 32

Angad didn't speak to Naina in the morning and left for office without having breakfast. He called Kripa but spoke to Sur only as Kripa gone out to meet Kanan. He became busy all the day and went to his own apartment. He called Kripa to ask her to visit him in his apartment. Kripa surprised "Kyon, kya huva? Phir sey Naina aunty ke saat jagada kiya tha?"

Angad irritated "I didn't fight, she only started." Kripa smiled at his child like covering his fault "Donon ek hi baat huyi, kyon fight kiya?"

Angad didn't want to explain about it and tried to divert the topic. "Angad! Pehley mujhey batao Aunty ke saat kyon ladayi kiya tha. I don't come unless I know the reason."

Kripa understood his silence and continued "Toh aunty ney hum donon ko milney sey restrict ki thi?" Angad sulked "haan".

Kripa laughed "Unhoney theeki kaha tha na? Mein bhi nahin chahti hoon kuch phaisla honey sey pehley hum donon mile. Mann ko kabu mein rakho, Angad! Khaas kar tumhari apartment ya ghar per nahin aaoongi. Mujhey pata hai tum control nahin kar paogey."

Angad sighed "that's why I didn't want to tell you anything. But you guessed everything rightly."

Kripa smiled and hung up the phone after promising to give him wake-up call and goodnight call until they meet.

After a week Angad was checking his bank statements on computer and found Kripa using the joint account "So! She is getting ready for festive." He affectionately thought and called her. "Hi, Darling! So how are the preparations?"

Kripa surprised "what preparations?"

Angad told how he found out and she laughed "Sur toh har roz sataati rahi ki ussey Indian dresses chahiye. I took her to Anitta's boutique but she wanted to go to some other shops too. Bahut tang kar rahi hai."

Angad smiled "akhir beti kiski hai? She is fulfilling main absence, right? Ghar mein din bar bhaitkar ussey bore hoti hogi. What about putting her in school? She is almost four now."

Kripa agreed "But I want to wait till I get papers in hand, so that she won't feel awkward in front of other kids and teachers."Kripa expressed her fears.

"Common, Kripa! Nothing happens to her. We have lot of international schools and NRI schools. She could fit in one of those. And there no one bothers for others. Let me find out today and I will take her tomorrow for some of those schools." Angad gave his spontaneous decision.

Kripa put a break to his flow of decisions "Sur tumhari biological daughter hai magar you have to adopt her legally. I couldn't give your name in birth certificate."

Angad groaned with disappointment "Adoption!! Meri apni beti ko adoption karna; kya bura kismet lekey aya hoon, main" Kripa chuckled "kismet ko kyon khoss raha hai, apni mann ko kabu mein nahin rakh paya, Angad!. Chalo, forget all this and wait for a month to get everything in your favour."

"One month!! It's too long, Sweety! Tum samjhogi nahin. Bahut dard hota hai. When can I own you?"

Kripa giggled "you already owned me long ago, mera tan toh Prithvi ke saat gayi thi magar meri mann tumhara saat rehgayi." Kripa's soft and husky voice stirred his heart. His eyes moistened and kissed Kripa's picture on screensaver on his mobile. Kripa's tears fell down as the sound of his kiss tangled her spine. Both felt a great urge to meet each other.

Angad drove to Kripa's home aa soon as he had finished his work.

Kripa surprised to see him as he never mentioned in the phone about his visit. Angad greeted Gayatri who came to attend the door bell. Sur came too dragging a lehenga. She screamed with excitement "Papa!!"

Angad stretched his hands to carry her "hai baby! I missed you a lot. How are you darling?" He rained kisses on her face. Sur giggled "I bought lot of dresses, Indian dresses. You wanna see them? They are so pretty. I love them. I went to Anittah buva's boutique too…" she started blabbering excitedly about her shopping. Angad hugged her tightly and kissed her cheeks "Sure!!" Sur started to release herself "I show you them, drop me down, drop me down."

Angad put her down and she dragged him inside. Gayatri admiringly watched them and smiled "Jao, beta, Angad! wo kal sey apni shopping ko lekey itni excite ho rahi hai. Ussey sambhalna mushkil hogaya tha. Bahut jiddi hai, kuch decide karleti hai toh jidd chodti nahin. Kripa toh waisi nahin thi."

Angad gave a grin at Gayatri and side glances to Kripa. He winked at Kripa who was rubbing her neck rolling her tongue inside mouth. Kripa startled at his daring behavior in front of Gayatri and blushed at his naughtiness.

Gayatri smiled and walked into the kitchen as Kripa followed her. Angad surprised to see the whole bed with different clothes more of which were Sur's little dresses. She showed everything putting on her giving poses. Angad gave kisses each time she modeled herself.

Kripa was trying to concentrate on arranging snacks though her heart pining to reach Angad. Gayatri gave a cup of coffee "Jao, yeh coffee usskey liye lekey jao. Yeh snacks bhi." She caressed her head and kissed her forehead "bhagvan jaldi tum donon ko ek kardey" she wiped her tears.

Kripa stopped her tears at the corner of eyes and walked into her room with tray.
Angad was enjoying Sur leaning back on pillows. He gave a stare at Kripa and sat properly. He took the tray and placed on the side table. He pulled her into his lap and hid his face in her hair. Kripa circled her hands around his neck and sobbed silently. After a few seconds relaxation in each other hands they looked into each other's eyes. "I'm missing you a lot, Kripa!"

Kripa shook her head as tears rolling down "I too." She cuddled him kissing his neck. Her soft and warm lips ran a shiver in his spine. He heaved a sigh "maardala Kripa!" he huskily dramatized. Kripa giggled and kissed his neck once again nipping his throat. Angad's heart was jumping with joy and his hands caressing her waist. He kissed her lips, nibbling hard her tongue. He ran his hands inside her shirt and caressed her upper back. His fingers searched for bra hooks and succeeded as his tongue exploring completely her mouth. He moved his hand on her warm back and moved slowly to front. Kripa stopped his hand near under arms signaling about Sur. He released her tongue and looked at Sur as he realizing her presence now. Sur shyly smiled running her tongue to touch her upper chin and ran out of the room with the chocolate bar. She closed the door and giggled at Angad's whisper "thanks."

Kripa slapped his biceps with her hand and hid her face in his chest. "meri beti bahut samjhdar hai. She got my traits but not nave like you." He whispered in her ears nipping the ear lobe. His lips moved to her neck and upper chest. He ran his hands to front exposing her beauty to his hands. Kripa moaned softly nibbling his tongue. He softly smiled at her passion enjoying the sweet pain all over his body. "I badly need you, Kripa! Humara ghar chaley?" Kripa shook her head sideways running her tongue on his teeth. She tried to move his hands when his teeth biting her lower lip as totally aroused but he got strong grip on her. She was heaving her breathe and curled her toes and arched giving more scope to him to explore her upper body. He moved her shirt up and nipped her tips. She gasped for his wet touch and pressed his face to her chest. Both lost their senses and engrossed into each other. Angad's hand was caressing, pressing her waist, hips and thighs. He slowly pulled her skirt up. Kripa came into the world when his hand touched her bare thighs. She tried to stop his hand moving further up.

Sur was running all over the room and suddenly hit the table making a metal vase fall on the floor.

Kripa pushed him back breathing heavily. She sat on the bed pulling her skirt down. She heaved out to calm down herself by pressing her temples with her palms. Angad flushed as he realized how was he carried away with passion. Kripa stole his eyes and got up to leave smiling through shy. He caught her wrist 'don't go, please" he whispered looking pleadingly. She blushed and sat on the bed lowering her eyes. He caressed her strands "I couldn't control. Bahut din hogaya thi na. I'm really missing you." She smiled blushing, "me too." He kissed her nape caressing her back to sooth her breath. She tried to hook back the bra straps. He turned her back and helped her. He pulled her close from behind "can we go out for dinner?" She shook her head sideways by pulling her shirt in place "aaj nahin, phir kabhi"

Both looked at the door as Sur opened the door. Angad gestured with hands to call her. She ran into his hands moving her head "mama! Naani is calling you." Kripa excused herself as her breath came to normal. She turned "coffee garam karkey lati hoon." She took the cup and left. She walked into kitchen and put the coffee on stove.

"Angad yahin khana khayega?" Gayatri questioned Kripa. Kripa shrug her shoulders. "Chalo banadeti hoon, ussey batadena" Gayatri pinched Kripa's cheeks. Kripa smiled and walked into her room. Kripa handed the cup to him "Have dinner and go." Angad lifted his eyes at her "Sure, Madam!" She smiled and piled all the clothes aside.

Angad slide in Kripa's lap placing Sur on his chest by stretching Sur's legs on either side. Sur was singing some English rhymes playing with his shirt buttons.

Kripa adorably watched them and caressing his forehead, stroking his hair. Angad bent Kripa's head and kissed her nose.

"I'm going to apply for Sur's adoption and our marriage registration. Divorce Papers miltey hi hum sab ek hojayeney. I don't want to wait till the auspicious day, muhurat all that cra*. I don't want to waste any more time in my life. So, be prepared for the registration."

Kripa agreed as she was also missing him a lot and eager to join him. "Uss din wo karva chaut wali sari pehenlena. I want to see you as my bride." She blushed and agreed.

Gayatri called Sur for dinner. Angad and Kripa spent some more time with their future plans. Kripa showed all Sur's deresses "yeh sab usney choose karli. Anittah was wondering at her choice." Angad pinched Kripa's cheeks "beti kiski hai? We always have the best choice in the world."Kripa put her tongue out and he grabbed her tongue with his lips.

Angad had dinner after Suryaban reached home and took leave from everyone.
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey di, sorry for not commenting as i was on vacation but now i am back and i read last some parts its fabalous and awesome. please bring them together soon. this story is so good. continue soon


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