MY LIFE......RN fic............ - Page 3

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Raj Naina and Naveen perfect house

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Raj took a spoon and he eat………and………. Nothing happened…..he get now very surprised .naina look at him like' I m smarter than u'and gave monika the real disaster
Dish.
Raj was looking at monika who was now abt to eat it, like a firecracker which is abt to explode. Monika eat one spoon of halawa and…………raj and naina were both confussed……..is she shouting?……crying?….laughing?…….screaming?………she had made face from which ,no one of them can find out what was she feeling . raj was scared and naina was having time of the life time.
Finaaly she shouted very loudly….."Rajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj……………"

Raj:- what happened?

Mona:- I dnt know………par yeh ……..yeh……….kya tha!

Naina who was having hard time for controlling her laughter and raj was having hard time to control his anger.

Naina:- arey tumhe maine banaya hua halwa pasand nahi aaya?

Mona:- it was ………..it was halwa? Uuff……….why do u do this naina?

Naina:- maine kya kiya hai?

Mona:- oho………..so innocent ha! I cnt stand u naina! I cnt!

And she shout loudly " Rajeev………" ( anyone fan of harry potter knows abt banshee thing ! so u can imagine)

Rajeev came out , scared." What happened mom?"

Mona:- we r moving from here …………right now!!!

Rajeev:- but mom……….i wanna play!

Mona just look at him, with her scary looks. Without saying anything Rajeev wear his shoes with tears in his eyes. Naina cnt see him like that …( nor we………….cause he is Rajeev yaar…………..)

So she went to naveen and ask him

naina ask him to do something.
monika was holding rajeev tightly and dragging him, but rajeev was crying nd asking her to leave him. as monika reach shoe rack and wear her sandles...CRCK.....both the heels of her sandle broke.

mona:- oouch.........what the hell? oh....my god! ab main kya karu i need new sandles!

then she look at rajeev." u! u stay here1 i go and get new sandles!" she said very harshaly to him and then she turn to raj and suddenly her expression changed from scarry to puppy like innocent " raj dear, will u plz drop rajeev at my place?"

raj:- yes ! sure!

and she went. rajeev happily hug naina and naveen and said " thanx"

rajeev and naveen both went to play. naina was looking at both very happily unaware of raj looking at her very angrily.

raj:- NAINA!

naina suddenly get alarmed!!

naina:- raj! chilla kyu rahe ho? dar gayi na main!

raj:- what was that?

naina:- what?

dnt u act smart with me, ok! wo halwa, chair or ab ye sandles!

jab tumhe pata hai to pooch kyun rahe ho?

naina! shut up!

how dare u to say shut up to me? i should say this to u when u were calling minika mona!

that was a joke and u know that!

yes i know! and so also i also joke!

now they were argruing so loudly that naveen and raj also came in hall.raj came near naina by siding the chair in front of him. naina also side the chair in front of her.

( hey guys remember the scene in kuch kuch hota hai, when srk and kajol fight after their basketball match, face to face its like that)

raj:-

raj: -see naina i was also making u feel...

naina:- jaleous na! i know that! u cnt ever cheet with me !

raj:- so why do u do this?

naina:- i wanted to teach lesson to monika! i dnt like her!

naveen look horrified at rajeev. but rajeev was cool , dnt even bother wht just naina had said to raj.

raj:- but why u break her sandles?

naina:- rajeev ko yaha rukane ke liye!

raj:- but u hv behaved very bad!and.........

then they both came to know that both rajeev and naveen are looking at them.

raj:- see humnein yeh decide kiya tha ke hum log naveen ke samne kabhi nahi jhagadenge but now tumhari wajah se...........

naina:- wht? meri wajah se! no its ur foult!

raj:- no! u!

naina- raj dnt argue ! its u!

they were saying "u" and coming front...they were so close that naina's nose almost touch raj's nose

naina:- raj apni naak hatao!

raj:- main kyu hatau? tum apni yeh bhaddi si naak hatao?

naina:- wht? bhaddi? to wo kaun tha jisse meri naak bohot pasand thi?

raj: oh! that........galatiya to insaan se hi hoti hai na?

naina:oh....ya!

raj:- yes!

rajeev and naveen both was finding very hard to stop their laughter.

naveen:- u was upset na ke our tv is not working......i dnt know abt other but u can see tom n jerry over here!

finally raj turn and also naina...............naina turn in left direction i.e their room's direction and raj oposite i.e towards the door. when he realise he turn instantly and start walking in same direction as naina..

raj:- tum teh mat samajho ke main tumhare saath hu.....wo wrong direction pakad li thi na..........remember that is my room too....

raj say with a childish tone. like when a kid share a toy with other he 1st make sure that its mine

they both went to the same room.

then rajeev and naveen was abt to go to play when a bell rang. Ting...( its door bell)
naveen open the door.

there stood a man with back at naveen,

naveen:- who r u?

then he suddenly turn. now rajeev and naveen were in the same state thet they were a second ago, to laugh or to not,

there was a man in very funny clothes. ( for refrence, amithabh bacchan in jhoom barabar song) . that man was hiding his face in his hat.

he had a big bag in his hand.

on which it was printed.....Capt. AH.

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Rajeev go near naveen and said in his ears " hey mere dad kehte hai aise logonse door rehna chahiye. wo kuch bahana karke ghar main ghooste hai aur phir bacchoko kidnap karate hai"

eventually that person hear this and drop his bag. naveen was laughing.

rajeev:- ya phir ye salesman hai.

so he turn towards that man and say" dekhiye humein na soap chahiye na comb na shampoo. aap ja saktein hai nahi to main security co bulaunga. ye ek army officer ka ghar hai"

then he remove his cap and went inside refussing the chatter- putter of rajeev.

he turn to naveen who now run at his direction and hug him very tight.

naveen:- hey buddy aap kidher the? kitne dinoke baad aye ho? aap to 3 month may ek baar ate ho na ! this is not fair its 6 months na! kya aap bhi huda uncle.

huda:- oye virappan . humara contract hai tu mujhe uncle nahi kahega . we r buddies right.

naveen:- yes buddy.

now rajeev was looking at them surprisingly.

naveen:- arey rajeev yeh mere dad aur ma ke dost hai! i call him buddy and u can also.

in between monika came back . shouting "rajeev.....

huda turn and see monika. and we all know how is huda?

huda:- wow! oye buddy yeh kaun hai?

naveen:- dnt ask! ma inhe kuch aur kehti hai , dad kuch aur kehti hai, teachers kuch aur mere friends ke dad kuch aur. waise in genaral inka naam monika hai!

monika:- rajeev chalo ghar.

and then she look at huda. curiously she asked him

monika:- aap naina ke rishteydar lagate ho! itne weird to wahi hote hai!

and laugh . took rajeev's hand was going.

huda said to naveen " ab samajh aya tu kya keh raha tha. aur meri phoolan ko weird bolati hai. she had to pay"

naveen:- thats the way! go on buddy ! lagata hai jo ma ne kiya bohot kum tha!

but till then monika had leave the home.

huda:- agali baar ise main naho chodunga!

naveen:- waise ek baat unho ne sahi kahi hai ! ke aap pure weirdo lag rahe ho! yeh kya pehna hai aap ne?

huda:- oye jyada jhaag mat faila! its my jhoom barabar jhoom look yarr! ( remember saif ali khan saying ' its my tom cruise look yaar' in hum tum . the same way huda said)
waise wo sab chod tu abhi bohot chhota hai iske baarein mein janane ke liye. mujhe yeh bata mari phoola aur gabbar kaha hai.

( by the way huda call naina pholan u know, to naveen he call virappan and raj is gabbar. and raj naina call him thakur)

naveen:-ma aur dad ka monika aunty ko lekar jhagada ho gaya!

and he explain everything to huda.

huda:- oh to yeh baat hai! gabber ka dil basanti pe? aur mere phoolan ko tang kiya! is gabber ke liye jay veeru dhoondane hi padenge! par yaar mujhe ye samajh nahi aa raha hai ke jab bhi main aata hu tab har baar ek to yeh log jhagad chuke hote hai, ya phir jhagad te hai!

naveen:- to saari problem ki wajah aap ho!

huda:- oye ........kuch bhi! problem ke baarein mein chod solution dhund.waise jitna main in dono ko janata hu wo ek doosre se door nahi reh sakte to shaam tak wait karate hai aur phir koi plan banate hai!

naveen:- thik hai!

huda:- waise yeh dono hai kaha?

naveen:- apne room main hai!

IN THEIR ROOM

naina was sitting on bed with pillow in her hand , raj had left the room and was in garden. both thinking abt each other.

naina remmber how he and she mate. through the same fight................their diffrances bring them together.


6 YEARS BACK:-

now guys the story is on the same track that now a days going on...
shakti taking box away from raj...............naina shouting at raj...................gahlot's entry.............but the difference is raj had solved ali and poja's problem and nair is again posted at ladak.

huda, ud, ali, and alekh were waiting for pooja and naina at the canteen.shalini and suriji had given them permission to celebrate pooja and ali's freedom and huda insist to celebrate nair's journy back to ladakh also.

pooja and naina enter.

huda:- kitna time lagate ho? humein sirf do ghante mile hai.

pooja:- achcha to ab apna talk time waist kyu kar rahe ho?lets celebrate.

ud:- yep! i got the bottle.

naina:- tum log drinking ke siva celebratte nahi kar sakatein na?

huda nodded and abt to open the bottle when alekh stopped him

alekh:- arey salo kitne ehsaan faramosh ho! jinho ne ye problem solve ki hain unko hi bhool gaye!

ali:- haa ! agar hum sab ko celebrete karana hai to capt. rajveer bhi hamare saath hone chahiye na!

then abhi also enters.

abhi:- to phir chalo raj ke room main !

naina was not keen to go but as all were going she also went.

meanwhile, mr. gahlot had came to KMA and was waiting for raj in his room.
raj enter and shocked to see him

raj:- sir , aap abhi yahan!

gahlot:- kyu nahi aana chhiye tha.

there was a rudeness in his voice, not that loving smile. raj was scare if he knows everything so he try to change the topic

raj:- sir, aap baithiye to sahi aur aap mujhase milne kabhi bhi aa saktein hai! main aap ke liye coffee banata hu!

and he make coffee. and gave it to gahlot. taking that cup gahlot stand up and he throw that cup angrily on floor and slap raj so hard that he fell dawn. blood was ozing from his lips.

there stood all the six cadets and abhi shocked to see that gahlot slap raj.

Raj was in no sense to react. He was just sitting on floor looking dawn, tear were rolling dawn from his cheeks…………..no one of them had seen raj in this condition ……………he was like a small child who had done a big mistake and his dad scolding him……..gahlot was in no different state….he was also crying ……………there was fear in his eyes, fear of loosing him, he can feel the pain that raj will have to undergo. Raj was too scare …………..not that what will happened to him but what will happened to gahlot.

Gahlot pull raj up by holding his coller.

Galot:- how could u do this raj? I trusted u most aur tumne hi?

Raj said with very low voice, still crying like kid :-" mere pass aur duja rasta nahi tha"

Galot push him away
Galot:- rasta nahi tha? Maine tumse vaada kiya tha na ke main tumhari madat karoonga to phir? Ya phir tumhe mujh par bharosa nahi hai?

Galot was sounding disso pointed.
Raj sharply look up. Shaking his head.

Raj: no no………never……….maine aap se ali aur pooja……

Galot:- oh! To doobara apne baap se madat mangane main sharam aati hai!
Aur jo tumne kiya wo? Kya wo besharmi nahi? Tumne chori ki hai raj!

Raj had no answer.

Galot then go near him hold his face.

Galot:- arey tujhe pata hai na iska anjaam kya hoga? Tujhe wo log jail mein dal denge, aur pata nahi tere saath kya kya karenge? Tu samjhata kyu nahi hai………..main kuch bhi nahi kar sakta! Bas tumhe humiliate hota dekhata rahu!

Galot now sit dawn on sofa, very hurt

Galot:- ek………..ek baap ke liye isse sharam ki baat kya ho sakti hai ke wo apne bete ko bacha nahi sakta! Kuch bhi nahi!

He bang his fist on table. Raj sit dawn near him!

Raj:- sir! I m sorry! Par mujhe yeh karana hi tha!

Galot:- aur tumhe iska anjaam pata hai na! Sab log tumhe kya keh kar pukarenge

He take a long pause. And with very difficulty he said " gaddar………..gaddar kahenge wo sab tumhe"
CRASH………………

The bottle that naina was holding slip from her hand. Raj and galot turn towards her. Raj was horrified , he doesn't wanted anyone to know this , not naina at least. She was almost dead by hearing that word.
She look around his room, and there was it on his bed.

That parcel containing red box!!!!!

Raj was abt to went towards her then some officers came there.

Officer:- captain. Rajveer singh shekhawat ur under arrest ! aapne hamarein top security area main chori ki hai aur aap par desh ke khilaaf kaam karneka charge laga hai.u have to come with us!

All were looking horrified and only looking at raj. Galot was now sitting on sofa holding his head. Naina was in no sence. She wasn't able to react the same situation that her bhaiyya may had faced.

Officer:- we want ur uniform and ……….

"Wait a second………….."

all turn back. Raj's senior shakti was there.

Shakti:- officer, further activity will be under me!

Officer:- what?

Shakti:- yes I got the permission . I will deal with him

That officer cursing went from there.

Shakti:- Raj maine tum se kaha tha ke aisa koi kadam mat uthana jis ki wajah se mujhe tumhe arrest karana pade! I never expected this from u! I help u only to see what is inside this box but………..but u stole it!

Raj was looking dawn.

Shakti:- I m sorry captain but u have to go with me!

He handcuffed raj and they were going put of room! All were looking at raj as he passed by them. Raj stopped at naina who was with watery eyes looking at raj. Unknowingly a tear tickle dawn on raj's check. He cant stand this situation further so he went out of room.

Everybody in KMA were looking at that unusual scene. Officers going in front with their head up and behind them raj going with his head dawn.

Abhi:- tum log yahan sambhalo main headquarters jakar ata hu!

He went to leave but turn around and see naina standing alone at back ,

Abhi:- aur naina ka khayal rakhana!

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AT JAIL:-
B.C, shakti, gahlot all were sitting there.
They all were tence cause it was not that simple. Raj had stolen the high security box, which has involvement with the spys.

It was two days they were going here and there and finally they have got the permission to meet raj.
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