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Posted: 18 years ago
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AT PRESENT:-

Knock…….Knock…..

Naina came back to reality.

Naina:- door is open!

Huda came in

Huda:- kyo phoolan aaj mera swagat itna fika? Tujhe pata hai jab bhi main aata hu tab……..

Cutting his words in between…….

Naina:- arey huda tu? Tu kab aaya? and I know……..i know……….tujhe bhook lagati hai……..

Huda:- haa……….aur main abhi kitchen main ja ke aaya hu aur mujhe waha pe kuch bhi nahi mila hai! I m hungry now! Aur yeh kya tune kilvish ki gang join ki hai? ' andhera kayam rahe' ? light kyu band hai?

( well guys kilvish is a character from shaktimaan serial. I think many of u know this. And it is his tagline ' andhera kayam rahe. Its just one of my pj.)

and he turn on the lights.

Naina:- arey huda yeh kya pehna hai tune?

Huda with irritate tone " kitni baar kahu! Its my jhoom barabar jhoom look yaar!"

Naina:-oh!

Huda:- ab tu ye oh baad main kar pahle kuch khaneko de! Its 6pm already ab to dinner ka waqt ho gaya hai!

Naina:- ok! Ok!

They went to kitchen. Raj was out of home for some work and now enter into house.

Raj:- hey thakur kaise ho?

Huda:- oh! Gabbar ke hote hue kaisa hounga?

And they hug each other.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Raj was talking with huda and huda was simultaneously playing video game with naveen.

Huda:- arey yaar aaj itni bhook lagi hai aur yeh phoolan itna slow khaana bana rahi hai!

Naina from kitchen:- " agar koi mera haath batade to jaldi ho jaega.

They all know she was talking abt raj.

So raj sit up and went to kitchen . all food was ready but salad had to cut. So raj took one cucumber to cut.

Huda smile at them and began to sing " saathi haath badhana………." So raj and naina look at him very murderously.

Huda:- haan thik hai main itna bura bhi nahi gaata ! to ghoorna band karo! Chal naveen radio laga meri singing ki to koi kadr nahi karata!

Naveen place his one hand on huda's shoulder like he is consoling him and went to on radio.

Radio jocky:- hellooooooooooo, I m back after that rocking jhoom barabar song. And we hv a next caller. So , hello may I know who is talking?

A:- main rahul!

Rj:- hey hi rahul1 whts up? U was my regular caller to 2 din se kya hua?

Rahul:- kuch nahin yaar I m in love yaar!

Rj:- oho! Our dear rahul is in looooooooovvvvvvvveeeeee! So rahul whts her name?

Rahul:- MONIKA!

Ok thts it! Naina was abt to break the bawl in her hand!

Rahul:- and I wanna dedicate a song to her!

Rj:- ok! And that song is……….

Rahul:- piya tu ab to aaja……..

Rj:- ok! Rahul! Its ur song coming up!

Piya tu ab to aaja…
Shoal sa man dhaheke aake bujhaja…….

Huda was also singing with that song

Tan ki jwala thandi pad jaye aise gale lagana……ha hah haha ……..

And that line came , after which raj regretted for not hearing whatever huda was singing and however bad, huda regretted turning on the radio.

That line was……

Monika oh my darling………………………..

Raj actually smash the cucumber he was chopping.

Next few minutes were so silent which was rare in that house. All were eating very calmly.

credit goes to NAINA

Edited by violence_peace - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
ohhhhhh...my god wat a great part..........jhoom barabar jhoom look 😆 still cant get over it 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44

After dinner raj went to garden and naina to her room…………………..

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IN NAINA'S ROOM:-

She was going to sleep………..but cnt sleep! All the past things were coming in front of her………

AT PAST:-

Abhi had called B.C as naina's father and told him that her mom is not well so he ask if naina could come. B.C knows through which situation naina was going so he allowed her.

Abhi and naina went to naina's home. Her perents were out of town.they search for that room naveen has mention but cnt find anything!

They were existed!!!

Abhi:- ageka plan to mujhe bhi pata nahi ! sirf raj ko hi pata hai. Aur wo……..

Suddenly he stop dead. And turn to naina

Abhi:- raj………..

Naina:- kya?

Abhi:- maine abhi abhi yahan raj ko dekha!

Naina:- what? How could it be possible?

Abhi:- no naina! Maine dekha! Wait a minute! Age ka naksha sirf raj janata tha! Right! Aur naveen ko innocent prove karane ke liye wo kuch bhi kar sakata hai……….

He took a pause look at naina and continue……..

Abhi:- jail se bhaag bhi sakata hai!

Naina look horrified!

Naina:- ha! Aaj sir ko jail se shift karane walw thena! Oh! My god1 abhi sir ke saath wahi ho raha hai jo bhaiyya ke saath hua!

Abhi:- look ! tum yaha ruko main bahar dekhata hu!

And he went out. After some time he came .

Abhi:- bahar koi nahi hai! Par wo aisa jaroor karega!

He place his hand over naina's shievering shoulder ………..

Abhi:- jo naveen ke saath hua wo raj ke saath nahi hoga! Aur hum aisa bilkul nahi hone denge! Main abhi B.C , shakti sir aur mr. Galot se baat karane jaata hu! U stay here or raj agar aye to use rok ke rakhana! And be brave……………..

Abhi went from there……………..leaving naina alone………….with her fear………..of loosing her sir………she sit there on sofa praying that wherever captain is plz save him, protect him…………

Night was darkning ……………it was getting darker………..raj hasn't come neither abhi………….naina was scare …………..the spy's know that there is something in naveen's room…………………..they may c

…………..the spy's know that there is something in naveen's room…………………..they may came here anytime…………..

And…………………TAK TAK TAK…………..
She heard someone's foot steps…………she grasp the night lamp near by and turn all bulbs off………………the foot steps were coming closer and closer…………….she turn and was abt to hit the guy with lamp………………..

credit goes to NAINA

Edited by violence_peace - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
hey contniue soon..cant wait anymore to see who the men is....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
hey pl continue


too good

cant wait for so long
yoginisahakari thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
hey where are u?


pl continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48

" naina……….." that guy shouted!!!!

Naina:- kaun hai?……….sir aap!

She throw that lamp away and went forward. She was not able to see his face. She came more close to him. Now she came feel his worm breath.

. It was very dark. She can hardly see his face.so she went to turn light on but raj held her hand..

raj:- no naina ! lights on mut karo! Warna un logoko shak ho jaega!

Naina help him to sit on a sofa. And she sit by his legs.

Naina:- sir aap……….aap thik to ho na? Aur apko kya jaroorat thi aise bhagane ki? Apko andaja bhi hai aapne kya kiya hai? Apko sari police aur spys sab dhund rahe hai! Aur…..aur apki halat to dekhiye! Apne aisa kyu kiya?

Naina was talking or may I say asking continuesly without letting him answer. When raj open his mouth to say something she asks him one more question.

Finally irritated raj lean forward and keep his hand over naina's mouth. They were so close………she look into his eyes……….and he too………now there was no questions and no need of answers…………blood was oozing from his forehead………..naina slowly touch his forehead…………….that touch of her was so soothing ……….that he forget abt all his pain………..he slowly removed his hand from her mouth…………….

And close his eyes…………..naina was sliding her hand from his face…………he was breathing very fast…………..now the blood was also on naina's hand………..and tears in her eyes………..she look at the blood on her hand…………..and suddenly so fast ……………she hugged him…………..crying hardly…………..mumbling something that sound like a " sorry………"………raj who was unaware wht she gonna do open his eyes……….he cnt believe wht was just happened…………she was holding him so tightly as she gonna loose him any time and she dnt want this…………raj was in dielema
That he should respond that hug or not…………….unknowingly still shocked his hands cover over her………….he push her towards him……….and hug her tight!!!!!!!!!!!

Tear were rolling from his eyes………….well that was " khooshi ke asoon"…………

credit goes to NAINA

Edited by violence_peace - 18 years ago
yoginisahakari thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
hey naina good going

par jaldi update kiya kar yaar

thanks Volilence peace for the update
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
hey great part...plz continue soon

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