MY LIFE......RN fic............ - Page 4

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And when he enter his cell he dant had further courage to go and meet him.

Raj was laying on the floor. it was too dark. His hand was burned .his legs were tied so tightly that it was bleeding. Galot went further went near raj and said " raj…………"

He dnt respond.

" raj…………" and he shake him.

Raj open his eyes and turn around.

His face was blacken. ( remember how naveen was shown in the serial when his dad n mom went to meet him)

Galot hugged him. He was crying.

Galot:- kya haal kar diya hai mere bete ka!
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OUTSIDE THE CELL:-

All others were tensed and sitting waiting for galot to come.

Officer:- dekhiya aap mein se jisse usse milna hai mil lo pata nahi ab dubara naseeb ho ya nahi! To kaun milna chahata hai?

Before anyone could say a voice came behind.

" I want…………….."

it was naina with abhi.

B.C:- cadet singh aap? Aur capt. Abhi? Aap yeh kaise……..

Abhi:- I know sir mujhe naina ko yahan aise nahi laana chahiye tha magar aap janate ho ke is saarein mamale main naina ka kitna involvement hai. I think its not fair agar naina ko capt. Se na milne diya jae.

b.c:- okay! Cadet u may go!

Naina nodded and went to meet him.

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INSIDE:-

Galot:- tumne yeh sab kyu kiya? Apne dost ko innocent sabit karane ke liya na? Use desh drohi, gaddar jinho ne banaya unko sabak sikhane ke liya na? Lekin ab kya fayda tum bhi ab unhi nam se pehchane jaoge!

Raj:- aii baat nahi hai sir………main…

Galot:- haa! Aur main ek insaan ka naam lena to bhul hi gaya tha Naina………

Hearing naina's name raj look up to galot try to say something but then he spot naina. Standing at the door.

Raj try to stop galot.

Raj:- sir aap naina ko kyu bicchme la rahe hai?

Galot:-main?……main naina ko bichhme la raha hu? Wo to tumhare beech kab ki aa chuki hai! Tumne us ladki ke liye yeh sab kiya jis ko tumhari fikr tak nahi! Naveen ke baad tumhari kya halat thi wo sirf main janata hu!

Raj:- sir, plz……

Galot:- aaj mat roko mujhe raj! Kya usne tumhe ek pal ki bhi izzat di hai? Uski har baat tu bas sunata raha aur wo jo chahe wo kehti rahi?

Galot then pause for a sec and said " raj, my son, she doesn't deserve u!"

And was abt to leave when he look at naina. Without saying anything he leave.

Raj was looking helplessly towards her cause 1st time in his life he cant do anything for her…………..naina was crying but trying her best to hide her tears from him. Raj went near her. She was at opposite side of cell so he cnt see her face clearly through bars. But he knew she was lost……..broken .

He went near her. So close. He look into her eyes who were half filled with water. She was hiding her face from him. But he had spotted that ………..he somehow manage to bring his hand out through the bars and he wipe her tears. That soft, worm hands were rough now. It was

That soft, worm hands were rough now. It was burned very badly……by looking at this naina lost her balance and began to cry.

Raj:- naina stop it1 yeh kya kar rahi ho!

She look up. There was a tear also in his eyes. She just keep looking at him and asked " why sir………why?"

He cant told her why he did this…why he was too patient when she was scolding him……..why he dnt care of himself but herself…………..why he was too eager to prove naveen innocent………..he put his one hand over her…….naina hold his hand by her hand……………..

He only stood there looking into her eyes. then suddenly………

" time khatm ho gaya hai. Ab chaliye aap yahan se……" officer said.

It was difficult for them to leave each others hand but raj try to took his hand back but naina was holding it too tightly. Like she dant wanna separate from him. But they have too……………

" maine kaha ab aap yahan se chhaliye varna………."

Raj:- naina , go……………..mujhe kuch nahi hoga…………..just go……….

Naina dent wanted but she had to leave, she wanted to ask so many questions but………………this was not the right time…………….may be some day some other time was designated for them.

After naina went, raj sit back he covered his face and cry…………….cry. he want to drawn himself in the tears. He want to throw out all the outburst he had. He was not able to fulfill his duty .he havnt prove naveen innocent , he cnt hug naina and make her all worries away from her. He has …………….certainly fail. But what can I do?

Suddenly something struck raj.
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IN ACADAMY:-

Naina was sitting in canteen alone. Abhi came there.

Abhi:- aap kya soch rahi hai?

Naina:- mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai! Kya karu ? sir ko jail se bacchau par kaise?
Ya phir bhaiyya ko bekasoor sabit karu? Aur main capt. Sir se poochana bhul gayi ke us red box main kya tha? Kya pata wo box inhone khola tha ya nahi?

Abhi smiles and said " cadet singh aap bohot sochati hai!

Naina confussed ask abhi " kya matlab hai aapka?"

Abhi:- do u really think raj is that idiot!! He is but not that much!!

Naina:- what do u mean by that?

Abhi:- jub tum raj se milke bahar ayi aur main use mila usne mujhe kuch kaha! Abt that box! Usne wo box khola tha. Aur phir se seal kiya tha!

Naina 's face brighten up!!

Naina:-to phir unho ne kta kaha?

Abhi:- us box main sirf ek chit thi! Usme tumhare ghar ka naksha tha! Aur naveen ke room ko mark kiya tha! Par aage kuch bata nahi saka!!!

Naina:- to hum yahan kya kar rahe hai? We should go to my house!! But permission??

Abhi:- naina kabhi kabhi mujhe shak hota hai ke tum naveen ki bahan ho?

Naina:- kyu?

Abhi:- naveen could love to break the rules!! Aur tum permission ki baat kar rahi ho?

Naina stand up " do u got any plan?"

Abhi:- that's like naveen's sis! Yes I hv! Come with me!!

Awesome FF can't wait for next update.

Love,

Saniya

too gud yaar. loved the plot!! cant wait to find out what happens next!!!!!!
update soon

hey very good part.plz contniue soon.cant wait anymore

hey too good

where were u these days

well good going

pl continue and that too soon