{LRL}.....Doomed...End Pg-54 {See Pg-55} - Page 3

I liked it but the suspense seems killing. Sanya yaar it's thrilling and I love thrill. Great going!!!

wah sanya.. aaj to bade surprises mil rahe hain.. pehle love station ka itna achcha ending.. aur ab yeh itna mysterious and exciting new part... sounds very interesting.. cant wait to figure out who THEY are... and i hope woh bechari lifeless body phirse navin ki na ho.. looking forward to the next update..

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

hey sanya

it sounds interesting

but could not make up who amongst the character were they

any way good start
i love suspense

great going
pl continue

soon

Well u were not supposed to make out dat in d very first part...I'll

b dropping hints..Pick them up if u can!!

Originally posted by: mahek-e-gulab

are yaar maine to apne sare nakhun hi chaba diye
dhasu start hai...par yaar in javano ke naam to bata
ne ways gr88 suspense n chill to shod thrill hi bahut sara hai

Javaano k namm bhi bata doongio...jaldi kya hai ;)
BTW dat short poem dat u wrote was sooooooooooooooooooooooo

sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet yaar.....Luv u for

dat....Mwwwwwaaaaaahhhhhh!!

Originally posted by: tina_twinkling_

plz temme will thr be any romance between raj nd naina

All I can say is Naina is gonna share some intresting chemistry wid

Huda, raj & Alekh bt in parts...Baaki who she's paied wid..find it

out for urself.

Originally posted by: seasons

its interesting cont soon.....

THanxx varsh!! I will!!

Originally posted by: luckyrobin

Superb start.. waiting for the story to unfold..

Thanmxx ushma..I just hope ki start ke aage bhi intrest maintain rahe sabka.

Originally posted by: Aamna Saran

I liked it but the suspense seems killing. Sanya yaar it's thrilling

and I love thrill. Great going!!!

THanx Aamna...BtW dont tell me u actually made Suhaan read d entire

Loe Station..I m feeling idiotic...Wat he must b thinking..Being a

real army personnel!!!!!

Originally posted by: khnk_rox

wah sanya.. aaj to bade surprises mil rahe hain.. pehle love station

ka itna achcha ending.. aur ab yeh itna mysterious and exciting new

part... sounds very interesting.. cant wait to figure out who THEY

are... and i hope woh bechari lifeless body phirse navin ki na ho..

looking forward to the next update..

Navin...Kabhi usko bhi baksh dena chahiye...There is no navin in d

fic!!

Hiii Guys,
D initial response sounds good.. I hope I m able to give u guys something intresting!!Here's d nxxt part coming up!!
Gradually i'll b putting up some hints..find out if u can ki who's who in d first part.
Luv,
sanya..