{LRL}.....Doomed...End Pg-54 {See Pg-55} - Page 2

Originally posted by: seasons

ye we also want something new yaar,not usual romance,n i know u will create a new sensation with this new ff.n the preview is superb.all the best yaar.n waiting for ur update........

THanxx Yaar..I m glad u r ready to c some changes!!😃

Originally posted by: khnk_rox

awesome sanya... luuuuuuuuuuuuv the poster..!!! n i think its gr8 that ur trying to move away from the norm.. i know ur gonna make it a nice interesting action packed fast paced story.. really lookin forward to it.. jus one request.. plz try n maintain ur impeccable update speed.. lol.. waiting eagerly for u to start..

THanx dear!!Pace pick up karne mein thoda time lagega bt I'll try to do dat ASAP....& of course I'll b updating daily for as long as possible!

Originally posted by: luckyrobin

Hey.. You've done a good job on te poster.. I liked it.. and looking forward to the next journey with Writer Sanya

😃THanxx Yaar!!Hope I dont dissapoint u!!

Originally posted by: mahek-e-gulab

wow too cool sanya!!!! 👏
maine abhi tujhe scrap kiya new ff ke bare me n to my surprise yahan to posters bhi shap gaye hai 😉 aur rahi baat readers ki to writer sahiba likhna to shuru kijiye line khud ba khud lag jayegi😉😉😉

guddoo's Doomed w8ing eagerly for it 😊

I saw ur scrap..phir socha yahin pe reply kar doongi....Fic is ready to take off..N I'll start as soon as i can!!😃

Hii Guys,
Here I present 2 u my latest fic..Doomed. Here some1 prompted some1 to kill some1. Aur yeh 3 some1s kaun hain I'll tell u somewhere around d middle of d fic when I give u all d reconstruction of dis part.Till then Keep guessing!!& I'll be dropping in some hints.

Waise I do kno ki yeh part is toooooooo short bt d size of d the parts will gradually increase n pace of d story in d initial few parts will b a bit slow. Bt gradually dat will also pick up.
W8ing for ur comments..
Luv,
Sanya..

DOOMED...

PART-1

There was a complete silence. The chillness of the night was making them numb. Two of them looked into each other's eyes. But their eyes show completely different emotions. If one pair of eyes was lit with Happiness then the other was wide with shock and horror.

How on this earth could this thing happen?

But it had happened. The thing that never ever could be imagined.

"What the hell are you waiting for? We don't have any time to waste. Just finish it off fast and let's go. You don't want us to be caught. Do you?" Came a voice.

The eye-contact was broken. Those bright eyes lit up all the more.

"You are right. Let's finish off this story forever and then we won't have any hurdle in our success. Goodbye and Happy Journey to the heaven."

A gunshot followed. A couple of seconds later the lifeless body fell on the ground. The eyes those were filled with shock and horror just a while ago were lifeless now. No emotions...nothing. They were blank. The person who has always been so full of life was DEAD!!

Their lips spread out in a smile as both of them looked at the dead body. The joy of their success could be seen over their faces.

"Poor thing" One of them said.

"You bet... just one mistake can sometimes prove to be fatal."

They looked at each other. This was no less than a victory for them. After all they have had a narrow escape. That was just another dead body for them. They had seen so many and they have never ever cared. They have never cared for other's emotions. Their own missions, their own needs, and their own life... that's the only thing they have ever cared about. One more person was killed by them tonight but that didn't make any difference to them.

They took away a life so that the lifeless body can take away the blame for the dirty game they have been playing for last 6 months.

hey sanya

it sounds interesting

but could not make up who amongst the character were they

any way good start
i love suspense

great going
pl continue

soon 👏

are yaar maine to apne sare nakhun hi chaba diye 😕
dhasu start hai...par yaar in javano ke naam to bata 😳 😆
ne ways gr88 suspense n chill to shod thrill hi bahut sara hai 👏

plz temme will thr be any romance between raj nd naina

Superb start.. waiting for the story to unfold..