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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
i agree with zinu
continue soon
your part are faboulous
-Nisha ❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
PART 5


suman - arcita !!! there you are you wouldnt bealive it laksh came to my house he nearly saw me but lucky he didnt
arcita - i dont no why you are always running away from him just talk to him !! trust me he will forgive you if you dont ill push you on him

suman - you wont do anything like that and if u do im not talking to you
arcita - laksh !!!!! come here sumans calling you
suman - why did you do that for bye
she bumped into laksh and it looked like they was hugging
suman - sorry
she relised it was laksh and kept on hugging him
laksh - umm you can let go now 😳
suman - opps sorry umm look over there
laksh looked and suman disappered
laksh - that was weird umm arcita why does she keep on running away from me
arcita - i know shes been doing it for too long now dont worry ill make you both meet
laksh - okay thanks
arcita and pari thought of a plan
they told laksh to wait in paris room
arcita - umm suman come lets go to pari room shes got this really nice dress you have to see
suman - okay come
she entered an saw laksh face she tried going back but pari and arcita locked the door she faced a different way so laksh wouldnt see her
suman - open the door now !! pari arcita this is not funny
laksh - umm suman , look at me
suman - um i cant my mom told me not to look at good looking boys 🤢
laksh - aww i mean still i want to see you he holded her hand spinned her around looked at her but her hands was covering her face he tried taking her hands of her face but landed on the bed with her ontop she hugged his chest and didint want to get off him if she did he would of saw her
laksh - umm i wouldve liked this hugging but i really want to look at you
arcita and pari came inside
arcita - sorry didnt mean to interupt in you romance
laksh - arcita !! shes hugging me by perpuse so i cant see her
pari - look thats enough now just show him your face he wont be mad
suman - i cant he will get mad when he sees me
laksh - i wont
suman lifted her head and laksh looked at her
laksh - tum !!!
suman got off of laksh
suman - yeah me 😕
laksh - oh so thats why you have been running away you know what just forget about it i was just in a bad mood so sorry
suman - its okay , its was my fault
laksh - umm so friends
suman - yeah friends
pari - aww sww was that soo hard i told you he wouldnt be mad 😃
suman - yeah i guess i was wrong i think we should go downstairs now
laksh - yeah
manthan - oh suman , there you are i was looking everywhere for you remember dance
suman - oh yeah
manthan - come lets dance
laksh looked at kt dancing with eklavya he hated the fact that she was dancing with someone else and not him
he looked at suman dacing with manthan
manthan held her tight and they both danced
laksh - umm sorry manthan , but suman may i dance with you
suman - umm sure
manthan got angery
laksh soon saw the face expressions on kt face and saw she was getting jelous he soon enjoyed making her jelous he holded suman tighter kt eyes was on laksh and suman all of a sudden she was burning with jelousy


hey guys thanks a lot for all your comments they really mean a lot to me
love madz 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 Kt getting jealous. That was really cool.
It was a fab part. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
PART 6




laksh went to his room
kt - umm laksh
laksh was shocked to see kt
laksh - kt tum 😃
kt - umm yeah me umm so how are you laksh
laksh - fine 😛
kt - umm well i saw you dancing with umm suman you both seem kind of close 😡
laksh - no we are just mates ( he soon saw kt jelousy face) umm but shes quite cute
kt - what !!!
laksh - just saying
kt - i mean yeah she is pretty but
laksh - but what .....
kt - bye
nukul came in laksh room
nukul- you seem happy today whats up
laksh - just kt she talked to me after soo long i mean she actually got jelous when she saw me with suman i get this feeling she might come back to me
nukul - okay then i guess the more time you spend with suman the closer you get to kt hahaahha

laksh - nukul your soo great you just gave me a idea i mean if i pretend to like suman maybe kt will get jelous and we will get back together thanks bro
nukul - no problem but why do you always get the goodlooking girls i mean suman its just mind blowing have you seen her face shes sooo 😳
laksh - yeah i know , but i just want my kt bye im going to see suman

sumans room
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laksh - oh hi suman , your looking very pretty
suman - oh thanks laksh 😳
laksh - umm i was thinking me and you umm restaurant
suman - umm sure ill love to go
laksh - okay ill just get ready in 10 minutes me and you in restaurant okay
10 minutes was over
laksh - shall we go
suman - umm yeah
----------- AT THE RESTAURANT ------------
laksh took suman to a very nice restaurant
suman - umm wow this is my favorite restuarant
laksh - really its mine too !!!
suman - wow kool
the waiter came
waiter - umm what will you have sir and madam
they both said together
laksh , suman - chicken tikka please
laksh - hehe i guess we both like the same food
laksh - wow you know you have really nice hands
suman - umm thanks 😕
laksh touched her hands
suman suddenly moved her hands
laksh - oh sorry i just really like your hands there soo soft thats why i wanted to hold them 😛
suman - umm okay then you can hold them i guess 😕
( wierd )
laksh holded her hands
suman - umm so ther food is here soo you can let og of my hand
laksh - oh sorry
they both talked a lot they relised they had a lot in common
they soon finished ther food
laksh - its late lets go home
suman - okay
it was very cold so laksh got his jacket and put it on suman
suman - thanks
laksh - its okay , dont want you to get cold
they entered shanti niketan
kt opended the door
suman - oh hi kt !!!!
kt - oh hi , soo where did you both go 😡
laksh put his arm around suman
laksh - umm well i took her to out favoirite restuarant we chated a lot didnt relise the time
suman - yeah it was really fun thanks laksh for a great time
laksh - no problem i quite enjoyed it to
suman - umm im ganna go bed
manthan looked at them both he didnt like suman going out with laksh
manthan stopped suman
manthna - hi
suman - oh hi , i am really tried goodnight laksh you know we talked soo much we didnt even relise the time
manthan - goodnight 😡
manthan didnt know what was happening to him he kind of liked suman he only knew he for a few days but liked being near her

hey guys i would really like your comments thanks those who replied it meant a lot
love madz 😳


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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part 👏 👏 👏
im glad laksh is trying to get kt bak 😊
update soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 7



suman went to laksh room he was sleeping
suman - laksh wake up !!!!
laksh grabbed suman and she was ontop of him
suman - laksh get off !!!
laksh was sleeping so he didnt know what to do
kt looked from the door she was shocked to see this but didnt know there was nothing going on she walked away
laksh hugged suman and rolled around with suman suddenly they both fell on the floor laksh was ontop of suman he woke up and saw suman

laksh - suman !!! tum umm what are you doing under me
suman - what am i doing under you !! i came to wake you up then you grabbed me while u was sleeping and then we fell down and now your ontop of me soo please get off me !!!
laksh - oh im so sorry, i didnt relise i had such a nice dream didnt want to wake up from it sorry
suman - boys !!! 😡
laksh - excuse me this is got nothing to do with boys you girl
suman - what are you trying to sAY you stupid monkey
laksh - what did you call me come ill sort you out
laksh ran after suman
suman - monkey !!!!!!!!!!! ba save me please from this bandir
laksh - look ba did you hear what she called me now im not ganna leave you
ba - bhas karo suman you shouldnt of called him a monkey
laksh - ha haha 😆
ba - and you laksh you must of done something thats why shes calling you a monkey
laksh - baa your taking her side when im your favorite
ba - hehehe you are my favorite but now my favorite is suman
laksh - oh my god suman now your trying to take my ba away from me you better run
suman - ahhhhhhhhhhhh
suman ran and hide behind manthan
manthan - hi suman what are you doing
suman - shhhh if laksh comes tell him im gone okay
laksh - have you seen suman
manthan - no 😡
laksh left
manthan - his gone now you can let go of my pants god are you trying to take them off
suman - no thanks bye
manthan - wait suman ....
she left
manthan got all sad
suman was in laksh mums room
tripti - soo umm you and laksh was making soo much nosie fighting
suman - oh sorry its jjst his sooo well his such a monkey but his really sweet
tripti - really ill just come back i need to get something 😃

laksh came inside
suman - tripti aunty !!!!
laksh - oh there you are i was looking for you sorry but my mum is not coming hahah
suman - look laksh if you touch me or call me names im ganna scream 😕
laksh - your ganna scream !! 😕
laksh holded suman and put his hand on her mouth
laksh - i must say your looking like a monkey
he came closer to her and sliped over a shoe and fell ontop of suman
suman - laksh
laksh - yes
suman - monkey 😆 😆
laksh - thats it im staying her ontop of you i wont let you go
suman - what !!! noooooo
tripti came in and smiled
tripti - laksh what are you doing im so sorry to distrub in your romance
laksh - its nothing like that
tripti - really its not what im seeing 😆
laksh stood up and so did suman
suman - no aunty its nothing like that me and this monkey no way bye she made a funny face to laksh
laksh - bye these girls
tripti - tell me the truth do you like suman
laksh - yeah 😕
tripti - yes !!! i mean you both look realluy nice together you made me soo happy today just get more close to her then ill get you both married
laksh - married !!!
laksh left and was very confused
tripti - yes this girl is rich i be soo rich if laksh marries her

please reply thank you everyone in this fourm is soo nice
love madz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part. continue soon madz. i miss u so much 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks zinu i will be updating soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 8


manthan is sitting on the stairs suman is coming down
manthan - hi suman !!!
suman - oh hi manthan , you okay
manthan - yeah im fine listen i was kind of thinking maybe you and me i mean umm would you like to go out with me not a date i mean like just 2 friends going out 😛
suman - hehehe umm sure ill love to go with you soo where you taking me huh
manthan - you will have to see init
suman - ahh your soo mean you know how impaitent i am anyways so what time
manthan - umm does 7 sound cool
suman - yeah cool so see you at 7 bye
suman running laksh is eating a banna and chucks it on the floor suman is coming toward laksh and slips over the banana she is about to fall but laksh catches her in his arms they start staring at eachothers for about 5-6 seconds

suman - umm thanks , whoz banana is this because of that banana i couldve fell thanks laksh stupid banana person whoever chucked it here
laksh -hey dont call my mom stupid banana person
suman - opps im so sorry i didnt know youe mum ..
laksh - hhahaha i was just joking the banana was um um um MINE HAHAH
suman - what so you did all this on purpose how imuture i know you like me soo
laksh - what you like me just admit it
suman - are you mad me like a clown like you in your dreams
laksh - yeah whatever so um have you got any plans today
suman - umm yeah im going out with manthan bout 7
laksh - wait a second did you say manthna
suman - yeah
laksh - hahahaah sorry umm his not that kind of guy who takes girls out i mean yeah his goodlooking lots of girls like him but ive never seen him like a girl like you i thought he likes those mini skirts girls like i do
suman - well i guess im different to all those girls im much better and you like mini skirts girls how disgusting you shouldnt like girls by the clothes they wear it should be there personality
laksh - okay bye arent you getting late for your hot date 😆
suman - shut up laksh we are just friends
laksh - okay whatever have fun !!!
suman went to get dressed she looked amazing
this is what she was wearning





laksh came in her room
laksh - what da !!
suman - whats wrong this dress doesnt look nice
laksh - no its looks nice just i didnt knwo you would get all dressed for manthan
suman - please you havent see nothing yet when i go on a date with someone speaical then you would see
manthan stepped in her room
manthan - oh my god your looking gorgous
suman - thanks manthan
suman holded manthans hand
suman - come lets go
manthan stared at her
laksh stared at them and felt angery

please reply i woud really like it
love you all
love madz 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
heheheheheheheheh!!! lakshu getting jealous. dnt worry lakshu. even kt might for you 😳 😆
plz continue soon madz. luv da story. 😳

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