agar tum mil jao laksh and - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
hey nice ff 😛 r u gonna pair laksh with kt or suman?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
continue soon. its going great. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow!! i just read it. its awesome madz. sorry i didn't reply earlier 😭 im waiting for the next part eagerly. 😃 please continue soooon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part
i just found your fanfic today
continue whenever you get the time
-Nisha❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 3



Suman was just on her way to the virani house her dad was with her
dad - okay beta, we are here now i havent visited them for ages
suman - i cant wait to go inside !! i remember tulsi dadi cant remember the rest really shall we go inside now im getting really excited

manthan opened the door his eyes pooped out when he saw suman
suman - oh hi um is tulsi dad there ,
manthan - um gagag gagig
suman - umm sorry i guess you dont speak english or hindi becasue i cant understand what you are saying 😆
manthan snapped out of it
manthan - umm sorry shes there come inside
suman - thanks
tulsi was really happy meeting them after so many years
everyone in the whole parivaar wa in the living room but laksh
tulsi - yeh laksh where is he
arcita - i dont no , i think his in his room come suman ill show you the whole house


sorry its hort onlyhad a bit time i promise it will be longet thanks for l your comments
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Posted: 18 years ago
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CONTINUED .....


arcita showed suman nearly all of the house she went inside manthans room
arcita - oh this is manthans room
manthan was sitting in his bed he looked at suman and arcita
suman - umm nice room , um wait arent you the guy who opened the door the gaga goigo one
manthan - um yeah 😳
suman - haheheheh hha sorry its just really funny
manthan - well please stop it i really hate people laughing at me
arcita - yeah thats true , there was this one time when manthan was ...
before she could say another word manthan gave her a dirty look
arcita - umm nothing
suman - umm okay umm so nice meeting you manthan
manthan - umm bye , and it was very very nice meeting you 😃 they shaked hands
suman- okay then see you around i have to cheak the whole house out bye
manthan - k bye 😳
manthna gazed at her as she went into laksh room
arcita - and there is laksh room umm he doesnt seem to be in his room i think his gone to the bathroom
suman - oh okay
arcita - ahh i really wanted you to meet him , he is really nice

suman looked at his picture
suman - dont tell me that is laksh 😡
arcita - yeah thats him so sweet right
suman - umm yeah 😕
laksh soon came out of the bathroom
arcita - loook his there laksh i want you to meet suman
she turned the other way so he couldnt see her
laksh - umm hi , cant really see you face
suman - good , i mean im really shy 🤢

arcita - come on turn your face just look at him
suman - nooo i dont want to
laksh - please look at me dont be shy im just a boy
suman - umm bye
suman ran really fast she ran out of the house like mad laksh was more egar to see her
laksh- waht was that all about
arcita - i dont no but im going to find out

laksh - crazy girl , umm so how did she look like
arcita - well shes really really pretty
laksh - then i must see her jokes um soo is her dad downstairs
arcita - yeah , she ran like mad she forgot her dad hahahah
laksh went to meet him
laksh - hey uncle , im laksh
sumans dad - oh hi , so have you met my daughter suman
laksh - umm kind of 😕

tulsi - laksh can you take uncle rajeev home
laksh - okay didnt you come in a car
suman dad - umm yeah i think my daughter took it and left me starange
sumans dad - oh well atleast you will get to see my house and my daughter since you kind of saw her 😆
laksh stepped in sumans house suman looked out from the window and saw laksh
suman- wat is her doing here !!! she paniced
laksh - wow wht a big house nice ,

to be continued hope you like it thanks a lot for all your comments

oh i wonder if laksh will see her 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome cocept madz. i miss u so much gurl 😭 didn't talk to since ages..well it sure feels like ages 😕
continue soooooon 😉 👏 😳
Your BFF
- Zinu** && Miss Yah<3
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
👏 👏 It was soo funny.
Well you sure are a creative writer.
Well by the way, plz continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
PART 4


laksh went inside the house suman was in the kitchen
dad- suman suman!!! where are you
suddenly something dropped
laksh - umm i think shes in the kitchen , ill go get her
suman dad just got a phone call
dad - thanks laksh this girl you know i called her soo many anyways i have to go to work i just got a phone call from the office you go meet suman ill just leave bye beta
laksh step into the kitchen suman heard his every step and saw that he was getting closer and closer
laksh - hi !!!
suman paniced and didnt want laksh to see her so she saw a pie and smashed her face into it

laksh - umm why do you have pie on your face 😆
suman - oh um its not a pie its my facial cream umm its really good for the skin 🤔
laksh - okay then umm i guess it was nice meeting you bye i hope next ill see your face
suman - umm bye
laksh - bye you know your voice sounds very farmlier have we met before
suman - nope never seen you in my life 😕
laksh - okay then bye nice talking to you i guess

laksh left suman was relifed
suman - thank god he didnt see my face and i have to go to the virani house tomomrow since its mihir and tuksis anniversary oh god i hope he dont see me

suman got all dressed she was looking very pretty in a green and blue lenga
suman and her dad went to the party suman greeted everyone but laksh
suman was just going to arcita when manthan held her hand
manthan - hi
suman- oh hi manthan
manthan - i must say you are looking very sexy 😉
suman blushed
suman - o thank you manthan your looking very nice too
umm bye i just have to talk to arcita okay bye
manthan - okay bye but you must dance with me


sorry its short ill contine later thanks 4 ur comments
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
Wow!! madz..awesome part. FAB!!
I miss you so much madz 😭 😭 😭
Plz continue soon 👏 👏

Love,
Zinu 😳

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