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Posted: 18 years ago
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i will be updating soon
on thursday soz guys 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 9



Suman - so where are we going 😊
manthan - umm i was thinking cinemas
suman - o cool what film are we going to see
manthan - dead zombies !!! cool init
suman - are you sure beacuse i really wanted to watch partner its got salman khan , katrina kalif and ...
manthan - sorry i dont like watching love films im more into scary movies
suman - okay fine will watch dead zombies 😕
----------------- the cinemas----------------

manthan and suman got there tickets and saw laksh and pari.
suman - omg pari !!! kool and laksh 😕
pari - hi what you doing here we came to watch dead zombies 😛
laksh - oh i wanted to watch partner but she wanted to watch dead zombies.
suman - really i wanted to watch partner too
manthan - guys we are getting late
pari - yeah come i dont want to miss a single minute
manthan - me tooo come suman
they all sat near eachother suman was in the middle near manthan and laksh and pari sat at the end
manthan - if you feel scared feel free to hold me
suman - sure 😕
laksh was sooo angery his face was buring with anger
suman - ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh zombie zimbieeeee she holded on to laksh.
laksh smiled and manthan was angry he took tuman hand off laksh and put it on him
manthan - thats better 😊
suman - umm can i go pelase i dont like this movie
manthan - why its not that scary
laksh - i want to go i dont like this movie
manthan - omg lover boy is scared hahahahhaah
suman walked out
manthan - where are you going
suman - umm bathroom
laksh - umm yeah i need to go bathroom to im bursting
suman - okay come lets go together
they got out of the cinemas
laksh - lets get out of here !!!!! 😕
suman - i am soo with you omg theres a zimbie behind you.
laksh - ahhhhhhhhhhhhh
suman - hahahaha i was just joking
laksh - you better run fast !!!! 😡
suman - ahhhhhhhh
manthan - whats taking them soo long let me cheak
pari - yeah whatever
manthan - wait i cant go to the girls bathroom
pari - fine ill come
they looked in the bathroom
they both wasnt there
manthan - shes gone !!!! 😡 and with that laksh i hate him.
pari - cool down i think they got scared of the movie
manthan - still i wonder where they have gone i cant stand them both together.

pari - why you dont ...... oh my god i knew it
manthan - i do not please ...... 😳
pari - oh why do you always be mean to laksh cant you both just be friends
manthan - no i dont want to be friends with him that stupid loser.

laksh ran after suman and grabbed her arm
laksh - did you have fun scaring me
suman - yes lots of fun 😆
he let go and they both laughed


to b continue please leave comments i would really like that sorry i didnt update i was really busy
thanks
madz 😊




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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
its very nice... please update the next part soon !! im waiting... thx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 10

Suman - should we go home now
laksh - Ummm no lets have some ice cream my treat
suman - okay 😊
laksh - soo what ice cream ??
suman - cookie dough
laksh - 👍🏼 "omg thats my favorite ice cream"
suman - really coool mine too !!! 😊

it soon become dark they sat on a bench and ate ther ice cream and talked for ages they didnt realise the time.

Suman - "umm laksh what time is its getting dark"
laksh - "its 9 o clock omg we got out of the cinema at 5 wow time flys".
suman - omg everyone must be worried and manthan he must be mad.
laksh - "lets make them wait a bit longer theres a realy nice beach it just take 2 minutes come on lets go"
suman - are you sure okay will just stay ther for 20 minutes thats all.
laksh - okay baba come lets goo

its was a nice windy and breezy day the oceans was soo beautiful no 1 was in the beach except suman and laksh.

suman - wow what a nice beach
laksh - yeah i come here often
they both sat in the sand near eachothers and looked at the stars
suman - wow laksh look its soo beautiful
laksh - yeah come lets walk near the ocean
suman - umm okay
laksh pushed her in the ocean
suman -laksh what did you do now im all wet !!1
laksh jumped in the ocean
laksh - look now where both wet
suman - the water is very cold lets get out of here
laksh holded her arm and looked into her eyes
laksh - come on lets have some fun
suman - "your really weird what fun do you have in the night in the ocean"
laksh splashed water on suman
suman splashed some
they began to have a water fight
suman - i want to go now
laksh - umm my watch says its 12 OMG !!! We are late
suman - this is all your fault

she got out of the ocean and so did laksh she folded her arms and felt cold laksh got his jacket and put it on her.

suman and laksh reached home they was soaking wet
everyone looked at them.
tulsi - "where did you both go look at the time its soo late we all was soo worried"
laksh - sorry we lost track of time
suman - im sorry but its all his fault
laksh - thanks not 😡
manthan - suman where did you go i was looking everywhere for you
suman - umm i ..
manthan - ohhh so u was with this fool
manthan walked off in anger

laksh and suman went in there rooms
tripti - soo laksh you was with suman
laksh - yeah im sorry mom we just lost track of time and then.
tripti - "no need to explain i dont blame you i mean suman is a really nice girl and you both would make a very nice couple"
laksh - its nothing like that mom we are just friends
tripti leaves and kt comes in laksh room
kt - laksh , laksh are you okay i was soo worried about you
laksh - you was
kt - umm i mean no i was worried about suman you was with her wasnt you 😕 what did you do
laksh - nothing just stuff 😃
kt - what stuff !!
laksh - "dont worry you dont need to know
kt was soo jelous her face was burning with anger she was mad that laksh didnt tell her what she wanted to hear"
kt - bye !!! 😡

laksh laughs
laksh - yes my plans working 😊 😆 😆

kt go to sumans room
kt - oh hi suman are you okay, i was soo worried about you.
suman - im okay its fine
kt - so where did you go you was with laksh right 😕
suman - yeah we had great fun !!
kt - really what did you do 😡
suman - "umm well we had ice cream and then went to the beach thats all and talked "
kt - oh okay
kt remembered all those times she spent with laksh in the beach.
kt - okay bye
suman - bye i have to go to my auntys house she ganna be mad umm c ya.

Please reply And LeAVE COmment please 😊



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Posted: 18 years ago
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😳ppl reply plz i need more comments

Edited by babygirl - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
hey i like ur fanfic... its very nice..
please continue soon !!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
hey there i s nothing like dat ur fanfic is gr8 !! just hope dat LK end up together !!! i dont want dem to be seperated !! lol 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

DAT WOZ AWSOMEE

CONTINUE SOON !!! 😊

Edited by karanvirani - 17 years ago

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