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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
hey. i just read ur whole fan fic n its really interesting. i have a feeling that angad is bad-just like every1 else thinks so 😆 - i think he's the "boss" of the gang. cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72
thaynkyou 😃 😊 🤗 everyone for your comments!!!!!!!!!!, i really apreciate them and they help me alot in writing the parts, !!!!!!!!! soo thanks!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 5


The room was small, there was only one bed, no sofa, just a bed, with a small TV, a bathroom with only a shower and toilet, and a sink. Angad let her sleep on the bed; he took the floor like a gentleman. and they both fell asleep. They both woke up the next morning, they some how were able to borrow a car, promising to return it even though that was a lie, and they both made there way, they were near the border of Seattle.
K- so where are we going
A- I'm taking you to Seattle
K- oh okay, are we nearly there?
A- yup, should be crossing the border soon
Kripa just nodded and looked out the window, she was sure happy that maybe she would be able to start a new life. And in no time they were in Seattle, after a few hours angad stopped the car in front of a apartment building, kripa was confused, what were they doing here,
K- umm what are we doing here
A- oh sorry I forgot to tell you , I live in Seattle , I was on a business trip in Vancouver
K- oh okay, where am I supposed to stay
A- how should I know
Kripa was just silent
A ( laughing) – with me of course, you don't mind like you can move when you get a job or money, but its totally fine with me
Kripa didn't no what to say, she hardly knew him, yet she could trust him, I mean he hadn't misbehaved with her through out the whole trip.
K- umm okay thank you
A- no prob. It's my pleasure having a beautiful lady staying with me
Kripa didn't know why but she blushed at his comment
And with that they both walked up to the apartment, they both entered, kripa looked around, it sure was a beautiful apartment, well better than the one she lived in, the walls were painted red and some were white, it was indeed very stylish. Angad went into the kitchen and came back with a beer in his hand.
A- okay come I'll show you your room, and he showed her room, which was next to bathroom and on the other side was his room.
A- okay maybe you want to freshen up, but before that we have to get you some clothes and other stuff
K- umm but I have no money
A- I know stupid, I'll pay for them and then you can pay me back when you get a job, and life is back to normal
K- thank you so much but I don't know I mean why would you want to spend money on a stranger
A- hey who said you're a stranger I thought we were friends
Kripa smiles and nods in agreement
And they both went shopping, they came back after two hours with a lot of shopping bags, they brought lots of clothes for her, and they both went into their own rooms, soon kripa freshened up, she came out in a towel forgetting she wasn't in her apartment, when she opened the door she met angad who was walking out of his room, he just looked at her causing her embarrassment, all she said was a soft sorry, and she left for her room, locking the door. She came out later to find angad not home.

It was around 6, she was hungry, she didn't want to cook or touch anything without his permission. A few minutes later he entered.
A- Hey did you eat?
K- uh no
A- good, come lets go to a club and before we can go get something to eat
K- okay
Kripa goes into her room to change, she decide to wear a halter black dress, which she got today, she wore light jewelry, black high heel shoes, she wore a bit of make up which she also brought today, she looked at herself in the mirror she looked completely different she looked hot she had to admit, she definitely didn't look like this before but she was a new person now, she finished doing her hair which she just blow dried straight. And she went to the living room, where angad was talking to someone on the phone
A- okay bye, and he turns around, he is just awe struck by the way kripa looked
A- wow you look gorgeous
Kripa just blushed and said a thank you
A- well I'm just telling the truth, lets go


okay here is the next part,, enjoy!!!and i have decided to change my story line for this ff 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
he is tooooo nice to her..sumthing is nt right 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
wonderful.........do continue soon........but in some way it didn't feel like Angad is a manu character here....he just sounded like some side characters and all.......plz don't mind that.....but it was nice....do continue it!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
hey guys i'm deciding to make this ff a short one!!, i don't want to drag it,and my story didn't turn out they way i had planned there is about7 long parts or even more if i get a new idea
Edited by Chocolate_luver - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
u r talking abt finishing this up?? i dnt even get wht going on in this story.. im too confused..n u want to finish it
😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: ash9

u r talking abt finishing this up?? i dnt even get wht going on in this story.. im too confused..n u want to finish it
😆

😆...lol dw it will be all explained in the parts to come!!!!!... n yeh i have a reason to end it.

Chocolate_luver thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79

guys with the note i'm not finishing the ff soon soon but i'm just saying the ff going be like a short one

Edited by Chocolate_luver - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
oh ok....well I was starting to like it as well.....but obviously among all ur ffs...DESIRE's the best!! 😉

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