Dus PM/SA/AM- pg53: Finale - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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its really good keep it up 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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seems interestin 😛 can't wait 2 read bout PM 😳 update soon lukin 4ward 2 da next part 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah me too
waiting for next part.
it does seems hard to me too but i m sure Samhita can handle it 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Yay, that was a brilliant start 👏 I could actually see Adi giving Yudi a high five, Well done tsamhita 👏 Would love to read the next part 😊
Edited by queenpersephone - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for all ur sweet comments... 😳

Homework???

Manthan walked towards Nisha but was stopped by Yudi.
Yudi: manthan....you remember what we have to do today?
manthan: what???
yudi: u kno...(yudi whispered so Anjali did not hear them) go 2 the library and get our history assingnments done by some dorky girls!
Manthan: oh yea...

Yudi and manthan both went to the library and Adi followed. yudi went into the library and spotted a girl in churidar sitting on the couch with her back towards the boys.
yudi went up and touched her shoulder. the girl turned around....it was mukti. She was wearing a yellow kurta top and jeans

She was the most beautiful girl yudi ever saw. He could not take his eyes off her.
mukti: HEEELLLOOO!!! she said slowly
yudi: ummm oh yea you know who i am rite?
mukti: did you tell me ur name before?...no...so ...no
yudi: lady... i'm yudi...
mukti: YUDI?? who are you?
yudi: none of that matters...you know how lucky you are that i'm speaking to you...million girls would die so i could speak to them
mukti: whatever.
mukti turned around ignoring Yudi
yudi: listen lady! i pick you to do my homework today...
mukti: WOW!!! she said sarcastically
yudi: good... he through the file at her and left.

Adi came running to mukti.
Adi: no mukti..
mukti held his hand and a sly grin crept up on her face. DON't tell him anything ADI.
Adi got worried and left after Prem.
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manthan had given up on the omework thing ages ago. his dad didn't really say anythng if he got a letter at hom and his mom was too involved in crying and taking "revenge" for her to be bothered about Manthan. he decided he would just make up another excuse or probably bunk class todAY

he was walking through the canteen when he bumped into a girl, he didn't see her face and just carried on walking.

girl: hey.. you...stop
manthan ignored her and continued.
the girl walked up to him and held his shoulder from the back. manthan turned around adn saw nisha.
nisha had a very angy look on her face. her clothes were coved in coffee adn manthan guessed by now that he was the cause of this.
nisha: how dare you! sorry bhi nahi kaha!
look at what you did.
manthan: whatever..you wern't looking while walking.
nisha: so it means you were?
manthan: yeh..i was looking
nisha: then you purposely bumped into me...i know guys like you...
manthan could not believe that. no one had ever raised their voice on manthan..manthan virani and now this girl who was in junior year was speaking like this to him?
manthan: just shut-up..do you know who i am ...who my dad is?
nisha: why...don't you know?
at this moment peole started laughing and they could not believe that a girl would stand up to manthan that too a girl who was younger than him.
manthan was staring at nisha with anger in his eyes.
nisha: ghalati tumhari uperse ghoor ghoor lke dekh raheho!(it was your fault and on top of that you are staring at me!)
nisha: give me your coat... give it to me!
manthan was shocked..he hated her aldready but for some reason insults just did not come out of his mouth.
nisha: forget it! looser! saying that she stormed out.
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Adi was in first period....he had not done his homework adn the girl he found to do his homework could not finish it on time so he decided.....
the teacher entered
everyone stood up and Adi looked as cool as a cucumber.
the class carried on and Adi was checking out girls in front of him, beside him adn behind him.
teacher: mr. Vikram Aditya Mehera! will you concentrate. The teacher had the habbit of spitting while he talked. Everyone covered their faces while he talked.
There were only five minutes left for the lesson to end

T: right! i want all your projects in now...
Adi: sir...i realise i should have concentrated! can i collect all the folders as a punishment?
the teacher agreed and Adi wnt round collecting all the people's folders.
he stopped at a girl. all he could see was her long black, thick hair. he could not see her face, only her back but the aura around her was pulling him towards him. she handed in a file and turned to him. She smiled sweetly at him. her rosey lips stretched. Adi was stunned by her beauty.
Adi slowly collected her file not even once looking at it and continued going round. At the end, he looked at a couple of files adn saw they did not have names on them so he simply pasted his name on it. 😆 and gave it to the teacher.
----------who's can the file be?? what will it lead to?------------------
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou so much 👏 👏 👏
i know Samhita who's that file could be? 😳
well i will wait for the next part. 😃
u didn't introduce Soham yet. 😕
Edited by cute Aleesha - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i'll introduce Soham soon!! 😉 don't worry 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haaaaaaaaaaa bring soham soooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn
i love ur fanfic and all the caracteres
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Juts read it i looooooooooooov ur FF plz cont soon! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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The fight - part 1

Class finished and evryone had handed their files in to Adi. Adi spotted a file at random adn wrote his own name on it. Yudi and mukti were in the same class adn Yudi looked at mukti. Mukti smiled at him and showed her thumbs up but as soon as yudi turned around she showed her thumbs down adn smiled evily.

Teacher: you are all dissmissed except for mr. Prem Prerna Sharma and Miss Mytheli Mishra. Adi and Mukti smirked and went outside.
Inside the classroom. Yudi and mytheli came foreword.
teacher: mr. prem...
Prem: call me UD!!
T: mr. yudi...what is this?
the teacher showed a file that had yudi's name on it.
Y: MY H-O-M-E-W-O-R-K he said cheekily
the teacher threw the file at him and said: open it!!!
Yudi opened it and was shocked to find.....

Each page had Thick Bold red writing on it.
the pages read:
I AM YUDI
HISTORY SUCKS
SO I'M NOT DOING MY HOMEWORK
MR BAKSHI - OUR TEACHER
LOOKS LIKE A MONGREL
AND HE SUCKS TOO

yudi was shocked as this was the file mukti prepared. he shot a glance outside and saw a laughing Mukti. Inside even mytheli was laughing.

teacher: i don't see why you are laughing miss mytheli...you did not hand in your homework either.
M:yes i did....loke there's my file.
the teacher looked at it and saw Adi printed on it
T: lies never helps anyone miss mytheli
M:sir this is my file!!
the person who colected it will tell you.
Adi was standing just outside the classroom adn mytheli pulled him in.

M: ask him sir...
T: mr. Adi is this your file?
mytheli was shocked that the person who had collected her file had been behind all this.
A: yes sir...it has my name on it.
Yudi had understood what Adi did and would have smirked at him but he was too angry adn was planning on how to get BAsanti back.

Teacher: i will let Mytheli off with a warning as this is the first day of school. BUt Mr. Yudi....
the teacher spatt. " DO I LOOK LIKE A MONGREL????"
he spatt more in yudi's face and mukti could not tollerate it anymore. she cracked up at seeing Yudi's face adn mr. Bakshi spit at him. She laughed until her sides Ached.

Teacher: Mr. Yudi you will recieve a detention every evening untill the end of this week.

Yudi and mytheli left. Adi and Mukti laughed outside.
Y: miss basanti...
Mu: yuo talking to me??
Y: yes miss basanti..watch out - next time it will be you who will get into trouble!!
Yudi went away. but mukti stayed.

Mytheli: you...you animal..pig...donkey...how dare you!! that was my homework!!!
Adi: beautiful...
My: shut up!!!
A: no...(Adi was a little offended)
My: you just wait till i get my brother on you.
A: what will he do huh?
My: you'll see
chal mukti!!
Mukti: good luck Adi...hint: you would'nt want to mess with her brother.
Adi took that comment lightly and walked off.
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i have to go now but part 2 will be up in a couple of hours!! where Soham will be introduced 😉

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