Dus PM/SA/AM- pg53: Finale - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Completely yummy my dear 👏 👏 👏 Super 👏 👏 Looking forward to the next parts 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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The Fight - Part 2
We see a man getting out of a sports car. and walking in style. He swings his jean jacket on and puts his sun-glasses on. We see his eyes, then nose adn then whole face.

many guys and girls walk past and greet him..
"hi soham" "hey soham"

Tehn we see a girl skating. her eyes, then lips - its Anjali. she turns on her skates and skates with speed down the corridors. She jumps down a flight of stairs and trips. She grabs onto somebody and swings round in their arms. The guy catches her and both look into each other's eyes. The guy is none other than SOham. BOth SOham and anjali stare at each other.

just then a teacher walks past
T: miss Anjali... how many times do i have to tell you - NO SKATING IN THE SCHOOL CORRIDORS!!

Anjali and Soham break apart and anjali skates away saying "ok Mr. Shastri!! in a minute!!"
Soham smiles: "so.. Anjali!!"
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Its lunch now and Yudi, Adi, Manthan, Bhoomi, Abhir, Nisha, Anjali and Soham make their way to the bench. Everyone greets Soham and he sees Anjali there. He goes and sits next to Anjali
s: so anjali...we've met before
Anjali recognizing that he is flirting with her
says: ya..it seems we have!

Meanwhile
Mytheli and mukti get out of class. Her phone rings and she speaks on the phone.
Mytheli to mukti: chal mukti..tu chal!
Mu: kaha?
My: you know where Adi is!
Mu: umm...no..
my: don't lie! bhaiya's in college now and i'll make sure he kicks Adi's a**
mu: look Adi's not all that bad
My: look...i know Adi adn you were best friends ever since Year 3 but he has to be tought a lesson.
And... (mytheli said in a slightly passive tone) i heard yudi eats lunch with Adi... so ...unless you plan on letting him go...
Mukti: no no no no. i'll come with you. i want to see how Prem's dealing with his detentions!
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very frustrated mytheli and mukti walk to the table. Soham's talking to Anjali and flirting with her.
My: bhai!!
Soham turns around and hugs her
My: i need to talk 2 you!
S: tell me
Mytheli - anjali: hey anjali...
Mytheli - Soham: anyway.. there's this guy who insulted me and got me a warning on my first day! Mytheli relates the whole tale and Soham listens calmly.
S: name?
my: umm...Adi...Vikram Aditya Mehra
just then Adi comes to the table holding his coffee.
A: anyone say my name?
Mytheli turns round and is shocked to see him speaking to everone on the table.
Adi: tum!
Mytheli: Tum!
Yudi notices muki and stands up: Tum!
Mukti folds her hands and replies: no...its my ghost!
yudi: look Basanti!
mukti: eh Shakechilli
Yudi: what!
mukti:shakechilli...you know he's....
but before mukti could continue, she was cut through bby Adi and mytheli shouting at each other.
M: bhai...he's the one
A: oh so Soham's ur bhai
M: yes! and he'll brake ur legs
A: whatever, he's my frien
M: bhai i never knew you had such cheap friends!
A: cheap!! how dare you!
M: you just shut-up, she pushes him a little and coffee spills on him.
A: ur dead! he starts chasing mytheli around and soham tries to come in between them.

Adi flings the mug of coffee aiming at Mytheli but it hits Soham

Soham is enraged and grabs a bottle of water and throughs it. the water falls on Anjali.

Anjali picks up her coke and troughs it. It falls on Prem.

Prem throughs beer at mukti

mukti throughs water at nisha by mistake.

nisha seees this as a good oppertunity and gets back at manthan by throughing coffee on his head.

bhoomi and Abhir get in to the fight as well.

soon all are running round outside in the field throughing drinks at eachother. Nisha finds a hose pipe and drenches manthan.

mytheli too finds a pipe and drenches Adi.
Bhoomi takes hold of the pipe and Abhir runs after her. Water is everywhere and it seems everyone is enjoying themselves.

JUST STOP IT! STOP IT THIS INSTANCE!!!!!!!!!!

All of them suddenly stop. they all are in the wierdest positions every. Manhtan's holding nisha by her waste and both are staring into each other's eyes.

Soham's standing and holding Anjali from behind

Yudi has his hand on mukti's mouth so only her eyes are visable and mukti has her hand on yudi's neck

Abhir is holding bhoomi's head adn bhoomi has her arm round his neck

and adi is practically carrying mytheli and swinging her round.

as soon a sthey heard the loud deep voice of the principal they all froze - no matter how strange a position they were in. 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23

Aawww nice parts
Thankyou so much
keep it up........u r a nice writer though.
i can imagine everyone's pic in my mind while readinng this part. its so funny 😆

plz plz plz plz plz plz continue

Edited by cute Aleesha - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
😆
i cud not stop laughing throughout the fight it was soo funny!!
you are such a gud writer!!!!!!
👏

cant wait for the next part............
by da way is the principle janki from kggk?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haha..that was too funny!!!! i love ur ff
plz cont soon! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
wow dat was sooo funi 😆 😆 😆 lol keep it up u doing really well cnt wait
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Adi flings the mug of coffee aiming at Mytheli but it hits Soham

Soham is enraged and grabs a bottle of water and throughs it. the water falls on Anjali.

Anjali picks up her coke and troughs it. It falls on Prem.

Prem throughs beer at mukti

mukti throughs water at nisha by mistake.

nisha seees this as a good oppertunity and gets back at manthan by throughing coffee on his head.

bhoomi and Abhir get in to the fight as well.

soon all are running round outside in the field throughing drinks at eachother. Nisha finds a hose pipe and drenches manthan.

mytheli too finds a pipe and drenches Adi.
Bhoomi takes hold of the pipe and Abhir runs after her. Water is everywhere and it seems everyone is enjoying themselves.

JUST STOP IT! STOP IT THIS INSTANCE!!!!!!!!!!

All of them suddenly stop. they all are in the wierdest positions every. Manhtan's holding nisha by her waste and both are staring into each other's eyes.

Soham's standing and holding Anjali from behind

Yudi has his hand on mukti's mouth so only her eyes are visable and mukti has her hand on yudi's neck

Abhir is holding bhoomi's head adn bhoomi has her arm round his neck

and adi is practically carrying mytheli and swinging her round.

as soon a sthey heard the loud deep voice of the principal they all froze - no matter how strange a position they were in. 😆 This part was sooo funny

Ura really good writer 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
thanks 4 all the lovely comments
i'll do my best to entertain you all! 😃

Punishment!

All 10 were standing in a row bowing their heads down. Not because of shame - at least not the boys - but because the principal indicated how to stand in her office. The principal of the school - princess of Jaipur - Janki Devi

She was lady true to be a princess. With such grace she handled herself and with the arrogance she showed anyone would think she was a royal.
She dressed like a royal
Ate like a royal
Walked and talked like a royal----
and had a temper like a royal

She was a role model for all girls at the college and Lady Dragon for all the guys!
The guys really just stared at the floor not giving an ear to what she was saying - whereas all the five girls who had immence respect for her were somewhat sad.

JD: who started this fight?
i know it cant be the girls but who started it?
no one answered her, they just kept looking at each other.
JD: alright...i see you are all good friends and don't want each other to get into trouble - so i'll punish you all. No matter how good friendship is make sure it does not lead you to the wrong path.

JD: there is a music festival and a dance production our college is hosting in few weks time - so you 10 students will be incharge of the two events. You will go in pairs as i wil decide adn will work on each element of it. All 10 of you, i believe are very creative - no, not in fighting Mr. Yudi! but in dance and music.
So all 10 of you wil perform representing our college at the international abstract street dance competition held at our school.

At this moment all the students' heads lifted up - some in joy and some in shock and some in digust.
Jd: i have all my trust in all you 5 girls but these boys i can't trust. So each girl will go with a boy as a pair. And i will choose who will go with who!

All the girls' faces changed to immediate frowns. There was somehow a wierd feeling that all the girls had - a feeling they knew exactly who they were going to end up with as partners

Sory this is a short part but the next one will be fun and long 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
PS. sorry puremagic - i had to use the "Lady Dragon" thing/ i hope you don't mind! 😕 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanx 4 this part. 👏
plzzz continue 😳

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