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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: damilola

fantastic part
it was sooo romanic

u have my songs on it
i luv those songs

awww they are sooo much in lurve !

ctn soon

awww thankyou!!!!!!, aww i love those songs to esp umbrella, thnks will do

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

awesome...do continue soon.....and only 3 or 4 or 5 parts left.....gonna miss it....

aww thankyou!!!!!!😊, will do, thnx!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Last part

weeks had passed on from that night, kripa was a bit disappointed that she let it happened, since he still hadn't heard Angad say the three magical words that would make a girl's heart melt. She started to doubt whether their relationship would go anywhere or not. Angad on the other hand was confused he didn't know if it was love, until he had a long chat with dev who obviously was deeply in love with Kaajal, and yes it turned out angad was indeed in love with kripa, a lot. He couldn't wait to tell her.

one morning kripa, ran to the bathroom and threw up, she knew it couldn't be good, she told Kaajal about their night and how she just threw up, they both missed classes today giving in excuses, and when Angad and dev asked they just said don't worry, and they didn't bother them, kripa and Kaajal went to the nearest drug store in disguise, Kaajal as a man and kripa as a women just incase they saw someone they knew, the got a pregnancy test. They managed to get out of the store without any trouble but instead of going to the dorm room , they went to Kripa's house, after reaching Kripa's house kripa tested her self, they both waited on the bed anxiously, and it turned out to be POSITIVE , kripa looked at Kaajal, and began to cry.

Ka- kripa don't cry she said hugging her best friend. K- Kaajal can you please do a favor for me, Ka- anything for my best friend, K- can you get all my stuff , and bring it here and don't tell angad about this, I'll call the dean and tell him I left the college. Ka- but kripa angad has a right to know, K- I know but Kaajal he hasn't said I love you yet, what about if he leaves, what if he doesn't want the baby, I can't face hearing that, now just tell him I moved to another state , please for me she said with tears rolling down her cheeks, Ka- okay but I'll miss you at college, and I promise I'll always be there for you, and they both hugged.

One month later for Angad

Angad tired to move on but it was hard, he wondered where had kripa gone, why did she leave him without even saying so, was she not in love with him, he asked Kaajal so many times but she wouldn't tell, him, until one Saturday afternoon when Kaajal and dev were talking about something which led to Angad , and that's when dev spilled out how kripa was so unfair for leaving without telling Angad, D- you know hun he love her a lot, Ka- what, are you serious, D- yeh why, you so shocked, Ka- dev where's angad?, D- in his dorm why?, Ka- just stay here I'll be back, D- sure whatever you say bubs. Kaajal knocked on Angad's door, he opened it later, his eye were red, you could tell he was just crying Ka- angad I have to tell you something , A- come in , Kaajal came in .

Ka- angad I know where kripa is , A- what, Ka- but first listen to me I have something very important to tell you please don't get angry at her after you listen to me it wasn't her fault, she was confused , Kaajal told the whole story to angad. Angad stood there shocked with tears running down his cheeks, A- I'm so happy , Kaajal why didn't she just come to me once, did she keep the baby?, Ka- yes, A- omg I'm going to be a father, can you take kripa out somewhere, but leave the door open I want to surprise her , Ka- deal

Three weeks later after kripa learnt she was pregnant

Kripa got ready, she was going for a check up , she got a cab to the hospital, it was her first check up she was nervous, but excited, she was happy to know that she'd be a mother, it felt good, kripa looked around for her doctor's room when she saw the room number right at the end , and she began to run down the corridor not noticing the board that said "be careful wet floor", and in a few second she was on the floor on her stomach, screaming in pain, a few nurses rushed towards her and that was the last thing she saw until she fell unconscious. Kripa's eye's opened she looked around to notice where she was , she got up with a sudden when she felt a pain in her stomach, "easy child", a doctor said coming into the room, K- doctor what happened, D- I'm sorry dear but you lost your baby, you fell really badly, K- what, is all she could say, she wanted to leave right , she had tears in her eyes. The next day she got discharged she went back home in a dull mood, she wasn't going to go back to college. After a few days, she had to try and move on but it was hard, she took up a fashion designing to keep her mind off her miscarriage. She hadn't told Kaajal about it.

Kaajal called kripa and asked let's go shopping she agreed maybe it would help her, she thought of telling her today about the miscarriage but , she wouldn't not yet she wasn't ready herself to admit and move on that she wasn't pregnant anymore. Kaajal picked her around 6pm and they went to shop. Around 8pm kripa reached home, she dropped her bags on the sofa and went into the kitchen when she noticed , the back door was opened, "strange", she thought, when she went to close it she saw outside the pool lights were on and the pool gate was opened. She went outside , towards the pool when she got the biggest shock of her life.

There were floating candles in the pool that said "kripa will you marry me" , when she heard a voice behind her " kripa will you marry me", she turned to find angad, kripa fel her eyes moist up she ran to him and hugged him crying, A- kripa why did you leave why didn't you tell me, you know how much I missed you?, god I love you soo much, she finally had heard those three magical words she wanted to hear, K- I love you to angad, I love you so much, A- gosh I'm so happy, now stop crying, I don't want to see tears in your eyes . he got down on one of his knees and held her left hand , A- kripa, my princess will you do the honors of marrying this fool, making him your life partner , will you marry me he said as a tear fell down his cheeks, K- yes , with pleasure, he placed the ring on her finger and got up and kissed her sweetly on her lips, he bent down to her stomach and kissed it, about to say something to his unborn child when kripa brought him back up A- what happened, kripa told him everything while crying. Angad stood there still a few minutes after knowing the truth with tears soaking his cheek, and then he embraced kripa into a tight hug, K- I'm sorry I couldn't take care of pour baby, if only I hadn't run, A- don't blame yourself, I guess it was just not meant to be, I love you, K- I love you.

Three years later

You now see someone sitting in a room on the bed, and she begins to speak

V- Now see that's how I met your sexy father, a woman said patting her big tummy, and yes it's non other than kripa

"You'll love him; he'll make a great dad, even though at times he can be a child, but trust me when you grow up in least you'll have someone to play with until we give you a sister or brother"

V- honey I'm home

" looks like his home", she said about to get up from the bed

V- no don't get up stay there and it's none other than angad

A- how are you he said kissing her on the lips softly

K- good just missing you

A- so what did you do today

K- I told baby Jnr. About our love story

A- aww my poor baby he said patting her stomach, did mum bore you today

K- Angad she said hitting his arm, your so mean, if I wasn't so mean I would kick you right now

A- and thank god you are big or else I would be running right now

K- hahaha, anyway what time is the doctors appointment for today

A- umm at 6pm

K- okay

A- I can't believe in a few days you'll be giving birth to my son

K- whoa hold up who said it was yours

A- shut up I'll kill you if you ever say that

K- okay I'm sorry she said brushing his hair as his head was on her lap.

A- okay how about we go shop for the little one and then we'll go to the doctors from there

K- sounds like a plan my couchie pie she said while she pinched his cheeks

A- okay darling don't do that it's not cute

K- but when we were engaged you said you liked it

A- yeah well I was scared if you knew I didn't like it you would break off the wedding

K- wow bubs you think of really unpredictable things but I still love you

A- and I love you too he said kissing her cheeks

A- and love you three he said bending down to kiss her stomach

K- Angad honey don't do that it's really weird

A- fine , jeeze party pooper

K- aww I'm just joking my prince

A- I know you were my princess he said pinching her cheeks

K- oww that hurts

A- now you know

K- oh shut up she said holding his hand as they walked out of their room

They had their own house now, angad joined his dad's work and now was in charge of 50% of the shares, kripa finished her fashion designing course, and ran her own boutique with Kaajal, and as for Kaajal, she is now happily married to dev and had a baby girl named anjali last year.

After a week or so kripa delivered a healthy baby boy who they named Jaiden.

The end!!!!!!!!!!!

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okay so i decided to end it in one part other wise they would really short parts plus i changed the story a bit and yeah, thank you to everyone who rea my ff and commented , it meant alot , thank you heapssss!!!!!!!!!!!🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
beautiful ending
yehhhh....i got to comment first...lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwww, its over!!!! 😭 the ending waz cute tho...i lyke wen angad proposed and at the end i didnt understnad who kripa waz talkin later, haha im slow.

it waz cute wen they were talkin bout wat is and isnt cute at the end.

im sad this one's over but im excited bout u starting sum more...please cont sumthin or start sumthin soon! i look forward to seein sumthin by u soon!

<3 kiran
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was awsum.i really enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
good ending. great job on the fan fic. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 awesome dear sorry for late its mindblowing ending 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

beautiful ending
yehhhh....i got to comment first...lol

awww thankyou!!!!!!!!!!😳😛....hehehehe yep!!!!!!1😃😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kIrAn...E>GA<3

awwwww, its over!!!! 😭 the ending waz cute tho...i lyke wen angad proposed and at the end i didnt understnad who kripa waz talkin later, haha im slow.

it waz cute wen they were talkin bout wat is and isnt cute at the end.

im sad this one's over but im excited bout u starting sum more...please cont sumthin or start sumthin soon! i look forward to seein sumthin by u soon!

<3 kiran
E> GA <3

yeh it is 😭....awww thankyou!!!!😳, lolz hehehehe😆, yeh i loved writing that bit lol, yep i'll keep on writing lolz!!😆, thankyou!!!!!!!!!😃😛

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