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Dammy

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Posted: 18 years ago

#261

omg i luv ur ff !!!
this is great i just read all the parts and they were amazing 👏

aww they are soo falling for each other
asesome ff and ctn soon

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Chocolate_luver

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Thank you: jdsean,kIrAn...E>GA<3,angullgrl91
,damilola for your comments!!! 😃 😳 😊

Part 23

The next day the students found out that college was close for the whole week due to some problems, Prithivi who met up with everyone at caf , P- hey guy good new, I'm having a party at my house you know since colleges out and yeh come plus my cousin is coming there who will be joining our college for the last few moths, he's also a senior, so what say

K- kewl when is it though
A- yeh

P- Monday night starts at 10pm
D- I'm in
Ka- I'll be there

S- Angad are we going she said grabbing his left arm, angad however looked up at kripa who gave a smile

A- um I guess so

P- you kripa

K- anything for you

And they all left , kripa didn't know how to spend her week, she wanted to spend it with angad but sheetal was always around, Kaajal was busy with dev, Prithivi was in his own world, she thought walking around the campus garden when she felt her self being swirled around in the air, she turned to find angad and smiled instantly.

A- how is my sweetheart doing

K- good, so are we spending time with each other this week

A- you know I want to hopefully sheetal has her own plans

A- come on lets go somewhere just me and you

K- okay but where

A- how about your place, I heard your parents are out, he said winking

Kripa hitting his arm, - I'm not a s*** okay I aint so cheap

A- are you sure

K- fine I'm leaving

A- where are you going he said pulling her back , you know I'm joking
K- so are we going

A- Yep let's go

A- Okay meet me at my car in half an hour

Half an hour later kripa met angad and they drove up to her house, which they soon reached after tow hours

A- Bubs I'm hungry he said opening the fridge, K- umm hang on I'll see what we have

A- okay sweetie he said kissing her cheek heading for the TV, Kripa ordered Chinese since there was nothing at home , they watched television, made out once or twice and then he left , kripa had decided to spend tonight at her house and go back to college tomorrow since they had the week off.

K- bye she said kissing him on the lips as he got out

A- cya babe
K- so we doing anything tomorrow or will I meet you at the party
A- you babe that sheetal's always around , so I don't know probably at the party he said and left.
For some reason kripa didn't know whether angad did like her or not I mean why can't he just tell sheetal, it's not that she's in love with him, or is she, wow she didn't want to steal him away from, even though she did like him but it would break her hurt if she got dumped just because of her but what does angad want, I'm not sure maybe he is confused to, I guess I'll have to find out tomorrow night. And she went to bed with that being her last thought.

Next morning she got ready and left for college, arriving two hours later , but Kaajal wasn't in the room, she was probably with dev, kripa thought, hmm she was bored , should she call angad or let him call, it's always her asking to spend time with her, "whatever I'll just call anyway", she dialed his number but there was no response, she called Kaajal up thinking that they all were hanging out some where together and it was true they were at the mall, they told her to meet which she did half an hour later.

But to her surprise , both sheetal and angad were there holding hands, but what got to her the most , angad was actually happy, in fact he hadn't realized she was there until he looked up. she put on a fake smile and went up to them, K- hey guys, they replied with helloz and hi except for angad who thought he was in trouble he could tell she wasn't happy.

K- so what were you guys doing here

D- kripa what do you think you do at a mall

K- shopping
D- nah you don't say

K- sorry she said laughing

The rest of the day the girls brought outfits for the party tonight while the guys just held onto their bag which dev was getting tired of. D- Kaajal hun, don't you think you did enough, Ka- what are you kidding no way, you just don't want to hold the bags, D- well you try holding four bags in each hand, Ka- I doubt you being a man , your not even strong enough to hold eight bags all together, give them here, D- sweety you know I was joking , go and shop more, Ka- aww I love she said kissing him on the lips softly and then walking into another shop with kripa and sheetal.

A- man how do you put up with her, she's always bossing you around, don't you ever get tired of her, D- well angad bro when your in love you can do anything for the person whom you love, see love is a feeling and emotion that turns a person crazy, A- okay your creeping me out what happened to my old bro dev , who could care less, D- well your old dev is now Kaajal's dev, A- oh how romantic he said sarcastically, causing them both to laugh.

They were done shopping and they left , they rested and then around 9pm they got ready and left for the party, everyone was enjoying herself kripa too, but she wanted to spend some time with angad, but sheetal wasn't letting him go , and angad didn't seem to care welll that's what she thought, maybe she was thinking to much. That's until she saw them kiss, ouch she felt her heart break, she couldn't break them apart, she could tell how much sheetal's was in love with him, she didn't deserve him anyway, she had to tell angad they were over , she laughed , wow it only last 24 hours, new record kripa she said feeling her eyes become moist.

Soon she saw angad go outside , great this was a good chance , she went up to him, K- angad, A- hey sweetheart he said kissing her cheek, K- um angad I have to say something important, A- first dive me a kiss on the lips, K- no it's important, angad totally ignoring her pulled her in for a passionate kiss, when they broke apart they saw a teary sheetal, A- oh crap , he said leaving kripa running after sheetal when kripa stopped him, K- angad where over sheetal loves you I can't do that to her , strange it might sound before I could care less what others want I always got what I want, but I think your confused, your probably only attracted to me by my beauty maybe , where me I think I'm falling for you but before it goes further I'll stop my self, I think you should go to sheetal, bye it was nice while it lasted she said about to cry she ran back in she had to tell Kaajal, what was happening to her why was it so hard.

Ka- kripa I'm sorry to say , but maybe you have fallen in love with him these past months fighting, making him, jealous, trying to get his attention

K- crap she was right , but she felt bad for sheetal, why did she have to say what she said yesterday , admitting to Angad she liked him, oh well its over she'll just move , anyway how hard is it to get over a guy you just realized you are in love with
Kripa wiped her tear, and decided to enjoy herself, angad on the other side came up with some excuse which sheetal brought after a lot of persuading, but angad was hurt, how could kripa just dump him, did she not like him? That's when he saw her dancing with some guy, seemed as if he was Prithivi's cousin.

He felt a pang of jealousy instantly when he put his arms around her waist bringing her closer for the slow dance. He didn't like it, so that's why she dumped him for another guy, but she said she was falling for me, gosh I should have just broken up with sheetal. After thinking for 10 minutes about the heck was going on tonight, he couldn't spot kripa and that guy where could they be.

That's when he spotted them walking upstairs leaving the parting, when the thought of him touching her came to his mind, "hell he wasn't going to let that happen, they weren't over yet, and he wasn't going to let kripa go, poor boy didn't know he was deeply in love , well you couldn't blame him he didn't believe in it . he followed them upstairs.

10 minutes before- kripa and the guy were dancing when he asked her if she wanted something to drink, which she agreed upon trying to enjoy herself, he handed her a drink when it accidentally spilled when someone barged in between of them trying get a drink as well , that's when he offered to show her a room to clean herself and left.

Angad saw them heading for a room, he could feel his blood heating up within him, he wanted to kick that boys a** right now

Let's just say it was going to be ONE CRAZY NIGHT TODAY, changing a lot

okay that's all i have for today hope you like it, please comment!!

Edited by Chocolate_luver - 18 years ago

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

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Posted: 18 years ago

#263

wow. awesome part. ur fan fic is really really good. im alwayz excited 2 read more. cont soon.

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Kristina

@jdsean

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Posted: 18 years ago

#264

Awesome part. I didn't expect Kripa to break up with Angad. But I mean she has a point he hasn't even tried to break up with Sheetal. Now I hope he realizes that he's in love though. Can;t wait to see what happens in the rest of the night.

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meme25

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Posted: 18 years ago

#265

great part.........surprises r everywhere.......stupid sheetal she better buzz off.....lol......anywayz continue soon

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sameira

@AKForever

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Posted: 18 years ago

#266

het great part
continue soon

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Sumra

@Shazia_haya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#267

1st-ly I can't believe I missed a part.......2nd-ly it was awesome....gr8.....I totally loved it!!

Do continue soon.....and lol....jealous Angad!!!

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Jennifer Mall

@kIrAn...E>GA<3

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Posted: 18 years ago

#268

omg, i vowed today i wudnt comment anyone! but gurl!!!!!! dat part kicked a$$!!!

man, so much emotion!!!! dude, i got a rush frum reading it!!!! dats lyke impossible! wonder watll angad will do...? hmmmm... 😆

CONT SOON!!!!!! ill be waitin!!!!

<3 kiran
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Jassie

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Posted: 18 years ago

#269

i juss caught up today FANTASTIC!! fanfic im really enjoying it and i also love No Time For Love && Unwanted Love!!!! there all so interest'n wow FABULASZ u r such a good writer acully ur not good yyour AWESOME!!!! 😃 😃

<3 😊

TOO GOOD!!!

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