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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

lol...hey that was pretty good.......and the last bit....lol....a guy mimicking a girl-I heard but a guy mimicking a guy and also in a situation like the one in your part...lol....it was funny......do continue soon...

thanks😛 lol yeh i luved wriing that bit i made me laugh as well thanks!!😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 awesome dear last 3 parts 👏 👏

Thankyou!!😳😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ixi-shaj

How jealous can u get?!!!!! 😉
Nice plan,at least shes asked prithvis permission, otherwise he might get hurt in the long run...

hehehe i reckon aye lolz....thanks for commenting!!!😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

awww thanks!!😛😊

*Next part comming soon*

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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 20


It was the morning they all were leaving for dream world, dev and Kaajal went in one car, angad in his car and Prithivi and kripa took his car. The trip was three hours by car. Dev and Kaajal had already read so did angad who was getting pissed standing around waiting for the two late comers.

D- jeeze angad have patience man
A- bro why the heck do we have to wait for them? Let's just go do our own thing
Ka- no angad that's rude we should wait for them
D- yea listen to her bro she's true
A- yeh whatever your just whipped
D- so what it's true I am whipped
Ka- aww I love you
D- love you to hun
And both head for a sweet kiss on the lips
A- great I'm stuck with the two love birds, when he turns around spotting kripa and Prithivi walking hand in hand,
A- look they're here
K- hey sorry we were late,
P- yeah sorry but I'm not to blame, it's hard keeping your eyes on the road when you a beautiful lady sitting right next to you
K- oh stop she said hitting his arm, "damn his good"
A- yeah yeah whatever so what are we doing first
D- well why don't we relax and then around 7ish they are having a pool party
A- sounds like plan
P- ooh can't wait, he said happily
A- don't talk like that you sound like a girl he said receiving weird stares from everyone

D- anyway the dress theme is your swimsuits
A- damn look like it's going to be one heck of a party he said grinning while looking at a girl walking by, kripa pinches Prithivi who gives her a stare "what was that for", she replied by signaling to say something back. P- yea finally I get to see Kripa's sexy body and that to in her bikini, whoa hold up did he just say that, he looked around too see each of their expressions, dev and Kaajal didn't were to surprised to say anything, Kripa's eye were dilated and well angad head turned away from that girl and gave uh what was it?, yep a jealous look. P- whoops did I just say that out loud, he said cutely, kripa laughed, K- oh Prithivi your such a sweetheart, P- I'm not a sweetheart , I'm your sweetheart, k- oh stop it she said pretending to be shy, Ka- aww how sweet, how come you don't say stuff like this dev, gosh your so unromantic, D- whoa hold up sweety, what did I just say a few minutes go , K- that was a few minutes ago I'm talking about now, gosh your pathetic she said walking off, D- hang on jaan, okay I'm sorry, from now on I'm your aashiq he said running after her. A- what fool, K- jealous cause you have no girl around you, A- shut up miss universe, K- oh btw pool boy will you be doing a shift tonight at the party she said with a grin , " whatever but make sure you tell your co workers to clean the pool before the party she said leaving with Prithivi.

They both headed to their rooms when they reached Kripa's room which was 214, K- oh cool your next to me , P- nah I'm 215 on the other side, K- then who's 216?, " I am" they turned to find angad standing there with a grin on his face. K- Great that's all I need, she said opening the door, P- well I'll see you both at the party, K- yep okay, and they all went into their rooms.

Hours passed on it was now 6, kripa started to get ready she went in the bathroom and came out an hour later looking absolutely stunning in her black bikini wearing a mini white denim skirt, she styled her hair by giving it the wet look , she wore lip gloss and outline her eyes with her black eyeliner, she wore her small diamond hoops and she was done, she looked at the time it was already 7 " great everyone would already be there, ready kripa it's time to make your entrance she said locking the door behind and she was off.


She made her way and she entered the poolside , she continued to smile as she noticed eyes on her but where was he , she kept on walking when she spotted rest of the gang except for angad, " where was he" she said to herself, when she saw him by the bar looking hot shirtless, in a pair of black billabong board shorts that came up to his knees, while holding a girl and flirting with her

"what that's not fair , all this hard work for nothing, no way kripa think you need to get his attention"




okay so here the next part hope you like i!!t....comment plz 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
AWESUM prt!!! loved it!!! jealous Angad is just soooooo HOT!!! love it!!!
gosh, Prithvi is like a natural flirt!!! dies he really like Kripa or sumthing???
nahhh, cant be, he was eyeing Aaliyah, rite??? anywho, Dev-Kaajjal r really
cute nd funny!!! CANNOT wait to read the next prt, more jealous Angad &
Kripa... continue soon!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow. great part. sry i didnt comment b4. i totally 4got about ur fan fic. newayz, cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi..i just catched up on parts..after ur vacation..welcome back...and must say story is developing really nice...cant wait to c wht happens next..great job so far...continue soon.. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
lol..I guess Angad's not slow...he's got something up his sleeve too.....lol....it was cool...do continue soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago

a big thanks 😃 😛 🤗 to berkeleygirl818, angullgrl91, armaghan0, sweetangle04, Shazia_haya for commenting, i really appreciate your comments
Part 21


Kripa walked up to Prithivi who was shirtless wearing white board shorts, P- oh hey kripa, so did he see you yet, K- no that a** is too busy with another girl, P- well what's the next plan, K- hmm I don't know let me think, P- well why don't you think here while I go meet that girl he said admiring a girl from far, K- sorry but your staying right here, P- what that's so unfair, gosh no wonder he doesn't like you , so bossy, K- WHAT, I'm so not, P- whatever now what are we going to do, K- ooh let's go over to the bar alright and just follow my lead, P- well that's what I'm doing, K- good, she said kissing his cheek and linking her arm into his and they walked towards the bar.

P- hey angad hows it going
A- good until you came his said underneath his breath
A- good
Angad became busy with the girl again , totally ignoring kripa, she had enough she was about to strangle the damn girl as well as him.
K- Prithivi I want a drink
P- Why don't you ask the bartender, causing angad to laugh?
K- Shut up pool boy why don't you go clean, and you she said Prithivi " ufff I hate you" she was about to leave when she hear Prithivi

P- teekhi teekhi teri akhiyaan,
chhooke chhooke behkati hai,
dekh dekh naa yun mujhko,
hosh hosh le jaati hai,
deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye naa,
humse khafa koi ho jaye naa

kripa turned to see Prithivi walking towards her " d*** how come I don't think like this" and she played on

K- touch me don't touch me don't touch me soniyaa -

chhod chhod meri raahon ko,
taubaa taubaa dar lagtaa hai,
aisi vaisi teri baaton se,
ishq vishk saa jagtaa hai,
deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye naa,
humse khataa koi ho jaaye naa
touch me don't touch me don't touch me soniyaa -

Prithivi lifted her up and took her to the middle and in no time everyone was dancing included dev-Kaajal and angad with that girl, then partners begun to change going around in circles, when finally kripa reached her destination, angad.

She grinned to herself, pushing him away from her K- touch me don't touch me don't touch me soniyaa - . angad pulled her from her waist bringing her towards him then picking her up, kripa who was on top of the world "finally it worked" when

SPLASH!

Angad through her into the pool, A- so is the water clean enough for miss universe he said laughing, enjoy your swim sweetheart he said walking back to the bar. Ooohh kripa was mad, "that's it "she said getting out avoiding the looks from everyone including Prithivi who was trying not to laugh. She marched right up to him, grabbed someone's drink and through it on him and turned to leave when angad grab's her hand turns her around and splashes his drink oh her.

K- Ahhh you freak, you ruined my skirt, A- oh go and cry, K-ufff I hate you she said leaving him. P- so did it work, Prithivi said walking towards kripa, K- no that idiot oh gosh his just too much, P- don't worry leave it up to me I'll think of something, K- thanks you've been a really good friend, are you trying to get rid of me she said laughing slightly , P- me no way your like a sister I never had he said taking her into his arms giving her a friendly hug, what they both didn't know was a pair of eyes were watching them, yep and those pair of eyes with a glint of jealousy belonged to angad Khanna.

P- come on let's go have some fun and then we'll think about a plan, K- alright let's go , and left to dance with the rest of the crowd unaware of angad watching except for Prithivi, angad gets up to leave for the bathrooms, when Prithivi get an idea, grinning to himself he tells kripa and walks off.

Angad reaches the bathroom and washes his face, why did he care to see her with, could it be he was falling for her, nah she's such a brat, or maybe I'm just jealous of that idiot he said to himself, but why should I be what does he have that I don't, nah I aint jealous I just hate him yeah that's what is. Angad turned around to leave when he heard Prithivi talking to a few other guys.

G1- hey wassup Prithivi
G2- yo bro hows it going long time know see, what you doing here
P- hey guys, nothing with a couple of friends
G1- so we see you've getting busy with that chick huh what's her name
P -kripa
G2 -yeh, so you serious about her or
P- nah no way man please you know me use them then dump then
G1- man you'll never change, you dog

Angad who was about to boil, why? He didn't know marched straight up to Prithivi and punched him in the stomach ,

A- YOU STAY AWAY FROM HER GET IT OR ELSE

P- what are you going to do huh, what's it to anyway, why do you care it's between me and her

A- Prithivi I'm warning you he said leaving a very proud Prithivi behind

P- hey thanks guys , well done must say your both natural

Angad walks right up to kripa who was dancing, holding her by the shoulders, A- and you stay away from Prithivi , his intentions are not right , kripa pushed him away try to suppress her smile, she knew what he was talking about but played along, K- what the heck is your problem pool boy gossh go and annoy someone else, and why should I believe you I rather trust Prithivi, Burn that last bit hit him, why he didn't know, A- fine whatever, go to him, K- I will she said leaving him, A- fine but to can play this game he said to himself .




Okay here's the next part hope you like it, please comment 😊 oh and i wont be able to continue until 31st of july coz i have relatives coming over and i have summer project to do and books to read unfortunately ,

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