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Posted: 17 years ago
k-kyun ..kyun kyun..[her chin on his shoulder his hands arnd her hair]...maine kya gunah kia hai?...mere andaar hi khot hai koi..jo harr barr mere saath hi!


s-tum mein khot nahi! aisa sochna bhi mat!

k is still sobbin in same position,completely wrapped in his arms,& secured in his company,& his warm fingers caressin her cares,makin her feel nice

aise hi kuch der dono issi haalat mein rehte hain

s k ko thoda seperate karta hai,2 tak a look at her pretty face

& realises ki wo to rote rote so gai

s k ko comfortably bed pe thik se letatha hai,uske sar pe pyaar se haath ferta hai,covers her with the blanket properly

he has a small satisfied smile on his face,2 c her safe,& peacefully sleepin

s kuch der uske paas baithke,kych moments usko naajaane kyun dekhte hue bitata hai

pr jo ye saab dekh raha hai,sarwaze ke paas se says

pr-chalein!

s realises his presence jo k ke saath wo bhul hi gaya tha

s-oh haan!..haan..chal!

both come out of the k ka room



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Posted: 17 years ago
wwwowww nice prt🤗👍🏼👏ab toh en ki shadi ho jani chaheye i must say😉 plzzzzz continueeeeee
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow looks like sujal is fallin in love with kashish i just loved the way sujal consoled kashish even toh the words not many but the silence did the magic lovely part cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
pr & s sit on the bar with a drink

pr-kaun hai ye?

s-kashish! [his eyes r wellin up,he cldnt bear pain of k]

pr-kya lagti hai teri?

s-k..koi nahi?...er..drink?

pr-hmm....

s makes drink,& gives 2 pr,& strts gulpin his,as him the drink will ease the pain inside him

s-mujhe mili thi,suicide karne jaa rahi thi!

pr-kya??????????

s-phir bachake ghar leke aaya tha!

pr-iska parivaar?

s-koi nahi hai,left her ! alone! all alone!

pr-kyun?

s-kyun?..kyun? [anger risin thinkin abt it]..kyunki kisi jaanwar ko,aurat ki izaat karna nahi aata,jaise bhedie aaj maine paal rakhe the,saamne aa jae naa to..rape,hua hai!

pr-oh no!sad!

s-hmm,very! [now s is almost drunk]...aft a minute of silence,& gulpin most of the drinks in btw}..y did it happen 2 her! y damn it!..she is so nice,so good!

pr-kya karna hai?..kahan rakhna hai usko?

s-matlab?..wo yahin rehti hai!

pr-usse yahan se kabhi na kabhi jaana hoga naa,shadai ke baad usse arcie thode naa rakhegi!

s-NAHI! kashish kahin nahi jaegi! akela nahi chodunga usko! use kuch ho gaya to!

both r silent,s gulps some more

pr-hmm....u like her!

s-hmm?..emm..no..err...[ankhen chura raha hai]..no..i mean she is a nice gal!

pr-u love her! i knw u love her! care 4 her! kyun iss beimaani shadai mein apni,kashsih ki aur archie ki zindagi kharab karna chahta hai! jst go & propose her!

s-yeah propose her..aur jo bachci kuchi dosti bani hai,wo bhi khatam ho jae!

pr-sgar main kahun she loves u! wo nahi bata pati yunki tu nahi bata pata idot! be a guy! tell her!

s-she loves me? [a smile comes]//i mean r u serious!..oye mazak mat kar yaar!..

pr-abbey tere is drink ki kasam! tu andha hai kya,main ek din mein pehchaan gaya,tu itne din nahi samajh paya!

s-bol naa kaise pata!

pr-kya? c she trusts u! jab wo sab hua,kiska naam le rahi thi wo,tera!...tu aya to kisse lipti! tujhse!kiske kandhe pe sar rakhke roi,tere!kisko dil ki baat batai! tujhe!

s-wo to she was in distress,aur mujhe hi jaanti hai ths y!

pr-achcha,aur kiski har baat aaj robot ki tarah maan rahi thi! hak to aise jamata hai,jaise teri biwi ho,aur wo bhi hak jamane deti hai!aur waise bhi ye do ankhen hai naa,tum dono ki bass,keh deti hain sab kuch,dono ko saath mein dekho to chemistry ke patakhe phutthe hain!

s-so shld i tell her?

pr-haan kehde romeo,apni juliet se apne dil ka haal!


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Posted: 17 years ago
thank God for pratham lol
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plz cont sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwww..............awesome part yaar neelu 👏 . very nice 😉 . i loved the way pratham explained sujal ki kahsish also loves him 😳 . awwwwww......he is such a sweet,adorable friend 👏. aur haan even i think the same jabhi koi musibat ho kashish sujal ko pukarti hai, jaab khushi ho toh usse batati hai 😳 . she share her feelings with him, and trust him soooooo much 😳 .toh i think ki sujal ne bhi propose karna chahiye kashish ko aur kashish.....she should say yes . i mean come on kitne din aise rahegi woh .sujal itna acha hai, he is a nice person,nice human being, bohot pyaar karega kashish se and she has a secured future with him 🤗 . she should think about it aur haan hi kehena chahiye 😉 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
hiiiiiiiiiiiii nilanjna i hv read all of ur ff that i could find...........tum ek saath 2 stories kaise likh lete hai???waise now i understand why u kept asking me for comments when narrated me the story...kitna gussa karti ho tum chotte comments milne par...........pls do continu soon..now i cant even bug to tell me little more(jst 15 more mins)i promise even i'll start commenting from ur next post by the way humari adhuri kahani ka end enta tragic kyon hai???????????ya fir maine poora end padha nahi haiya fir tum use aur update karoge??but still even with its tragic end i liked it vry much its just that atleast fictions ki to happily ever after ho sakti hai even if real life mein me sabke saath na hoo..........waise did u read d boof i gave u now let me hv UR COMMENTS on it even if i havent wriiten it tell me what do you think of chris???????and cathy ?do u think what they did was right or not??also i dont understand in this ff whens&k go 2 plankhet k tells mrs d to call n tell ar to comr the but ar never showed up???????? ❓ but in any case i think that by now s is going 2 think up of ways for proposing k or he would just suddenly pop the ques in a completly odd non proposing situation.....also pkr ke bas 3 hi parts hai na?ok bye write d next part soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi meggs,thanxs 4 the fab & big comment,i loved it! aur ye tumhara pehla post hai to thanxs 4 postin ur 1dt ever comment in my topic,& also congrats! thanxs dear 4 readin & likin all my fics,i hope u will keep readin & likin,& also commentin regularly on them lik this.now comin 2 ans 2 ur Qs. i guess ur not a new member kya? tumhara naam kya hai? maine tumhe stry narrate ki thi,kya.

ok comin 2 hak ka q ,dont u think it was the perfect end. it was sad,she died,but thier love lived,the undyin love 4 each other. dono ne ek dusre ko kabhi physically touch nahi kia,naa aisa relation banaya,k ke pros hote hue bhi,k ne s ko hurt naa ho,aur iss jazbe ke lie wo bass s ki hai,usse aur nahi chu sakta,apni jaan tak de di. dont u think tht was so romantic,such a romantic thing they did.aur s jo k ko bhulake,k se to wo zyada din mila tak nahi tha kehne ko kuch aisa khaas rishtaa nahi tha,s k ko jhat bhulake,shaadi kar sakta tha,apni zindagi jii sakta tha,he was such a filthy rich handsome succesful guy par his love 4 k was 2 much,his mind & heart so full of her,ki kisi aur ki jagah hi nahi thi.k was all tht he can think,all he can wish,he can love. her death or seperation cld not even a bit change thiere lov 4 each other,but it grew more & more. she was dead 4 the world,but she loved 4 him,lived with him every moment.he preserved her in his heart forever

aur rahi end ki baat,mujhe hak ke lie kuch sk speacial naye romantic moment suje,ppaar sadly hak has ended. paar ekta style ek plan hai k ko ko zinda rakhne ka,paar thts too ekta style leave it!aur rahi baat happy endin ki,bhale hi hak ki endin itni happy naa ho,paar i feel its better than 'happily ever aft endings' coz of its showcase of undyin,immovable,irreplacebla & forever existin love,the purest form of love not desire jst pure love!

wht 'boof' r u talkin abt ,i dunno! havent got any! do send me love 2 read it!oyeeeeeeeeee ruk jaaaaaaaaaa tu Meghna hai kya? abb muje realise hua,kya hai 'meggs',Meghna likh nahi sakti.maine socha nahi tha,tu sach mein dhundke fic padlegi,saara pada kya,oye so sad i loved ur buggin,abb kya karungi main,never mind har line pe comment mangungi,waise bhi meri jholi mein stries ki kami nahi,shuru karenge kuch aur kyun!

aur haan kshm ka ans is ki,mrs d never called ar coz as v all knw she hated her frm core of her heart,& never wanted s & ar 2 be together,aage kya hoga we'll c,aur haan pkr ke abhi tak 3 hi part hai,saare pad lie kya.comment ka intezaar hai tere chat pe aane ka bhi,mera yahoo id nonachatterjee@yahoo.co.in hai. byre baby take care

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Posted: 17 years ago
meghna username already koi le chuka tha...ofcourse i hv read all tht i could find dont woprry i'll bug u tell me d ekta kapoor ending..........and i really did like hak ending its just thst its a sad ending.......u should read rage of angles it ahas also got a sad ending but its one of my fav. sidneysthe 1 with micheal mority in it(appearance like that of sujal i told the first time we were sitting in stairs and u had started with pkr )i'll only comment on whatever new u write also ur comments on the book plz
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Posted: 17 years ago

s-so shld i tell her?

pr-haan kehde romeo,apni juliet se apne dil ka haal!

s-sahi mein?

pr-haan,dekh karne ko wo do cheezen kar sakti hai,haan ho to tujhse lipat kar tujhe kiss....

s is dreamin how wld tht be

pr-ya..na ho to,ussi gaal pe kiss jagah thapad!

s-kya? [drunk] chal koi baat nahi thapad bhi maregi to kiss samajh ke wo bhi le lunga!

pr-abbey i mean ur seriously gonna propose!

s-aur kya? tujhe kya ye mazak lag raha hai,mera pyaar mazak lag raha hai!

pr-nahi mere baap!

s-paar...ye ladki ko jaake kehna kya hai?

pr-kehna kya hai kya? apni dil ki baat,jo to feel karta hai jaake bol de!

s-oh yaar kahan phaasa raha hai!..to baaj gaya mera band! wo sab to bilkul bolna nahi aata! koi simple tarika bata bey!

pr-simple to,ye ki jaake kehde,i love u jaan!

s laughs a bit drunkishly

k-'jaan'! hmm...kashsih jaan!..jaan! [puts his hand on his heart ]

tabhi-

idhar kashish jo so gai thi,uski ankh khulti hai

k-emm...eh..arre..ankh lag gai meri!...arre ye blanket..zarur sujalji..[smile appears on her face]...oh no!..unke dost pratham..kitni help ki meri..mujhe unhe thanku zarur kehna chahie,i hope wo sujal ji ke saath hi ho,shayad dono neeche honge,..main abhi unka jaake unka shukriya aada karti hun..sujal ji to..wo to..[blushes a bit]..paar pratham ko to thanku kehna chahie naa

Edited by belanila - 17 years ago

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