~Mahi*Shabd~fan-fic *The Test*~PART 6pg12 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
Arre Ouma the Fan Fic is amazing....really cute...cant wait for the next part

~Rashi~
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😊 Thnkxxx!!!

Luv ya..

Ouma
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
lol ouma look who it is:P:P
finally decided 2 comment be4 u killed me!
hmmmm tho yeh lady kaun hai.... i think shes trying 2 seperate shabd and mahi ryt?
jaldi post karna love u jaaaaan 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Ouma*n*Eijaz~



*yey* Thnku so much Saz made my day hun..
~I'll continue soon!😛, Ye MS are the perfect match❤️

Luv ya..

Ouma

awwww, ur very welcome, n its allll truuuuuuuue!! i dint know whethr d ff would b good or not, but i fell in luv wiv it str8 away! both parts were very well written! keep up d good work! n YAY!! u'll b continuin l8r 2day..!! can't w8! [should b revisin, got an exam 2moro.. but i reeeely wanna read d next part!!] 😆
xx!MWAH!xx
xx Saz xx

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i love urrr fanfic , mahi whatever and shabdsaying fitteymum just love it yaar cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks guys, sorry had no time to update today!😛
~ I'll start writing the nxt part now and post it 2maro..

Good luck with exams Saz👍🏼, i got one on Friday..

Luv ya..

Ouma
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey hunnii..

i just read your ff.. wow!! shabd and mahi rock!

beautiful.. please do continue soon!

👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey hunnii..

i just read your ff.. wow!! shabd and mahi rock!

beautiful.. please do continue soon!

👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 hey dear its mindblowing please conti soon and all the best for exams 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey,


~ Part 3 is up! Hope you guys enjoy!!!!😛 Please comment if you like..


Part 3:

Finally it was party night at the Sareen house, but it wasn't the party yet because the Khurana's hadn't arrived nor had the guests. Everything had been arranged to the plan, all the furniture in the huge hall had been removed to create room for the party, a baby's cot had been placed in the middle which had 2 blue pillowcases, a blue duvet and other blue bedding to match. The outside of cot was decorated blue with a few little balloons here and there. All decided by Mahi. DM (dadi ma) was ordering the servants to go and do this and that.

Upstairs Mahi was getting ready, she was wearing a turquoise sari with sequins, zardosi work and white piping work as well. (Sari looks like this, just imagine Mahi instead....)

Mahi was spraying perfume while standing in front of the mirror. Meanwhile Shabd happened to walk in whistling, he took a glance at Mahi and carried on walking until he stopped, he looked over at Mahi again. An immediate grin came across his face, he stood there admiring her beauty, she looked this beautiful all the time but today she was glowing. He gave a little cough to get her attention.. ehem ehem..
Mahi turned around to notice Shabd wearing nearly the same color as her, but a darker shirt, with the top few buttons undone; his sleeves were rolled up just before where his elbow came. She turned back round, and pretended to be fiddling with her bangles.

M: Who aagayi?

Shabd gave a another smile, he got her attention..

S: Kaun…? Veer, Raji aur chootte sab abhi nahi aye, aur guests bhi nahin aye, kyunki abhi 6:45 hai.. 7 nahin..

M: Pata hai, main to tumhari who..urrm kya naam tha…So…haan Soniya, woh aagayi…dance routine practice karli tum don ne..

S: Whatever…

M: Kyon last minute cancel kardiya hai kya..

S: Haan urrm tum kuch asia hi samjhlo (cheeky smile came across his face, he walked towards Mahi)

M: Hmmmm, matlab.. (Stopped fiddling with her bangles and looked up to see Shabds reflection in the mirror…)

S: Sach kahoo Mahi! Bechari tumhari phone par bhaatein sunke daar gayi..

Mahi laughed and thought to herself, chalo atleast bhootni ko baghadi…
She looked back up to see Shabds reflection, he smiled and winked at her… she looked down and gave a shy smile, suddenly she realized that half her blouse was had slipped of her shoulder and was resting on her arm. She knew she didn't tie the dori tight enough...

Instantly she lifted the blouse back up to her shoulder and tried to tie the dori again with a frown on her face…

She looked in to the mirror to see; Shabd was still watching her fascinated...

She wondered if was he going to just stand there and watch or was he going to help any time soon...

Shabd stood in front of the wardrobe, watching Mahi struggle with the dori, with a smile on his face, he thought to himself, he'll let her struggle for a few minutes more until he would come to the rescue…
Mahi got fed-up; if he wasn't going to offer then she would order him to…

M: Shabd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Frown on her face...)

Shabd made a questioning face at her…

Mahi narrowed her eyes at him, Shabd at once understood, that she wasn't in the mood to play games... he walked up to her and took the two separate dori's out of her hand… he looked up at her in the mirror, Mahi had a relived expression on her face.

Shabd took the two doris and pulled them together and started to knot th…………

M: SHABBDDDDDDD!!!! WAIT, OUCH OUCH…SHABBD..

Shabd looked up straight away,

S: Kya hua????
M: Let go, two tight…Back hurts…..she gave another little scream..(she jerked..)

S: Ok Ok... (He let go the doris at once, they both spread apart opposite each other, leaving the blouse to slip across Mahi's shoulder again. She lifted it back up...

M: Kitna dhook ra hai...

Shabd was a bit amused…how that could have been painful???

But he took another look at her back, and there in front of him was 1 thick red line, a thick red mark!

Ouch! He thought to himself, maybe he had pulled them to tight...

S: Sorry….

Mahi didn't answer she started rubbing her back while holding the blouse with her other hand...

Shabd felt a bit guilty, he moved Mahi's hand away, and gently moved her hair to one side. Shabd ran his fingers down Mahi's back across the big red mark, he watched Mahi in the mirror as she closed her eyes. He then lent closer and kissed her where the red mark was, Mahi closed her eyes tighter, he carried on and kissed her again, his hand slid down and tightly wrapped around Mahi's stomach…

Mahi blushed and quickly turned around to hug him, Shabd smiled as he smelt her freshly washed her. He whispered "I'm Sorry"

Mahi lifted her head away from Shabd's shoulder and took a few steps backwards looking down smiling at the floor. Shabd arms were still wrapped around her, he tied the dori again. This time not as tight. He then lent in kissed Mahi on the cheek gently, she gave another smile. Shabd kissed her again he couldn't help himself she felt so soft it warmed him inside. Mahi looked up, they both got locked in each others eyes, both got lost reading the love in each others eyes.

They both moved towards each other, their lips nearly touching.

Suddenly…they heard a tring tring tring…they both looked towards the phone.

Mahi instantly pulled away from Shabd and ran towards the phone, he grabbed her just in time, she could read his face which was saying "don't go".

She blushed and pulled her arm away to attend the phone.


~ Part 4: Music, dance and more romance… everyone goes upto find a note in the babies hand regarding …….!

~ Hope you guys enjoyed, not much happned...next part should be more interresting and fun..

~ Please Comment! Need at least a few!😛

Luv ya..

Ouma

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